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Posted 9/29/08
thats wut good but the chapters are short XD anyway that was good XD but Alice is a mean person saying shi made an idiot in front of people when she clearly made an idiot of herself >.>
Posted 9/30/08

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thats wut good but the chapters are short XD anyway that was good XD but Alice is a mean person saying shi made an idiot in front of people when she clearly made an idiot of herself >.>


hehe
well she is supposed to be the bad charater dum dum dum i'm glad someone that i don't no finally has posted on here n ye my chapters r usally short cos my step dad works at EDF and has to put stuff and send stuff on the computer n my mum just joined facebook n is addicted 2 it but thanks
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Posted 9/30/08
oh lol XDand i see a mean person >=D
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Posted 10/1/08
but really what'll happen next >=3 can't wait X3
Posted 10/1/08
soz that it's late but i wrote the 5th chapter nearly finishing it rite n i went upstairs n go 2 the loo n i came back down n my mum had put facebook on n deleted mine as i say she's adicted hehe ^.^ so i'm gonna write it now
n plz next time someone posts can they put the thing with wot colour they want alice's chara 2 be
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Posted 10/1/08
coool ^^

well about alice's chara colour I think "maron" would be good (dark red)
or other dark colours ,to show the evilness <>w<>
Posted 10/1/08
here is chapter 5



hope u liked it plz comment woop woop
Posted 10/1/08

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coool ^^

well about alice's chara colour I think "maron" would be good (dark red)
or other dark colours ,to show the evilness <>w<>


what about black is that evil enough cos Shi's is red
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Posted 10/1/08

buono_shugochara wrote:


DeeDee_95 wrote:

coool ^^

well about alice's chara colour I think "maron" would be good (dark red)
or other dark colours ,to show the evilness <>w<>


what about black is that evil enough cos Shi's is red


That's good too -^^-
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Posted 10/1/08
nice nice keep up the good work ^^ , and what are there transformation names ?
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Posted 10/1/08
It's not bad I guess
Posted 10/2/08

DeeDee_95 wrote:

nice nice keep up the good work ^^ , and what are there transformation names ?


umm . . . . . i haven't really thought of that u'll have 2 wait n see then hehe ^.^
Posted 10/2/08
hi again hehe ^.^ soz i haven't been writing much but so much homework n mum n dale r addicted as i've told u



lol i hoped u liked that don't forget to comment (like always)
Luv Fran-Chan hehe ^.^

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Posted 10/2/08
wow onix is as mean no colder then alice which isnt much of a surprise Xd anyway greaat chapters (i was slow i didnt read chapter 5 yet until today) i wonder wuts going to happen next XD
Posted 10/3/08

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wow onix is as mean no colder then alice which isnt much of a surprise Xd anyway greaat chapters (i was slow i didnt read chapter 5 yet until today) i wonder wuts going to happen next XD


hehe ur well nice i'll post next chapter 4 ya
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