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[Fanfiction] It Never Works Out Between Us
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Original Writer : HeavenMyth
Pairing : Amuto (Ikuto X Amu) ; Kuutau (Kuukai X Utau)
Fictional Characters : Suzuka Himeko
Prologue :

It's been two years. Two years since Ikuto had seen Amu. And two years since he's been going out with the most popular girl in school, Suzuka Himeko. Did he really love Himeko? Or was it because he thought it was the best for Amu? No one knows. Even Utau, who is currently the best friend of Amu and younger sister of Ikuto, could not understand any meaning towards Ikuto's actions.

*Two Years Ago*

"Amu! This is where you were!" Ikuto huffed and panted. Relieved that he finally found Amu. Amu heard his voice. She immediately stood up. Wanting to run away. She knew what Ikuto wanted to say. She didn't want to hear it. And yet, her legs could not bring her to run away from her beloved.

"Amu.... I.. want to tell you something"

Here it goes. Amu was expecting it coming. Since the arrival of Suzuka Himeko.

"I... want to ... break up with you" Ikuto bit his lip. He meant every word he said. He looked at Amu worriedly. To his surprise, Amu smiled back at him.

"Sure! Why not?" Amu replied enthuastically.

Shocked. Devastated. Ikuto definitely was not expecting this kind of response. Amu stood up still smiling. She reached to her bag where she kept her Shugo Charas. She took out something. It was a locket. A clover shaped locket. She then untied the strap of the bag. She handed them to Ikuto.

"Here. Take care of the Humpty Lock, Miki, Ran and Suu" Amu smiled a smile filled with sadness.

"Why?" Ikuto could not help but ask.

Amu smiled. "Well, the Humpty Lock is supposed to be a lock to fit the Dumpty Key" Ikuto knew very well what she meant. She wanted to leave him too. But her Shugo Charas? Ikuto certainly did not understand!

"Your Shugo Charas? I do understand the Humpty Lock. But your charas?"

The second sentence stung Amu's heart. She smiled and whispered, "You'll find out soon"

With that, she left. Alone. Something was bothering Ikuto about her response. He looked up with sadness. And saw...

A drop of Amu's tears.

And he heard her say,



"Eien ni aishiteru. Sayonara, watashi no Ikuto" (A/N : It means, "I will forever love you. Goodbye, my only Ikuto")

The next day, she did not appear in school. Or she had shown up at her house that night. Moreover, it was like she dissapeared into thin air. Nothing marked the existence of the Joker Guardian, Hinamori Amu.

Except for her three Shugo Chara who had turned back to eggs and...


The very existence of Tsukiyomi Ikuto.


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HeavenMyth : I hope you leave comments! It's fuel for writing the next chapter!
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Nice
Next chapter plz???
Did you planned to post this in fanfiction.net?
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well..it's kinda nice..and i wanted to know what will happen next!! what's with Amu??
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nice cliff hanger!
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very nice^^noo...i mean great!!!!hhe3x
cliff hanger and update soon 'kay^^
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UPDATESOON!!!! I LOVE AMUTOS!!!!!!!!!!!
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that was awsome story
hope u update soon.
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Replies :

Shiori4869 : I don't think so. Because Fanfiction.net works reeeaaalllyyyyy slow for me. Thanks for commenting anyway!
allanimelover : Heheheh. It's part of the story to find out. I'll give you a small hint. It's not-yet-properly-introduced-girl, Suzuka Himeko. That's all I can give you. =D Have fun reading!
candychess : If you call THAT a cliffhanger, I'll show you what's a REAL cliffhanger real soon. And, lol. You're very impatient!
g_c_a_w : Haha. Okay. Updated already. I advice you not to call that a cliffhanger I suppose. Oh! And, if you don't like cliffhangers, i think you should wait another chapter. :D
mo0rawr2 : Thank you. I thought I wrote it a bit too... dramatic!

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Chapter One : Two Years. Yet It Feels Like Nothing Changed.

July 7th. The date that marked the disappearance of the ex-Joker Guardian, Hinamori Amu. The Sakura park that marked the last of her. Two years and yet no news. Without her powers, Easter has been evolving. Thus, bringing more pressure to Ikuto.
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Seiyo High School. The Guardians who have already graduated from Middle School entered the new school. As usual, they were the chosen Guardians. The King, Tadase. The Queen, Rima. The Jack, Kuukai. The Ace, Yaya and the Joker?

"Good morning fellow students of Seiyo Gakuen. As of today, I have speech to say. We will now elect a new Joker to place Hinamori Amu who has left us two years ago. The Joker for this year is..." Tadase, the King's Chair announced. It felt like he had to force the name of the one that he loved, Hinamori Amu.

"Tadase! Tadase! Don't daydream!!!" Yaya whispered loud enough for Tadase to hear but not the whole hall to hear her. Tadase looked at Yaya apologetically and looked at the murmuring crowd.

"I will announce it. This year's Joker will be ... from the Moon Class,Classroom B-2 Suzuka Himeko".

(After Assembly)

*In Moon Class, Classroom B-2*

"Heh! Suzuka-san! You're so lucky! Not only you got into the Guardians but you can even meet those two princes after school!" A random girl squeaked.

(Author's Note : The guys wear the same uniform as Ikuto in the anime and the girls wear Utau's uniform earlier in the series of the anime)

"Class! Please sit down. Today, we have a transfer student" The homeroom teacher announced.

Murmurs could be heard throughout the room such as "A girl? A boy?" or "Is she cute?" or "Is he hot?".

"Please come in!"

A navy blue haired boy came in. He was half a head taller than the homeroom teacher. He was a bullseye-boyfriend-material for the girls. Even the newly appointed Joker, Suzune herself smiled at him. Ikuto saw the smile. He returned it by looking away.

"His name is Tsukiyomi Ikuto. Well... please sit beside, Suzune-kun".

Ikuto walked pass the tables and straight to his seat. Not failing to make the girls melt into puddles and make the guys envious of him. He sat down and sighed. He thought "What a school. This is so boring!"

"Hey, Ikuto! I'll be showing you around the school!" Suzune told Ikuto happily.

Ikuto didn't give any response .He just looked out to the windows.

"Suzune-san! You know Tsukiyomi-san?" one of the classmates asked.

"Know might not be the proper words. Hmm. I think 'boyfriend' is a better term" Suzune smiled enthuastically.

"Ehhh? Tsukiyomi-san's already taken? How long have you guys been dating?" The girl asked again.

"2 years..." This time, Ikuto answered.

Ikuto looked at the girl deeply. To be expected, she melted into a puddle. Suzune stared and just giggled.

(Lunch Break)

"Ah! Suzu-cchi!" Yaya's baby voice could be heard through the entire Guardian Greenhouse.

"Good afternoon, Suzune-san. Welcome to the Guardians!" Tadase welcomed her.

"This is your badge of proof. We don't wear cloaks like before. Sigh" Kuukai sighed.

Suzune smiled with warmness and the Guardians easily managed to talk with her. All except Rima. Rima walked out to the gardens and sighed heavily. Rima's shugo chara, Kusu Kusu, asked her, "What's wrong, Rima-kusu?"

"Nothing much. I can't accept it..." Rima whispered.

"The fact that Amu has left? Even though 2 years have passed?" A husky voice could be heard from the tree Rima was leaning on.

"This voice?! You are... Tsukiyomi Ikuto!" Rima looked up in shocked.

"Sigh. You guys love to exaggerate my name" Ikuto sighed.

"What do you want? The Humpty Lock isn't with us anymore!" Rima said in a very offensive way.

"I know. It's with me..." Ikuto trailed off in the last sentence.

"Eh...?!"

Ikuto reached into his pocked and took out a clover-shaped locket, the Humpty Lock.

"Why.. Why do you have it?" Rima asked in shock.

"I don't only have this. Amu also gave me her charas.... before she left" Ikuto's bangs covered his eyes.

Yoru appeared behind Ikuto holding the eggs which formerly belonged to the Joker Guardian. Rima and her chara had a shock.

"Why don't you explain yourself?" Rima pointed at Ikuto rudely.

"Sigh. Let's sit down somewhere then we talk." Ikuto walked off in another direction.

Rima had no choice but to follow Ikuto. She stared at him suspiciously. "What?" was the only reply she got out of Ikuto. "Return the eggs" Rima said. "No", he replied. "Why?" Rima couldn't help it.

"It wasn't yours to begin with. And Amu entrusted them to me. And also, when these girls are born once again, they're the only connect I can get to Amu. We've arrived"

Ikuto halted to a stop. Rima stopped beside him. Rima looked up, "Orion Cafe" was the name of the Cafe. They went in a took a seat. Rima no longer could stand it, "Explain. Now."

"Chill. I will!"

5 minutes have passed and the navy-blue haired boy finished explain. Rima who was sad with this news broke into tears.

"Oi oi! Don't cry at a place like this! People will get the wrong idea!" Ikuto said in his low husky voice.

"Sniff. But.. but!" Rima could make out any words.

"Ah! Ikuto! Rima!" Kusu Kusu and Yoru said together.

The egg which belonged to Miki cracked at the edges. Ikuto stared at the egg in surprise. Rima stood up, grabbed the egg and quickly left the cafe. Ikuto took out some notes, left it on the table and chased after Rima.

After a while, Rima sat down by a tree, crying. "Miki! Miki! Please!" Ikuto, who felt guilty telling her the story, comforted her. While in the midst of comforting her, Miki's egg cracked open.

"Miki-kusu!!" Kusu Kusu said happily.

Rima looked up. It really was her. Hinamori Amu's Shugo Chara, Miki. But, Miki herself wasn't happy. She had a depressed face on her.

"Neh.. How many years it has been since we're eggs?" Miki asked softly.

"2 years..." Rima smiled. She was happy just to see one of Amu's shugo chara.

"I see..."

"You know something right-nya?" Yoru asked.

"Ikuto... Yoru..." Miki sniffed. She broke down crying. Unable to say anything on Amu's dissapearance.

"Ikuto! I sense a X Egg-nya!" Yoru alerted him.

"Kusu Kusu!"

"Yoru!"

"Chara Nari!" Both, Ikuto and Rima said at the same time.

"Clown Drop!" "Black Lynx!"

"Ikuto! Rima! There's something weird about the egg!!" Yoru alerted.

"I know. I can feel it" Rima said.

They went after the egg. Ikuto and Rima who tried all their tricks to harm the X Egg, did not flash any scratch on it. Instead, the X Egg had turn into something some other than a X Character. It shaped like a normal human. Out of a sudden, a girl with long sleeved top and mini-ruffled skirt jumped pass them. She stood in front of the "human". She took out her hand as if saying stop to the "human".

"Change back into an egg" The girl commanded coldly.

The "human", slowly turned back into an egg and flew back to its owner. Rima and Ikuto, shocked to see what was in front of them. It wasn't what she did. It wasn't how she reverted the "human" back to normal. It wasn't how she was able to command it. It wasn't how cold her tone was. It was who that was in front of them.

The girl who had pink hair and honey-brown eyes.

The ex-Joker Guardian.

The girl that loved Ikuto.

The girl that broke up with Ikuto two years ago.

The girl whom Ikuto still loves until now.

The girl who had abandon her Humpty Lock and her Shugo Charas.

"Amu-chan!" Miki screamed in the sight of her.

It was...



Hinamori Amu
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Chapter One DONE! Wheee~ I just love cliffhangers! I'll stop here for today! I hope you enjoyed it!
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PLEASE CONTINUE! I LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON!
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i hope u update soon... i'm just hanging in there
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Can't wait for the next chapter!
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