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[Fanfiction] All I Want is You
Posted 9/15/08


i'm bored so i came up with this fanfiction thingie..i'm a new fanfictioner..Give me comments on the fanfics..if its good, i'm gonna upload more..or else..i'm just gonna delete it!
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Posted 9/15/08
it's not bad for a new fanfictioner..you should give some work on it and continue..
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Posted 9/15/08
I like it XD hope you make more ~ XD
Posted 9/17/08 , edited 9/17/08
Here's the second chapter!! its kinda short, but i'm gonna work out more on the third chapter!


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Posted 9/27/08
It's getting interesting...
you should post another chapter
Posted 9/27/08
cool this is ace carry on i'm gonna post a story thing on cr wen i get 500cr points but it's not gonna have the characters from shugo chara i'm making up my own^.^
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Posted 9/28/08
kawaii!! i beg of you!! make for fan-fiction stories!!
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Posted 9/28/08
nice! upload soon
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Posted 9/28/08
This is quite good actually. I advise you try describing things more and work on your spelling mistakes. (getting a beta XD, but that's normal.) Although, just use maybe a least a few adjectives for example how excited Amu's eyes looked when she saw Rima for example.
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Posted 9/30/08
NICE. But I agree with SakuraSenin
Posted 9/30/08
this is good make more soon
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Posted 10/1/08
Not bad. Did u pn't I could put it on for you.? if you didn't I could put it on for you.
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Posted 10/12/08
lalalaala =]]]]
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Posted 10/14/08
niceeee
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Posted 10/14/08
kewl story... i'd like to see more ^.^
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