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wheeee~~ write more :D
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wheeee~~ write more :D
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domo arigatou~!
~ne, you're gonna appear on chap6 already~! XD!
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Uwahhh~
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Chapter 6: Protecting at all Costs(Determination)

*click* the sound of someone opening the door


>> everyone looking at the door. thinking, "who is it??" the door finally swung to reveal who is the mysterious man behind it...

Keito: ah! oyaji! *grins brightly*
Kenichi: Keito?! who did this to you?! *goes and hugs Keito*
Keito: itai~! *shrieks*
Kenichi: oh, gomen~ne... I was just so worried about you!
Keito: I know you do...
Kenichi: oh, *looks at everyone* looks like all of your friends are here...
Takaki: Okamoto-san, honto~ni gomenasai if Keito was in an accident *bows down*
all: *bows down too*
Kenichi: please do not be so formal to me, all of you have been guests in our house already... *smiles*
Chinen: ~hai! domo arigatou Okamoto-san...
girls: *looks at Shin puzzled*
Shin: *looks back, as if saying "I called his father okay?! so don't worry... *
girls: *looks at her, as if saying "oh okay... I thought we are in trouble*
Kenichi: so, Keito, are you okay now?? *fatherly eyes*
Keito: otto~san, I'm fine now... *smiles sweetly*
Kenichi: yokatta... it made me really worried that Johnny's personal secretary told me to go here...
Keito & all of HSJ except Shin: Johnny's.. personal.. SECRETARY?!
Imai & Suzuka: *looks at Shin, as if saying "ohnoes-you-are-so-busted-girl!"*
Shin: *panicking in her mind*
Kanata: *looks at the 3 girls staring at each other* uhmm... anou~sa, I was the one that bumped your son... Honto~ni Gomenasai! *bows down*
Ryokou: *looks at Kanata, whispering to Yumei* Yuu-chan, I think I'm ~chu in-love!
Yumei: you're being too obvious... sshhh...
Ryokou: ~hai *keeps her mouth shut*
Keito: demo, otto~san, it's not his fault... it just so happens that he hit me...
Kenichi: so you expect me to believe that?!
Shin: uhmm... Okamoto-san, it is all my fault! if it weren't for me, we wouldn't be here... GOMENASAI~! *bows down*
Kenichi: and who must you be?!
Keito: ~mou otto~san! don't ever be like that in Shin!
all: *shocked*
Shin: Keito-chan, daijobu~ your father's just showing his "fatherly love" to you... *I'm so stuck between 2 stubborn men!*
Chinen: eh?! since when did Keito's name had a "-chan" at the end??
HSJ: OH~! SOU~KA!
Eru: oi oi oi... Shii-chan, is that your new namecall for Keito?!
Nishiko: hhmmm... that's a pretty lame namecall for Keito! haha!
Yuto: come to think of it, it surely fits the two of them! "Shii-chan" to "Keito-chan" demo, "Keito-chan" is lame, so we should change it to "Kei-chan", but then, we have our own "Kei-chan" *pointing to Inoo Kei*.. ~mou! thinking of it is frying my brain!
HSJ: BAKAYARO~! *slaps Yuto's head*
Yuto: ITAI~! *touches his head*
Yamada: masa~ka, how did you ever became my bestfriend?!
Ati: haha! demo, the two of you somehow resembles together! *giggles softly*
Yamada: *OMG! how could I ever resist looking at that sweet face! XD!*
Kenichi: so, why don't you explain yourself to me then... *looks at Keito seriously*

Keito told the whole story to all of them... and as they exchanged opinions on how to deal with Risako, it was already late at night...

Kenichi: okay guys, it's already late now, your parents must be already worried...
Suzuka: *turning to Shin, whispering* Shii-chan, are you gonna stay in here??
Shin: ~hai, after all, what would I do at my condo unit all alone?!
Imai: *whispering to Shin* ~ne, Shii-chan, I'll let Keito go for 'ya... demo, cook me an Obento for Monday~!
Shin: *blushes* arigatou~ Imai-chan! *hugs!*
Tomoyo: oh?! I wanna join I wanna join I wanna join too!!! *hugs them too!*
all girls: HUGS!!!
Takaki: girls sure are affectionate...
HSJ: uh-huh... *agrees too*
Kenichi: Keito, are you sure you're alright by yourself then??
Keito: ~hai! demo otto~san, I'm not alone 'ya know... *looks at Shin*
Kenichi: fine... I'll leave now and bring some clothes for you tomorrow...

Now that all of them are gone, it's just Shin and Keito... alone in the room... XD! *P.S: don't think of censored! *

Keito: uhmm... Shii-chan, I'm gonna whisper something, come closer to me... *thinking something evil*
Shin: *thinking, "OMG!OMG!OMG!* uhmm... nani desu ka??
Keito: come closer... *surely planning something evil*
Shin: is this closer?? *blushes too much!*
Keito: no, that's not closer! come closer.. to my face... *evil-minded*
Shin: *heart beats faster* uhmm... is this closer?? *already at Keito's face! XD!*
Keito: uh-huh... ~ne, I have something to say to you... *gonna do his evil plan! >=D!*
Shin: *OMG! God help me!~kyaa!* uhmm... what are you gonna say??
Keito: sshhh...BOO!!!
Shin: *screams so loud* WWWAAAAAAA!!!
Keito: *laughs so hard* hahahahahaha!!! you should have seen your face!!!
Shin: *infuriated* hhmmppf!!! kimi atama ni kuru ne~! (you're so irritating~!)
Keito: haha! jodan dayo... *puppy eyes*
Shin *shucks, I didn't know he could do that!* ~mou, stop that puppy eyes...
Keito:*touches Shin's hands* please forgive me... *puppy eyes again!*
Shin: ~mou, what can I ever do if I won't forgive you?!
Keito: so you forgive me right?!
Shin: ~hai ~hai ~hai... * I couldn't resist you ya know*
Keito: hehe! arigatou~ *smiles sweetly* ~ne, I think I'm hungry...
Shin: oh... come to think of it, you surely didn't eat anything yet...
Keito: ~hai... uhmm... anou~sa, I have a favor to ask...
Shin: it better not be the "BOO" thing you did awhile ago...
Keito: iie... that's not it...
Shin: then what is it??
Keito: can you please feed me??
Shin: why do you always have to do that "puppy eyes thing?! I thought that would only work on Chinen...
Keito: Chii thought me how to do it~!
Shin: so that's why you're pretty good at it...
Keito: ~ne, are you gonna feed me or what?? :mellow:
Shin: *ugh, damn that innocent face! I guess I can't help it... * yeah sure...
Keito: hehe... ~arigatou! *smiles sweetly*
Shin: sheesh, if you weren't injured I wouldn't do this...
Keito: *grins*
Shin: ~ne Keito, your father bought you carbonara, Yabu & Eru bought you a pint of ice cream and strawberry milk... what do you want to eat first??
Keito: uhmm... carbonara first!
Shin: ~hai.. *takes the food out*
Keito: *looks at Shin with ease~XD!*
Shin: here, say "ah"... *feeds Keito~XD!!!*
Keito: oishii~!
Shin: oh, you have something besides your mouth... *moves closer to Keito, wipes his mouth~XD*
Keito: *looks at Shin sweetly~ XD!*
Shin: *looks at Keito curiously* uhmm... is there something on my face too?? *pretty nervous*
Keito: iie, there's nothing wrong about you... *gazes deeply at Shin's eyes*
Shin: *heart skipped a beat!* Keito-chan, your face is an inch away at my face already... *caught by Keito's gaze*
Keito: ~ne, at this angle, I can see that you're a defenseless girl that I need to protect...*serious mode*
Shin: huh?? what are you saying?? I can defend myself 'ya know! *serious mode too*
Keito: honto~?? then how come you can't even defend yourself from me?? *quickly kisses Shin!*
Shin: *dumbfounded!*
"such KISS made their two worlds become one... uniting two hearts... filing each other's empty minds... making a meaningful and wonderful night, what seemed like an eternity, feels like never to break this kind of bond... touching each other's soul..."
Keito: *opens his eyes, gazing at Shin's blooming face*
Shin: *was I really kissed by this boy?? am I dreaming?! if this is a dream then I don't want to end it...*
Keito: Shin, you know I wouldn't sacrifice myself if you're not important to me...
Shin: huh?? *is he really talking to me in this way?? gosh, I think I'm gonna faint...*
Keito: boku no mono ni natte?? (can you be mine??) *nervous*
Shin: * OMG! I think I really am gonna faint!* Keito, watashi... wa... *faints*
Keito: Shin?! oi Shin?! *taps Shin's face*
>>Shin's dream: *buwahahahaha!!! ^evil laugh^ in your face Risako!!!*
Keito: *calls the doctor*
>>doctor comes in... nurses picking Shin then lays her at the sofa bed near Keito...
Keito: is she gonna be okay??
Doctor: ~hai... shinpai shinai de... she just fainted because of exhaustion and probably some kind of excited impulse also triggered her to faint...
Keito: *remembers when he kissed Shin!*
Nurse 1: ~mou, mister, what did you do to your girlfriend when it's the two of you alone in here??
Nurse 2: ~ne, you must be gentle to your girlfriend... be sure to always pull her closer to you...
Keito: *blushes!* ano~, she's not yet my girlfriend!
both nurse: *giggles*
Doctor: that's enough you both... *turns to Keito* I'll have my nurses to call your friends to take care of you and your girlfriend... and as for time being, just rest...
Keito: like I said, she's not yet my girlfriend

>> the next day, their friends, including Kanata, came in only to find out Shin sleeping at the sofa bed and Keito touching Shin's hair...

Imai: oi! what did you do to Shii-chan?!
Hikaru: haha! so the composed Keito also have some fetishes...
???: *knocks*
Ryokou: huh?? anata dare??
???: can I just come in first??
all: *looks at each other*
Suzuka: ~hai, dozo!
???: *storms in*
Takaki: whoa! you could have hit me with the door!
???: *searching for someone*
Kei: uhmm... can you please tell us who are you searching for and who you are?!
???: *runs towards Shin, throws Keito aside* SHII~CHAN!!! WAKE UP!!!
Shin: *shrieks* NANI?!NANI?!NANI?!?
???: ~kyaa! Shii-chan!!! kimi ga koishi!(I missed you!) *hugs Shin tightly*
Shin: ~mou, I can't breathe! yamete~yo...
???: ehehe... gomen~ne, I just missed my favorite cousin!!!
all: *dumbfounded*
Kanata: uhmm... can you please introduce her to us Shin...
Shin: ~ne, Umi-chan, introduce yourself...
>> the girl stood up, looked at everyone's faces, then introduced herself...
Koizumi: ohayo gozaimasu ~minna, watashi wa Yuchiko Koizumi~des... yoroshiku onegaishimasu!
Eru: oohhhh?! Umi-chan?! I didn't notice you there~!
Yumei: EH?! Is that really you Koizumi?!
Ati: kimi wa utsukushi(you're so beautiful) Umi-chan~!
Nishiko: you've become prettier...
Tomoyo: YATTA! now we're really complete~
HSJ: *still dumfounded*
Koizumi: ~mou, doushita ~no itoko??(what happened cousin??)
Shin: ~ne, can I just tell 'ya the whole story when we come home??
Koizumi: ppssshhhh.... fine... demo, could you tell me why were you sleeping on his lap?! *points at Keito*
Keito: *widened his eyes*
Suzuka: hhmmm... I'm also thinking of that?? I mean, why is Keito touching your hair?! *grins at Keito*
Shin: ~mou, I actually don't know what happened to me last night... it's all a blur to me... *touches her head*
Yuto: ~ne Keito, did you do something at Shin?! HUH?! *grins at Keito too*
Chinen: haha! nice one Keito! *thumbs up*
Keito: oi! I'm not like Yama-chan and Hika-chan that are PERVERT!
Yamada&Hikaru: OI! We're not like that! we just like girls that's all...
Kei: sheeesh... yeah right...
Everyone: *laughs*

>>as the days gone by at the hospital, finally, Keito is already healed and ready to go to school...

>>Monday, the school is in a buzz again, waiting for HSJ to come, thus, many people are in-lined along the corridors to greet their favorite group!

black limousine comes in front of the school's entrance...

girl 1: ~kyaa! it's HSJ!!!
all school girls: *SCREAMS*
Hikaru: ~maa ~maa... it's so nice to hear screaming girls again!
Daiki: ma ji de, you're really into your personality right now...
Keito: uhmm... do we really had to use a limousine?!
Ryutaro: yeah... it's so flashy...
Yamada: hehe! don't you think it's kinda cool?! we get to hear screaming fangirls like Hikaru said...
Yuto: ~ne Yama-chan, mite~! Ati-chan is looking at you... *points to nowhere*
Yamada: *panicked* doko?!
Takaki: haha! nice one Yuto! *high five*
Yuto: yeah!
Chinen,Kei,Keito&Ryutaro: we are seriously hanging around with a bunch of weirdos...
Yabu: demo, you are with these bunch of weirdos...
HSJ: *laughs&giggles*
student 1: ~minna! mite~ mite~! it's Hongo Kanata!!!
HSJ: huh?! Kanata's gonna study here too?!
Kanata: *steps out of the car, walking towards HSJ* ohayo gozaimasu ~minna!
Daiki: hey, nice seeing you here!
Kei: so you're gonna study in here too??
Kanata: ~hai... my old school pretty much doesn't fit me...
Yuto: oh... sou da ~na...
Chinen: ~ne ~minna, ikou!
Ryutaro; *looks at his watch* oh, we've got to our classes already...
Takaki: yeah! they said there's a new student in our class...
Yabu: honto~?? i wonder who will it be...
Hikaru: I hope it's a girl!
HSB: BAKA~!
Daiki: Hika-chan, it's so obvious you're really a pervert...
Yamada: ~ne we're gonna go now..
HSB: yeah sure~!
HS7: ja~!

>>at 4A class...


teacher: ~minna, ohayo~!
all: *stands up* ohayo~gozaimasu sensei!
teacher: ~minna suwatte...
all: ~hai sensei... *sits down*
teacher: today, we have a new student...
all: *whispering to each other*
teacher: *looks at someone at the door* Yuchiko-san, please come in...
Koizumi: ~hai! *walks toward the center*
teacher: please introduce yourself
Koizumi: ~hai... *turns to the class* ~minna, watashi wa Yuchiko Koizumi~desu... hajimemashite onegaishimasu! *flashes a sweet smile*
boys: KAWAII~!
Takaki: *stands up, points at Koizumi* oh?! so you're the new student they're talking about?!
teacher: Takaki-san, please sit down...
Takaki: ~hai... *embarrassed*
teacher: Yuchiko-san, please sit down between Yabu and Kei, in front of Takaki...
Koizumi: ~hai... *sits down at her designated seat*
Yabu: you're pretty different from your cousin...
Kei: yeah, because they said when Shin introduced herself, she's pretty cold but cool...
Koizumi: well, it's just Shii-chan's outer personality, ~ne Taka-chan?? *turns to Takaki*
Takaki: *blushes* uh... ~hai...
Kei&Yabu: *winks at each other* looks like there's another one of us who's in-love...

*~kyaa! gomen~ne ~minna if it took so long for me to post it again! my brain's pretty fried this days... *hehe* so this are all the characters! I've made all of them be in here so that I won't be confused now... :lol:
so, I'm gonna make chapter 7 revolve around all of the girls! XD! that's why I have 7 previews for it!


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Yumei: I don't know why, but I really want someone to rely onto now... not just on my books...
Ryokou: are you sure about that?! *freakin' nervous*
Ryutaro: uhmm... can I ask you something?? *OMG, i hope she says yes!>,<!*
Yuto: I maybe as dumb as what others think, demo, I know what I feel and I know it's you...
Eru: I'm so glad that I can be with you today... *lays her head on Yabu's shoulder*
Koizumi: I've always played and watched with you when we were kids.. that's why...that's why...
Chinen: please don't change your feelings! *grabs Imai's hand*
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Chapter 7-part 1: The School Festival(Opening minds)

ding dong dong dong~!

>>it's the school's bell... such a beautiful morning at school awaits the students... new things will start to bloom... and as they bloom, we will see how the people's lives intertwine with each other...

Chinen: ~maa, ~maa... there's so many things that happened last week.. ~ne, Yama-chan??
Yamada: ~un... I still can't believe that Risako went too much for Keito... ~ne, Morimocchan??
Ryutaro: ~hai... demo, that's all over now... I mean, Risako was sent by her dad to another country already right?? I hope nothing bad would happen anymore... ~ne Nakayan??
Yuto: ~hai, ~hai! all I'm thinking now is about our school's festival!
Chinen, Ryutaro & Yamada: YEAH~!
Yamada: this is when I like Yuto talking... he's good at making us smile
Yuto: *hehe* ofcourse I am~!
Keito: ohayo~gozaimasu ~minna!!!
Chinen, Ryutaro & Yamada: ohayo~
Chinen: ~mou, you sure are early that you can walk with us today!
Keito: *smiles* I woke up early 'coz I got a text message from someone...
Ryutaro: whoa... Keito smiled~!
Yuto: eh?! I think that "someone" Keito mentioned is Shin! ~ne, Keito-kun?!
Keito: *blushes* uhmm... ~hai...
HS7: ~kyaa! KAWAII~NE!
Keito: she sent a message telling me "goodmorning! Hope to see you soon in school- Shin "
Yamada: Sugoi~
Ryutaro: that's so sweet of her to tell you that
Chinen: so, did you replied to her?!
Keito: ~hai... I said goodmorning too and I can't wait to see her again...
Yuto: ~maa ~maa... Keito's revealing his soft spot
Yamada: dummy, it's because Keito's lovestrucked!
Chinen: yeah... ~ne, how's your dad anyway??
Keito: as usual, he worries too much that I might get hit my a car again...
Takaki: well, don'tcha think he's just being fatherly ~ne?!
HS7: whoa!
Yuto: don't pop in just like that...
Takaki: Baka... I just did what you did last time... (see chapter 4)
Yuto: *thinks* oh... souka~ now I remember...
HS7&Takaki: Yuto, you poor guy... his innocence is just way off...

>> as all of them walked happily at school... they met with the other HSJ members at the school gate and teased each other for they have their own lovelives now...

at the 4A class... (Takaki, Yabu, Kei, Koizumi, Eru, Yumei)

Yabu: ohayo~gozaimasu Eru-chan!
Eru: ohayo Yabu-kun~ *smiles sweetly*
Kei: ohayo Yuu-chan!
Yumei: *closes her book, looks at Kei* ohayo Kei-kun... *smiles*
Takaki: *looks at the four* ~Mou, ma ji de, all of them look oh-so lovey-dovey...
Koizumi: ohayo Takaki~! *looks into Takaki with shining eyes*
Takaki: *oh great! so I'd be like them... >,<!* uhmm... ohayo Umi-chan...*cool-side*

at the 4C class... (Hikaru, Daiki & the new student Tegoshi Kumiko)

Hikaru: ohayo~gozaimasu ~minna! your Hika-chan is here~!
all: ohayo~ Hika-chan!
Daiki: ugh... you're so good today, as usual... =_=;
Kumiko: ohayo~ Dai-chan...
Daiki: ohayo~ Miko-chan!
Hikaru: *eekkk! it's my ultimate crush!*
Kumiko: ohayo~ Hika-chan! genki desu ka?!
Hikaru: *snaps out* ehem... why goodmorning too Miko-chan!(<<said in english) genki desu~ anata wa??
Kumiko: genki~ genki~ *tilted her head at the side then smiled*
Hikaru: *shucks! that's ~chu kawaii!*
Daiki: ~ne Hika-chan, I'm just gonna go to 3A's class... I'll be back okay?? *waves at Hikaru*
Hikaru: huh?? nani??
Daiki: I said I'm just gonna go to 3A! sheeesh... you're deaf whenever you hear Kumiko's voice...
Hikaru: you're gonna leave me here?! all alone?!
Daiki: yep... so don't give me that teary-eyed look, just gaze into Kumiko then you'd be okay~!

at the 3A class... (all HS7, Kanata, Ati, Tomoyo, Nishiko, Ryokou, Imai, Suzuka, Shin)

HS7: ohayo ~minna!
all: ohayo~!
girls: *giving Chinen teddy bears, giving Yamada strawberry-made foods, giving Yuto obentos, giving Keito loveletters, giving Ryutaro cakes*
Tomoyo: ~ne Morimocchan, Ati and I baked a strawberry cake.. want some?! *shows the cake*
Ati: we baked last night and it really turned out quite good~
Ryutaro: honto~?! can I really have some of it?!
Tomoyo & Ati: Un~!
Ryutaro:*turns childish* YATTA~! *takes a bite* Oishii~!
Tomoyo: ah... yokatta... I thought it's gonna taste bad because I baked some part of it... =_='
Yamada,Yuto & Chinen: ohayo~!!!
Suzuka: all of you sure are in a good mood today...
Chinen: ~hai! *whispers to Suzuka* especially Keito... *ahihi*
Imai: *pops in* Honto~?! nande?? nande?? oshiete~!
Suzuka: Imai-chan, don't scare us like that...
Imai: I just wanna know why 'ya know...
Chinen: I'm gonna tell 'ya!
Imai: oshiete oshiete oshiete~!
Chinen: it's because he recieved a message from Shii-chan! *giggles*
HS7 & the girls: ~KAWAII!!! *then looks at Keito & Shin that's talking to each other*
at Shin & Keito's side *ehem*
Keito: uhmm... ohayo~ Shii-chan... *smiles brightly*
Shin: ohayo~! *gosh! that smile's so perfect!*
at HS7 & the girls' side
all of them: uhuh... there's something that's going on between them!

>>time flies by quickly, it's lunch time!

at the 4A class... (Takaki, Yabu, Kei, Koizumi, Eru, Yumei)

Kei: Yuu-chan, why're you sad?? awhile ago you were happy...
Yumei: I don't know why, but I really want someone to rely onto now... not just on my books...
Kei: why'd you say that??
Yumei: *sighs* I just feel I'm being a bookworm too much...
Kei: demo, that's a good part of you... it's really nice to see you reading a book under the sunlight from the window... *smiles sweetly*
Yumei: * such a lovely smile! XD!* arigatou, Kei-chan... *smiles back*
Takaki, Yabu, Koizumi, Eru: *aawww* that's so sweet of them~!

at the 3A class... (all HS7, Kanata, Ati, Tomoyo, Nishiko, Ryokou, Imai, Suzuka, Shin)

Kanata: *goes to Ryokou's seat* uhmm...Ryokou-chan, are you gonna go to the school festival??
Ryokou: ~hai! ofcourse I will! I wouldn't miss it for the world...
Kanata: oh that's great! can I ask you something again??
Ryokou: sure~! nani desu ka??
Kanata: uhmm... can you come with me there??
Ryokou: matte... are you.. asking me... to be with you.. at the festival??
Kanata: ~hai... *shy*
Ryokou: are you sure about that?! *freakin' nervous*
Kanata: ~hai... so, will you say "yes"??
Ryokou: YES! * YATTA! he asked me out! woohoo!*
XD! at Ryutaro and Tomoyo's side...
Ryutaro: Tomo-chan! * this is IT! I'm gonna spill it out! >,<!*
Tomoyo: Ryutaro... ~ne, why'd ya called me?? *tilts her head at the side*
Ryutaro: uhmm... can I ask you something?? *OMG, i hope she says yes!>,<!*
Tomoyo: sure~! so what 'ya wanna ask?? *takes a bite of her sandwich*
Ryutaro: okay, here it is *takes a deep breath*can you please go out with me on the day of the school festival 'coz I really wanna be with you on that day and I promise that we will have loads of fun and we'd go to booths together and eat candied apples and takoyaki and watch the firework together so will you please go out with me?!(<<said it fast)
Tomoyo: huh?! I didn't catch you there...
Ryutaro: *o__O* uhmm... what I mean is, is that, can you please go with me at the school festival??
Tomoyo: *grinned big* SURE! I WILL~!
Ryutaro: Honto~?! * in disbelief*
Tomoyo: ~hai! * smiles*
Ryutaro: *phew* arigatou~ne... *smiles back*
all HS7, Ati, Nishiko, Imai, Suzuka, Shin: ~ara ~ara... such sweet sweet young love! * laughs at all of them*

*hehe* gomenasai ~minna if it's short~! I've been reviewing for my periodical tests...

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ish daiki still available??

kyaa!~ i mean gomen for my late comment! im sooo late!!!
hahahaha its cute!!!

can i still be on it? with daiki??
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waaaa it's so cute....i did't know u had posted new parts...u should have told me....waaa gomen ne for the late reply~ demo it's too kawaii
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yaay! lol i wanna see the love in the air xD rofl!
can't wait for the next part!
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Chapter 7-2: The School Festival(Closing Ties)

at the rooftop... there's 3 boys talking eagerly, and it's Yuto, Keito and Ryosuke...

Keito: oi~! why should I pretend to be a girl?!
Yuto: Keito-kun, WE need you~!
Yamada: ~hai! for the first time Yuto said something reasonable~
Yuto: oi, I'm not that stupid 'ya know...
Yamada: fine fine... *turns to Keito* so please! teach us the way of LOVE
Keito: demo! why should I pretend to be Ati and Nishiko?!
Yuto: because your "the master!"
Yamada: BAKA, don't act so cool... remember that we both need Keito...
Keito: then tell me the reason why am I "the master"?!
Yamada: datte, you already captured Shin's heart...
Yuto: ~hai ~hai!
Keito: urusai~yo... fine, I'll be Nishiko first...
Yuto: YATTA! I'm first to practice with Keito! nice try Yama-chan...
Yamada: sheeesh... you're so childish...
Keito: ~ne Yuto, hayaku~ it's Yama-chan's turn after you
Yuto: *turns into serious mode* uhmm... Nishiko *looks at Keito as if he really is Nishiko!*
Keito: ~hai, Nakayan... *feels like a girl*
Yuto: I maybe as dumb as what others think, demo, I know what I feel and I know it's you...
Keito: me what?? *kinda confused*
Yamada: haha! nice try Yuto!!! haha!
Yuto: oi Yama-chan! I was already in the zone 'ya know!!!
Yamada: *laughs louder* demo, I can't stand to look at your serious face, it just makes me laugh...
Keito: *giggles* yeah yeah... I was gonna burst into laugh already if it weren't for Yama-chan
>>bell rings
Yuto: oh, it's over for lunch...
Yamada: I think I'll just laugh myself out at the corridors then... haha!
Keito: then maybe we can tell it to others about Yuto's serious face... *laughs with Yamada too*
Yuto: TELL, if you DARE!
Yamada&Keito: haha! *laughs some more*

at the classroom... with the ever-boring lessons in MATH...

>>at Yamada and Ati's side
Yamada: *passes a folded paper rose to Ati*
Ati: *confused then whispers* what's this for??
Yamada: just read it...
Ati: *unfolds the paper* Yamada wrote:
Ati-chan, do you have any date for the school festival yet?! I know you can always go with your friends, demo it's nice to go with a boy too right?? so, would you please go out with me?? I promise to make you smile and do what you want! -Ryosuke-
*looks at Yamada*
Yamada: *look at Ati eagerly*
Ati: *nods... definitely "YES"*
Yamada: *grins... YATTA!!!*

>>at Yuto and Nishiko's side
Yuto: *taps Nishiko's shoulder*
Nishiko: *turns to Yuto then whispers* nani desu ka??
Yuto: *whispers* ~ne ~ne, do you have any date for the school festival??
Nishiko: *whispers back* nope, I intend to go with my friends...
Yuto: *whispers again* ah souka... demo, if a boy asks you out, would you say yes??
Nishiko: *already knows what Yuto is planning* you're gonna ask me out are 'ya?!
Yuto: *speaks to himself, "yabai! it' looks like she already knows* uhmm... if I say "yeah i'm asking you out", would you say yes then?!
Nishiko: uh-huh... I'm not cold-hearted 'ya know...
Yuto: then you really say "YES"?!
Nishiko: what do you think am I saying huh?!
Yuto: uh, let me think uhmm, you're saying Yes??
Nishiko: then you got it!
Yuto: *stands and shouts* EH?! HONTO?!
all students: *looks at Yuto*
Math teacher: ehem... Nakajima-san, please sit down and focus on our lesson...
Yuto: *embarrassed* uh... ~ha..~hai sensei..*sits down*

>> bell rings again, it's DISMISSAL!

>>Eru and Yabu(holding hands while walking)
Yabu: ~ne Eru-chan, you'll come with me at the festival right??
Eru: ~hai, ofcourse I would!
Yabu: yokatta... ~ne, let's sit at the river banks...
Eru: Un~!
Yabu: ah... it's nice to sit again after walking
Eru: I'm so glad that I can be with you today... *lays her head on Yabu's shoulder*
Yabu: *looks at Eru* ~ne, we're gonna tell them about "US" at the festival right??
Eru: yeah... *smiles* it's because we can't hide our feelings at each other now...
Yabu: ~hai... *dazes into Eru deeply* aishiteru Eru... *gonna kiss Eru on the lips*
Eru: aishiteru Yabu-kun... *stares deeply at his lips*
Yabu: *softly touches Eru's bright cheeks... and kissing her gently and whole-heartedly... XD!!!*

>>Takaki and Koizumi(bumped each other on the way home)

Takaki: oh... it's you...
Koizumi:*startled* I thought you were a molester...
Takaki: EH?! ME?! A MOLESTER?!?
Koizumi: gomen~ne! it's hard to walk alone 'ya know... :sweatingbullets:
Takaki: wakatta... I got it... =_=; ~ne, why aren't you with Shin anyway??
Koizumi: she was called by ojisan...
Takaki: oh, Johnny-san right??
Koizumi: Un~! uncle's dotting on her so much! he treats her as his own...
Takaki: demo, you're also his niece right?? so why is it that he always wants Shin??
Koizumi: it's forbidden for me to talk of that..
Takaki: eh?? nande?? oshiete~
Koizumi: you should've known that 'ya know...
Takaki: I'm bad at memories...
Koizumi: I've always played and watched with you when we were kids.. that's why...that's why...
Takaki: I know that, it's just that I didn't know what happened when Shin was sent abroad
Koizumi: I guess I have no choice but to tell you right??
Takaki: ~Hai!
Koizumi: Shin's parents died in a car accident when we were kids, it was shocking for all of us but we can't grieve too much since we're involved in the showbiz industry...
Takaki: whoa... I really didn't know that
Koizumi: *continuing with the story* Johnny-jisan sent Shin abroad because she wasn't talking to us anymore. he feared that she might not recover from that accident. he adopted Shin since he doesn't have one as his own...
Takaki: oh... souka... I didn't know her life was pretty sad, good thing she has you to rely on *looks at Koizumi*
Koizumi: Un~ I'll always be there for her!
Takaki: *smiles sweetly* then I guess I'll go with you girls at the festival!
Koizumi: *confused* eh?? nande??
Takaki: it's because most of HSJ have their own partners already
Koizumi: haha! you're pretty right there~
Takaki: oh, my house's this way, I guess I have to go now
Koizumi: sure... ja~ne!
Takaki: ja~! *kisses Koizumi's cheek then runs* mata ashita~!!! *shouts and waves bye*
Koizumi: did he just kissed me?! *smiles at herself then touching her chest* I guess my heart beats for him...

>>Chinen and Imai (Chinen running towards Imai who is walking towards home already)

Chinen: Imai-chan!!! *running so fast*
Imai: Chii?? *looks at Chinen running who seems that he can't stop his feet*
Chinen: *bumps into Imai*
Imai: itai~! you've hit my head...
Chinen: gomenasai!
Imai: nani ga hoshii no?? (what do you want??)
Chinen: ehehe... just wanna walk home with you *scratches his head*
Imai: oh... *looks down then started walking again*
Chinen: uhmm...~ne ~ne, what'cha doing lately anyway??
Imai: uhmm... betsuni, just doing random things...
Chinen: oh... *nervous* uhmm, ano~sa, who are you gonna go with at the festival??
Imai: no one, I think I'll just go with Shii-chan~!
Chinen: is it always Shin that you always think of?!
Imai: *confused and a bit irritated* ofcourse she is~! *pouts*
Chinen: Shii-chan sure is lucky to have all of your attention...
Imai: it's better that my friends get all of my love than others who just break me into pieces, I think I want a change of heart~
Chinen: *stops at his steps* why do you want a change of heart? *serious mode*
Imai: *stops at her steps too* you know that Chii... I know that you're just ignoring what goes on around us... and you also know that I'm pretty tackless at what I always say, do you even want to continue this kind of conversation? * serious too*
Chinen: I think I don't know what to say now... demo, if we don't continue this conversation then we will never see what's wrong with us...
Imai: Chii, there was never "us". you don't even think of me in nights do you?? well I know I do... demo, I think it's time that I should change what I feel.. because this is becoming a one-sided love, rather, it has already been since then... *teary-eyed and turning her back on Chinen*
Chinen: please don't change your feelings! *grabs Imai's hand*
Imai: *crying already* please, let go of me...
Chinen: *hugs Imai* I know I have been so cruel after all those years since you've given my first teddy bear.(see characters' list) demo, you're wrong that I don't think of you in nights that I have fallen for you! you're being unfair... *teary-eyed*
Imai: *buries herself into Chinen's hug* so you think of me??
Chinen: ~hai, how could I forget the one who made me like this?! shitteru~(do you know), that I always hug the teddy bear you gave to me imagining that you are the one that I was hugging?! and saying to myself that someday, I'll have the courage to have you for me.. *looks deeply into Imai*
Imai: *stops crying then sniffles* so is that "someday" you said is this day??
Chinen: *smiles brightly* ~hai!!! from now on, please rely on me... *looks at Imai happily*
Imai: *smiles sweetly at Chii's face* Un~ I'll be protected by you from now on... *hugs Chinen back*

*wwweeee~!* I can now finally move onto chapter 8 now that I finished this... *hehe*
gomenasai ~minna if I'm such a slowpoke in doing this...


PREVIEW:
Johnny: so, are you happy now that you came back into your ojisan's side??
Hikaru: ~ne ~ne, let's see who would win that big teddy among the 10 of us! I'm so gonna win that! *evil laugh*
Matsumoto Jun: wwwaaaa~! imouto~ kimi ga koishii~! *hugs Shin*
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whee!! i read it!
it was cute when koizumi and takaki were talkin at the end xD haha...
can't wait for the next part!!
keep up the good work!
and we don't mind that your "slow" cuz i'm really slow with my fanfic xD
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Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:

whee!! i read it!
it was cute when koizumi and takaki were talkin at the end xD haha...
can't wait for the next part!!
keep up the good work!
and we don't mind that your "slow" cuz i'm really slow with my fanfic xD


thanx for reading it~! XD!
and it's not just the "slwoness" that i'm kinda worried about, it's just that my fanfic's getting bored and ignored...
well, that's what I thought...
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Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:

whee!! i read it!
it was cute when koizumi and takaki were talkin at the end xD haha...
can't wait for the next part!!
keep up the good work!
and we don't mind that your "slow" cuz i'm really slow with my fanfic xD


thanx for reading it~! XD!
and it's not just the "slwoness" that i'm kinda worried about, it's just that my fanfic's getting bored and ignored...
well, that's what I thought...


ehh~~ no way!
this fanfic is like...so cute!
i likes it :]
and..there's many readers...just, they don't comment v__v
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cuuute! haha! gomen ne if I've just posted now.

I didn't know you also had a Romeo and Juliet part. :O Honto ni, GOMEN! :((

anyway, this is not boring! continue it! it's coool!
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Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:


Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:

whee!! i read it!
it was cute when koizumi and takaki were talkin at the end xD haha...
can't wait for the next part!!
keep up the good work!
and we don't mind that your "slow" cuz i'm really slow with my fanfic xD


thanx for reading it~! XD!
and it's not just the "slwoness" that i'm kinda worried about, it's just that my fanfic's getting bored and ignored...
well, that's what I thought...


ehh~~ no way!
this fanfic is like...so cute!
i likes it :]
and..there's many readers...just, they don't comment v__v


I guess so... *haha!*
nyweix, thanx for always reading it~! XD!
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