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Well, another whim story. Inspiration hit me like a ton of bricks and I just gotta write it down. It'll probably end in the middle.........that's about when I loose interest in it and forget about it XP. But still, enjoy the story. It's kinda angsty and tragic and romantic at the same time....it'll die out pretty soon though if I'm right. It's just one of those stories that I start and never finish. Well, here it is peoples, the disclaimer for legal purposes:

This is a work of fiction, any relation to anything real or other works of fiction are entirely coincidental except for the main character (whom I named after yours truely + my personality) and maybe several other characters (whom I based offa my best friends IRL).

There are also those that I pulled outta my other stories and fanfics so if you ever read them, they might seem familiar.

This story has cussing, insults to certain religions (Cristians and Catholics mainly), and diss God a lot. Please R&R ^_^.
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Prologue:

To him, it was a game. To her, it was survival. They stayed together because he wanted fun and she needed his powers. Even though they knew that someday, they'll have to seperate and that it'll be painful, they stayed together. She was the prey and he was the hunter. An ever lasting game of cat and mouse. She taught him compassion. He taught her to become the hunter. He died. She lived.

She hunted the preys alone. Lost all her compassion. She became the person he was before she met him. She became feared amongst her kind. A legend of sorts. Someone unseen yet know by all. Her identity is unknown yet everyone whisper of her with the frightened eyes of a hunted doe. She was a reaper, a shinigami, a death god, the very Devil herself. Or so they say.

I remember differently. I remember he laughter, her teasing voice, her gentle and kind heart, and her love for him. She's immortal. I'm human. This is her story. My story. His story. But mainly, their story. If only they could finally be together. If only they never met. If only.................
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yep. it's dead........>_>;; I mean, I got the plot and stuff down but I lost total interest in it. If you got a nice idea for it or wanna take over, feel free to do so but please tell me first.
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Nevermind, I want it back now. This post is VERY short. I know. It's no where near long enough to be considered a chapter. So this is just part one XP. I'm not sure where this is going but well........ideas are welcomed. Please R&R ^_^
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Chapter 1: Meeting You part one

"Shit." Kisa muttered under her breath. Her dark brown hair flew out behind her as she ran through the Forest of no Return. A low growl resounded from behind her. Her large crimson eyes darted around, searching for anything that just might help her stay alive and get out of this god forsaken forest. Suddenly, a branch whipped out at her and managed to cut deeply into her arm. A small stream of crimson blood spilled out onto her alabaster skin. She hissed in pain and clutched the wound but didn't even slow. The beast from behind her growled again as it caught the scent of fresh blood. It ran faster thus she was forced to do so too. Any hope of outrunning or outlasting the beast had disappeared over half-an-hour back, when it managed to chase her into this damned forest and far from her home.

"This is a fucked up place huh? If you're not careful, the branches and beasts would easily tear you to shreds." an amused voice said softly. Kisa whipped her head around to look toward the voice. That was a mistake because it caused her to slow down. Slowing down meat that the beast which was right at her heals catching up to her and attempting a jump on her. That means trouble for her.

But at that moment, she didn't care. She stopped running completely and simply stared at the man who spoke. Because she stopped unexpectedly, the beast over jumped and knocked right through several trees before coming to a full stop, knocked out with a gash at the head.

The man whistled in admiration, "That's some brute strength right there wouldn't you say so miss? Nice tactic though, stopping so fast. You got nice stamina and reflexes to be able to run at top speed for several hours straight and stop like that."

"W-who are you?" Kisa whispered as she stared wide eyed at him. He was the very definition of "Perfect". His pale white skin shone, no, glowed under the soft light of the slender cresent moon. His black hair seemed to be a piece of the darkest shadows and his eyes were the enchanting gold with depth and the spirit of a true hunter. He was slightly taller then her and his body was well built while still somewhat lean. His cheek bones were higher then hers and right then, his posture of one watching something that entertains him greatly.

"It's a pleasure to finally meet you, Kisa of the Shadow Clans." he gave a deep bow.

'He's mocking me.' she realized. 'And he's dangerous. More dangerous than any beast that can easily destroy me with a single swipe. He's a noble of the highest status amongst us demons.'

"You're" she said with the faintest of awe and disbelief in her voice, "Ku............."
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I just realized that I never added description for the "beast". Okay, it's some sort of giant wolf twice the size of a full grown horse with brown, gray streaked fur, sharp canine teeth, huge paws with long claws, and a poisonous bite. Because of it's sheer size, normal attacks wont work. It's also really fast for something of it's size and weight.......say........60 miles per hour? And yeah, Kisa can run like that for several hours straight. We're talking demon here after all. Besides, I made her really weak already so she's got to have some sort of good point

Kisa specializes in speed. She's a great runner but one of the weakest type of fighter. Her speed can come in bursts, making her invisible to normal vision, or it can last like her little chase with the wolf thing.
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Meeting You part two:

He pressed a finger against her lips to silence her. "Does it matter who I am? Of course, it's flattering that such a pretty young lass like you would know my name."

"But...." Kisa started to say.

"How do I know your's?" he finished for her, "Because I've always watched you. And.......please, call me Kai."

"Why would you......" Kisa said but was interupted by a deep growl. She whirled around to look toward the sound and cussed under her breath when she saw that the beast was waking up. She took a small step back as the wolf lumbered to it's feet. It snarled at her and attempted another leap. Kisa barely managed to dodge it. 'I'm outta stamina! Shit. Can't run anymore.' she mentally slapped herself for not reacting sooner.

Then, a sudden burst of pain shot up her right leg, forcing her to fall from her feet. Looking down, she saw that there was a huge gash across her calf all the way down to her ankle.

"Not a very deep cut but it went through your tendon." Kai murmured from right next to her. "Who'd've known that they got double layered claws." His voice was thoughtful and held a hint of mirth. "I suppose no one lives to tell the tale so no one knows bout this........hn. Well, I got a lil' offer for ya."

The beast was charging at them once again. Just before impact, Kai picked up Kisa in one swift move and jumped onto the higher tree branches. "Whaddaya say to us sticking together?"

When Kisa didn't reply, he looked down to her face. It was blank. "Why would you," she said slowly, "want to travel with someone like me? Someone who's only got speed. I don't have power, spells, magic, experience, anything. You're almost a legend. I'm nothing."

"That's were you're wrong my dear," he smirked, "You've got loads of potential. As for power, that can be easily arranged if that's what you want. But for why, it's for personal interest. I like to keep amused you see and you're very interesting and amusing."

The tree they were on shook. "Well, ya don't hafta decide now but I don't got eternity to wait either." The tree began to fall as another attack was launched at it from the beast below. Kai jumped off at the last moment and made a soft landing back onto the ground. He placed her onto a pile of moss next to where he landed and faced the beast.

It charged again like it had for the past few tries. Kai made no move to stop it or get out the way. When it got to point blank range, he lashed out with his foot and caught the beast in the neck with suck force that there was a loud crack as the beast's neck broke. Even with it's neck broken, the sheer weight plus the momentum of it's charge kept it going forward. It's opened it's jaws wide in attempt to at least bit the man who's killing it.

Kai grabbed it's nose with one hand and grabbed the chin with the other and with a small grunt, ripped the haw clean off while snapping the head further back. There was a half choked cry from the wolf beast as it choked on it's own blood. At the same time, Kai managed to deliver two kicks, one to sweep the beast off of it's legs and another to it's abdomen to keep it from going forward. The beast dropped.

"Well," Kai turned to Kisa with a large grin on his face, "That was fun."

Kisa balanced shakily on one foot and hopped toward him. She let a finger brush against his cheek, almost in sadness. She turned away. "You've got blood on you." she muttered. "As for your proposal, give me 3 days. If I don't reply by then, it's a no."

He grinned wider, "Oh you'll agree. I just know you will. But since you asked, three days it is then."
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tht was really good!
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