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hi~ i'm sorry for being such an irresponsible mod, i'm not helping at all, and i havent read all of your fic! sooo much! and sooo nice! i can't choose which one first~
well, i'm going to re-post my old fanfic, please tell me when to stop, okay? feel free to comment bad!

CHAPTER 1

Yamada ryosuke, an artist, singer, talented chef and young man. But wait, i'm not going to tell you about his young life, i've imagine him as a father, single parent :)
A 29 year old yamada ryosuke has a 5 year old girl named yamada umi. His wife died 6 months ago caused cancer. Being popular and single dad at the same time is not easy at all, so he paid for half time nany. Only for take care his daughter at day.

One day, ryosuke cooked for dinner, umi study hiraganas and making some pics, she ask ryochan.
''otochan..''
"yes, dear, are you hungry?"
"no.. Etoo... Ok, yes."
"wait for 5 more minute ok, sweaty"
"ok, otoochan, where is okachan?"
Ryosuke stunt, he thinking the right way to answer it.
"otoochan, you don't know?"
"okachan have done the best, she's watching us now, on the heaven"
Umi stop her draw and walk to ryosuke, she grab ryosuke's pants.
"heaven? Where is it?"
"hmmm... I'll show you after we eat ok? Ah! Its done! Here you go*put dinner on the table*"
"waa, tochan's cook smells good, itadakimasu!"
"umi like it?"
"soo much!"

After dinner, ryosuke wash dishes and carry umi to backyard.
"i promised to show kachan place right?" umi nods.
"see the sky, what do you see?"
Umi sees sky and dirrectly answer "stars"
"kachan ne, right now, she's above those stars, watching us. That place called heaven. It's really beatiful there."
Umi hug her dad tightly
"will she comeback?"
Ryosuke look his daughter, smile gently and answer,
"we'll go there someday, so be a nice girl ok?"
"i promise tochan!"
"saa, good girl can't sleep well, let's go to sleep."
Ryosuke carry his daughter to her bed room. He put her soft blanket and turn off her room light.
"tochan, you will come to my parent meeting,right?" ryosuke stunt, he forget
"which one?"
"the one i gave you the letter yesterday."
"ah! That one, i'd never miss it." he said it even without remember which one. He step out from umi's bedroom.
"tuesday.. Tuesday, i feel like i have sth to do that day." he said to himself.
His phone rang, he has no mood to look who's calling, so he just picked it.
"ryochan!"
"yuto ka? Doshite?"
"my kids have this parent meeting on tuesday, what will you do?"
"i'll come?"he confused.
"yappari."yuuto sigh.
"why?"
"you forget about we have dorama shoot."
Ryosuke stun, He really forget. What the hell?
"helloo, ryochan? You still there?"
Ryosuke can't think. Damn it.
"ok, than, happy thinking, jaa ne." and phone closed.
Now only ryosuke, with his full-scheduled-mind alone at his sofa.
Posted 9/19/08
Yatta!! glad you posted it ruru-nee!!
love it!!
it's so good!
aww... Ryosuke as a father! is so sweet!
i'm sure his daughter would be sooo kawaii!!
aww... his wife died poor Yama-chan..
can't wait for the next chappy!! ^_^
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waaah!! i missed reading ur fic ruru chan!...yay!
finally you posted it and ur not an irresponsible mod ...
it won't be...
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WOW!!Yamada as a father!!!!SUGOI!!!
hahaha..
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Gyaaaaaaaaaaa ~~
Yamaaa ..
heheheh .
i ever read ur fanfic already .
it's really good .
keep it up ^^
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haha!!
yay!!
you posted it here!! ^-^
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^_________^ COOL!! ^^.
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wee! what would ryosuke dooo? :O poor ryosuke.
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わああ、i'm really glad this has pretty good response, please enjoy the next chapt and once again i remind you, please tell me the weakness and right time to stop

Papa Yama chapter 2 :
 
"tuesday... why tuesday? aaaah!" Ryosuke keep thinking and thinking for his daughter parent meeting. When his wife was there, he never really care about this kind of stuff. But now, since she’s gone, he MUST care about this. He don’t want to disappointing his daughter and of course his wife.
 
Finally, he fell asleep. With strawberries in front of him, TV still turn on, and he miss England match he’s been waiting for ( cause I saw one of ryochan photo using England uniform and I scream out loud to know he like England too (: ). Night time pass. He wake up with Umi above him waiting for him to open his eyes and like talking to him when he slept.
“Ah! Ohayo, tochan! You late.” She said when she realized Ryosuke wake up.
“Late? What do you mean by late, angel?” he asked half sleeping and try to grab his phone.
“Because… you’re the one who said you must work at 7.30 AM!”
“and, what time is it?”
“hmm…. Let me see, ng… I don’t know how to say it, but the short one on 7 and the long one to number 2.” Ryosuke startled and jump off the sofa. He sees clock on his phone. Damn, his daughter right. It’s already 7.10 AM, he couldn’t hear his alarm, and now he only has 20 minute to get ready and make a breakfast and bento for Umi.
 
When his done, with the breakfast and bento, he make his way to work.
“Umi, I’ll go, can you wait for nany alone?”
“sure, Dad! I always do that. You can depend on me.” She smile proudly and pointing herself.
“That’s my girl, come here, let me kiss you.” Umi run to Ryosuke and get her morning kiss.
“Don’t forget to lock the door and eat your breakfast ok? Oh, yeah, make sure you learn about clock!”Ryosuke said, and he left. Umi giggling, she closed the door, make sure it’s locked, and eat her breakfast and watching barney :D.
 
Ryosuke drive really fast to his photoshoot place. He meet his manager that looked very upset. He run, and said “gomen… gomen…. Oversleep.”
“Aaaah!*very upset* whatever it is, let’s go change, and FAST!”
“hahaha, ok, ok, no need to be upset, sis.” Ryosuke get changed. And he do what he need to do. After the photoshoot,
“here, coffee.”
“ah, thanks. How do you know I’m sleepy?”
“hey, you always be my lil brother even I am your manager now.”
“haha, that’s right.”Ryosuke laugh and drink his coffee.
“how’s Umi?”ask his sister.
“Mmm hmm…” Ryosuke nodding. He suddenly stand and ask,
“Can you rescheduled my Tuesday schedule?”ask Ryosuke.
“What’s wrong with Tuesday?”
“You see, Umi has her parent meeting on Tuesday, so since she’s gone, I am the one who must come.”
“Parent meeting ka? But parent meeting usually morning.”
“That’s why, we have dorama shoot at morning too right?”
“Err…. Ryosuke, are you sure you saw the right schedule?”
“Eh?” Ryosuke looks confused. “but, Yuuto said…”
“Yuuto? Both of you are trouble maker since you joined JE.”Ryosuke giggle. “Here, read this CAREFULly, ok?”
Ryosuke eyes like O.O and he smiled =)
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kyaaa i've read this before....o.O...it's really sad...kyaaa gomen i shouldn't spoil it for the others who haven't read it yet...hehe gomen ne...demo i love it!!
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Mai-Lee wrote:

kyaaa i've read this before....o.O...it's really sad...kyaaa gomen i shouldn't spoil it for the others who haven't read it yet...hehe gomen ne...demo i love it!!


hahahhaah, daijoubu daijoubu, thx for reading it

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Mai-Lee wrote:

kyaaa i've read this before....o.O...it's really sad...kyaaa gomen i shouldn't spoil it for the others who haven't read it yet...hehe gomen ne...demo i love it!!


hahahhaah, daijoubu daijoubu, thx for reading it



hai...hehe demo it's really good!!
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hey girls~ i decided to post everything i have wrote here~ some of chapters i have posted on YRC group, but some of them haven't please enjoy
chapter 3:

chapter 4 :

chapter 5 :

chapter 6 :

chapter 7 :

chapter 8 :

enjoy~
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KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! KAWAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII~~~
I LOVE ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT~~~
MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! TT.TT UMI-CHAN PAPA YAMA KAAWAAAAAAAAAAAI XD
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glad you like it!
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