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K so this is most likley going to be my new story~!!
About pirates (obviously) So I'll most likley write it sometime soon.So someone tell me to do it so I'll get the power~!!lol I am writing this for one of my friends
kyahikaru so I hopes YOU all like and especially Hikaru~!! :D

Chapter 1 will be out soon (If someone reminds me to make) so I hopes u all wait ^-^
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T-thank you so much T.T I'm going to write a story for you to! And I promise it'll be awesome! The best story every!! .>n<.

I love all of your stories! I'm sure I'll love this one as much or even more!!
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K so this is most likley going to be my new story~!!
About pirates (obviously) So I'll most likley write it sometime soon.So someone tell me to do it so I'll get the power~!!lol I am writing this for one of my friends
kyahikaru so I hopes YOU all like and especially Hikaru~!! :D

Chapter 1 will be out soon (If someone reminds me to make) so I hopes u all wait ^-^


I want to read your story!! I wanna! I wanna! I wanna!
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sgurlrox67 wrote:

K so this is most likley going to be my new story~!!
About pirates (obviously) So I'll most likley write it sometime soon.So someone tell me to do it so I'll get the power~!!lol I am writing this for one of my friends
kyahikaru so I hopes YOU all like and especially Hikaru~!! :D

Chapter 1 will be out soon (If someone reminds me to make) so I hopes u all wait ^-^


I want to read your story!! I wanna! I wanna! I wanna!


lol yay!!I'll make soon ^^
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T-thank you so much T.T I'm going to write a story for you to! And I promise it'll be awesome! The best story every!! .>n<.

I love all of your stories! I'm sure I'll love this one as much or even more!!


aaww ty TT^TT ur so nice~!!!
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Chapter 1-Meeting

"Yo Ho,Yo Ho a pirates life for me~"I sang as I stared out at the sea.

"You musn't sing such songs.You'll curse us with a bunch of dafted Pirates!"Growled one of the navy captains.

"And we still have to arrive at bay,and get you home safley."He continued

I shock my head "But.Pirates can't be ALL bad...can they?"I lowered my voice near the end.

I shock his head reclessly "They steal from civilions,and the king.They taunt the navy,and they kill.Theirs nothing good about them"He named off as he continued to shack his head.

I looked down at the water

"But still..."I murmured

He sighed "Sir"A sailer walked over and put his hand to his forhead

"Their seems to be a storm bruing"They captain looked up at the sky quickly

"We think it would be best if we ancored here"He continued

"I didn't ask for your opinion now did I!!??"The captain growled

Both the sailer and I stepped back.

"N-No you didn't.I'm very sorry captain.What would YOU like us to do?"The sailor studered

"Keep going"He ordered

The sailor just nodded and ran towards some other sailors.

I looked back at the ocean as the waves clashed togeather

"Sir!!"Yelled a voice from above

"A boat is coming in our direction!!"

"Description"The captain ordered simply

"I think-"He looked closley "It looks like a pirate ship!"

"Damn"The captain cursed as he ran towards the back of the boat.

"ALL HANDS ON DECK!"All the sailors corused

"Mrs.Dudley the captain wants you to hide in his quarters."I stared at him in horror

"Pirates?"I whispered in astonishment as the sailor pulled me to the small room.

"Lock the doors and don't come out"He ordered as he ran to the other sailors which were going down a small pair of stairs that led to a bunch of canons.

I nodded as I shut the door and locked it.

'Pirates are actually coming?'

After a few seconds passed I heard loud whisling noices and loud banging noises

'They are...'

I heard yelling and then felt the ship shack.

I gasped as books fell from book shelves

I heard yelling and loud claning sounds.

I reconised the sounds imediatly

Swords.

I had always been good at sword playing.

My toture had said I was terrible at first but as weeks passed and I kept practicing he said he had never seen anyone progress so far,so fast.

Although my father never new about my private lessons.

After all

What kind of girl that has nobel blood,is good at swords?

Non

Not even a poor girl would or even could.

Or at least from what I new...

And I was only 11 at the very thought of it my father would probly have a fit.

So I never had told him.

My thoughts were inturupted by the ships shacking once again and the loud gasp and screams from fallen sailors.

I gulped

After a few more minutes of clanging metal the noise ceaced.

'It stopped' My thoughts wandered

I slowly walked towards the door not really sure if we had won the attack.

Then again the navy was the strongest attack force in the sea.

I decided to rethink my stratigy and at least get a weapon.

I tiptoed to the back of the room and something caught my eye.

A plate of metal.

A sword.

I grabbed the weapon and ran towards the door.Stopping in my tracks when I reached the door.

I slowly reached towards it and heard quriling voices,and cursing.

I opened the door all the way and stuck my head out the crack of it.

As I looked around I saw that all eyes were on me.

And that the navy was now on the edge of the boat with pirates surronding them.

I stared out in horror.

"I never thought that the navy would have a girl on this ship"A voice intupted my horror.

I searched the boat for the voice.

As I found the person I heard a loud bang and somthing silver catch my eyes.

I heard loud gasps from down the room

I found the silver object.

A sword,and also felt a sharp pain from my left cheek (a/n face cheek,NOT her butt cheek!!!lol)

A bit of blood dripped from my cheeks and slid down it.Making the wound look worse than it was.

I opened the door all the way and stepped out.

All the pirates.

'They looked only a FEW years older than me!!!'

'But how could they take the whole navy down?'

"aaww you ruined her face cap"I heard a voice snicker

I glanced over angrily

"Nothin much to look at"The voice...er captain replyed

I growled as I looked back at the boy/captain.

He had sandy short blond hair and black eyes.

He was.Quit attractive.

I flushed but remembered how much a jerk he seemed to be.

"Well you aren't exactly something special"I said,glaring at him.

He chuckled to himself

"Well you sure aren't a lady of the nobel navy"

I growled again

"I may not be much of a lady but I can at least clean up scumb like most girls.Though your a little bit bigger than the average scumb"

He frowned

"What are you imply'in"A Pirate asked

"I bet I can beat you in a sword fight"
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ooo a cliff hanger on the first chapter!!yay hopes every1 enjoy ^^
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Chapter 1-Meeting

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That was so good! I cant wait for the next chapter!!! And what was the main character's name?
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Chapter 1-Meeting

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That was so good! I cant wait for the next chapter!!! And what was the main character's name?


I haven't exactly thought of one yet and this is in her past so I'm gonna write her name when her past dejavu thing is over lol! XD
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sgurlrox67 wrote:

Chapter 1-Meeting

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That was so good! I cant wait for the next chapter!!! And what was the main character's name?


I haven't exactly thought of one yet and this is in her past so I'm gonna write her name when her past dejavu thing is over lol! XD


ok!
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Chapter 2-Challenge

"Miss you musn't "I heard a sailor worry

But the captains thoughts were absent "How would she know how to sword play?"He murmured to himself.

I just glared at the pirates face,not listening to the distant Navy worrys.

"And how would a girl,let alone a girl from a Nobelist family"He scetistsed.

My eyes dropped from his face and to the ground.

It wasn't that big of a deal....right?

"A woman can do anything a man can do,and better"I growled my eyes lifting from the wood floor boards.

'This was going to be a match for the navys's safty and all woman that were doughted.'

I lifted my sword and pointed it at him.

"One match.Fair play"I growled

He chuckled to himself "A pirate doesn't play fair"And as he said taht he ran forward towards me with super human speed.

I gasped as he grabbed a sword that hung from around his waist and hacked at me.

I jumped back quickly as it came inches away from my face.

He ran forward not flinching as I hit him with my sword.Cutting his face.

I felt like we were playing tag.

He moved his sword and body easily,as I stumbled around trying to dodge his attacks.

I felt something snap on me as I heard one of the pirates snicker,and my oponent smirk.

-Angry-

I hit the edge of the boat but took this for a chance to bounce off from in.

My body swirled in the air as I flew over top of the pirate.My eyes were set on his face as I dodged more of his attacks.

Our swords clanged togeather,our faces inches away from each other.

I saw shocked faces blur pass us as we danced to the sound of our swords clanging togeather

He grunted as I pushed him forward,and his back hit a look out pole.

But he quickly spun us around again and this time I had my back to the pole.

I heard the desperate cheers from the pirates,and heard the silent gasps from the navy.

I kicked at his feet and he tripped backwords as I hit a senstitive spot.

But he quickly recovered as I flung my sword at him.

He dodged the attack and as he did this he grabbed my rist and threw me towards the boat edge.

I tripped over a something and fell backwords.Which injured my ankle.

I tried to get up but couldn't seem to muster up the strength.

I fell back down and saw the pirate walk up to me.His sword pointed at me.

'Pirates don't play fair....huh?'My thoughts wandered

'So I'm going to die at the age of 11!?'

He raised his sword and my eyes flung shut.

I heard the wind whistle as the sword was brought down.

But instead of pain.Or even dieing instantly I felt something.

My eyes opened just as the pirates lips left mine

I flinched back in shock.My face felt warmer.

He touched his finger to his lips "Remember pirates don't play fair"He chuckled as he walked towards the other pirates and started to walk over a plank that went over to his ship.

I snapped out of my horror and tried to get up once again but still couldn't seem to get up.

It was annoying....

I saw the pirate glance back quickly and whisper "We will see you again soon"quiet enough that no one else could hear him except me.

I stared at him in horror.My lips pressed togeather in a straight line.

The navy instantly ran to my aid and others went after the pirates.

-Narrator-

The young girl never saw the pirates again.

And she grew up to be a buetiful younge woman.Never forgetting about the pirate who equally matched her skills,and stole her first kiss.

The girl didn't grow up to become responsiple of the Noble family though.

She often ran off and took things into her own hands.

She was supposildy the most Adventurist,reliable,Energetic,most hands on Nobleist their had ever been.

She did everything on her own without others help.She always found some sort of way.

And over the years her sword skills improved to the max...But her social skills with nobleist,let alone her own family decreased drasicly.

Her father never approved of her sword skills,and often got gaurds to lock her in her room and not let her meet the unknown swordsman.

But she always escaped.Weather it was window climbing,Attacking,or involved running she would do it.

No nobleist had ever seen a girl from a noble family ever do things like this.

But her father was very drastic and did whatever he could to change her,and make her more noble like.

But all the towns people did find her noble.

She was different from most nobleists and helped people weather it was working in feilds or running around doing arrends.

She'd even give money to the poor.

She was a hero.

But no royal blooded people relized this.

Her father aventually tried to make her not socialize with any citizens or survents that worked in their home.

But of course she surpassed that and kept up her good deeds.

So the girl was a hero from a royal and stubborn family,that new how to sword play and had queit a tom-boyish character.

But everyone loved her,and would do anything for her.Everyone except royalty...

The girl still never forgot about the boys words.But tried not to think about it much.

She thought that trial would never come.

But boy was she wrong.

Let the adventure begin....
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How old is she now? And I wnated her to be 11 for the whole story >n< Oh well~ ^U^
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How old is she now? And I wnated her to be 11 for the whole story >n< Oh well~ ^U^


lol sry I WAS going to make it like 4 years later so she'd be like 15.BUT NOW U'VE GOT ME THINKING!!lol what age do you want her to be it can't be below 13 though lol (sry) XD
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Hmmmmm.... Maybe 14 or... 11...? I really like the idea of her having a young love thing! i dont lnow why!! I just want it to happen while she's like 11~~ sorry Thats all i got
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Chapter 3-Attack

It had been 3 years since the pirates had attacked the navy,and she had not yet forgot about them.

And neither did her father.

He tried recless stunts to try and keep her safe.But not relizing that he was smothering her with all of this "protection"

-end of narration-

"Where is Alice!?"I heard father gasp in the distance as I ran down the grassy feild's.

'The gaurds will be looking for me non stop now....I better hide!'

But I couldn't shake the feeling that something was going to happen today.

It was sort of exciting since nothing really happened around here...

"Alice"I heard a voice grunt,hidden under the long grass.

I looked around quickly trying to be aware of my surondings just as my teacher had taught me.

As I looked around I decided to listen for some sort of sound.

My eyes shut automaticly as I listened.

I instantly caught onto something and walked in the direction of my left.

"sensei"I smiled

The old man lay on the ground not noticble from far away,and even up close.

His old gray beared scruffy,and his hair a mess.

"You know an old man could get stepped on from their.Your not very noticble anyone could guess that you were dead.After all look at your age"I joked as he grinded his teeth togeather and opened his old black eyes.

He stood up automaticly holding his back in the proses.

"I told you its my day off today no training"I stared at him in shock as I started to remember him telling me this.

"I never thought I'd hear you say something like that"I said in astonishment as I placed my hands on my hips

"Your always the one to want to practice,and I'm often agreeing with you"That was a bit of a lie.

I often did want to practice but I often got tired easily.

My lips pressed togeather in a straight line as I thought

"You aren't feeling ill are you"I said sounding concerned

I bent down to his height

"I'm fine"he grumbled

I stared at him.Annoyed.

"Well then do you want to train?"He asked seasing from rubeing his back

"Are you sure your alright?"I ignored his question

He nodded agressivly.Probly annoyed by my worrying.

I sighed in relief.

"Well if you ever feel ill just tell me and I'll take care of you"I smiled brightly.

He seemed happy for a second but shook his head once again "I'm fine.My you are the one getting old with that sort of old woman concern"

-angry-

"What was that!!!"I yelled as I threw swings at him.But as always he dodged my desperate attacks.

"I'm only 14 let me remind you!!!"I growled

He chuckled to himself

"Your sword play is good,but your fist attacks are terrible"He teased

I growled once again but seased as I heard a scream.

No.Not just one scream.Their were many.

I thrust my body around searching for the sound but my face went blank with horror as I found it.

The small town was in flames,and people were scattering around from the one's that started it.

Pirates...!

Instead of thinking carefully about were to hide and such like most noblest's do.Or even think about what to do for that matter.I ran.

Not running away.I ran TO the flames,the mayhem,the killing,the...pirates.

Everyone would die if someone didn't do anything.

I heard sensei's desperate plea's for me to stop and hide.But I didn't listen.I was to far gone.

As I reached the town I stopped abruptly in horror.My mouth hanging open.

My hand tightened over my sword as I stared.

Everyone.A lout of people.Not just the navy soldiers that tried to help.The citizens lay on the ground dead,or either screaming in terror.

I felt tears burn my red raged face.

'Those....'I couldn't find the right word for it.But I was in to much rage to think anymore.

Once again the hero.That took people before herself entered my body.

I grasped my sword as I saw a pirate run towards me sword in the air ready to kill.To kill me.

"Like in hell I'll die that way"I swore as I ran forward ready for the attack.Ready for the fight of my life.And futur.

Lives pass by us quickly
But new lives to protect the inocent are born quicker...
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