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whheeeeee~ HOSPITAL FICS<3

ganbatte ne? ((:


hai hai, and thank you for taking your time reading
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Wow!!
this looks so exciting!!
I love the banner!! ^-^
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Wow!!
this looks so exciting!!
I love the banner!! ^-^


thank you ^__^
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Posted 9/21/08
can i be erika toda?
btw cool fanfic!
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waah i love the story!
fuyo chan![jade chan] we're the same!
i love medical related ficS!
its cool!
can't wait what's going to happen next
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Posted 9/21/08

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can i be erika toda?
btw cool fanfic!


Sure and thank you
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Posted 9/21/08 , edited 9/21/08
Sorry taking so long... well here's part 2 for chapter 1..
I think this part is so boring~

Preview: Mirai was about to meet the two new trainee doctors

Chapter 1 part 2

Mirai: Ehhhh…
Hideaki: Nakata-san you know them too
Mirai: uh uh…no no
Hideaki: *look at them* oh…ok
Mirai: hai… *fake smile*
Hideaki: well hope you guys get along
Mirai: *she turn to her right and say to herself* hope so *back to listen to Hideaki*
Hideaki: Alright Tomohisa-san and Keiichiro-san , this nurse Nakata Mirai will show you guys around ok
Both: hai…

All three of them walk out from the office. While Mirai was showing them around and was embarrass becuz some girls in there was going crazy with Yamapi and Koyama. Finally Mirai finish

Mirai: ok, that’s all for now *smile*
Koyama: Arigato Nakata-san
Mirai: iie you guys don’t have to call me like that just call me Mirai is fine *hit her chest*
Koyama: ok arigato Mirai!
Mirai: Hope you guys know every room is at right
Both: hai…

Maki came out from a patient room and saw three of them

Maki: oh…
*all three look at Maki*
Maki: yamapi… *surprise*
Yamapi: oh..Maki *shock*
Mirai: you guys know eachother *pointed to maki and yamapi*
Maki: hai…Yamapi was my childhood friend right? *smile*
Yamapi: hai… *smile a little*
Maki: so you work here now
Koyama: only for training
Maki: oh…that’s kool but uh..gotta go ok ja~ talk to you next time Pi
Mirai: Pi? *confusing face* But anyway hope you guys know where to go right? *ask Yamapi & Koyama again*
*both didn’t answer*

Mirai was about to leave but then the emergency alarm came on

Announce: A pregnant lady has arrive plz go to the front door

Yamapi and Koyama ran to the front door also Mirai ran to the front door too. When they got there, the lady water was already broke, so all of them took her to the emergency room. When they got there, Yamapi and Koyama watch all nurses help the lady

Nurse 3: Where’s Hideaki-sensei?
Mirai: I’ll go get him

Mirai ran out. Yamapi look at the lady and grab the glove and went to the lady

Yamapi: ok let’s begin
*All the nurses and koyama look at him*
Yamapi: ma’am plz push when I told you to

The lady nod her head, while Mirai was going to Hideaki-sensei office, Ryo came out

Ryo: *yell* Ey you, the nurse that is running
*Mirai stop running turn*
Ryo: you told me that I can go outside when it’s 2 right?
Mirai: uh…hai..
Ryo: aren’t you taking me outside
Mirai: emergency right now
Ryo: I don’t care it’s a emergency or not
Mirai: you can go alone *was about to leave*

Then Maki came out from a patient room

Maki: oh…Mirai you’re here why aren’t you at the emergency room
Mirai: I was but I have to get Hideaki-sensei, this time it’s a pregnant lady
Maki: oh…honto?
Mirai: hai..her water broke too
Maki: ehh… *ran to the emergency room*

When Maki got to the Emergency door, it open, then a baby crying voice came out. Mirai heard it and was surprise

Mirai: *smile*
Ryo: gomen.. *bow down*
Mirai: huh for what
Ryo: gomen I didn’t know that you were in those kind of emergency
Mirai: iie, let me go check out the baby then I’ll take you outside
Ryo: iie, I’ll go alone *was about to leave*
Mirai: *grab his shoulder* I’ll go *smile*
Ryo: *look at her*

While the nurses was checking the baby and the mother is sleeping the two trainee doctors came out, with sweat

Koyama: our first day and already an emergency *wiping his sweat*

While Mirai and Ryo were walking around the garden at the hospital

Ryo: ano…. I forgot to ask you, what’s your name?
Mirai: oh Nakata Mirai
Ryo: Nakata Mirai, so I call you Nakata-sensei then
Mirai: iie you can call me Mirai
Ryo: Mirai, uh…ok
Mirai: so what was the question that you want to ask me again?
Ryo: oh yeah why do you work here? *lift eyebrow*
Mirai: *look at him with a shocking face*


Preview:
Erika: eh…Mirai you haven’t left yet
Mirai: huh, oh no *tired voice*
Erika: why aren’t you going home?
Mirai: I want to finish these paper works then I’ll leave
Erika: oh ok… oh yeah umm Nishikido-san was asking for you a little while ago
Mirai: oh…
Erika: I don’t know if he’s still awake but you can go check if you want to
Mirai: oh…
*Erika left*

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kyaaa sugoi!! it's great! i can feel the vibe that there's going to be a triangle love or square love!! good i love it...more please!!
Posted 9/21/08
Very Interesting. Yamapi and Koyama part are so actionable.lol I laugh at that part "First day of trainee and already emergency" hahaha..nice nice...continue on.
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Preview: Ryo wanted to know Why Mirai work in the hospital

Chapter 1 part 3

Mirai: uh…well my father was a doctor here before he had been working here almost his whole life. But then one night he has a car accident and passed away. So I promise to my father that I’ll try my best to take his place, but then I can’t instead a doctor I became a nurse, baka me *look upset*
Ryo: so you broke the promise
Mirai: Hai *looking down*
Ryo: that’s ok, unless you’re not like me
Mirai: huh why? *look at Ryo*
Ryo: My father always wanted me to take over his company, I promise that I will but then at last when I have grown up I became a naughty son and never listen to him and I don’t want to take his company I have dream too. I always wanted to try out to be the best airplane engineer, but then I end up having trouble that’s why I’m here
Mirai: oh yeah you got hurt right, that’s ok after you cover you can go back right
Ryo: hai…*smile*

Around 6 p.m. Mirai was at her desk doing paper works she doesn’t leave until 11. Then Yamapi came pass her desk and sat down in his desk

Mirai: *look at him*

Both didn’t talk awhile

Mirai: ano…did the lady saw her baby yet?
Yamapi: hai *looking at his paper*
Mirai: that’s good *nod her head*
*Koyama came to them*
Koyama: ah~ finally I can rest now
Mirai: *look at him*
Koyama: so Mirai how long have you been working here?
Mirai: oh almost a yr
Koyama: wow that’s long
Mirai: yeah…
Koyama: I was wondering why did you wanted to work here anyway
Mirai: uh…it’s becuz my father
Koyama: you’re like me, my dad force me to become a doctor too
Mirai: oh… that’s kool unless you have a father that told you to *looking at her paperworks*
Koyama: yeah…


While all three were at their desk doing something, Maki came in

Maki: uh…so tired *yawn*
Mirai: how’s the patient
Maki: good, but tiring
Mirai: oh haha hope you get off early today
Maki: uh…until 1
Mirai: again
Maki: Hai
Mirai: well do you need any help I can stay
Maki: no I don’t but if you want to help with the patient then you may
Mirai: oh ok…

~11~

Nurse 4: Nakata-san, are you leaving?
Mirai: oh not yet I want to finish these papers first
Nurse 4: oh ok, well I’m going
Mirai: hai…*wave goodbye*

While Mirai was doing her work until 12, Erika came to her

Erika: eh…Mirai you haven’t left yet
Mirai: huh, oh no *tired voice*
Erika: why aren’t you going home?
Mirai: I want to finish these paper works then I’ll leave
Erika: oh ok… oh yeah umm Nishikido-san was asking for you a little while ago
Mirai: oh…
Erika: I don’t know if he’s still awake but you can go check if you want to
Mirai: oh…
*Erika left*

When Mirai finish her paper works, she was about to leave but then she remember what Erika told her. So she stood up and was about to walk out from her desk

*phone ring*

Mirai: Hai?
Miki: Mirai?
Mirai: hai
Miki: Why aren’t you home yet?
Mirai: I’m coming home right now don’t need to worry
Miki: oh ok, I’m just curious
Mirai: don’t need too, I’ll come home
Miki: hai..
*both hang up*

Mirai grab her bag and leave the office. When she was walking toward the front door, she passed Ryo room. But then she stopped and went in front of Ryo door. Took a big breath and open the door slowly

Ryo: finally you came
Mirai: *got scared*
Ryo: you haven’t go home yet
Mirai: yeah I was but then Toda-san told me that you want to see me and what is it?
Ryo: haha nothing I just want you to come and look at the stars with me but then the time already over
Mirai: oh..gomen
Ryo: it’s fine, I usually watch the stars alone but I want to someone to see it too
Mirai: oh next time ne
Ryo: hai
Mirai: well I gtg now
Ryo: ja~
Mirai: ja~ *turn around and was about to leave*
Ryo: chotto
Mirai: nani? *turn*
Ryo: uh…one of the sensei told me that I can go home tomorrow so I might leave tomorrow
Mirai: *happy* that’s good for you, now you can go back to work
Ryo: yeah…
Mirai: well I think you need to rest, so I’m going to leave you ok
Ryo: hai
Mirai walk out from his room. When she was about to leave, she saw Yamapi

Mirai: oh Tomohisa-sensei?
*yamapi saw her*
Mirai: *walk to him* you haven’t left yet?
Yamapi: iie, Hideaki-sensei was talking to me so I stayed
Mirai: oh…well see you tomorrow
Yamapi: hai
Mirai walk away from him, but then she turn

Mirai: Tomohisa-sensei, don’t stay up late *walk away*
Yamapi: huh, that baka *smile*

~MIRAI HOUSE~

Mirai: Tadaima
Miki: oh…Mirai *tired voice*
Mirai: ehh…
Miki: your home
Mirai: you stay up
Miki: hai
Mirai: baka why didn’t you sleep? Tomorrow you’re going to school go sleep right now
Miki: hai… I was worry about you gosh *walk to her bed room*

Preview

Mirai: Ohayo Yamapi *smile*
Yamapi: *ignore*
Mirai: *tired eye* huh…
Maki: oh ohayo Mirai
Mirai: ohayo Maki
Maki: your patient left today
Mirai: hai…I know Toda-san told me already
Maki: oh Erika told you already that’s kool
Mirai: hai… well I gtg talk to you later
Maki: hai

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kyaaa love it..hehe ryo seems like a nice guy!! hehe more please!!
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LOVE THIS FANFIC SO MUCH .
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Posted 9/22/08
wheeeee~ DOCTOR PI<3
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Posted 9/22/08
Wow!!
this is so cute!!
Ryo's so cool!! ^-^
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Posted 9/22/08 , edited 9/22/08
for now on i might post my fic on the first page so you guys don't have to go page to page to find the chapters or parts

part 4 for chapter 1 will be up soon!!
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