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jally23 wrote:

cuuute! haha! gomen ne if I've just posted now.

I didn't know you also had a Romeo and Juliet part. :O Honto ni, GOMEN! :((

anyway, this is not boring! continue it! it's coool!


it's okei~!
*hehe*
thanx for reading it~
atleast I have two readers already... *haha!*
i'm a bit weird ~ne?!
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jally23 wrote:

cuuute! haha! gomen ne if I've just posted now.

I didn't know you also had a Romeo and Juliet part. :O Honto ni, GOMEN! :((

anyway, this is not boring! continue it! it's coool!


it's okei~!
*hehe*
thanx for reading it~
atleast I have two readers already... *haha!*
i'm a bit weird ~ne?!


noooo! You don't have 2 readers! you have a lot!!! haha!
and it's not weird.
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jally23 wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:


jally23 wrote:

cuuute! haha! gomen ne if I've just posted now.

I didn't know you also had a Romeo and Juliet part. :O Honto ni, GOMEN! :((

anyway, this is not boring! continue it! it's coool!


it's okei~!
*hehe*
thanx for reading it~
atleast I have two readers already... *haha!*
i'm a bit weird ~ne?!


noooo! You don't have 2 readers! you have a lot!!! haha!
and it's not weird. :)


*hehe*
thanx~ really need that saying... *haha!* LoLz!
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Okeiz...

I'm kinda gonna run a survey if I'm STILL gonna continue this fanfic~
'coz seriously, my one-shots are better than this~ * thanx to my utterly poor brain*

so, shall I still continue or not??
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Chapter 8: The Awaited School Festival's Night(Blooming Flowers)

All love that bloomed(see chapter 7-2), Shin's whereabouts were clueless... She was grabbed by her uncle's people and was dressed like a princess to meet her "ojisan"... in her uncle's house, Johnny Kitagawa's house...

Shin: ~mou, ojisan, you shouldn't have let me dress like this...
Johnny: demo, you look so cute in a dress! can't you let your ojisan see you dress so nicely??*puppy eyes*
Shin: yabai... why is it that everyone uses puppy eyes on me?!
Johnny: hehe... it's because you fall for it so easy~
Shin: sheeesh... curse the one who created puppy eyes
Johnny: haha! I missed your irony my dear Shin... *smiles brightly*
Shin: well... I know you do ojisan... I kinda missed you too! *hugs him*
Johnny: ~ne, my Shii-tan, have you chose some lucky guy from one of my JE idols??(Shii-tan, Johnny's way of calling her)
Shin: there you go again jisan, no wonder others think you're a molester
Johnny: but it's my way of finding the right guy for my Shii-tan! I wouldn't want my Shii-tan to be alone you know...
Shin: relax jichan! it's not like I'm gonna die 'ya know...
Johnny: oh, but you're wrong there... people die out of loneliness... remember, we have another half-heart, and it's with the one who will share his or her life eternally with you *lightly pinches Shin's cheeks*
Shin: it's what you always say jichan... and it's always in my mind...
Johnny: so always bear it in your mind.. *touches Shin's head*
Shin: ~hai... I always will!*smiles sweetly*
Johnny: so, are you happy now that you came back into your ojisan's side??
Shin: *thinks* I think I'm happy that I'm here now...
Johnny: so , speaking of "happiness", have you really not picked on one of the boys in JE??
Shin: puh-lease! jichan, you're rewinding what we just talked awhile ago...
Johnny: haha! so it does!

>> at Ati's house, the girls are busy for the upcoming School Festival..

Ryokou: ~ne ~ne, does anyone know where will we meet them??
Nishiko: huh... them who??
Eru: ba-ka! ofcourse the boys...
Nishiko: oh... hehe! gomen~ne , bakanishi illness started again...
Suzuka: ano~ *in a kimono* does this kimono look good on me??
all: WOW... you're pretty Suzu-chan!
Tomoyo: I'm sure Dai-chan would like to see you in that...
Yumei: hhmmm... I don't know why is it that you girls always fuzz up over this, I really don't get it!
Koizumi: Oi Oi, I think you should fuzz up over this too 'ya know!
Kumiko: yeah~ because Kei asked you to the school festival..
all: aayyyiiieeeee~!
Ati: it seems love is really in the air for us!
Imai: *blushes* ofcourse it is!
Ryokou: ~ne~ne, you're blushing!
Tomoyo: I know what happened! *harhar!*
Imai: EH?! I never told about Chinen and me going in the festival yet~! >,<!
all: *laughs* BUSTED!
Suzuka: Imai-chan, you seriously can't hold what you feel don't ya?!
Kumiko: that's because she has held it for so many times already...
Nishiko: Un~ good thing Chii already noticed that...
Imai: *smiles sweetly to herself*

>>at HSJ's side:


Yabu: Oi, ~minna! all of you should be in yur best behavior, got that??
HSJ: hai~
Takaki: and all of you should be "gentlemen"... so that we would the girls' hearts today~
Yamada: MOCHIRON~! I would surely win their hearts... *harhar*
Yuto: "their" hearts?? I'll say to Ati-chan that you're being a playboy...
Yamada: ba-ka~! what I mean is that I'll win their hearts in favor of being Ati-chan's "man"...
Chinen: oh.... souka... I guess I'll have to do my best to win their hearts too~!
Ryutaro: you guys, are so childish on how you all think
Kei: *sighs* well, I think you're HS7's only mature guy...
Ryutaro: yeah~ *high five*
Hikaru: I guess I'll have to be on my best behavior today~!
Daiki: Un~.. because Kumiko might think you always watch Hentai... *laughs*
Yabu: Oi Oi Oi! Dai-chan, don't you ever talk like that when Suzuka is around, because you mightget a punch from her oniichan, and that is ME *evil smile*
Hikaru&Daiki: igh~! *whispers to each other* Yabu is scary~
Keito: tadaima~ Kanata is with me now...
Kanata: so, are we all ready for the School Festival now??
Takaki: I guess we can't help but yell~---
All: HAI~!!! WE'RE READY NOW!

>>All of them met up at the entrance of the enormous two-pillared setup designed at the opening of the school and a banner hanged saying "WELCOME TO THE SCHOOL FESTIVAL!!!". Surely, they're all in awe... All of them excited to go from booth to booth, play games and merry away with the festivities...

Hikaru: ~ne ~ne, let's see who would win that big teddy among the 10 of us! I'm so gonna win that! *evil laugh*
Takaki: I'll win that for sure~!
Yabu: oh no you don't! 'coz I'm gonna win that for my Eru~
Yuto: tsk tsk tsk, ~minna, I'm sure all of you would accept defeat from me~! *harhar!*
Yamada: Nakayan, I know you're daydreaming, because I'm the winner of all the winners
Ryokou: ~maa ~maa... I think the boys are bickering on whose the biggest man on all of them! haha!*
Ryutaro&Tomoyo: ~hai ~hai... so childish! *laughs together*
Kanata: Ryokou! *holding a big teddy bear* this is for you!
all girls: ~kyaa! HOW SWEET! XDD!
Hikaru,Takaki,Yabu,Yuto,Yamada: oh... we lost to him~
Nishiko,Kozumi&Eru: *laughs so hard*

Kei: ~ne ~ne Yumei *grabs her hand* let's go there! *drags her*
Yumei: Un~! gals, see you around~
Chinen: Imai! let's go to the fish booth over there~
Imai: sure sure~ maybe we'll get a fish as our pet... *hehe*
Yabu: *looks at Eru* Eru-chan, let's go somewhere together
Eru: sure~ I would definitely go~ *smiles sweetly*
Daiki: *YOSH! now I can finally ask Suzuka!* uhmm... anou~,Suzu-chan...
Suzuka: *pulls Daiki's arms* come on Dai-chan! I wanna try that game! *points at a booth*
Daiki: sure~! Whatever you say~! *lucky me*
Yamada: *my turn!* Ati-chan~, let's go to the strawberry farm the science club built~
Ati: okay~ I'm gonna pick some strawberries for my cake tomorrow
Hikaru: Kumiko-chan, let's go to the hall of weird mirrors~!
Kumiko: ofcourse~ I bet I'll laugh myself out once I saw your weird look in the mirror~

Koizumi: *looks at her wristwatch* geez, Shin sure knows how to be fashionably late...
Takaki: Koizumi, who are you waiting for anyway?? come on, let's go!
Koizumi: not yet, I still have to wait for someone that "should" be here~
Takaki: and who might that be??
Keito: *pops out of nowhere* is Shin already here??
Yuto&Nishiko: *pops out of nowhere too* Keito sure knows how to wait patiently~
Takaki&Koizumi: Oi~! don't pop out of nowhere you guys~!
Keito: demo~, where is she anyway?? *worries too much*
Koizumi: don't worry, she'll be in here anytime now, she just...err... *looks at Takaki*
Takaki: err.. she just went to her ojisan... ~ne Koizumi?! *looks at her with questioning eyes*
Koizumi: yeah~ *whispers to Takaki* arigatou~ for saving me there, I almost slipped out about Johnny-san and Shin...
Nishiko: *points* EH?! k..kki..mm..mi...*stutters*
Yuto: Uwwaaaa... Shii-chan.. ki..mmii...
Takaki&Koizumi: *looks at Shin* whoa... kimi.. wa--
Keito: *looks at Shin amazingly* Shii-chan, kimi wa utsukushii...
Shin: *hehe* arigatou~... they kinda went overboard about the kimono *touches her kimono*
Koizumi: itoko... you're perfect! *elbows Keito* ~ne ~ne, Keito-kun?!
Keito: *stares at her longingly* uuhhh... ~hai... *blushes*
Takaki&Yuto: Oi Keito, we'll go now...
Nishiko: yeah~ so I guess, we'll leave both of you alone.. ~ne Koizumi?! *winks at her*
Koizumi: Un~ sure~

>>at Keito&Shin's side...*finally~! XD!*


Keito: uhmm... Shii-chan, you're really wonderful tonight~ *smiles*
Shin: *blushes* a..arigatou~ne...*grins*
Keito: ~ne ~ne, let's go to that place! *points at a bridge over a pond where cherry blossoms adorn the place, no other people in there ofcourse.. XD!*
Shin: sure~ I would love to... *blushes*
Keito: *takes Shin's hand and went there* Shii-chan, there's something I've been keeping from you for so long already..
Shin: *looking at their hands intertwined* so... what might that be?? *gazes at Keito's enlightened face*
Keito: see, I've been wondering wether I should just keep it forever locked in my heart--
Shin: *cuts in* --then don't.. because whatever it is, I would always accept it.. so don't give me that "forever" something you've got going on..
Keito: *smiles sweetly* hey, do you still remember when you stayed with me at the hospital??
Shin: yeah... I still do, but there's something going up in my mind ever since that time.. and I'm trying pretty hard to recover that part of my memory ..*scratches her head*
Keito's P.O.V: *I guess I intoxicated her too much of my KISS back then.. I guess there's no holding back then*(see chapter 6)
Shin: Oi, don't space out.. *waving her hand on Keito's face*
Keito: *snaps out* Un~ so, do you want that memory back or not??
Shin: yeah I do... so what'cha gonna do then?!
Keito: I think I can let you remember it if I do this-- *touches Shin's cheeks both of his hands locking her face and slowly drifting his face to hers*
Shin's P.O.V: *OMG,OMG,OMG! he's gonna kiss me! urgh, my head is aching..*
Keito's P.O.V: I wonder, if she would faint again?? hehe! I think I'm a great kisser *

finally, Shin remembers everything that happened between her & Keito that night at the hospital months ago... her FIRST KISS!!! and just as she was about to say something, their lips met~ yet again! it was her most anticipated moment..the way their lips moved together passionately, the way she intaked Keito's breath under her mouth, it was really intoxicating her! no wonder she fainted last time, but she swore she would never faint this time..

Keito: *still eyes closed* so, have you remembered everything??
Shin: *gasps for air* yes, I do... demo, watashi no koto suki?? (but, do you love me??)
Keito: Shin, I love you... dare mo kimi ga suki ja nai (no one is like you)*looked deep into Shin's eyes*
Shin: Keito-kun, I love you too~ *intoxicated*
Keito: *hugs Shin* I promise you, I will never leave or hurt you.. I promise that I will always be with you even when the world turns its back to you... because, no one would ever love you the way that I do..(is it me or I'm being all so mushy on writing this??>hehe<)

>>now that Keito's & Shin's lovecase is solved, they went to meet the others to wait and watch the school's fireworks light up in the sky..


Keito&Shin: *holding hands while walking*
Yabu: *whispers to HSJ and the girls* ~minna, on a count of three we will shout--
Keito: *cuts in* what will all of you shout??
HSJ&girls: uwwaaa~! don't scare us like that!
Shin: *giggles*
Takaki: ehem...*clears his throat* what we will shout is--
all of them: OMEDETOU SHII-CHAN AND KEITO-KUN!!!
Keito&Shin: *dumbfounded*

???: *bumps into Ryutaro*
Ryutaro: ouch! itai...
???: gomenasai...*extends his hand* here, I'll help you
Ryutaro: *takes the hand* arigatou~
???: anou~ you're my kouhai right??
Ryutaro: huh?? *looks at the man curiously*
???: *stands still, then smiles perfectly*
Ryutaro: *screams* WWWAAAAA!!!! you're Matsumoto JUN!!!!

HSJ: *turns around to look at Ryutaro* huh?? nani itten no??(huh?? what are you talking about??)
Matsumoto Jun: *peeks at them* he's actually talking about me...
HSJ&girls except Koizumi&Shin: *screams* WHOA! IT'S MATSUJUN!
Koizumi: *whispers to Shin* yabai! this is not good! Shin, you better get out of here right now... or else!
Matsumoto Jun: *made his way to Shin* uuwwwaaaa~!!! I thought I wouldn't see you here! I searched out for 'ya in this so-many crowd~!
Shin: hush! you're creating too much attention in here nii-chan~!
HSJ&girls: NII-CHAN??!!
Matsumoto Jun: wwwaaaa~! imouto~ kimi ga koishii~! *hugs Shin*
HSJ&girls: IMOUTO??!!
all the girls: Shidohara Shin you better explain yourself!
Shin: ugh.. *breaks MatsuJun's hug* ~minna, I can explain.. really!

*gomenasai for updating this fic way-way late... and yeah, it's getting boring~
I'm planning to end this multi-chap fic as soon as possible and make way for one-shots... (it seems to me one-shots are better~!)


PREVIEW:
Ati: don't worry Shii-chan.. we're not that really mad 'ya know~
Ryutaro: look! a flying pig~! *points at an empty place*
Akanishi Jin: Oi, MatsuJun! don't 'ya hug my imouto~!
Posted 1/22/09
ooh.ooh.oohh!!! can i be an antagonist for the chinen x imai love pair? uwaaa~! xD
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wui~ c daiki ba taken na d2? ahihihihihi!!!
sbi ko na nga ba di nmn pangit toh weh!!!
ang cute kea!!!
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so good writer(:
shie-chan u are great ne(:
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ooh.ooh.oohh!!! can i be an antagonist for the chinen x imai love pair? uwaaa~! xD


*wootz!*
thanx for reading this~ *hehe*

sure sure~
you can be the "catalyst" a.k.a antagonist for the chinen&imai pair~
just give me your name~
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wui~ c daiki ba taken na d2? ahihihihihi!!!
sbi ko na nga ba di nmn pangit toh weh!!!
ang cute kea!!!
=D


*sniff sniff*
deen-chan, si Suzuka kxe ka-pair ni Daiki rito eh...

don't worry, sa susunod kong MC fic nandun ka na~!
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so good writer(:
shie-chan u are great ne(:


arigatou for reading my utterly failed MC fic~
*hehe*
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xiaoqian94 wrote:

so good writer(:
shie-chan u are great ne(:


arigatou for reading my utterly failed MC fic~
*hehe*


haha cant wait for the next part(:
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shieLdembLem wrote:


xiaoqian94 wrote:

so good writer(:
shie-chan u are great ne(:


arigatou for reading my utterly failed MC fic~
*hehe*


haha cant wait for the next part(:


*hehe*
I.. don't know...
'coz it's a failed MC fic of mine~
gomen~
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shieLdembLem wrote:


xiaoqian94 wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:


xiaoqian94 wrote:

so good writer(:
shie-chan u are great ne(:


arigatou for reading my utterly failed MC fic~
*hehe*


haha cant wait for the next part(:


*hehe*
I.. don't know...
'coz it's a failed MC fic of mine~
gomen~


why u sae it is a failed MC ???
Posted 1/24/09
my name? o'well can i be... Owada Asako. please? ^^
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