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NOOO. THE GOOD PEOPLE ARE TAKEN.
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I'm getting all crazy now!!
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I'm late. ><
I've been busy and sick lately... so... *hides*
But here's a long-ish first chapter! ^______________^
ENJOY~



♥ Chapter One:

I look in the mirror
Hoping to see myself clearer

I see my face
That I wished to erase

For I did not feel
Or even reveal

The tiniest bit of me
I wanted to flee

Because looking into a mirror
Made nothing clearer




All three groups were summoned by the Devil God for an important meeting one evening.

“The curse within you all is now activated,” the Devil God said in a deep voice. He grinned.

“Before midnight, each one of you must go to the human world. Failure to follow this instruction leads to immediate death. Do you understand?” he asked. All twenty-two young men nodded in understanding.

“You all already understand the rules that apply, but I shall repeat them,” he began.

“You must eat the souls of ten humans before twenty-five days of being in the human world. By eating the souls, you are kissing the humans. If you are unable to do this, after twenty-five days, you will die,” he added.

“If you complete your task of eating ten human souls, then you will return to our world safely,” he said. They all nodded.

“That is all. Does anyone have any questions?”

“Where will we be once we go to the human world?” Tegoshi asked as everyone’s attention turned towards him.

“Good question. You’d all be placed in around the same area. I am unsure of where the exact location is, but I will assure you that it is a safe place,” the Devil God replied and everyone nodded.

“Any other questions?” Everyone shook their heads. The Devil God nodded.

“Remember, you must all be in the human world by midnight,” he said, and with that, he vanished.

-

Kamenashi Kazuya, the leader of KAT-TUN, looked at his watch.

7:00 PM. Five more hours left.

“Let’s make a bet,” Kamenashi said as the three groups settled down.

Yamashita Tomohisa, the leader of NEWS, asked, “What kind of bet may I ask?”

“Well, from all the groups, let us see which group can have all their members get rid of this curse the quickest,” Kamenashi explained.

“So like a race to see which of us is fastest?” Yamashita asked and Kamenashi nodded.

Yamada Ryosuke, the leader of Hey! Say! JUMP, stated, “That is very unfair for us. Our group consists of ten members whereas NEWS and KAT-TUN only have six.”

“Tch. Listen kid, if your group tries their best, maybe you can beat us. And if you beat us, you will be the new almighty group in the devil world. I think it’s a pretty good deal for you. A whole bunch of people would look up to you,” Yamashita said with a hint of annoyance.

Yamada thought for a while and then nodded.

“Alright, we’re in,” he smirked. The other members of Hey! Say! JUMP didn’t look very satisfied with their leader’s decision.

“Alright then, are we all going to the human world at the same time?” Kamenashi asked and Yamashita nodded.

“We intend to go at the same time as the other groups, right?” Yamashita asked as he turned to the rest of NEWS’ members. They all nodded.

“Okay, we will go at the same time as well,” Yamada said and Kamenashi smiled.

“Why don’t we go now?” Kamenashi asked and both Yamada and Yamashita looked at Kamenashi suspiciously.

Yamada looked at his watch.

It’s 7:15 PM. It’s way too early.

“Why now?” Yamada asked with a hint of curiosity.

“No reason,” Kamenashi replied with a casual shrug. Yamada nodded.

“Very well, since we have no reason to stay and wait here, I insist we go now as well,” Yamada said and Yamashita nodded in understanding.

The twenty-two men all stood up and closed their eyes. Devils were only able to go to the human world when their curse was activated.

With a flash of light, they all disappeared.

-

RING! RING! RING!

Kame woke up with a headache. He stared at the thing that woke him up. He was officially in the human world.

“What the--“ he said as he stared at the ringing object.

Without hesitation, he smashed it on the ground and was satisfied that it no longer rung. He turned around to see Yamashita lying asleep beside him. On the same bed.

He looked on the table beside the bed. They were in a hotel.

You’ve got to be kidding me.

He looked at his clothes and realized that he was wearing a student uniform. He looked at the figure beside him and realized that Yamashita was wearing the same uniform as him.

You’ve got to be kidding me.

We are high school students, of all things.


“Yamashita Tomohisa. Wake up before I decide to smash open your head,” Kame yelled into his ear.

“WHAT? WHERE ARE WE?” Yamashita said as he dashed out of the bed. Kamenashi smirked.

“Let’s go… to school,” he said and Yamapi looked confused.

“Just come,” Kame said and dragged Yamapi out of the hotel. He wasn’t sure what high school they go to, but according to their uniform, they went to Niji Gakuen.

Tch. What a lame name.

With a lot of asking for directions, they somehow managed to find their school.

-

Kame scanned around the school. This was an all boy’s school.

How are we supposed to find victims if everywhere we go, there are boys?

Kame could feel them. He could feel all twenty of the cursed devils inside this school. Minus him and Yamapi of course.

They all went to the same school. Excellent.

He looked through a window to see that there was an all girl’s school across from their school. Good. He still had some chances.

-

“E-e-excuse m-me,” an unknown voice suddenly said.

Kame turned around to see a nice looking girl, a perfect first victim.

But why was a girl in this school?

“M-may I ask where Kuma Gakuen is?” she asked with a nervous look.

Oh, so that’s why. Tch. Kuma Gakuen. That sounds lamer than Niji Gakuen.

“Is that the all girl’s school?” he asked with a million dollar smile.

The girl blushed and nodded furiously. Kame nicely pointed over to the location through the same small window and she thanked him and attempted to scurry off. However, Kame placed his hand on her shoulder before she was able to run off.

“What’s your name?” he asked.

“M-my name is Hachimitsu Sui,” she said without looking at him. He nodded with a smile.

With a swift motion, he tilted her head up so that her eyes met with his.

Without a second thought, Kame leaned down and planted a soft kiss on her lips.

Then, after about a second, he shoved her down onto the ground and started walking away.

He smirked.

One down. Nine to go.

-

“Yuto, stop eating,” Takaki said as Yuto and him walked down the hallway of their school, Niji Gakuen.

They came to the human world and woke up in the boy’s washroom, of all places.

“Takaki, Takaki, Takaki. It’s a once in a lifetime chance to eat human food in the human world. Gosh, at least consider the fact that we still have 25 days,” Yuto said and started biting into his hot dog.

“No Yuto. We only have 25 days. It’s not good to slack,” Takaki said.

“Think about it this way. The first 15 days, we can eat and sleep. Then, for the 10 days after, we’ll catch our victims. Good deal?” Yuto asked with a smile. Takaki slapped him in the head with his hand and rolled his eyes.

“Ne, Takaki. Can’t all of Hey! Say! JUMP just kiss each other since we have 10 members? Then all our curses with be deactivated!” Yuto suggested.

“Yuto. We’re not human,” Takaki said.

Yuto stopped smiling.

“Ah… I forgot,”




[end of chapter one]



So. Um. Shie-channn! ><
i know you're paired with Keito and not Kame.. But a devil has to start somewhere before they fall in love right? >< ehe~ i sacrificed kame.. because i didn't want anyone to be upset that their guy kissed another girl... so i hope everyone's okay ^^ and no worries... no other guy.. would kiss a girl who isn't paired with them.. if that makes sense.. xD SO JUST NO WORRIES! XD

I didn't really like this chapter.. but i'll try to improve ><

most of the guys would appear in the next few chappies.. so yes ^^

THANK YOU FOR READING! ^^
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“Ne, Takaki. Can’t all of Hey! Say! JUMP just kiss each other since we have 10 members? Then all our curses with be deactivated!” Yuto suggested.


ahah this was so funny!! i love it....it's so cool and great!! when will u post the next part??

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this is good....^^i didnt knoe its goin to be this good...is there anymore roles??
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i like the banner...^^

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i just barely found out only morimoto is left so ill take him...^^hehe


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kyaaa! i like the first part!...
i just laughed at the part when yuto said

Ne, Takaki. Can’t all of Hey! Say! JUMP just kiss each other since we have 10 members? Then all our curses with be deactivated!


good job!
i want more pls...
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KOOL~ i love it i want to read more..lolx yuto is so funny haha
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gyaaa!! devils!! kowai hahahaha

love it!! kakkoi desu!!

ne .. since my daiki is taken can i be tagguchi junno?? hehehhe
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deen22 wrote:

gyaaa!! devils!! kowai hahahaha

love it!! kakkoi desu!!

ne .. since my daiki is taken can i be tagguchi junno?? hehehhe


ehe~ thank you~ ^^

sure! you can be with taguchi~ xD

but first, u'll need to fill in this form because it helps me with organizing ^^

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deen22 wrote:

gyaaa!! devils!! kowai hahahaha

love it!! kakkoi desu!!

ne .. since my daiki is taken can i be tagguchi junno?? hehehhe



gomen ne...deen-chan i took it...honto gomen!! i feel so bad!!
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ano..if it's ok....deen-chan u can take my part for daiki...and i can just take massu..since no one has took his part!! demo is it ok with u?? and also the creater!!
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deen22 wrote:

gyaaa!! devils!! kowai hahahaha

love it!! kakkoi desu!!

ne .. since my daiki is taken can i be tagguchi junno?? hehehhe



gomen ne...deen-chan i took it...honto gomen!! i feel so bad!!


haha its ok! no harsh feelings hehehe
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kyaaaaa
i love the first part!!
yuto loool
cant wait for the next part!hehe
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thanks!!!
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