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(fanfic) jewel chara's
Posted 9/28/08
iya this is my first fanfic go easy on me that's why it has a wierd name
I don't no if it's classed as a fanfic cos theres like no characters from the real shuog chara in this story sorry if that is a promblem
i hope u enjoy it plz comment
relax n enjoy



sorry i didn't write that much but i'm at my dad's and he's got to drop me back off at my Mum's now :sweatingbullets:
plz comment if u can since theres not much to comment on!
thanks
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Posted 9/28/08
what will happen next ?
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Posted 9/28/08

buono_shugochara wrote:

iya this is my first fanfic go easy on me that's why it has a wierd name
I don't no if it's classed as a fanfic cos theres like no characters from the real shuog chara in this story sorry if that is a promblem
i hope u enjoy it plz comment
relax n enjoy



sorry i didn't write that much but i'm at my dad's and he's got to drop me back off at my Mum's now :sweatingbullets:
plz comment if u can since theres not much to comment on!
thanks


Your missing puntuation but hey, were not perfect.
That was short. So not much to comment. But nice!
How'd u get ur CR points to increase so fast????
Posted 9/28/08

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buono_shugochara wrote:

iya this is my first fanfic go easy on me that's why it has a wierd name
I don't no if it's classed as a fanfic cos theres like no characters from the real shuog chara in this story sorry if that is a promblem
i hope u enjoy it plz comment
relax n enjoy



sorry i didn't write that much but i'm at my dad's and he's got to drop me back off at my Mum's now :sweatingbullets:
plz comment if u can since theres not much to comment on!
thanks


Your missing puntuation but hey, were not perfect.
That was short. So not much to comment. But nice!
How'd u get ur CR points to increase so fast????


i posted on everything i could find
Posted 9/28/08
hiya i'm back
here is chapter 2


i hope u liked it i wrote it once n when i went to post it i found out i wasn't loged on so i had to right it again but i wrote it different this time cos i couldnt remember what i'd wrote n b4 i wrote either of them my step dad Dale wanted to go on E-bay n then ma Mum wanted to go on face book so that's what took me so long to put chapter 2 on

plz comment plz be nice
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Posted 9/28/08

buono_shugochara wrote:

hiya i'm back
here is chapter 2


i hope u liked it i wrote it once n when i went to post it i found out i wasn't loged on so i had to right it again but i wrote it different this time cos i couldnt remember what i'd wrote n b4 i wrote either of them my step dad Dale wanted to go on E-bay n then ma Mum wanted to go on face book so that's what took me so long to put chapter 2 on

plz comment plz be nice


wow you write loads
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Posted 9/28/08

buono_shugochara wrote:

iya this is my first fanfic go easy on me that's why it has a wierd name
I don't no if it's classed as a fanfic cos theres like no characters from the real shuog chara in this story sorry if that is a promblem
i hope u enjoy it plz comment
relax n enjoy



sorry i didn't write that much but i'm at my dad's and he's got to drop me back off at my Mum's now :sweatingbullets:
plz comment if u can since theres not much to comment on!
thanks


it's gonig greatttttttttt keep gonig pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Posted 9/28/08

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buono_shugochara wrote:

hiya i'm back
here is chapter 2


i hope u liked it i wrote it once n when i went to post it i found out i wasn't loged on so i had to right it again but i wrote it different this time cos i couldnt remember what i'd wrote n b4 i wrote either of them my step dad Dale wanted to go on E-bay n then ma Mum wanted to go on face book so that's what took me so long to put chapter 2 on

plz comment plz be nice


wow you write loads


hehe^.^ i didn't realize i'd wrote that much i get abit carried away


Posted 9/28/08

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buono_shugochara wrote:

iya this is my first fanfic go easy on me that's why it has a wierd name
I don't no if it's classed as a fanfic cos theres like no characters from the real shuog chara in this story sorry if that is a promblem
i hope u enjoy it plz comment
relax n enjoy



sorry i didn't write that much but i'm at my dad's and he's got to drop me back off at my Mum's now :sweatingbullets:
plz comment if u can since theres not much to comment on!
thanks


it's gonig greatttttttttt keep gonig pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee


thanks i will ^.^
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Posted 9/28/08

buono_shugochara wrote:


kittymeo wrote:


buono_shugochara wrote:

iya this is my first fanfic go easy on me that's why it has a wierd name
I don't no if it's classed as a fanfic cos theres like no characters from the real shuog chara in this story sorry if that is a promblem
i hope u enjoy it plz comment
relax n enjoy



sorry i didn't write that much but i'm at my dad's and he's got to drop me back off at my Mum's now :sweatingbullets:
plz comment if u can since theres not much to comment on!
thanks


it's gonig greatttttttttt keep gonig pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee


thanks i will ^.^


hehe okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk nyuuu
Posted 9/28/08
well i've got a few comments it's good enough



hope u liked it
don't forget to comment hehe^.^
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Posted 9/29/08
KAKOII great job ^o^)/
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KAKOII great job ^o^)/


thx DeeDee hehe^.^
Posted 9/29/08
we'll it'd be nice for more people to comment but as long as the people who have read it r enjoying it i don't mind ^.^
this is so important to me cos i want to be a writer when i'm older


sorry it isn't much but i have so much homework n stuff at school 2 worry about

once again plz comment
and would u like it if i put colour on the sentances like a different colour for a different character? i can do that for u

and could u put what colour u would like te characters like
Mia:
Shi:
Alice:
Ruby:
Crystal:
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Good job can't wait for the next chapter ^-^

I think this is giving me an idea for my new manga =D

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