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CONTINUATION OF CHAPTER 1:

Jed: Hi! Watashi wa Otsuka Jed desu!
Yuto: Hah? why is that girl looking at me? Am I that attractive? *boasting*
Mai: Hi! Watashi wa Hagiwara Mai desu!
Chinen: Oh.. she's so kawaii..
Mai: *saw Chinen then smiled*
Chinen: *blush* *oh, she likes me^^*
Madoka: Hi! Watashi wa Hagiwara Madoka desu!
Chinen: Eh?! they're sisters?! they don't even have similarities! .. *shocked*
Ryutaro: Iie, only Mai and Umi, because they're twins, Madoka is just their cousin.. She's the girl i like.. *blush*
Chinen: so.. you like Madoka huh?
Ryutaro: Eh?! did I say that?!
Chinen: haha, stop joking Ryutaro..
Ryutaro: ah.. hehehe..
Nikki: Hi! I'm Nikki Tozer, nice to meet ya'll! [english]
Keito: Ooh, wer'e the same ..

----SENIORS CLASS A----
sensei: Ok class, time to introduce yourselves..
Yabu: Ore wa Yabu Kota desu, yoroshiku desu!
Hikaru: Ore wa Yaotome Hikaru, yoroshiku desu!
sensei: ooh! you have big head huh.. that means you have big brain!
Hikaru: Iie! i just drink a lot of water, that's why I look like this..
*everyone didn't laugh, except for Kaye*
Kaye: hahahahha! your'e funny ne?!
Hikaru: hehe, thank you for laughing of my corny joke .. *smiles*
Kaye: *melted in Hikaru's smile* *smiles*
Inoo: Ore wa Inoo Kei, yoroshiku desu!
Girl1: he's hot ne?
Girl2:ne?!
Girl3:ne?!
All girls: ne....?!... *except for Chihiro*
Chihiro: hot?! what's hot with him?! *as if she doesn't like Kei*
Inoo: *looks at Chihiro and smiled then winked*
Takaki: Ore wa Takaki Yuya, yoroshiku desu!
Ai: If Chihiro have Inoo, then I have Takaki.. ^^ *saying in her mind*
Daiki: Ore wa Ariyoka Daiki, yoroshiku desu!
sensei: next?!
Daiki: *shakes Yuki's shoulder, they are seatmates*
Yuki: Ah.. *yawn* Hi.. Watashi wa Nakamaru Yuki desu... *she was so embarassed, so she decided that she will not sleep back*
Daiki: haha! you better not sleep next time okay?
Yuki: ah.. hai .. *smiles*
Daiki: haha, your'e funny ne..
Kaye: Hi! Watashi wa Yamashita Kaye desu!
Hikaru: *whispers on his own* thank you again for laughing.. again.. that was my first time that a girl appreciated my jokes..
Mizuki: *looking at Yabu* Hi! Watashi wa Ashiya Mizuki desu!
Yabu: Eh?! why is she looking at me?.. *shocked*
Chihiro: Hi! Watashi wa Otsuka Chihiro desu!
Inoo: *smiling*
Ai: Hi! Watashi wa Otsuka Ai desu!
Takaki: ahh.. she's kawaii.. *blushing*
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Posted 9/20/08
aw cool!!
I want more!!
great start!!
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Posted 9/20/08

emkyuu wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:

Sugoi~! XD!
I want chapter 2~! XD! I'll wait eagerly... X3!

"Nikki Tozer – Keito’s lover, also a half British and half Japanese, she’s the sister of the famous Step’s Kaye Tozer."
- can I be her?! onegashimasu~ ^o^!


haha .. actually chapter 1 is not yet finished .. i'll post the continuation soon .. =)
sure! you can be her! .. ^^ arigatou for the support!!! .. =D



*harhar!*
arigatou~! XD!
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pafoua wrote:

it's great! haha yuto was jealous of yamada lol
can i be Hagiwara Mai??


woah! thank you for the support! ^^ sure! you can be hagiwara mai^^


ur welcome!! thnx love-love neechan!!
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Posted 9/20/08
everyoone already have crushes hahah
kute fic!!
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Posted 9/20/08
waaaaa...sugoi!! i love it!! hehe keep it up ne!!
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Posted 9/20/08
haha~ this is cute! ^^
i like it~ :)
keep writing! :D
I can't wait to see some development in their relationships~
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Posted 9/20/08
Hahaha..SUGOII!!!^_^
More please!!^_~
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Posted 9/21/08

emkyuu wrote:


yamachan-kakkoi wrote:

yuto is jealous.
lol^^
i wanna read the next part!hehe
can i be in it too?
i want to be otsuka chihiro please~hehe^^


haha .. thankz for reading it .. ^^
i'll post the next part soon .. Ü
sure ..! u can be otsuka chihiro .. =D
thank you very much for the support!!!!


thankss..hehe^^
KYAAAAA~
love the first part!
kawaii..hahahh
i'll keep supporting u~~
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Posted 9/21/08
waaah!kyaa
i looked at him!
more umi chan!
onegai!
Posted 9/21/08
haha. i am such a sleepy head. good thing daiki saved me! ^^

can't wait for the next one! ^^
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Posted 9/22/08 , edited 9/22/08
CHAPTER 2: The Fight

----------------CLASS DISMISSAL-----------------------------

Ryosuke: Finally! First day of school is done! ..
Yuto: Ah.. sumimasen ryo - chan, can we go home together?
Umi: Ryosuke!! go home with me!
Jed and Mai: EEHH??!!
Mai: what about us umi - chan?!
Umi: ah.. maybe tomorrow okay? okay mai - chan?
Mai: huh? nande?! nande?!
Umi: ah.. because i want to go home with ryosuke.. okay?
Mai: ah... ok...
Ryosuke: Eh?! Umi - chan?! ah... ah...
Yuto: no! he's going home with me! i asked first!
Umi: ha?! he's not going with a gay like you! (sorry guyz .. but it's only a fic .. gomen! gomen!)
Jed: eh?! hey! he's not gay! you can't call him like that umi - chan!
Umi: Jed? your in his side?!
Jed: ah.. gomen.. i'm leaving now! ja!
Mai: chotto matte jed - chan!
Yuto: weird girl .. well, ryosuke is with me! ne ryosuke? ne?
Ryosuke: ah... ah...
Umi: no! we've been friends since we were 4 years old, and i have something to tell him! and ..
Yuto: and what?!
Umi: and i like him so much!
Ryosuke: EH?!.. umi - chan.. *blush*
Yuto: oh yeah?! i like him too!
Ryosuke & Umi: EEEHHHHH????!!!!
Umi: so.. you confirmed that you are a gay huh?!
Yuto: no! it's not what you think! ..
Umi: haha! yuto is a gay! .. hahaha!
Ryosuke: stop that! ok then! the three of us shall go home together! .. just promise me that you will stop the argue okay? ...
Yuto & Umi: hai..
*when they arrived in the gate...*
Umi: hah! Kamenashi Kazuya! over there!
Yuto: hah?! where?! where?! *yuto is a big fan of Kame and he is his admired senior, "in my fanfic only .. hihi.."*
Umi: Ryosuke! lets run! lets go! hurry! ..
Ryosuke: eh?! stop that umi - chan! ..
Umi: eh?! nande?
Ryosuke: umi - chan! what are you doing! you promised me! .. yuto is also my friend! why are you doing this?! it seems like you're not the umi that i knew before! you've change! ..
Yuto: hey, he's not here .. hmmft! you're bad umi - chan .. you lied to me .. you..! you!..
Ryosuke: stop it yuto! ..
Umi: well.. i guess i'll just go home myself .. bye ryo - chan .. bye yuto - san ..
Ryosuke: hah?! chotto matte! *but ryosuke is late because umi is already in the bus*
Yuto: gomen ryo - chan ..
Ryosuke: Iie, don't be sorry, it's my fault. It's because of my big fat mouth.
Yuto: hah?! your mouth is not big, .. nor fat ..
Ryosuke: *laughing* is that a joke?
Yuto: no.. and what's the funny?
Ryosuke: ah.. nothing.. *can't stop giggling because of the dumbness of yuto*
Yuto: hey! stop it ne..
Ryosuke: ah.. gomen..
*suddenly, Chinen arrived*
Chinen: ah! hi! can i go with you guyz?
Ryosuke: sure! .. ^^
Yuto: Eh?! your going home already?!
Ryosuke: hai, nande>
Yuto: i thought wer'e going to eat outside first?
Ryosuke: eh?! you didn't said that before and i haven't agreed ..!
Yuto: ah! change plan! is it okay with you Chinen?
Chinen: hai! i just wanted to be friends with you guyz .. so, anywhere would be fine! .. ^^ .. Ü



guyz .. i'm very sorry that i didn't include the other characters in this chap. .. gomen! gomen!



WHAT WILL HAPPEN ON THE NEXT CHAPTER?
- all hey say jump will meet, and will finally form the group Hey! Say! JUMP,
and their group is going to be the most famous group in their school.
- knowing more about yuto, ryutaro and others .. ^^
- stay tuned for the next chapter guyz! hope you like it! .. Ü
Posted 9/22/08
love it! ^^
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Posted 9/22/08
ahahahaha^^
yuto and umi is fighting over yamachan~

love it
more pleaseee!hehe~
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sugoi ~~! i like it !
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