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Chapter 11-->dedicated to Chiaki, Shoon and Hikaru’s love triangle~<3


Their schoolmates continued to stare at them as if they were out of this world. The photos that were taken last night only made matters worse. This time… even Chiaki is dragged into the matter. “Nakajima Chiaki—Yuto’s Onee-San, introduced the girls to the guys!” Ayu read fearfully.
“But…looks like her reputation isn’t affected at all… people have been looking for her since morning and the crowd isn’t dispersing…” Aiko whispered as the two turned their heads to look at the crowd surrounding the awkward Chiaki.
“Chiaki-Chan,” Aiko called out to her when they were finally left alone, “are you coming to our practice later?” Aiko asked her best friend.
Chiaki then shook her head and replied apologetically, “Gomen ne, Aiko-Chan. Hikaru-Kun has invited me to go to the theme park with him so I’ll have to get going now. Bye! Bye!”

“Chiaki-Chan!” Hikaru called out to her in excitement, waving wildly as she approached, delighted that Yuto wasn’t in sight.
Chiaki jogged towards him and greeted, “Hikaru-Kun! Yuto couldn’t make it… but… I’ve called Shoon-Kun along!”
She then turned around and waved excitedly at Shoon who was strolling towards them, equally happy that he saw Chiaki. Hikaru’s jaw dropped when he saw Shoon and turned around, “What a formidable love rival!” he muttered, “YAMASHITA SHOON!!!!!!!” he yelled all of a sudden.
“Hai?” Shoon answered Hikaru’s call, their faces only inches away.
Hikaru then stuck out his chest and asked, “So… how’s your new drama serial coming along?”
Shoon then turned to look at Chiaki, totally ignoring Hikaru, he asked, “Chiaki-Chan! Let’s go to the Jet Coaster ride!”
Hikaru’s lips twitched upon the mention of Jet Coaster as he thought, terrified, ‘Jet… Jet… Jet Coaster!? NO~!!!!!!!!!!!’

As he watched Shoon dragging Chiaki towards the entrance of the Jet Coaster ride, he then narrowed his eyes and muttered, “For Chiaki-Chan… I’ll put on a brave front! I’ll not be beaten by Shoon!”

After being forced to go onto several rides that Hikaru disliked so much, Hikaru decided to make a shot at some of the games stall that were always available at theme parks. “Chiaki-Chan! This is for you!” Hikaru exclaimed shyly, holding a teddy bear keychain in front of him.
Chiaki was smiling delightfully at the cute little teddy when they heard Shoon exclaiming, “Chiaki-Chan! Look what I’ve won!”
Hikaru’s jaw dropped when he saw the teddy that Shoon was hugging… which was so many times larger than HIS.
Chiaki then took Hikaru’s keychain and immediately hung it on her phone, “Thank you, Hikaru-Kun! I’ll definitely cherish this!” she thanked him, eyes full of gratitude.
Shoon then stood there, stunned by the sight of Chiaki smiling so radiantly at Hikaru. This is the first time he has seen Chiaki smile so sweetly at a guy other than him. He was filled with jealousy as he witnessed Hikaru and Chiaki exchanged numbers. Shoon was about to approach them when he got a call from his manager, “Gomen ne, Chiaki-Chan… but I have to go now… I’ve got something on.” Shoon apologized for the sudden matter that he had to attend to.
Chiaki shook her head in an understanding manner as she replied, “Daijoubu, Shoon-Kun! Hikaru-Kun said that he’ll send me
home today!”
Shoon walked away, feeling lonely and down all of a sudden, “Chiaki-Chan… will you ever understand how I feel for you…?” he whispered, disappointed, “I’ve never wanted to treat you like my sister… I don’t want to be your elder brother…”
Turning around to take another hopeful glance at Chiaki, he noticed the sweet smile that she revealed to Hikaru. “Hikaru Yaotome…” Shoon muttered under his breath, eyeing at Hikaru menacingly, “Chiaki will never be yours.”

“Chiaki-Chan…”
“Hikaru-Kun….” Both of them said at the same time, then laughing at each other awkwardly, “I’ve had fun today… thank you very much.” Chiaki thanked Hikaru and showed him the teddy bear that she had already hung onto her cell phone, “I’ll cherish this teddy bear! It’s the first present I’ve received from a guy other than Shoon-Kun and Yuto-Kun, I think it’s really cute!”
Hikaru blushed deeply at the compliment, scratching the back of his head, he replied with a foolish smile, “It’s nothing much! Yuto-Kun told me you like bears~” he then covered his mouth at the mention of Yuto and grimaced as Chiaki laughed, “Oh darn… it slipped out of my mouth!”
Hikaru then looked at Chiaki who was still smiling sweetly. Her smile captivated him and she seemed to light up the aura of happiness in him. Hikaru and Chiaki were just smiling awkwardly at each other when they heard someone yelling, “Hikaru-Kun!
Don’t be shy! Tell Nee-Chan NOW!!!!! I want to see!” Hikaru turned to the window upon hearing the familiar voice… YUTO!!!!!!
“GET BACK IN THIS INSTANT!!!!” both Chiaki and Hikaru hollered in annoyance as Yuto slammed the windows shut, chuckling to himself mischievously. All along, he knew that Hikaru fancies his sister but just didn’t have to guts to confess to his sister… but right now… Hikaru just have to seize this golden opportunity to make his move!!!! Yuto then did a ‘dance-of-victory’ in the room and the two could see his shadow moving rather… weirdly. Chiaki and Hikaru tilted their head to the side and went, “Eh…? What exactly is Yuto DOING!?”
Finally, plucking up enough courage, Hikaru inhaled deeply and said in a rush, “I really like you, Chiaki-Chan! Can you be my girlfriend? I know that I’m not the kind of guy that will make girls like me at first sight but I’ll try my best to make you smile everyday and I’ll give you happiness if you give me to chance to show you the care and concern that I’ll give!”
Finishing his long sentence of confession, he panted as Chiaki stared at him blankly. “So? How is it?” Hikaru asked cautiously, his heart overwhelmed with anxiety.
Chiaki then smiled awkwardly at him and Hikaru thought that Chiaki’s answer was going to be a ‘no’ when she replied, “Well…”
His heart nearly missed a beat and he stumbled when he heard Chiaki complete her sentence, “Can you speak slower because I couldn’t catch what were you saying…”
Hikaru’s lips twitched as he made a face at Chiaki, then rubbing his sweaty palms onto his pants, he asked, only slower this time… and more precise, “Can… you be my girlfriend?”
He watched as Chiaki’s face lit up under the street lamp… no, to him, her face seemed to be BRIGHTER than that of the street lamp. Chiaki then asked, “Can… I have time to think this over?”
Hikaru’s heart sank when he heard her reply…not knowing what she had in mind and watched Chiaki enter her house in a hurry. As he ran a hand through his hair and muttered under his breath, “Yuto-Chan is going to get it from me!!!!”
Just as he turned around to leave, he received a message and fished his cell phone from his pocket… ‘YES.’ He said in a soft whisper at first, then louder, “YES!!!!!!!!” and then finally, he punched his fist in the air and hollered, “YES!!!!! CHIAKI-CHAN ACCEPTED ME!!!!!!!! CHIAKI-CHAN IS MY GIRLFRIEND!!!! SHE’S MY GIRLFRIEND!!!!!!!!! MUHAHAHA!!!!!”
“URUSAI! People are trying to sleep here!” Hikaru heard a resident yell and covered his mouth hurriedly, chuckling silently to himself.


Drowning in his world of happiness and love, he sipped his drink, staring into thin air. “Hikaru-Chan, are you alright?” Chinen asked, concerned as he plopped himself onto Hikaru’s lap. Hikaru, then replied, without looking at Chinen, “YES~” still thinking about the message that he received from Chiaki last night.
Chinen then felt Hikaru’s forehead and then touched his own, “You’re not sick or anything…” he mumbled, “But why are you drinking my water?”
Upon hearing that he was actually drinking Chinen’s water, he spitted all of it immediately… like a water fountain. “Hikaru-Chan. You dirtied the floor.” Inoo said, raising his eyebrows at his friend.
“There’s something wrong with him today. Like he has a screw loose or something…” Keito explained, folding his jersey into his bag as basketball practice has just ended.
“Yeah!” Ryutaro added, “he’s been saying ‘YES’ since like… the whole day?”
Hikaru, ignoring the other members, continued to drink Chinen’s water as Chinen looked longingly for his bottle of water, pouting hardly. “According to our observations…” Yabu said, putting an arm around Takaki, “He must’ve been hit by the poisonous ball of love!” they continued in unison as Hikaru choked upon hearing their deduction.

The others eyed suspiciously as he went into a coughing fit, “It must be true, heh…” Yamada commented.
“Hikaru-Chan is with my Nee-Chan!” Yuto exclaimed, raising his hand and confessing in Hikaru’s place, “Isn’t this just WONDERFUL!?” he continued in a sing-song voice.
Kei then slapped his face and said monotonously, “this is such a WRONG combination…”
Ryutaro then patted Yuto on his shoulder as Yuto continued to smile brilliantly, “We will all pray for the happiness of your Nee-Chan, don’t worry, Yuto.”
Chinen, almost dying of thirst after the practice, strangled Hikaru as Hikaru finished every drop of water in the bottle, “Hikaru-Chan!!!! SPIT MY WATER OUT!!! SPIT IT OUT NOW!!!!!”


END--<3
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rofl!
this was a nice chappy xD
i was like laughing the whole time!
and poor chinen..his water was drunk by hikaru! bad hika-chan!
yea...can't wait for the next part!
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Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:

rofl!
this was a nice chappy xD
i was like laughing the whole time!
and poor chinen..his water was drunk by hikaru! bad hika-chan!
yea...can't wait for the next part!


ahahah it's funny ne!! but it gets worse!! lol...i'll post the next part...demo it's kind of sad..taht your the only one reading..demo enjoy it ne!!!! i'll post 11 and 12!!!
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i meant 12 and 13
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“What’s wrong?” Hikaru asked, “DID YOU SEE MY UNDIES!?!?!?!” he exclaimed, terribly terrified as he checked to make sure, “Heh… there’s no way you can see my undies from the front…” he muttered, trying to make sense to himself.

rofl! i laughed sooo hard at that sentence!! xD
omg....! i love this fanfic! it's like sooo much suspense! and reality-ness! omfg!
keep up teh good work!!
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“What’s wrong?” Hikaru asked, “DID YOU SEE MY UNDIES!?!?!?!” he exclaimed, terribly terrified as he checked to make sure, “Heh… there’s no way you can see my undies from the front…” he muttered, trying to make sense to himself.

rofl! i laughed sooo hard at that sentence!! xD
omg....! i love this fanfic! it's like sooo much suspense! and reality-ness! omfg!
keep up teh good work!!



ahah i know right...it's so funny!! and your so right..it's so reality-like!! just love it!! that's why i love this fic so much!!! i'm sure..angel-chan will be really happy to know that u love her fic!! will post 14-15 now!!! hehe
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Chapter 14

“Yuto told me that you’ve got a commercial offer!” Chiaki said over the phone, “Congrats!!”
It’s in the middle of the night and Chiaki is still not turning in, enjoying her daily session of chatting with Shoon. “Ya, thanks.” Shoon replied gloomily at the thought of Chiaki and Hikaru together.
After getting the news from Yuto that his sister is dating Hikaru, his heart sank and he was not excited about work at all. He always thought that Chiaki would be his, having grown up with her and all. He always thought that he could protect her forever and watch her from a corner but people change as time passes and Chiaki now has Hikaru to protect her and shower her with the love that Shoon used to shower her with, shielding her from all the paparazzo’s cameras. “Chiaki….” Shoon started in a soft murmur, “are you really happy with Hikaru?”
Chiaki then laughed and replied in a blissful manner, “Of course I’m happy with him! Don’t worry, Shoon-Kun! I won’t forget about you!”
Shoon then popped another question, “are you happier with Hikaru-Kun?”
Chiaki, not realizing that Shoon was unhappy with Hikaru continued smiling and replied, “Yes!”
Overwhelmed with jealousy, Shoon hung up on Chiaki for the very first time and flung his phone onto his bed, too mad for words.


Matters were taking a sharp turn at Kojima’s residence as Kyoko threw a couple of news papers in front of the twins. “What exactly are you girls doing!?” their mum hollered at them, her blood boiling as she was overwhelmed with anger.
Ayu and Aiko read at the news and then exchanged their glances. They had no idea that their neighbours had been observing them… these were the newspapers collected… right from the start of the news. “I demand an explanation!” Kyoko yelled.
Their dad then brought Igo into the room as Kyoko reprimanded her daughters, “I sent you to school for you to receive good education and not for you to date idols! Tell me how you got to know them!?”
Aiko then explained hurriedly, “Oka-San! We just bumped into one of them coincidentally and Ayu dropped her notebook! That was how we became friends and nothing else!”
Kyoko then searched for something in the midst of the mess and she threw the paper at Aiko’s face as she spoke, “When did you become such a rebellion, Aiko!? Don’t take me for an idiot! You got caught in the rain the other time because of this Arioka guy isn’t it!?”

Ayu then stood up for her twin but was interrupted by her mother with a tight slap on her face, “You’re nowhere better than your twin, Ayu! What were you doing leaving Aiko alone with a guy and running off with Yamada Ryosuke!?”
Loss of words, the twins just stared guiltily at their mother and then looking at each other, they knew that they have to prepare for the worst. “You girls are going nowhere.” Kyoko said with gritted teeth, “I’ve had enough of the neighbours’ telling me how to discipline my kids!”
After throwing both their cell phones into her bag, Kyoko grabbed Ayu and Aiko by their arms and pulled them into their room, locking them in! Banging at the door desperately with tears streaming down their faces, they cried, “Oka-San! Let us out! Oka-
San! We promise we won’t see them anymore! Oka-San! Onegai!”
Kyoko then continued, “Don’t even dream of going back to school because you girls will be going off to separate schools in the future!”

Frustrated, they slumped onto the floor, sobbing so hard that their bodies were shaking. Both of them sobbed as they turned to each other for comfort, hugging each other tightly.

The gentle moonlight streamed in through the open window, giving a dim light to the dark room as the twins settled into Ayu’s bed, cuddling together. Their heartaches was worsened by their mother. The girls have nothing left now… their hearts felt empty yet heavy at the same time as their tears dried. The guys haven’t been in contact with the girls as well and right now, Ayu and Aiko just wished that they could go back to school to meet their friends.

“Ayu…” Aiko started, “if you have another chance to see Yamada-Kun… would you tell him that you really like him?”
Ayu snuggled up to her sister, her cheeks were sticky from the tears that flowed like an endless river earlier on, “I’ll tell him… that I like him… then… I’ll tell Yumi-Chan to forgive me for not telling her the truth.”
Ayu then looked at her twin and asked, “What about you…? What will you tell Arioka-Kun?”
Aiko then replied slowly, “I’ll tell him that I’m willing to be the shadow of whomever he likes… I regret for not trusting him…”
Ayu then smiled slightly and said, “It’s funny how we tend to appreciate things more after we’ve lost them… I don’t think we’ll ever meet them again.”
Aiko then added, looking out of the window, her heart aching ever so terribly than before, “we’ll never get to meet Yumi and Chiaki again…”


Chiaki, who was oblivious to what was going on, was shocked the next morning when she read the papers. “It’s just a tabloid….! It’s just a tabloid…” she muttered, trying to calm herself down.
There was a picture of Shoon and her together, walking home after school and another picture of her with Hikaru. Apparently, Chiaki was not spared by the media either. The media said that Chiaki hooked up Hikaru using her identity as Yuto’s sister and even introduced her friends to the guys. ‘Nakajima’s Nee-San is two timing!?’ that was what made the headlines. “Nee-Chan! Nee-Chan!” Yuto hollered as he stormed down the stairs, “What is this about!? Why is the media saying that you’re two timing!?” he demanded.
Chiaki then shook her head hardly and replied, “I… I don’t know why are they doing this!”
“Haven’t I told you to be careful!?” Yuto blamed his sister, “How are you going to explain things to Hikaru-Kun now!? You know that he doesn’t like reports like these!”
Vexed, Chiaki dialed Hikaru’s number immediately and tried to explain, “Hikaru-Kun! I…” she started the moment Hikaru picked up the phone but then was cut off by him.
“Chiaki-Chan!” he interrupted, “we need to talk.” He said solemnly, “I’ll be seeing you outside your school later… Ja Ne.”


END--<3


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omg!!
poor ayu,aiko, and chiaki =(
hmm..feel kind of sad for them...lol
can't wait for the next part!!
Posted 11/19/08
OMG! THIS STORY IS SO ADDICTING!!!
Please post more up as soon as possible! I'll be waiting eargerly!
This series is TOO GOOD!!!
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omg!!
poor ayu,aiko, and chiaki =(
hmm..feel kind of sad for them...lol
can't wait for the next part!!


i know right!! it's so sad!!! but hopefully it'll get better!!! hai..i will post them!!!
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OMG! THIS STORY IS SO ADDICTING!!!
Please post more up as soon as possible! I'll be waiting eargerly!
This series is TOO GOOD!!!


omg...thanks for reading!! thanks for saying that..i am sure angel-chan would be happy!! i know..this fic is addicting..i love it so much!!! i'll post the next chappie!! 16-17~~ hehe enjoy reading!!
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yeaaaa! i'm bak in this lol
omg! such good friends! :tears:
more! more!
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Thank you sooo much! I'll be waiting for more to be uploaded~!! ^^
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