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[Fanfiction] It Never Works Out Between Us
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Chapter Two : Memories

The "human", slowly turned back into an egg and flew back to its owner. Rima and Ikuto, shocked to see what was in front of them. It wasn't what she did. It wasn't how she reverted the "human" back to normal. It wasn't how she was able to command it. It wasn't how cold her tone was. It was who that was in front of them.

The girl who had pink hair and honey-brown eyes.

The ex-Joker Guardian.

The girl that loved Ikuto.

The girl that broke up with Ikuto two years ago.

The girl whom Ikuto still loves until now.

The girl who had abandon her Humpty Lock and her Shugo Charas.

"Amu-chan!" Miki screamed in the sight of her.

It was...



Hinamori Amu.

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Amu took out her cell phone and called someone. She put it on loudspeaker and made her chara hold it. She looked at her palms, held it out and out of no where, birds perched on her hand. Amu who was shocked, moved her hand to make them fly away.

“Hello?” The voice came from the cell phone.

“Hello. This is Hinamori Amu. Mission completed. Not the embryo” Amu said coldly.

“Understood. Keep searching. And…” the voice said.

“And?”

“Change your tone”

Amu hung up. Obviously pissed. “Let’s go, Dia” She said to her chara.

“Amu!” a husky voice shouted.

Hearing someone who called her name, Amu turned around just to be found herself in the arms of something warm. Amu who was already pissed as she is, used her force to push the person away. She looked down coldly, and found a navy-blue haired boy looking up at her, with sadness. “Don’t hug someone you don’t know. That’s my advice. And, get a shower. You stink” Amu said with the coldest tone that anyone has ever heard.

The comment stung Ikuto very badly. She looked at Ikuto in disgust and walked away.

“Amu! Don’t you remember me? Or them?” Ikuto shouted out of despair.

Amu didn’t bother to turn back this time. Nor response to it. She went straight to her hotel where she is currently staying at. A suite I would say. Entering the luxurious prepared for her, she went straight to shower.

“Are you curious?” Dia asked to break the creepy silence that filled the room.

“About?” Amu replied back with a question.

“The blue haired guy and his chara” Dia said.

“No. He’s just good looking. Others than that, he stinks.” Amu replied coldly.

“……” No response from Dia.

“He had a chara? Didn’t see that” Amu realized Dia’s last sentence.

“Un. He has a cat-like chara” Dia said softly.

“Heh. I didn’t know that. I don’t really care about strangers” Amu said while wiping herself. She wore a short pants and a blouse. Followed by a silver bracelet and a cross necklace. She took her cell phone and put it into her pocket.

“Where are we going?” Dia asked politely.

“Just a stroll” Amu replied. This time, with a happier tone.

“Okay!” Dia said enthuastically.
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“Ikuto-nya?” Yoru asked in worry.

“Hmm?” Ikuto replied with his eyes closed.

“You alright-nya?”

“Yeah… I guess”

“Let’s go-nya!” Yoru said trying to pull Ikuto into walking.

“Where?” Ikuto said finally opening his eyes.

“Buy some catnips! And let’s take a stroll nya!” Yoru said happily with his tail whisking about.

“Okay…. How about you? Crying won’t help you get Amu back” Ikuto said in a matter-of-factly way to the crying Miki.

“C’mon. You need fresh air after being stuck in that egg for TWO years-nya!” Yoru reached out his paws to Miki.

Miki instantly blushed. She tried to hide it by looking at the unhatched eggs of Ran and Suu. She sighed.

“I think she has a crush on you, Yoru” Ikuto whispered to Yoru as soft as possible.

“Really-nya? I think she likes the kiddy king’s chara-nya!” Yoru whispered back.

“Un. Let’s go” Miki made up her mind to stay by Ikuto for now.

Ikuto, using Yoru’s chara change, jumped off the roof and landed on the grass smoothly without any unnecessary movements. Miki who tagged along, got tired of moving around too much. Ikuto bought some catnips from a nearby convenience store ate a bit of it and gave some to Yoru. He looked at Miki and said, “You want any?” Miki looked up and nodded. She took one and ate it. She thought, “He’s a despicable guy but… he has a nice side to him after all”.

“Wait a minute, Dia! Give me back my necklace!” A girl shouted. Yoru, Miki and Ikuto shot up hearing the voice. It was unmistakably the voice of Hinamori Amu. Ikuto unconsciously started chasing the pink haired girl.

“Wait for me-nya!” Yoru started chasing after Ikuto.

Both the charas caught up to the running Ikuto. “What are you going to do? Amu-chan doesn’t remember you … or any of us. What will you do when you see her?” Miki asked while chasing Ikuto. Yoru agreed along with Miki. Ikuto who didn’t reply just continued chasing the pink haired girl.

“Dia! There’ll be no supper for you later! Give it back to meeeeee!” Amu shouted.

“Man. I just wanted to play!” Dia stopped and gave her back her necklace.

“Hmph. You could have picked a better game” Amu said while wearing back her necklace.

“Ah~ We’ve entered a deserted park” Dia said.

Amu then heard panting voices behind her. She turned around just to find the disgusting navy blue haired boy this evening who hugged her and his charas. Amu ignored them and turned back around. She walked straight as if something was calling her. Dia followed along.

“Amu! Listen to me!” Ikuto shouted to her.

“Amu-chan!” Miki shouted trying to regain Amu back her memories.

Amu-chan?This struck a bell in Amu’s head. She fell down screaming, “Ahhh!!!! It hurts! It hurts! I don’t want to remember! AHHHH!” She shook her head as hard as possible. She looked at Ikuto and his charas angrily. Ikuto had never seen such an angry stare from Amu, got sent flying backwards by Amu.

“Ikuto!” Yoru shouted.

Miki looked at Amu who had her palm up as if saying stop. It was the same as this evening when she reverted the egg back to normal.

“Amu… let’s go back…” Dia said softly.

Without any response, Amu snapped her fingers. Within a blink of an eye, Amu and her chara, Dia disappeared. Ikuto’s bangs covered his eyes and walked away. A worried Yoru and a sorrowful Miki, tagged behind Ikuto.

A drop of tear fell from Ikuto’s face to the grounds.

“Ikuto….” Yoru used his paws to wipe off the tear. Miki took out a small handkerchief and wiped the tears that wear flowing from his face. “It’s uncool for a guy to cry…” Miki said. Ikuto wiped off his tears and moved his bangs out of his face and mumbled a small thanks to the charas.
*******
“What’s wrong, Tadase?” Yaya asked.

“Nothing…” Tadase replied.

“It’s not NOTHING! You’ve been in a daze since evening!” Kuukai said.

“…….”

“Tadase?” Kuukai and Yaya worried about Tadase.

“Today… I saw Hinamori-san….” He started softly.

“EH?!” Yaya squeaked.
******
“Hello, Hinamori here” Amu said to her cell phone.

“Have you found it?” There was a really low voice over the other side of the phone.

“Not yet”

“Find it quick. Or I won’t guarantee the safety of Amu-san

“Give me two months! I’ll find it” Amu said quickly.

“Then start working” the voice said demandingly.

“Can I ask something?”

“What? Make it quick. I’m in a hurry”

“Did Amu-san knew a navy-blue haired boy?”

“……”

“Hello?”

“Ah. No. Just get rid of him if he’s bothering you” he commanded.

“Yes. And two months! You promised” Amu said worriedly.

“That is IF you get the Embryo for us”

“Then you’ll let Amu-san free?” Amu asked.

“Maybe”

And the guy hung up. Amu herself was worried. Dia went to her and comforted her. “Amu…. It’s alright. We’ll find the embryo.” She nodded and they both went to sleep.
*****
(Somewhere in Easter)
“How’s she?”

“She’s still in a coma”

“Heh? Looks like Himeko-sama did a really good job”

“Good evening…” A black haired girl popped out of nowhere.

“Himeko-sama! How was school today?”

“Quite good. I got in the Guardians. And Ikuto transferred into my class”

“Wow. Himeko-sama must be really happy. Your plans are falling into place”

“Of course. I’ll find the embryo earlier than that girl. Trust me I will”

“We will always support you”

“Thank you. How’s the body?”

“She’s sleeping like you predicted over the TWO years!”

“Good. If she shows any sign of waking up, give her the drug that I prepared” Himeko instructed.

“Yes, ma’am”
*****
Chapter Two done! I hope you guys enjoyed it! I bet you’re all curious aren’t you!?
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I like it! Your really good at it! I can't wait for Chapter 3! ^^
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time 4 me 2 work. great chap. hope u update soon. i pn u de link when i done
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im finally finish put up the story online people that want to here the link

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yay! hopefully u write more! and wow, that amu that said ikuto stinks wasn't really Amu? o.O O.O
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is there a nother mewchiy lol
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WOW NEXT CHAPTER PLEACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I HELP IT COME SOON.
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I WANT NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!!!!
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OMG THIS STORY IS

It Never Works Out Between Us » by lil.anz.gurlz
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nice writing great job !
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iluvshaoran wrote:

OMG THIS STORY IS

It Never Works Out Between Us » by lil.anz.gurlz


lil.anz.gurlz is me, HeavenMyth let put on her story for her hehe
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But.. Isn't Ikuto much older? How can they be in the same class?
Or is Suzune also much older than the rest of the guardiens? ... but that would be weird...

anyways.. I like the story.. it's so mysterious...
I wonder who that 'fake' amu is then..

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ask HeavenMyth i have know ideas.
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mo0rawr2 wrote:

ask HeavenMyth i have know ideas.


lolz. Yeah.. Gotta ask her to update soon!
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