Post Reply Tears of Ice as it Melts
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Posted 9/19/08
THIS IS A WORK OF INSULT TO GOD/HOLY SPIRIT/SON SO IF REALLY LOYAL TO RELIGIONS OF THAT TYPE, DON'T READ.

So, yeah, like I said, I actually wanna finish this story. It might take a while but here's a basic summary. I'll post up the actual story in a few hours.......maybe 5 hours cause I need to get off soon. Also, the italic part, I used a translator so it might not be very accurate:


She was always laughing and smiling, she was popular, not quiet beautiful but still pretty with her long brown hair and dark green eyes. She was easy to get along with and always friendly, outgoing, playful, and in many ways, cute.

It all changed one day. Her cruel smile shone red in the light of the fires and screams of agony. She was a beast. A monster. Her hate bringing her back even from the depth of Hell.

"Reprobo thy deus of Olympus. Profugus ut ora of Abyssus. Reprobo thy flamen. Nunquam ut reverto. Reprobo thy Filius of Olympus. Ut infinitio of absolute poena. Reprobo totus Angli. Pro vomica of meus universitas."

((It's suppose to mean "Condamn thy god of Heaven. Banished to the edges of Hell. Condamn thy holy spirit. Never to return. Condamn thy Son of Heaven. To eternity of absolute pain. Condamn all Angles. For the curses of my world."))
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Posted 9/20/08
Prologue part 1: Childhood

Two children who looked around 7 raced along the creek, surrounded by bright green trees of mid-summer, their laughter resounding in the forest. One child with her dark, almost black, brown hair in a pony tail, bright, forest green eyes, sharp ears and ivory skin, laughed and tackled the boy. They boy had light gold hair and silvery eyes with a slightly darker shade of skin then the girl gave a yell of surprise as they rolled around, wrestling. They girl came out on top.

"HA!!! I beat you again!" the girl laughed happily.

"No fair!" the boy pouted, "You took me by surprise! I wasn't ready!"

"You got beat by a girl!!! Not for the first time either!" she grinned as she flopped down on her back next to him, "Heheh. You'll never become our clan leader at this rate. I'll beat you to it."

"That's cause you cheat. Besides, it's not that you're unbeatable. You got a really large weak point." he said seriously.

"And what's that?"

The boy grinned, "YOU'RE TICKLISH!!!!" and he started tickling her sides. She shrieked and laughed. Then, she managed to kick him off her. They were both rolling on the ground, laughing.

"And you say I cheat." she said between giggles.

Both of them froze. The sound of a bell rang throughout the forest. The warning bell of their clan. They looked quickly at each other with wide, confused eyes. As if on a silent signal, both of them bolted toward the sound of the bell silently and quickly. A low branch hanged down on the trail they took and like little monkeys, they climbed onto the trees and moved through the branches faster then a human could ever hope to achieve with trained accuracy.

They increased their speed and momentum with every swing and leap until they were little more then blurs to the untrained eye.

They're not limited to human limits. After all, they're demons. Or so they believe.
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Posted 9/25/08
I'm stuck. I knew it'll be hard to stick to it. I usually work on one story at a time and then work on another when I get newly inspired but since all of my focus is on Huntress right now, this story is postponed for now. Until I get stuck on Huntress and move on here, I'm not updating this story.
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