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Posted 10/4/08

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Okay Chapter 2!!!!.....hope you like it =D


Thanks for reading my story Chapter 2 =D...i hope you liked it...and message me...if you do!! again thanks for readig! ;)


this chp was really good!


the ending of chapter 2 was almost like the original story izint it?
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Hiyaa!! Here's chapter 3!! hope you like it!!!



hehehe srry if its long for you=D..but i hope you like it...and thanks for reading!!!


and for the chapter 3... the story is almost the same except for mikan's personality...also the part where cleaning the window which i tink the original story dun hav.... in concluson, kindda too many same points...

sorry if u think my comments are rude.
Posted 10/4/08

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Angelcatz wrote:


powerpuffgirls-z wrote:

Okay Chapter 2!!!!.....hope you like it =D


Thanks for reading my story Chapter 2 =D...i hope you liked it...and message me...if you do!! again thanks for readig! ;)


this chp was really good!


the ending of chapter 2 was almost like the original story izint it?


yep! cleaning the windows XD and mikan personality is different. misaki is mikan's sister! thats kinda funny i wonder if mikans personaliy is gonna change if she and natsume start to like each other (i really want that to happen lol)
Posted 10/4/08

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4sun4 wrote:


Angelcatz wrote:


powerpuffgirls-z wrote:

Okay Chapter 2!!!!.....hope you like it =D


Thanks for reading my story Chapter 2 =D...i hope you liked it...and message me...if you do!! again thanks for readig! ;)


this chp was really good!


the ending of chapter 2 was almost like the original story izint it?


yep! cleaning the windows XD and mikan personality is different. misaki is mikan's sister! thats kinda funny i wonder if mikans personaliy is gonna change if she and natsume start to like each other (i really want that to happen lol)


heheh maybe! xD...but..the rest is good...right?? plz say yes

Posted 10/4/08

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powerpuffgirls-z wrote:

Hiyaa!! Here's chapter 3!! hope you like it!!!



hehehe srry if its long for you=D..but i hope you like it...and thanks for reading!!!


and for the chapter 3... the story is almost the same except for mikan's personality...also the part where cleaning the window which i tink the original story dun hav.... in concluson, kindda too many same points...

sorry if u think my comments are rude.


its okay...its good that you say that xD...i'm gonna work on that..but chapter 5 is already done..but thats really different
but...i like it to have many same points..:P because its easy..you know what i mean??..
Posted 10/4/08 , edited 10/21/08
Chapter 4!!!!... okay this is an sort of rewriting the story..:P sort of but..plz enjoy


okay...okay...okay....i know it is like the Anime..srry about that...but its way easyer...but okay...Chapter 5 is very different..from the other chapters believe me =D..
and here are Mikan and Misaki..how they look now
okay this is Mikan...in her old school let just say an month before she came to Alice Academy?? ^^ but..
this is Misaki...kawaii!!!...heheh ;)...very different from Mikan don't you think??
If they are sisters....or not?...uhh..o.O DAMN!!!..i've said something i haven't must do that uhh...what to do..uhh..forget what i just said okay!!! and.. hope you like it heheh ... i mean it..forget what i just said!!...thanks for reading!!! and btw. Natsume Koko Sumire Ruka and all the others..look the same..but only on the pictures from Misaki and Mikan...they are a little bit smaller then on the pic.
Posted 10/4/08

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Angelcatz wrote:


4sun4 wrote:


Angelcatz wrote:


powerpuffgirls-z wrote:

Okay Chapter 2!!!!.....hope you like it =D


Thanks for reading my story Chapter 2 =D...i hope you liked it...and message me...if you do!! again thanks for readig! ;)


this chp was really good!


the ending of chapter 2 was almost like the original story izint it?


yep! cleaning the windows XD and mikan personality is different. misaki is mikan's sister! thats kinda funny i wonder if mikans personaliy is gonna change if she and natsume start to like each other (i really want that to happen lol)


heheh maybe! xD...but..the rest is good...right?? plz say yes



yep its good. I think that even if its not original the details of it make it really good

Posted 10/4/08
thanks!!! =D
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Posted 10/4/08
i hope you can let us see chapter 2!!! this was great!!!
Posted 10/5/08

vanilla28 wrote:

i hope you can let us see chapter 2!!! this was great!!!


you can read chapter 2, on the first page heheh xD

Posted 10/5/08
Okay here is Chapter 5....hole different from the other chapters..sort of sad chapter <:(
but okay hope you like it!!



heheh and did you like it??..sad hmm?
but..i hope you like it..and thanks for reading!!!
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Posted 10/5/08
ahhh what page is chapter 4 on?? I can't find it anywhere in all of these spoilers!!!
Posted 10/5/08

cherryblossomkiwi wrote:

ahhh what page is chapter 4 on?? I can't find it anywhere in all of these spoilers!!!


its that thing..with two pics!! xD i'm srry..i haven't said above from Chapter 4..srry and don't forget chapter 5 xD if i have put it on....xD
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Posted 10/5/08

powerpuffgirls-z wrote:

Okay here is Chapter 5....hole different from the other chapters..sort of sad chapter <:(
but okay hope you like it!!



heheh and did you like it??..sad hmm?
but..i hope you like it..and thanks for reading!!! :D


pretty good!
Posted 10/5/08

cherryblossomkiwi wrote:


powerpuffgirls-z wrote:

Okay here is Chapter 5....hole different from the other chapters..sort of sad chapter <:(
but okay hope you like it!!



heheh and did you like it??..sad hmm?
but..i hope you like it..and thanks for reading!!! :D


pretty good!


heheh thanks!! =D up to Chapter 6
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