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ya its out!!! im going to read it now!!
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He seemed happy for a second but shook his head once again "I'm fine.My you are the one getting old with that sort of old woman concern"


Will there be a LOVE triangle~ heheh
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He seemed happy for a second but shook his head once again "I'm fine.My you are the one getting old with that sort of old woman concern"


Will there be a LOVE triangle~ heheh


lol most lilkley yes but not with the old guy (her swords teacher) cause hes old lol!! but her swords teacher is actually an "old" friend of the pirate that stole her first kiss heheh and I'm startin a new chapter nnnoooww!!lol
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Chapter 4-Kidnapped

The pirate grunted as I used all my strength and ran towards his sword locking ours togeather.

I didn't look up at him.

I was to busy pushing to make him lose his balance and fall backwords.But he stayed rooted to the ground.

I finally looked up as I heard feet from behind me coming.

As I looked up I recognized the face of the pirate that I was fighting

He was one of the pirates from 3 years ago!!The one that was making fun of me and talking about injuring my face.

I frowned as I stepped back from him.

I didn't want to fight him.I wanted to beat up the man that stole my first kissed.

-angry aura-

"You"The boy stared at me with a shocked expression,but it soffened as he relized how flustered I was.

"heh your that girl from back then..."He murmured a smirk on his face.

I ignored his ignorance "What are you doing here?"I growled as I stuck my sword into the earth and leaned on it.

"Well I did tell you taht you'd see us again soon"I heard a voice whisper in my ear.

I turned around abrutly.

Their...layed the pirate that had stole something from me.He almost stood their in fashinobly,and almost cool stance like way...

I shock my head

'Hes still a darn pirate!'

I went on my tipi-toes and got up in his face

"What am I THAT hard to forget about"I joked icly

He just smirked

"Nah.Seems you seem more...hhmm whats the word for it..spunky?"He joked

My eyes flared angrily

"Shut up"I growled

I heard chuckles from behind me.

"What does a pirate want anyway at a navy filled town?"I stepped back and turned around.

"You should have been caught and killed by now"I made a face at the idea of more people dieing even if it was these...pirates.

"hhmm not a chance"Their was no joke to his tone anymore.

I turned around and faced him again.

"Anyway what do you want?"

"heh"He looked away from my face "You"He smirked

I frowned finally understanding why their were so many pirates around me now

"You'll have to catch me first"I said as I looked for an openeing and found one.

I quickly started for a run and leaped under the ground and slid under a pirate.

I got up quickly and made a run for it in the direction of the fields.

'I have to get away from this place or more lives will be tookin'

FIELD

I heard deep breathing from behind me and new that this was was the end of the running.

I turned around ad relized something

"AAHHH!I forgot my sword down their!!"I winned as I remembered that I didn't take it when I ran for it.

"bboo"My lips went out,as I pouted.

"heh"I heard someone snicker "end of the run kid"The pirate smirked

I growled

"Its not over till its over"I reminded him.

He frowned "How far are you willing to go?"He whispered

"Are you THAT selfish?"

"Selfish?"I repeated,confussed.

He smirked his frown now gone as he ran forward and grabbed onto my rists.

"uh"I grunted

"What I mean is"He paused as I tried to bite him "The lives of hundereds of people in this town are at stake."He continued

I looked up at him with a horrorful expression

He just stared at me.

"Or at least the one's that are left over"

"Uh"I grunted as I tried to hit him "HOW CAN YOU SAY SUCH THINGS!!??"I said with tears in my eyes.

"Their living beings!!Your own kind!!"I cried

My throat tightened

I used my other hand to hold the aking feeling.

The pirate losened his grip and put his hands on my shoulders

Before I could say anything his lips hit mine.

I tried to push out of the attack but lost feeling in my arms,no.Not just my arms.My whole body.

Not because it felt good or anything because he had some sort of poison on his lips.

Or maybe it was a sleeping postion??

I don't no I can't think!!!

My legs lost feeling and my body started to collapse but the last that I felt was arms under my legs and back.

I was in a bridal stance,I guessed

"Jerk"I whispered weakly

I heard him chuckle I was about to say "Only a weak man would do something like this"But my lips wouldn't budge and the sound wouldn't come out.

That was all i could remember anyway...

The adventurers romance will begin soon....
And steal your and everyone's heart away.
Just like the young pirate stole the girls heart away,and the young girl stole the pirates heart away...
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So good! you really make great stories!!!!!! relly really!!!
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aaww ty TT^TT but I'm terrible and ur thousand times better!! I'm gonna start makin the ch now btw ^-^
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Chapter 5-A pirates life for me~

As I woke up all I heard was the sound of waves and seaguls.

My favorite sound...

My eyes closed again sleepily and I turned over to tired to think.

I felt a wind brush past me,and again...and again...

And a small snore.

Suddenly my eyes flung open as I remembered what had happened yesturday

"Ah!!"I screamed and fell from the bed.

My kidnappers eyes flung open from the sound of my scream.

But his face sofened into a small smile and then into a smirk.

"hhhmmm good morning darling"He joked

I growled

"Where am I!?"I roared as I started to stand up from were I'd fallen,but felt dizzy.

I felt arms wind around my waist and pull me into the pirates chest

"UH!Let go!!"I growled

He smirked again as he brushed his head against my hair "Your a pirate now.Pirates don't get whatever they want unless they earn/kill for it"

I frowned and tried to look up at him but didn't suceed.

"Who said I ever agreed to becoming a pirate-"But I stopped midsentance from speaking.

'Thats what him and his ship killed people for,they killed them not just because they wanted me for fun...but because they wanted me to join their crew?'

I started again "Not in a million years will I join your ship!!Not after what you did to all those people"I frowned again.

'It was all my fault?'

"Well then just more people will die"He paused "People that you loved...people that you protected...people that you helped"

"You killed them all"I cried out

His grip on my waist losened and I took that as a good chance to escape.

I hit my funny bone into his ribs and he grunted and fell back into the bed

"You won't get away.Theirs alout of men out their that will capture you for me.And then you'll be punished"He said in a weak breath but then he added "They'll be punished"

That brought chills to my spine.

I looked at him painfully but still tried to escape.

I opened a door that led onto the deck.And as he had said their were people all around that would catch me...

I couldn't escape...at least not now.

And if I were to escape I'd have to escape when we were near home.

Which would probly take years cause I doughted they'd go around their...

But if I somehow escaped to a place near their I could send someone to go and warn father taht their may be an attack from pirates!

I stooped in my tracks and stepped back into the room,shutting the door along with it.

I heard a chuckle in my ear,and I spun around quickly "Don't think I'm joining your stupid ship,I just have nothing better to do...Plus if their is ever killing involved I won't do it."I put up my circumstances

He mearly nodded,a smiled planted on his face.

He didn't nod but he somehow seemed to agree to those expectations

I nodded as well,absent minded.

'So I was going to be a pirate now...huh??'

So their future sets sail along with a few hopes and dreams...
And a new crew member...
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yay new ch's up!!
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aaww ty TT^TT but I'm terrible and ur thousand times better!! I'm gonna start makin the ch now btw ^-^


no! im not that good! im really bad
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ya! new chapter, new chapter! the girls named alice and the guys named...? so i read so excitedly i may have missed that psrt!
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sgurlrox67 wrote:

aaww ty TT^TT but I'm terrible and ur thousand times better!! I'm gonna start makin the ch now btw ^-^


no! im not that good! im really bad


yes u r~~
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ya! new chapter, new chapter! the girls named alice and the guys named...? so i read so excitedly i may have missed that psrt!


:D lol I haven't come up with a name yet its gonna come out on the new chapter cause it introduces all the crew mates
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yes u r~~


I like your way of writing better.. mine is not book-ish-y...


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:D lol I haven't come up with a name yet its gonna come out on the new chapter cause it introduces all the crew mates :P


Okay! I can't wait! hurry with the new chapter! as i will mine!
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sgurlrox67 wrote:
yes u r~~


I like your way of writing better.. mine is not book-ish-y...


sgurlrox67 wrote:
:D lol I haven't come up with a name yet its gonna come out on the new chapter cause it introduces all the crew mates :P


Okay! I can't wait! hurry with the new chapter! as i will mine!


hehe ty ^-^ and okies
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sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:
yes u r~~


I like your way of writing better.. mine is not book-ish-y...


sgurlrox67 wrote:
:D lol I haven't come up with a name yet its gonna come out on the new chapter cause it introduces all the crew mates :P


Okay! I can't wait! hurry with the new chapter! as i will mine!


hehe ty ^-^ and okies :D


welcome-welcome auuuu!
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