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lol I usally don't!!But I was sorta proud of myself a while ago that I was writing so much,and felt accomplished.So I made her read the first two chapters.And then she noticed me starting to hide them.And now she's like gonna read'em lol~!! But I will write somethin good 4 u :P


Thanks! i put a lock on my computer top so no one read mine. What did she say to you about them? Hehhehe good storys arent easy to come by~


LOL!!well shes only read the first 2 chapters of I'm What!? And she doesn't know about this story so maybe I can add something...moliciouse >:3 lol


hahah! Well nice chapters! I'll start the chapters of my stories right away!


yay!!I look forward to it ^-^


Im so exicte now! I wanna read your stories so much more now! it just got to the ggoood(er) part!!!! ":)


aawww hehe!!ty thats the exact same way I feel about urs!!
How about u make a new chapter of blood red eyes or shuffle mix.And I'll try and add a new chapter right now??
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k so I just watched pirates of the carribeon 2 and 3 (already watched 1) so yeah!!I've got some new idea's and such lol so I'm probly gonna write a new chapter right now
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k so I just watched pirates of the carribeon 2 and 3 (already watched 1) so yeah!!I've got some new idea's and such lol so I'm probly gonna write a new chapter right now :)


yaaaaaaaaaa i love those movies!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Im so exicte now! I wanna read your stories so much more now! it just got to the ggoood(er) part!!!! ":)


aawww hehe!!ty thats the exact same way I feel about urs!!
How about u make a new chapter of blood red eyes or shuffle mix.And I'll try and add a new chapter right now?? :D


Okay! ^^
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Chapter 9-My crappy Escape Plan

I was finally begining my life at sea and for some reason every one of those pirates acted different around me.

And I have NO idea why!!

'Well...I do have an idea why...I mean I am a GIRL and they are all a bunch of smelly,dimwitted pirates.Let me refrase that all a bunch of SMELLY,DIMWITTED pirate BOYS.'

"Oi don't just stand around in a daze"growled a voice from behind me.

I spun around embarressed by not just how close Scar was from my face,but by how embarresed and flustered I acted!

"Well their ain't that much around to do"I growled

"Ah would you look at that I'm already rubbing off on you and you don't even know it"He grinned mischiouvsly.

"What the HELL are you talking about?"I growled

"Pirate slang"He answered simply

"What are you talking about?I always talk like this-"I cut myself out from thinking about home and how I actually acted normal around here.

He noticed my hestitation instantly

He chuckled to himself queitly and walked over to the boats steering wheel.

"Cap'in looks like theirs a storm bru'in"Said a pirate with dark brown hair and navy blue eyes.

"heh whats our moto!"He smirked as he said this and seemed to glance over in my direction

'good'

I gave the bordest look that you possibly could make.

"No storm can define the king of the ocean.Neh the black pearl!!"Chimed all the pirates from their stations.

"Good now get to work ye' scurvey dogs!!"

I made a face at his moto

King of the ocean?Black Pearl?It all didn't make sence to me.

I didn't see anything else to do on the lowsy ship and began to give up on ever having some sort of exiting life.

'dream crushers'My thoughts wandered as I walked over towards My/captains corders and opened the door

"Ah!Captin lookie here!An island lay on the coast"Another pirate chimed to Scar

"This be the secret island Botta??"

"They' not be true stories.Aren't ye' all legends?"

"A Lengendary island?The' be a good barried goods under ground not yet found!"

All the pirates questions ecohed the ship and into my ears.

I didn't understand any of this pirate no how.But it seemed like a pretty neat place to explore.

Scars voice cut into my thoughts "Yeh stories or legends are never just legends until you see' with ye' on eyes"

I found myself staring at Scar with curious eyes.

I prayed that no one noticed and turned back to the door.

"Are you going to come exploring with us Alice?"My heart throbbed as he called me name.

He had never actually said it before.But for some reason that was a big deal to me...?

I turned around to face him and AGAIN relised how close he was to me

'How did he even get over so fast?'

"I wouldn't associat myself with something so stupid.PLUS I am not interested in treasure."

I was about to turn again when he continued questioning me

"What kind of treasure do you LIKE then?"He questioned but didn't let me answer

"Gold,jewles,Diamonds,Money?"He whispered in my ear

"NON"I answered plainly

"Their nothing to me"I whispered "And just to not let your curiosity get the better of you,its not because i've had them all my life,for that matter I never have got anything like that..."I suddenly noticed something.

My voice.It sounded so frail and sad,almost like I yearned for something.

"Then what do you WANT?"He asked

"Thats easy.Something with MEANINGFUL value"And with that I turned away and shut the door in his face.

I sort of felt sleepy actually

I drowsily dropped onto the mattress without bothering to take off my coat or even change my clothes at the very least.

Not that their was anything to change into.

My thoughts wandered as I driffted into uncoinciosuness.

Could I POSSIBLY escape on this island?

It would probly be the best chance of escaping to my home that I could get.

I would need to get someone to help me though

'help' My thoughts murmured

-sleeping-

I heard a creak and then saw the door open reveling a faceless man no...boy?

He walked towards my sleeping body and sat next to me on the mattress.

"Alice"He whispered just as my heart seemed to beat faster

"I'm going on the island so no trying to escape while I'm gone.Theirs going to be someone outside your room watching to make sure if you try and escape"He paused.

Just as I breathed softly.

Then...Something tapped my lips.

It was warm and I sort of felt happy and protected.

'WAIT!WHAT IS THIS STRANGE DREAM!'

And with that I woke up...

Protected from an annomonsiss aura...
Feeling safe at the strangest of times....
Feeling warm...
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k so I just watched pirates of the carribeon 2 and 3 (already watched 1) so yeah!!I've got some new idea's and such lol so I'm probly gonna write a new chapter right now :)


yaaaaaaaaaa i love those movies!!!!!!!!!!!1


LOL same!!! >.<
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Im so exicte now! I wanna read your stories so much more now! it just got to the ggoood(er) part!!!! ":)


aawww hehe!!ty thats the exact same way I feel about urs!!
How about u make a new chapter of blood red eyes or shuffle mix.And I'll try and add a new chapter right now?? :D


Okay! ^^


hehe okies and a new chapter HAS been posted ^-^ Goodnight!!
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sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:

Im so exicte now! I wanna read your stories so much more now! it just got to the ggoood(er) part!!!! ":)


aawww hehe!!ty thats the exact same way I feel about urs!!
How about u make a new chapter of blood red eyes or shuffle mix.And I'll try and add a new chapter right now?? :D


Okay! ^^


hehe okies and a new chapter HAS been posted ^-^ Goodnight!!


yayayayay!
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kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:

Im so exicte now! I wanna read your stories so much more now! it just got to the ggoood(er) part!!!! ":)


aawww hehe!!ty thats the exact same way I feel about urs!!
How about u make a new chapter of blood red eyes or shuffle mix.And I'll try and add a new chapter right now?? :D


Okay! ^^


hehe okies and a new chapter HAS been posted ^-^ Goodnight!!


yayayayay!


hehe I hopes u liked ^-^
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Chapter 10-A new Crew member

It had now been an hour since I had last been asleep and having that crazy dream.

But who knew their'd actually BE a pirate/guard outside my door!

So I decided to try my former escape plan.

Window jumping

We were probly at land now so their'd be no water to drown in for me (joy)

I tryed jumping from the window and this time it worked but who knew it was so FAR down to get to the ground!

So I fell.

And ACTUALLY somehow landed on my feet.

But of course injured myself in the proses.

But since I USUALLY can take pain I desided to continue my escape.

I ran into a forest like jungle and surched around the place but found no sign of life near by...

But I continued onwards,I kept on strate thinking that I AVENTUALLY find SOMETHING

But it seemed that time wasn't with me and the day started to change into night.

And minutes turned into hours....

But I was MUCH to tired to carry on so I desided to sit/slump down next to a tree.

Bad idea.

I fell asleep.

And when I awoke hundreds of people suronded me.

And stared at me.

"W-What?"I said in a studder

they seemed to step back as I spoke.

Almost frightened

But I ignored it and tride to stand up.

But then felt the sharp pain in my legs from when I had jumped before and fell back down.

One of the people walked out of the croud and up to me.

He observed me and said "She' the one who cause the rath of de' pirate gods amounge us"In a africa'n or asian sort of accent.

All the people scowled at me and other (some women) hid their children from me.

'Pirate gods?'my thoughts repeated.

"We shall do the' honor of killing the girl for the pirates so they' will spare our lives"He sudenly pulled out a knife from his pocket and I just stared in horror.

'This was just another terrible way to die!!'My thoughts screamed out as he lunged the knife at me.

But for some reason...I didn't feel any pain?

My eyes opened slowly and warily to see a young boy about 6 years younger than me standing in front of me.

He didn't really look or dress like the rest of them.

He sort of actually looked like a pirate.

"We don't know if they want her dead uncle"The boy whispered strongly but in a slight studder

He turned around slowly and faced me and asked "Are you all right?"All I did was nod in a dumb founded sort of way and continued to stare as he helped me up.

"What do you think you are' doing?"Another voice from the crowd asked

All the boy did was shake his chocolate brown curly hair and start to walk in the direction I had come from before.

As he walked he helped me onto his back.

"u-um.."I studdered "Aren't I too heavy?"I asked shyly

All he did was grunt and shake his head "its fine,your not that heavy"

And with that everything went silent.For some strange reason I wasn't scared anymore even though I had to wonder why he was helping me.

"I'm going to take you to the pirates.I'm going to be their so I'm sure they won't really hurt you."He finally said

I was silent but finally asked "Isn't that dangerouse?I mean.Won't your..Uncle?Be mad?"

He shock his head again and continued to walk "No.I'm probly banished by all the tribe now anyway"He whispered

I gasped and he seemed shocked "Then why?"I whispered still in shock

"Because...its the right thing to do."He answered simply.

I stared at the back of his head in confussion now but didn't ask any more questions.

Shouldn't I be trying to escape right now?I could probly get away now even with this hurt leg.

'But I don't want to ruin his genourosity' My voice whispered in my head.

And finally we REACHED the ship.

Everyone seemed to be in panic mood,but I was starting to get sleepy again with the peaceful silence and the drumming of the boys feet on the ground.

So I nestled my head in the boys back and hair and listened to the piter pattering of the boys feet slowly stop and a new sound of feet come in the ditant along with many voices.

I think the whole ship crew might be surronding me.

But I was to tired to wake up even though I could hear all around me I couldn't really listen to the meaning of their words.

"Alice"Called out a voice

"Is she asleep?"Asked another

"What happened?"

And finally Scars,he sounded almost angry "What did you do to her kid?"He growled

That almost made me angry treating someone like that when they saved my life.

Even now I could feel heat from my anger burn my throught and my head.And sleepiness drown away.

"I-I didn't do anything a swear on the heart of Davy Jones!"The boy studdered

My eyes slowly lifted from his fear and I slapped away Scars hand on the boys neck.

"He saved my life you ass"I growled as I tried to get up but lost balance and almost fell over but some of the pirates steddied me.

I shoke off their questions of greif and faced the boy that had saved my life

"Whats your name?"I whispered

"Alto"He stared at me in surprise

I smiled sweetly at him and heard all gasps around us.

"Nice to meet'cha I'm Alice"My sweet smiled slowly turned into a grin as my arm extended out.

He shook "Nice to meet you to"He was smiling now but his face seemed a little red.

"Well then"I turned around to face Scar my grin now vanished and I glowered at him.

"Trying to beat up a kid?"I growled

"Heh your going to be punished for sure now"That brought shivers down my spine and gave me a small frown and crease on my head.

And with that all the pirates took off into the ship but when they dissapeared I relized that they were watching us,no hiding and watching us to see if anything happened.

That made me smirk for fun I would try a little something

"Alto"I smiled as I faced his

"U-Um yeah?"He studdered

"Thank You.For.Your.Help"I put my words in small form and leaned my face to his and kissed his cheek.

His face flared up and I didn't relise that he'd actually respond to it.

He fell backwords and passed out instantly

"Ah!!!Alto!!"Damn it!"I growled as I worried about him but heard the pirates chuckles on board the ship.

"Uh!If I made you all SO happy then your going to help me bring his on board!!"I growled

All their laughter ceased "Hes coming on board all of his family banished him from this place"I growled

And then all their voices dissipeared "Lowsy little"I stopped my swore midsentance and began to tug the boy onto the ship.

This was going to be a LONG night...

Friendship is born...
Rivalry is born...
Feelings are born from this rivalry...
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Chapter 11-Truth

It HAD been a long night and I was tired of it all I had just finished dragging Alto's unconcious body into the ship and the only place that I actually new were their were beds.

The jail room (downstairs)

He was still asleep and now I was begin'in to feel like I wanted to go back to sleep.Gosh I had been sleeping so MUCH recently that it was almost sad!

I slid next to Alto and curled up into a little ball.

Their were NO blankets around and it was getting PRETTY cold so I decided body heat was the best cure for that.

I blushed at that thought and memory of when Scar tried to "WARM" me up with bodyheat.

I didn't want to go to sleep in Scar/My room since he was probly going to "punish" me.

And I didn't want that.

My eyelids closed and I slowly drifted to sleep.

-wakes up-

When I woke up I wasn't cold I was actually room tempature warm.

And actually pretty comfy.

But WHY was I SO warm?

I mean body heat can't be that great right?

And it didn't feel like I had,had enough sleep yet.It felt like I had been wokin up.

And I had.

By captain Scars

My eyes slowly opened and I saw Scars hair and I felt something kissing my neck

I had to sort of wonder what was going on but at the time I was to sleepy to get it

I was being "punished"

I monued as his lips and breath went up and down my neck and around my cheek bones.

"Hello Darling'"He smirked as he raised his head to face me.

His shirt was now OFF and my clothes (a/n:except under clothes like bra/corset and um yeah...) now scattered around the room.

My face reddined to the state were it felt like it COULD explod.

"Uh get off!"I growled but in a sort of way that could make it sound perverted.

He just ignored me and continued his punishment and moved down my body

"AH!"I growled "GET OFF,GET OFF!!"I growled

But he continued to ignore me.

"Why are you doing this"I sobbed

"I almost die and I'm being punished!?"

He frooze and looked up at me and wipped my tears "NO"He simply put it.

"I-"He stopped "You see I'm not like many other pirates"His face was now grave

"DUH!"I sobbed

He smirked but then wnt back to his seriouse face "Your going to be a pirate on this ship soon so you need to know aventually"

I stopped him mid sentance "I never said I would!"

"But you WILL"He growled

I was about to say something else but he said "Don't say any more or else I will continued were we left off before.And let me tell you their aren't many more things to take off"

I frooze on the spot

"Good girl"He whispered in my ear

I blushed more and had a thrill of pleasure come down my spine

"You see I am known as the king of the ocean"

'DUH!!'

"And...all the crew members here.Don't age or die"If I could freeze anymore than I would have

"WHAT!?"I gaped aloud

He bit my ear and I frooze

'Ah can't...move?'

"We can only age when we find true love...or"He paused as I tried not to gasp even though I couldn't even if I wanted too.

"Their is someone who has special blood that we need to drink so ALL of us become human and will live and age normaly and AVENTUALLY die like any other normal human."

'WHAT!?'

Truth be told...
Love be told...
Wants be told...
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Cool! Ya! You stopped at the most exciting place!!!! waa! >U<
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Chapter 12-First Love

Finally my voice came back to me and I whispered drilly even though I already knew the answer to this

"Why are you telling me all this?"

"Because.You are my love."He whispered in my ear,his bangs now covering his eyes.

I gulped silently so that he couldn't hear me.

He loved me?I was guessing it was one of the two but I was ACTUALLY surprised.

I thought I was somehow the special blood person.Not his *gulp* love.

How is a person supposed to responed to this!?

"I-"I paused to try not to studder "I don't love you"I whispered.Again.It sounded dry.

His whole body that was NOW over top of me frooze.

"So...Do you love someone else then?"He whispered

My throught tightened and burned

I looked away from his face even though I couldn't see it

"I'll kill whoever they are"It surprised me by how cold and almost...scary his voice sounded.

"I don't-"He cut me off just as his lips attacked mine.

I didn't even get a chance to breath,Was he trying to soficat me?

I mouned as his hand started to tug down my now low corset.

"Ah!Stop"I gasped as I pushed him away from me.

But he continued to fight against my weak force to stop him.

I couldn't find the right word for how I felt right now it was...GREAT!And VERY pleshuring for some STRANGE reason.But it was hinted with a state of guilt?

Why did I feel sad?

I should be feeling TERRIFIED right now!

"I mean it get off!"I growled weakly.

He was still being very forceful but slowly stopped and stared into my eyes.

Reading my face almost.

His bangs NO longer hiding his eyes.

"If you don't love anyone then I still have a chance"He whispered to himself rather than me.

I stared at him with a terrified weak expression.

"If only you knew how much I loved you"He whispered

I didn't really understand this.

He had pretty much only met me once or twice so why did I matter to him.

I hated him and was rude to him.

Yet he cared SO much about ME of all people!

The real me?

Was this just one of those child hood first loves?

Probobly.

But why did his words stun me so much?

I could feel my face reddin to the state of a cherry red.

'I hate it when he makes me feel this way!And I don't even know what this feeling is!!'

And as I thought he slowly walked to the entrance door and opened it.

"Looks like I have something to work for"He joked his face no longer in pain but looking like he were about to resel down a bear or a challenge.

And for some reason that made my heart go *doki*

'Something to work for...huh?'

And with that he left and I somehow,shockingly,fell asleep....

First love,first heart throbs...
The first time a heart goes *doki* for anyone...
An interesting,and unknown feeling...
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Awesome! So So Awesome!!!!! Yeah!!! IM SO EXCITED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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