Her Dance before Dawn
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Prologue


The story I want to tell you is known to those who witnessed that fateful day.
The day the Imperial Kingdom of Dilkara fell.

It’s a story of life and death, hope and despair, friendship and revenge. It was a story never told from the heart of a princess ~ not till now.

I was born here, in this place that would come to be called the old ruins of Dilkara but to me, it had no beginning and no end. I belong here, I would always belong here.

They say the legend of Dilkara’s eternal light stems from the bravery, faith and love of one girl, but the story I want to tell you is true.
I was there and I remember. I remember the sun, the sky, and the times where everything was peaceful.

I was a naïve child, leading a blissfully carefree life. Never understanding and appreciating the meaning of the life, free from the clutches of destiny, till it’s too late.

I shall forever be
Isla Selene, the last heiress to the throne of Dilkara.
I am the spirit and will of the last princess forever protecting where the Imperial Kingdom of Dilkara once stood.

I hope that you will read and who knows there might be a happy ending.

It all began on a day that will change the live of a girl forever. Now let’s see where to start “Once upon a time, in the Imperial Kingdom of Dilkara—”
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Posted 9/28/08 , edited 10/4/08
Chapter 1: The Lake under the Moon

(temporarily discontinued to be re reedited and besides got PMR )
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I adore the POV~^^
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Hey~~ It's pretty good~~~
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arigato ka-chan
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Only when she was dancing did she felt free.
My favourite line~~^^

"That song.... It is time....."
What does she mean by that?
Let's continue to watch~~^^
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Posted 9/29/08 , edited 9/29/08
MUAHAHAHA *cackles* you all are aware that she is dancing ON the water right?
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Oh~~ Not really~~~ Since u tell, now I know! *rereads the story*
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Posted 9/29/08
*stares w/ eyes wide and jaw down* OMG that means there IS something wrong w/ my story!! *runs around in circle*
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*slaps Rushi-tan* Relax!! It's juz me, who isn't observant~
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Posted 9/30/08
ITAI *shrieks till ka-chan's ear drop* hai hai.
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Posted 10/17/08
Rushi ignore Ka-chan~ She's REALLY not observant~ *pats Ka-chan's head*
Yeah, I do notice that she's dancing ON water~ XD
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Posted 10/18/08
yippie *jumps in joy* sigh writer's block....i hate it
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Posted 10/18/08
Me too~~ *sigh* Maybe just go out & jump a few times to generate ideas~~?
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this is not the first time. I did alot of chapter1 for this story but all not worthy so i rejected it. The last chapter 1 is close but still not up to the way I wanted it so...
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