Post Reply The orchid in the lake
Member
853 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
22 / F / in Kpop Highschoo...
Offline
Posted 9/25/08 , edited 2/24/09
chap 1

As i soon remembered i had no one by my side...my name is akkio sona.my parents were in a car crash, I now have to live with my relatives. I use to have sweet relatives,but now they think i am not a sona except my uncle and aunt but they left for some thing. I soon found out they weren't coming back.No one wanted me i asked around but they all said if you be my maid.I looked every where for my uncle and aunt but they weren't there.I started to cry then I went to the lake me and my parents went before.I saw a orchid it was beatiful. I started to walk but then a boy said why are you crying?I said because my parents died and not one of my relatives want me.Whats your name he asked.I said akkio sona.how about you?My name is jun yuki. he said as his soft hands held mine i will cheer you up ok. I said ok.He made silly faces as we were walking.He said I will get something to eat.After that we walked home we said goodbye and left.I was staying at a friends house Ithought if I went to the same lake I first saw him he would be there.As I saw him I waved at him he saw and yelled my name AKKIO!! I said hi and from there we became friends. I told him everything about me. He was the one who was there for me. Then the a few days later I told him Ioved him he said your joking right I said no.

chap 2

As he knew I loved him he stopped being there for me, he just left me alone.I know he wasn't going to be there for me so I stopped going to the lake and then I saw a beatiful orchid it reminded me of him so I bought it. I watered it and took good care of it reminded me of him so I always took care of no matter what.Then I got tired of watering it so I sold it.I finally got into high school and forgot about him.I was dating the most cutest boy in the school.Then I saw jun again it has been 5 years since I told him I loved him.As I saw him he was mad what happen to his lovely smile? What happened?


If u want more plz 5 or more peeps comment about it !! thx
Posted 9/26/08
thankssss so much for postin a story! ^o^
i LIKEEE ITT
Member
7875 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
26 / M / Cactus TX.
Offline
Posted 10/1/08
that is a good story when are you going to write more? I can wait to read the rest.
Member
42133 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
F / Unknown
Offline
Posted 10/3/08
ahhhh i need more please its getting really good ^^ great story
Member
283 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
22 / M
Offline
Posted 10/3/08
more =]
Member
25801 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
27 / M / Archangelus
Offline
Posted 2/24/09
Please do write some more, because it is a good story.
14198 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
24 / F / ~somewhere in the...
Offline
Posted 2/24/09
Great story! I would like to read more ^^
You must be logged in to post.