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Yamada smiled as he laced his hands with mine. Wait--- what?! My eyes shot open as I bolted up, hitting my head with someone elses."Ow!" I groaned as I cradled my head in my hands. "I'm sorry, Amber-chan, I shouldn't have been sitting here." A deep voice said as I looked up to come face-to-face with... "Yamada! What the hell are you doing in my bed?!" I shouted as I pulled my covers over my nose, blushing madly. He chuckled. "Your mother let me in." Mom, she's always doing that to me, does she not love me?? As I glanced at my clock, my eyes nearly popped out of my head. "10:59?! HOLY CRAP! I'M LATE!!!!" I shouted as I threw off my covers, making Yamada land on the floor, not without bringing me down with him. Good thing Yamada cushined my fall, or I'd be in alot of pain. I blushed madly as I looked down at Yamada who held a look of love as he lifted his head and kissed me on the lips gently.


What do you think? Should I finish it?
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AmberSou wrote:

Yamada smiled as he laced his hands with mine. Wait--- what?! My eyes shot open as I bolted up, hitting my head with someone elses."Ow!" I groaned as I cradled my head in my hands. "I'm sorry, Amber-chan, I shouldn't have been sitting here." A deep voice said as I looked up to come face-to-face with... "Yamada! What the hell are you doing in my bed?!" I shouted as I pulled my covers over my nose, blushing madly. He chuckled. "Your mother let me in." Mom, she's always doing that to me, does she not love me?? As I glanced at my clock, my eyes nearly popped out of my head. "10:59?! HOLY CRAP! I'M LATE!!!!" I shouted as I threw off my covers, making Yamada land on the floor, not without bringing me down with him. Good thing Yamada cushined my fall, or I'd be in alot of pain. I blushed madly as I looked down at Yamada who held a look of love as he lifted his head and kissed me on the lips gently.


What do you think? Should I finish it?


I think you should continue it... is this a synopsis??
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Kinda, I'm not really sure... and I might continue it.
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