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this fic is written by my great friend angel-chan!! ( angel_averagegal) this fic is great!! please do read!! and we haven't came up with the title yet...demo when we do..we will change it!! or we'll tell the mods to change the tittle for it!! ja here it is!! (i really love this fic!! hope u guys who read it does too)

Starring:
Kojima Ayumu (geh-chan) —Older of the twins and she’s the headstrong girl who’s forever looking out for her twin, Aiko. They are almost inseparable and no one can tell them apart since young… well, except the few who are really close to them.
Kojima Aiko (mai-lee) —Younger of the twins and she’s always caring for her sister, putting her sister, Ayumu, before herself. (Aiko means beloved child… it has a very nice meaning so I thought I would use it~)
Nakajima Chiaki (Van-chan) —Chiaki’s my friend’s name… it means fine autumn (I think it’s a very nice name so I just used it~^^) she’s the best friend of Aiko… sister of Yuto…. But no one knows about it…not even her best friend…
Yuki Yumi (Yamada_Yuuki83) —best friend of Ayumu… a HUGE fan of Yamada. She’s a really stubborn girl at times and trust me… you wouldn’t want to mess with her.
All HSJ members~


Things that you need to know:
Kojima Ayumu and Kojima Aiko—they are twin sisters who participates actively in basketball and Aiko likes Daiki who’s very much smitten with Ayumu who happens to like Yamada… anyway~ they met the renowned singers whilst having a mixed team basketball match(which means that there are girls and guys in the group…)
HSJ—ten cool guys who are in the basketball team. Girls adore them… guys want to be them… Kojima twins… just can’t wait to bash them! Other than playing basketball, they are the hottest thing in Japan~!!!


HERE IS CHAP 1


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ano..angel-chan if we can be characters in this fic...i really wanna be kojima ayumu because i love her in ur fic!!
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CHAP 2-----------------------------

They assembled in the court that was exceptionally flooded with people, “whoa~ why are there so many people here today…?” Yumi asked, intimidated by the overwhelming number of people who came especially for this match, “isn’t this just a match against Akado High…?” Yumi continued.
The rest of the team were also very much intimidated by the crowd, “The Akado High must be really strong… that’s why there’s so many people…” some guys from their team deduced, Aiko and Ayu chuckled and looked at each other, knowing exactly what their twin is thinking… wait till they meet the guys…!

Just then, their coach came rushing in, telling them what to do, “right… this is your first match this year so I want all of you to do your best alright! Akado isn’t a very friendly team… but I trust that you guys can do it…! Gambatte…!” he cheered enthusiastically as his team looked at him awkwardly.
“Umm… coach… there’s no need to be so enthusiastic about the cheering part….” One of the guys said as the circle dispersed, “eh~!?” Coach Jin exclaimed, “aren’t you guys going to cheer!? Come on…! Cheering helps to boost team spirit…!” he tried persuading, “besides…” he added, “I’ve been anticipating it for a long time…!” he then looked at them hopefully… but the only reply he got was the silence from the members.
Disappointed, he sat in a corner, trying to get emotional all over a cheer, “there he goes again… ever so excited about little things like these…” Yumi laughed. That was when a foreboding silence filled the hall, sending a shiver down their spine… the Akado players have arrived… walking to their seats really coolly and settled down, unzipping their jackets… and making the crowd go wild. Out of nowhere, various banners started popping out, “Eh!?” everyone except Jin, Aiko and Ayu exclaimed, “We’re playing against a team of idols!?” Jin then pushed his specs and smiled, “So… are you afraid now…? Ahaha….”
They looked up to their coach with puppy dog eyes and cried, “Coach Jin…!” that was when their coach narrowed his eyes at them, “don’t even think of escaping…!” and one by one, he pushed them into the court, “Ayu, Aiko…! Remember…! Work with each other…! You’re the best combination…!” Jin reminded them supportively, “we understand…!” they said, with a determined tone.
Flexing his muscles, Yamada eyed at Ayu who was also approaching the centre of the court, “I won’t let you win…” Ayumu muttered as she narrowed her eyes at Yamada, “you stupid teen idols are just good-for-nothings.” With a smirk, Yamada replied, “As an idol, I won’t lose to you… losing to you would be a disgrace to me, my school and my band.” Ayu sniffed, infuriated by Yamada.

Then, there was a whistle… both of them set their eyes on the orange ball held by the umpire… and the game begins! Ayu made a jump for the ball as it was thrown into the air… grabbing it with her sweat palms, she landed on her toes and passed the ball to her sister… only to be intercepted by Daiki! “Oh no… there goes the ball… into Arioka’s hands!” the committee announced, “he shoots and he scores! Two points for Akado High…!” the team watched in bewilderment as the speedy Arioka made a swift two point score under the hoop. “What are you doing!?” they heard coach Jin scream, “Get them!” the team nodded with much determination as they got into their places, eyes flaring at the players from Akado High…

“Time out…!”Jin yelled over the noise to the umpire, requesting a time out… it was the last twenty seconds and Akado high was leading 61-50… it would be hard to win now. “They’re getting tired now… we can use this to our advantage and score all we want.” Takaki panted.
Keito nodded his head in agreement, “yes… but we still have to look out for the twins though…they’re really hard to get through…” Hikaru entered the circle of conversation, wiping his sweat, “they’ve got some guts… trying to push us like that…” that was when their coach, Kame cut in and made things clear, “okay… listen up everyone… Morimoto, Takaki, Yuto… you three had better keep your cool… I don’t want any more fouls from the three of you. We’re already way ahead of them… there’s just a few more seconds left… all we’ve got to do now is to play defense and prevent them from scoring…” the guys nodded as Chinen’s head bobbed up and down, jumping frantically, trying to listen, finally, he managed to squeeze into the centre… scaring the daylights out of everyone when he suddenly popped out of nowhere, “what is it? What is it? What is it?” he asked curiously.


“You’ll never win now…” Takaki said coldly, eyeing menacingly at Aiko. The moment the whistle sounded, they ran in the direction of the ball… that was when Takaki got physical with Aiko, who was constantly blocking him, bumping her and nearly tripping her, Ayu was about to go to her sister’s aid when the ball was passed to her…. She was about to shoot when Aiko fell and the umpire whistled a foul at Takaki.
"What are you doing!?” Kame cried, frustrated at Takaki’s impulsive temper.
Takaki, who bit his lip in an irritated manner, started pushing Aiko, “What do you want!? Why do you keep on eyeing on me!?” the rest of the members frantically tried to hold Takaki back, pulling him away, but he pushed away his male and female teammates and pushed Aiko forcefully, that was when Ayu went up to hug her sister, shielding her as they skidded to the wall nearby.
“Oww…” Ayu cried… she felt as if she was thrown to the wall… the push had led her to hit the wall so hard that it formed a red patch on her skin.
“Ayu…!” Aiko cried, “Are you alright…?” seeing that things have turned into this state.
Kame stepped forward and hollered, “Takaki Yuya! Are you quite done yet!?” finally, in the midst of fury, he sent Chinen into the court to replace Takaki.
“I’m alright… I can carry on with the game…” Ayu grimaced.
It was a throw-in… the last breathtaking ten seconds… Aiko faced the towering Yuto, whom she eyed at with undying determination. Faking two shots, she tried to put the ball into the hoop…. But the ball hit the board and rebounded back…! Only to be caught by Ayu who was right behind Aiko… pushing the ball into the hoop just in time for the whistle…! It was a clear cut victory for Akado High… but the match had left a bad aftertaste between Takaki and Aiko.


The twins and their friends, Yumi and Chiaki started their lonesome route to home... thinking about the loss, “Cheer up guys…!” Chiaki tried comforting them, “it’s only a friendly match…! There’s always a next time…!” that was when they stopped in their tracks as the ten guys stood in a row in front of them, “are you here to mock at us now that we’ve lost…?” Yumi blurted, stepping out to defend her friends.
“Don’t be silly,” Yamada said, his eyes wavering uncomfortably as he spoke, “we’re not here to mock at you…! We just want to apologize…” he continued after much hesitation.
The twins then looked at them and Aiko asked timidly, “Apologize…?”
Takaki then stepped out awkwardly, “I’m sorry for pushing…” he started then looked at the twins in a confused manner, trying to differentiate which twin he offended, “one of you.” He ended, after failing to tell which twin did he push.
“well… it’s okay… I didn’t really take it to heart… don’t worry about it…!” Aiko replied, flashing a smile at him.
Takaki blushed deeply and went on, “in order to compensate… we decided to give the both of you special seats for our concert… which is just around the corner.” He rushed as he tried to make his offer, looking at the ground and shifting from one foot to another uncomfortably.

As they took the tickets, Yumi looked at Yuto who was hopping and waving frantically, “Sorry to interrupt… but… what exactly is HE doing…?” she asked, making a weird expression.
The twins then looked behind them to see who was he waving too, “Nee-Chan~!!!!!!” Yuto screamed at that moment... the twins blinked at Chiaki who was hiding behind them all along with their saucer-like eyes, “NEE-CHAN!?” they exclaimed as Chiaki smiled awkwardly and waved at Yuto.
“Oh, that’s right…!” Aiko snapped her fingers as she was suddenly enlightened… the twins looked at each other and said, “NAKAJIMA Chiaki…!”


END~!!!!!!!--<3
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waaah new fic! '
i love the story!
can i be part of this fic?..i hope its ok
i would like kojira ayumu! onegai..
well i hope its ok with you..bcoz it seems like
you like it too...i hope you're not angry...gomen
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ahh~ this is good! ^^

if possible...
can i be Yuki Yumi? xD
i like her character a lot~ ^^

can't wait for the next part~
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hehe i didn't write this!! just to make sure guys!! ANGEL--CHAN IS THE CREATER OF THI FIC!!!
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chap 3---------------------------

“You mean you don’t know that she’s my sister…?” Yuto asked , slurping his drink like a thirsty little kid, “Nobody has to know that she’s your sister…” Yamada cut in , stealing a mouthful of Yuto’s drink greedily.
“Gomen ne… Yuto…? Nee-Chan didn’t tell them that I’m your sister…” Chiaki said guiltily.
“Don’t blame Chiaki, Yuto…!” Ayu blurted… even though it was not needed, “I don’t blame her…” Yuto said gently, still smiling, “I understand that it’s difficult to be the sister of an idol because of all the attention and paparazzi which Nee-Chan doesn’t like… sorry, sister…” he apologized sweetly.
“Aww… I think I’m going to cry…!” Yumi muffled biting her towel which she hung around her neck, “are you nuts…?” Ayu said, hitting her friend on the head.
They went to a cafeteria to take a well deserved break after the match, “let’s guess which one is Aiko and which one is Ayu…!” Yuto exclaimed excitedly , clapping his hands together.
“My guess is… the right one should be Ayu…!” Hikaru said.
“No…! I think that the right one is Aiko…!” Takaki interrupted.
“Yumi, Chiaki…!” Chinen cut in as the guys fought over which twin is which, “you know them longer right…? Can you tell which one is Aiko and which one is Ayu…?”

Chiaki then looked at the twins and explained, “I suppose… we just recognize them by… sensing…” she then smiled awkwardly again.
“Are you guys’ idiots…?” Yamada said and everyone turned to look at him, “the left one is obviously Ayu and the right one is Aiko.”
Everyone then looked at him in astonishment and Yuto nudged, “Ne…. Yamada-Chan…” he begun, “You like Ayu right…?” he muttered beside Yamada’s ears , making Yamada choke on his food, coughing badly, everyone patted his back frantically and Yuto hurriedly handed him his drink, “What’s with the exaggerating reaction!?” Yuto exclaimed as he patted his best friend’s back.
“That’s because…!” Yamada coughed, “you said…!” he continued, then noticed the stares of other customers and his friends…as if they weren’t getting enough attention already…!
Then he decided to just sit down and keep the matter to himself, “eh…? Yamada-Chan…! What exactly did Yuto say…?” Ryutaro prompted, eyeing at Yamada with glimmering eyes that were full of curiosity.
“Nothing…” Yamada replied, trying to avoid the topic, “Anyway…” Keito started, “Is he correct…?” everyone asked in unison.
The twins then smiled awkwardly as everyone’s faces were only inches away, blinking at them curiously, “Eh… yes… he’s unexpectedly right…” the twins chorused.
The rest then looked at Yamada in amazement, “Sugoii~ Yamada-Chan… how did you know…?” Inoo Kei questioned excitedly, “well… because he’s met them before…!” Daiki blurted by accident, “WHAT!?” the members went.
That was when Yamada hurriedly stuffed Daiki’s mouth with what was remaining of his strawberry cake and explained, screaming at the top of his voice, “It’s because Ayu has a purple bracelet and Aiko has a pink one…! Are you guys’ idiots!?” Everyone in the cafeteria stared at Yamada awkwardly as he slumped into his seat in embarrassment…

“Ne~ Yamada-Chan…” Yuto called out to his best friend as they were on their way home, “how’d you know that the purple one belongs to Ayu and the pink one belongs to Aiko…?” he asked curiously.
His sister wanted to go to the Kojima’s residence, which leaves him with Yamada. “Well…” Yamada began, “when they were in their jerseys… because their names were written on the back of their shirts, that was when I noticed… otherwise it would be really difficult to differentiate them, because I was suppose to be blocking Ayu…. that’s why I noticed… not because I like her!” he explained, then there was a short pause as Yuto nodded his head in enlightenment, “also…” he went on, “Ayu has a more headstrong personality than her sister, whereas her sister is the weaker one… this can be seen when Ayu defended her sister from Takaki-kun. She’s always putting her sister in the first place…” Yuto continued nodding his head as his friend explained.
“Yamada-Chan, you’re really great ne…! It’s really good to have a friend like you who’s so observant…!” he exclaimed.


“Aiko…!” Ayu screamed from the bathroom, “Can you answer my phone for me please…? I’ve got foam on my hands…!” Aiko entered the bathroom, answering the call just there and then.
“Hello…? This is Ayu…” Aiko greeted as she put the phone into loudspeaker mode.
No one had been able to differentiate her voice from Ayu’s since young and they often confuse their friends over the phone as well… except for their mother. “Hi… This is Arioka.” Daiki greeted from the other end.
“WHAT!?” both twins screamed as Ayu hurriedly switched off the loud shower, “I’m sorry… but… are you busy right now…?” Daiki apologized for his abrupt call.
“No!” both twins chorused as Aiko struggled to answer and pass the towel to her twin at the same time.
“We’re having another match the day after tomorrow… would you like to come…? Along with your sister of course! I could tell that the others like you twins…” Daiki proposed.
Aiko was frantically trying to wipe the foam from Ayu’s eye when HER cell phone rang, “Hello…? This is Ayu~ No, sorry!!!!! Aiko here…!” Aiko greeted hastily, “Hi… this is Takaki here… I got your number from Chiaki-Chan… umm… Yuto’s sister…? I’m sorry for doing it without your permission…” Takaki apologized sincerely, “hello…? Are you still there Kojima…?” Arioka’s voice poured out of Ayu’s cell phone.

Ayu pressed her ear onto the phone, supporting it with her shoulder as her sister tried to wipe the foam, “Yes… I’m still here…!” she screamed frantically.
“Well…”Takaki begun, “We’re having another match the day after tomorrow… would you like to come…? Along with your twin of course…”
Aiko hopped frantically as the foam got onto her hands, they cried, “Okay…! Okay…! We’ll go…!” in unison, “great…! I’ll see you then…!” both guys said coincidentally and hung up.
Just as they ended their calls, the twins tripped on the mat that was on the slippery floor and landed on their back, hands and legs tangled together… “This is chaotic…” the twins sighed in unison as they lay their heads onto the bathtub.

END--<3
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haha~ this chapter was funny. xD
especially when they were guessing which one was ayu and aiko ^^
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waaah new fic! '
i love the story!
can i be part of this fic?..i hope its ok
i would like kojira ayumu! onegai..
well i hope its ok with you..bcoz it seems like
you like it too...i hope you're not angry...gomen


ano..i didn't write this just to make sure!! hehe demo if u want ayumu then i guess i'll just pick aiko!!
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thanks for reading!! ANGE--CHAN IS A GOOD WRITER!! I JUST HOPE SHE COULD READ ALL THE COMMENTS THEY GAVE ON HER FIC!! SHE'S NOT ON RIGHT NOW!!
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Whoah great fanfic ..
Can i be in it ??
Seems u already take the aiko part..
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Can i be Nakajima Chiaki ??
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haha^^ i just on on to check^^ glad that you all like my fic^^
Thanks Mai!!!!! for posting it!!!
THANK YOU MAI~ *Chu~*

welll~ i suppose vanialestari can be Chiaki
then~maybe Geh-San can be Ayu then Mai-Lee will be Aiko

Hmmm~ just really glad that ppl like my fic~^^ thanks for reading!!^^
Post on my guestbook too and tell me who you like ne~!!!!
Personally~i like Aiko^^ *teehee*
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I LOVE THIS FANFIC ;D
ur such an awesome writer, Angel-chan(can i call u dat?^^)!

cant wait for da nxt chappie!
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thanks for reading it^^
yuppx~you can call me Angel-chan no prob~
glad that you liked it!!!!!!!
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