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~mou... this chapter actually made me cry...
~chu many heartaches~!

demo, i'm getting more and more excited to see another chapter of this!



hai..it is ne~ it's very sad at parts...and funny~ demo the fic is great ne~
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WOAH!! ^____________^ AWESOME hahah too cool!
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SUGOI SUGOI SUGOII!
This is really AWESOMEEE~~
SDFGH. It's sooo great!
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hehe thanks for reading minna...angel-chan would be happy but she isn't going to be online..until later...like i mean later...later....waaa i miss her~
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eek~~ i like dis fanfic too!!!
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ohh~ may i be in the fanfic?
ettou yuki yumi??
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eek~~ i like dis fanfic too!!!
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ohh~ may i be in the fanfic?
ettou yuki yumi??




hehe me too~ this fic is good ne~ hai..u can be her..since no one has picked her~
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Chapter 7

“Aiko… are you sure you still want to attend school today? You look unwell.” Kyoko asked her daughter worriedly.
After getting drenched yesterday, Aiko was feeling a bit feverish but she didn’t mention a thing to her mother, not wanting to let her mother worry, she shook her head and replied, “I’m feeling just fine, Oka-San.”


“Good morning!” the twins greeted the class as per normal but were returned cold stares and a pregnant silence.
Chiaki then pulled them out hurriedly to a deserted part of the school after they had left their bags in class, then, with a worried expression, she handed them a newspaper. There was a sub heading… ‘Hey! Say! JUMP caught with girlfriends!’ and under the heading were pictures of them for the past few days… and finally… pictures of yesterday when Aiko was comforting Daiki under the rain and Yamada sending Ayu home. Aiko’s hands flew to cover her mouth in shock as Ayu demanded angrily, “Who took these pictures…?” she asked with gritted teeth at first but when Chiaki didn’t answer, she asked, only louder this time, “Who took these pictures!?”

Chiaki then explained, “I have no idea…! The paparazzi must have gotten these pictures! The class was discussing how to deal with us just now… just thought that I would let you know beforehand on what to expect.”
Looking at each other, the twins were speechless, worried about what might happen to them in the school.


“Kojima Ayu!” Yumi screamed in the changing room, charging at Ayu with a few basketball teammates behind her, obviously supporting her, “have you forgotten what you’ve said?” she asked.
Aiko then stood beside her twin supportively as Ayu tried to explain matters, “Yumi, listen… I can explain! It was raining yesterday…”

“And you forgot to bring your umbrella! What a dumb excuse!” Yumi cut her off, rolling her eyes, “I’m terribly disappointed in you, Kojima Ayu! To think that I treated you like my best friend…!” Yumi added, poking Ayu on the shoulder painfully.
It wasn’t the pain from the poking that Ayu felt… it was the heartache in her heart. The friendship that she had forged with Yumi was gone… just like that. Mad at Yumi, Aiko pushed her away and screamed, “And to think that Ayu treated YOU like HER best friend! Shouldn’t best friends trust each other!? Shouldn’t best friends sort things out peacefully!? If you don’t wish to listen to what my sister has to say, then get lost!”

Yumi’s courage wavered slightly, frightened by Aiko’s sudden outburst. She had not expected that demure and soft-spoken Aiko would speak up for her twin. Glaring at the twins, she marched away with her troupe of army.

“Please tell me that these girls are just friends of yours…” their manager muttered in the meeting room as the ten guys got up to leave, too annoyed to explain.
“Look… even if we were to have girlfriends, I believe that those annoying paparazzi don’t have any rights to interfere with our private lives!” Inoo said, irritated at the sight of the pictures.
The guys then exited the room, one by one as they can’t be bothered to clarify stupid matters like these. “Aren’t they being too creative to think of all these headlines!?” Keito said, “This is just hilarious! I’m Chiaki-Chan’s boyfriend just because I was sitting beside her!? It is unbelievable!” he continued after dumping the newspaper into the bin, running a hand through his hair.
“Yeah!” Hikaru joined in, “I mean… can’t they just use their creativity elsewhere!? Like… in a new drama serial for us to be in!?”
The others then looked at Hikaru, finding it hard to laugh at that moment, “Hikaru-Chan… I don’t think this is the time to joke.” Chinen whispered.


Arriving at the girls’ school in a van, the guys waited anxiously for the girls, surprised tat they weren’t being attacked by other school mates or anything. “How was your day?” Yamada asked, jumping out of the van along with the others, looking at Ayu.
Chiaki then looked at him and shook her head frantically, “Don’t ask!” she mouthed waving her hands wildly.
“Chiaki-Chan, your actions are too big… I can see them.” Aiko sighed as Chiaki stopped waving, her shoulders drooping even lower.

Ayu then muttered, “I wish to be alone.”
Walking off in the direction opposite to her house, Aiko held her sister’s hand and said, “Ayu… I understand how you feel…” but then was cut off when Ayu turned around suddenly and pushed her onto the ground forcefully.
The guys were shocked and rushed to Aiko’s side immediately, “What are you doing!? Even if you’re angry, you shouldn’t vent your anger on your sister!” Takaki hollered.
“How can you understand!?” Ayu screamed, “Chiaki is still by your side! Yumi… she’s no longer my best friend! You don’t know how I feel right now! Don’t try to pretend that you do!”
Both twins stared at each other with tears streaming down their cheeks. Then standing up, both twins turned around and took off at the same time with their back facing each other.
Yamada then said, “I’ll go after Ayu.”


Sitting at a bench outside the row of stalls, she panted and sobbed hardly. That was when a shadow blocked the sunlight from her and she looked up… it was Yamada. “Are you here to mock at me…?” Ayu asked, wiping her tears and looking away.
Yamada then rolled his eyes and replied, “I’m not a sadist.”
Ayu then stared at him and muttered, “But you look like one…”
Yamada then cleared his throat and asked, “You like me… right?”
Ayu was shocked and fell backwards, “it was just a question…” Yamada muttered, shocked by the exaggerated reaction.
Ayu then stood up hurriedly, trying to regain her dignity and trying her best not to look at Yamada Ryosuke. Who was also looking elsewhere, “Let’s date?” Yamada blurted, staring at Ayu.

Ayu then exclaimed almost immediately, “Are you nuts!?” then she added, “Go with a date with Yumi-Chan.”
Yamada’s blood boiled at that moment and replied fiercely, “don’t push me to Yumi! I don’t like her! I like…” then realizing what he was about to say, his voice trailed off and he kicked the foot of the bench and continued, “I just don’t like her!”
Ayu then looked at her foot and shifted uncomfortably, not liking the atmosphere. “Let’s go back… Aiko must be worried sick.” Yamada suggested as Ayu touched her bracelet, feeling guilty for the way that she had treated her twin.


“Aiko-Chan…at least let me cleanse your wound….” Chiaki tried to coax Aiko.
Aiko shook her head. She had buried her head, hugging her knees to her body as she sat at the steps and unconcerned about her scraped elbow. “Aiko-Chan… are you sick…?” Yuto asked suddenly.
“Why do you say so, Yuto-Kun?” Chiaki asked curiously as Arioka Daiki also stared at Yuto after the question was asked.
“No… because I noticed that she was looking a bit pale…” Yuto said, then, scratching his head, he continued, “but… it may just be my own imagination…”
Chiaki was about to say something when Ayu appeared at the park, “Ayu-Chan! I’m so glad you’re here! We couldn’t get Aiko-Chan to clean her wound!”

Aiko looked up upon hearing Ayu’s name being mentioned and searched for her twin. As if understanding each other’s heartfelt concerns, they rushed up to each other after staring for three seconds. “Aiko-Chan… I’m sorry…”Ayu apologized.

END--<3
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this is heart-touching...

and I can't believe how stupid Yumi is~!
can't she be a kinder bestfriend?! if I were Ayu, I would dump that kind of bestfriend...
because if Yui is truly a friend, she would let go and make way for Ayu and Yamada's love...
It's better to save the sake of friendship than an unrequited love...
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nyahaha...
i read all the parts :D
haha..i like this fic! even though my char is like..eh..dunno how to explain it..but yea..
i liked her character in the beginning xD
but now..it's like..O__O woah....
and i understand her feelings..cuz that's how i feel right now ...eh...heh?
but yea..
like..no...love this fic!
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this is heart-touching...

and I can't believe how stupid Yumi is~!
can't she be a kinder bestfriend?! if I were Ayu, I would dump that kind of bestfriend...
because if Yui is truly a friend, she would let go and make way for Ayu and Yamada's love...
It's better to save the sake of friendship than an unrequited love...


i totally feel it....i also wanted yumi to act better...she's so mean....but i love this fic so much...it's too good~
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nyahaha...
i read all the parts :D
haha..i like this fic! even though my char is like..eh..dunno how to explain it..but yea..
i liked her character in the beginning xD
but now..it's like..O__O woah....
and i understand her feelings..cuz that's how i feel right now ...eh...heh?
but yea..
like..no...love this fic!
:]


waaaa it's great ne...hehe gomen...u probably didn't expect that to happen...ahaha gomen....hope that u won't feel like her...cause best friends are great to have...thanks for reading angel-chan's fic
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shieLdembLem wrote:

this is heart-touching...

and I can't believe how stupid Yumi is~!
can't she be a kinder bestfriend?! if I were Ayu, I would dump that kind of bestfriend...
because if Yui is truly a friend, she would let go and make way for Ayu and Yamada's love...
It's better to save the sake of friendship than an unrequited love...


i totally feel it....i also wanted yumi to act better...she's so mean....but i love this fic so much...it's too good~


damn that Yumi...
I wish I could kill her! *haha!* LoLz!
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Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:

nyahaha...
i read all the parts :D
haha..i like this fic! even though my char is like..eh..dunno how to explain it..but yea..
i liked her character in the beginning xD
but now..it's like..O__O woah....
and i understand her feelings..cuz that's how i feel right now ...eh...heh?
but yea..
like..no...love this fic!
:]


waaaa it's great ne...hehe gomen...u probably didn't expect that to happen...ahaha gomen....hope that u won't feel like her...cause best friends are great to have...thanks for reading angel-chan's fic


ahaha!
i didn't expect it at all!! demo..i like surprises ^_^ lol
and tell angel-chan to keep up the good work ne?
and no problem..i just l-o-v-e spending my time reading people's fanfics
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Posted 10/17/08

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Mai-Lee wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:

this is heart-touching...

and I can't believe how stupid Yumi is~!
can't she be a kinder bestfriend?! if I were Ayu, I would dump that kind of bestfriend...
because if Yui is truly a friend, she would let go and make way for Ayu and Yamada's love...
It's better to save the sake of friendship than an unrequited love...


i totally feel it....i also wanted yumi to act better...she's so mean....but i love this fic so much...it's too good~


damn that Yumi...
I wish I could kill her! *haha!* LoLz!




hehe i know...right...we don't mean u yuuki-chan...just ur character...lol...demo it get's more heartthrobing after these parts...lol...even more...waaaaaaaa gomen ne for spoiling it...heheh
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Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:

nyahaha...
i read all the parts :D
haha..i like this fic! even though my char is like..eh..dunno how to explain it..but yea..
i liked her character in the beginning xD
but now..it's like..O__O woah....
and i understand her feelings..cuz that's how i feel right now ...eh...heh?
but yea..
like..no...love this fic!
:]


waaaa it's great ne...hehe gomen...u probably didn't expect that to happen...ahaha gomen....hope that u won't feel like her...cause best friends are great to have...thanks for reading angel-chan's fic


ahaha!
i didn't expect it at all!! demo..i like surprises ^_^ lol
and tell angel-chan to keep up the good work ne?
and no problem..i just l-o-v-e spending my time reading people's fanfics



lol...me too...i acutally thought she would be those helpful friends...demo not anymore..lol..hehe i'll tell her that...me too..i love reading people's fic...cause they are so good....really good...though i usually sometimes don't have enough time to
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