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What Charecters look like:

Alice
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u can imagin what the rest of the charecters look like ^-^


i thought Alice looked like karin from kamichama karin but with darker hair!
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sgurlrox67 wrote:

What Charecters look like:

Alice
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u can imagin what the rest of the charecters look like ^-^


i thought Alice looked like karin from kamichama karin but with darker hair!


*shakes head* in my eyes no ^-^ lol, but u can picture her however u want!! ^-^
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Awesome! So So Awesome!!!!! Yeah!!! IM SO EXCITED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


LOL!!ty!!And I can't wait 4 ur new chappy of ur stoires also do u want her to fall in love with him soon or play hard to get?? (I'm having a hard time chosing so u chose if u want ^^ )
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kyahikaru wrote:

Awesome! So So Awesome!!!!! Yeah!!! IM SO EXCITED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


LOL!!ty!!And I can't wait 4 ur new chappy of ur stoires also do u want her to fall in love with him soon or play hard to get?? (I'm having a hard time chosing so u chose if u want ^^ )


Hmmm.... hard choice....... uggg.... i dunno... eirther is fine!
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kyahikaru wrote:

Awesome! So So Awesome!!!!! Yeah!!! IM SO EXCITED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


LOL!!ty!!And I can't wait 4 ur new chappy of ur stoires also do u want her to fall in love with him soon or play hard to get?? (I'm having a hard time chosing so u chose if u want ^^ )


Hmmm.... hard choice....... uggg.... i dunno... eirther is fine!


lol okies ^-^
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Chapter 13-My New sort of boyfriend

When I woke up I noticed that their was a lump under the bed spread.

I was sort of scared at first to touch it.

More or less I was just scared that it was Scar and he would jump out of no were and start teasing me!

So I sort of just stood their barly breathing trying to see the size and shape of the thing.

It seemed sort of too small to be Scar...?

So I decided to quickly tug on the stupid thing and let this whole thing be over with!!

As soon as I did this my heart instantly settled to a slower rate

"Alto"I whispered almost smiling

He was breathing lightly,and slowly at a steady rate.

His curly chocolate brown hair a mess.

Who had brought him here?

And why?

Was it Scars?

Maybe one of his twisted way to steal my heart.

I was also amazed that I wasn't even freaking out about his instant confession and attempt of rape last night,I wasn't even constantly turning red at the thought of this.

YET

I heard the door creak open and glanced over in its direction and saw all the eyes of the pirates on me or at least in my direction.

I glowered at their faces they almost looked like they were waiting for me to do something to the poor boy

"What!?"I growled

They continued to stare and one of them answered "You kissed the boy last night,so its only to be expected"

I glared at them all "Oh yeah I LOVE boys that are about 6 years younger than me"I joked

"Gotta love'm while their young"

They chuckled to one another and then finally I growled "Need anything else other than entertainment?"

"Iya"Another pirate answered

"Cap'in wanted you for something"

"Oh"I looked back down at Alto almost debating if I should leave him for that filthy pirate and see what he wanted.

Almost scared that while I was gone the other pirates would through him over board since Scars sounded seriose when he said that he'd kill anyone that I loved even though alto wasn't exactly my "lover" to be exact.

But he might be thought of one.

"Tell him I'm busy"I said simply as I lied back down onto the pillow.

"With what!!??"A pirate that looked sort of like a navy captain rather than a pirate asked in disbeleif

"Things"I growled sleepily through a yawn.

I heard the floor boards creak and the sound of breaths get closer and I got what they where about to try and do.

Just as I got up to escape they grabbed onto my shoulders and pulled me out of the bed and out the entrance door to the deck.

"Ah let go!!"I growled as they pulled me along my feet dragging along the floor.

"If cap'in says somethin we have to obey thats the whole point of ye' know....de' cap'in?"A pirate explained.

I shook my head definatly as they opened a door to another room.

It had maps surronding all of it,and they were all charted and in the middle of the room stood a table were Scars sat.

"Ah so she came A'?"Scars smiled evily.

I growled at how sure of himself he looked when I had not come here without force.

"Iya' cap'in"The pirate grinned.

"Well I see ye' off then"He added as he dropped his grip on my shoulders and left the room.

I stared at the door foor a second but flew around and faced Scars who now stood inches away from my faces (again).

"Uh!How do you always do that!?"I growled

He stared at me for a second almost like I was the stange one and finally said "What do you mean?"

I shook my head in disbelief "You always apear out of no where so quickly"I answered plainly

He stared blankly again but then smirked "hhmm do I surprise you then?"He joked

I glared at him

"Anyone would!"

His smirk grew but then faded.

He stepped away from me and retreated back to his desk not answering my question.

"I'll let the boy stay on board"He answered all of a suddon

'Huh?'

"What?"I repeated my confussed thoughts.

"I'll let that boy that...saved"He winked at the word "-You,stay here"

I stared at him in disbaleif and then shock it off "I won't let him become a pirate"I growled

He stared at me again almost like he was in shock by my suddin outburst.

"I dought thats possible,anyone that is ON a pirate ship BECOMES a pirate."He said finally

"Well then I guess I have a challenge now"I said as I got in his face.

He smirked at my challenge "I'm sure I'll win both challenges quickly then"

"Both?"I murmured

"hhmm so you don't remember then?"His smirk grew and then all of a sudden he pulled on a piece of my blond hair and crushed his and my lips togeather.

I stared in shock but then remembered slowly about HIS little "challenge" that he had decided on his own.

"AH!"I pushed our lips apart and gasped for air

"I never decided apon that!!"I growled breathlessly as I wipped my lips thoroly with the sleeve of my clothing.

"hhmmm scared that I'll win?"He smirked

"I NEVER SAID THAT!"I roured

he chuckled to himself evily at my now red,and feirce expression

"Then its a deal"

"Deal"I repeated.

A challenge to triump
A dream to crush
A love to bloom
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I feel so stupid.... TT^TT I can't finsh a chapter of mine and you already working on the next one! I'll work as fast as possible! I'm so sorry!
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I feel so stupid.... TT^TT I can't finsh a chapter of mine and you already working on the next one! I'll work as fast as possible! I'm so sorry!


Ah!!Don't worry about it!!I'm just writing for fun and so that u won't have to wait since u seem to like ^-^ lol But anyways I just hoped u like and u shouldn't rush urself to write another chapter just write when u can ^-^ hehe
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Chapter 14-Party Pirates

Its been a few hours since our challenge has begun and Alto just woke up looking quit sleepy.

"Ah Alto-kun"I smiled at him brightly

His face lightly turned red

"Ah!So that wasn't a dream then...?"He whispered to himself rather than me

I nodded absently.

He looked up at me "Um...then your names Alice right?"He murmured looking embarresed

I noticed all the pirates from all around us freeze and watch us.

'Annoying!'My thoughts growled

"Thats right"I tried to keep my voice normale.

"Oi Alice get over here"Growled a voice

Scars.

"What!?Theirs a way to talk to people and thats not it!!"I growled as I turned around and looked at him.

He stood at the boat wheel.

"And theirs a way to talk to your captain.And thats not it"He said through his teeth

I hated the fact that I had ever agreed to becoming a pirate.Aspecially on this undead ship!!

I growled

"Fine"I spat

He didn't even smirk at my falior to fight back.

Was he possibly jelouse?

No.That couldn't be it.He was just being rude as usual.

I walked over to the wheel and stood next to him "What?"I growled

He finally smirked.

Alto walked up from behind me.

"You better be on your best behavior,were going to a party"he whispered in my ear.

My eyes widened "A what?"I asked in shock

"You heard me"

My eyes narrowed at how his voice sounded

"Fine,whatever I don't really care anyway"I growled.

"heh sure"He smirked

'A party?This might actually be fun...'My thoughts wandered and as they did,the trip to get to werever we were heading shortined.

And aventually we were their

A small little island,that wasn't hugley populated.

"You coming Alice?"Asked Alto.

I was sort of shocked that he had spokin to me,since he hadn't said a word since he had wokin up.

Not that it mattered to me,I was to busy daydreaming.

"um yeah"I nodded absently.

I was so scatter brained recently!!

I climbed down a long rope till I reached the bottem and then jumped off.

A party to enjoy...?

Partys,Drinking,Love,Pirates.
EVERYTHING that EVERYONE needs...
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kyahikaru wrote:

I feel so stupid.... TT^TT I can't finsh a chapter of mine and you already working on the next one! I'll work as fast as possible! I'm so sorry!


Ah!!Don't worry about it!!I'm just writing for fun and so that u won't have to wait since u seem to like ^-^ lol But anyways I just hoped u like and u shouldn't rush urself to write another chapter just write when u can ^-^ hehe


Don't wprry I finshed the chapter.... ^U^
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kyahikaru wrote:

I feel so stupid.... TT^TT I can't finsh a chapter of mine and you already working on the next one! I'll work as fast as possible! I'm so sorry!


Ah!!Don't worry about it!!I'm just writing for fun and so that u won't have to wait since u seem to like ^-^ lol But anyways I just hoped u like and u shouldn't rush urself to write another chapter just write when u can ^-^ hehe


Don't wprry I finshed the chapter.... ^U^
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sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:

I feel so stupid.... TT^TT I can't finsh a chapter of mine and you already working on the next one! I'll work as fast as possible! I'm so sorry!


Ah!!Don't worry about it!!I'm just writing for fun and so that u won't have to wait since u seem to like ^-^ lol But anyways I just hoped u like and u shouldn't rush urself to write another chapter just write when u can ^-^ hehe


Don't wprry I finshed the chapter.... ^U^


HEHE YAY!!
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Ya! I wonder what's going to happen at the party? *guessing* Oh and I'm going to make a new story thing! It's going to be about Idols and stuff. And the main character is NOTHING like any other anime girl out there.....hahahah
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Chapter 15-Pervert Sailor

As I walked down the sandy beach towards a small town were the "party" was supposed to be held I heard Scar and some other pirates that seemed to be second hands on deck,talking.

I couldn't hear them so I inched closer but wasn't really paying attention to my foot work and tripped over nothing.

"OW!"I cried

The pirates looked back and I flushed.

They didn't have to look at me in that sort of way.

I wasn't weak or anything,I always took care of my town but every now and then when it hurt everyone would look at me with the same eyes as these pirates did.

Worried,Smug,Curiose.I never understood what these pirates were thinking.

"Are you all right Alice?"Asked Alto with a troubled look on his face.

I nodded,my face feeling warm.

'I made a fool out of myself' I muttered in my head as Alto helped me up.

"Arigato Alto-kun" I smiled

I heard throughts being cleared and saw that the pirates were thinking strange things again.

"God you dirty pirates don't think of such perverted things"I growled as I continued to walk (limp) towards the town.

TOWN

The town was lit up with candels and people were surronding the bars were I guessed Scars and the others were going.

I sighed as my guess was right and they walked in the bars direction.

Seconds later the whole town had surronded Scar and the pirates and were chearing 'Why are they chearing for a bunch of pirates who steal,and...kill?'

The girls surronded the "attractive" pirates and the boys kissed the girls on the lips as a "greeting"

'Bastards they left me all alone over here' I muttered in my head as I rubbed my swollen ankle.

Atleast Alto was still around I though but in mere seconds he was tookin away by some younger girls talking about a makeover or something.

I didn't really care.

I had never been the one for partying,and dancing

I was even getting a little bit exited.

I felt a tap on my shoulder and turned around to face a man about my age but about 2 or 3 years older maybe,he smelled like alocohale

'ick'My nose scrunched at the smell.

"Hey cutie, you wanna have some fun?"Who does this guy think he is

"Um- no thank you.."I stood up quickly and turned around towards Scar who was surronded by girls in aw.

Something inside my twisted into a spiral and my throught felt tight.

I couldn't breath.

What was this strange feeling?

"Uh...never mind"I murmured without meaning to say a thing,and turned towards the older sailor.

He smirked and looked me up and down,and seemed to be seeing how I looked.

"Then come along gird'y"He put his arm and my shoulder and pulled me closer to him,the smell of the alcohal got stronger.

I had a bad feeling about this I thought as my stomace swirled in a butterfly filled spiral.

He pulled me outside of the bar and towards a bench on the beach.

We sat their for a while but the he moved his hand down my body to my waist.It didn't feel right,I was 14 and this guy was what 16 or 17?It wasn't right...

"Stop!"I pushed him away as he got down to my nee.

"What?"He growled looking upset

"This isn't any fun.."I murmured

"Gird'y what did you expect didn't your mama teach y'a never to go with'ye man alone at night'? "He moked as he pushed me down,my back against the bench.

"Stop"I cried as he started to pull at my buttoned white shirt (it was Scars)

"hhhmmm A girl shouldn't be wear'in such clothes now should 'yea?Its not feminit enough"He said as he ignroed my crys.

I didn't care about what I wore,I never had,I WAS one of the guys usually.At least thats what I thought when I was living at home.

"I don't care"I yelled as I kicked in beatween the legs and climbed out from under him but even in pain he grabbed me and held me down.

"Stop!Stop!"I said desperatly.

"You Bitch,how dare you"He said in rage as he reganained control of his pain and grabbed onto my bangs and began to slam my head back and forth into the bench, until my head felt warm.

As he slammed my head into the bench as hard as he could (probly trying to kill me) I began to have one of those "life flashing before your eyes" things,and began to see my life.

I missed my father,and his over protectivness,I missed my friends,and the people I had helped in the town,and the one's that had died in Scars attack to find,and catch me.

I never had beilived in how lovly my life was.But I trully was going to miss it.

And just as I began to black out and breathed my last breath I heard something...A voice calling out to me.In rage,and fear.

And then I died...

Painful Memorys...
Beutiful Memorys...


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Sry I know it wasn't great,It was just that I haven't writin in a bit so yeah..I needed to get back to doing it and get used to it... I hope u enjoyed everyone!!
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Hehe a new chapter yay!!Enjoy everyone!! ^-^
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