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Kawaii wa MITCH!
[Cute is EVIL!]


Chapter One
"Meet the morons-! I mean main characters!"

Hotoru Maki is one of the evilest girls on this planet.
She could steal and even kill if she wanted too.....
because she was also one of the cutest
.

"Welcome to Winchester Mantion!" Said Haru.
"Haru you idiot! That was my line stupid, ugly, shrew boy!" Screamed
Hotoru standing on stage in front of millions of veiwers.
"What the-! Well your brain can't process information that fast so I figured
that I should ease your pain moron!" Haru yelled in reply.

One day a idol recruiter came up to Hotoru and offered her a job to become an
idol. Trying to follow her dreams; to one day rule the world, she agreed and
signed the contract.


"Your not suppose to fight on live T.V.!" Whispered the director from back stage.
"You the moron who paired me up with this stupid moron!" Argued Hotoru throwing her
book; that she pulled from no where, at the director.
"Im not gay you ugly faced, evil little-!"

After a few days of restless duo searching for Hotoru, they finally found a partner
who's vocals could compliment each others. And that happen to be Haru Imi.


"Technical Difficulties!" Yelled the producer as he turned of the power.

You might think that if two idols fight to much they'll get kicked off. Well, not
for these two. Their famous for the completely reckless fights and their perfect
singing voices.


"This is all you fault! I'm going to make a voodoo doll of you today!" Yelled Hotoru
jumping on to Haru and stating to pull his hair.
"No it's all you fault for not taking anger management classes!" Yelled Haru.
"Here they go again..." Sighed the back stage crew.
"Hey they go again!" Laughed the audience; who didn't have a very good view
of what was happening.

When you hear someone like Hotoru say, "I hate you." you shouldn't take it
that deeply, because that is 3/4 of what she'll say to you everyday.
Not that she really mean's to hurt you she just, doesn't plain care.


"Get off of me!" Yelled Haru rolling on the floor.
"Oh you know you like it, cause you have a crush on me!" Giggled Hotoru
jokingly.
"Whatever! Just get off!" Screamed Haru.
"Your just in denial 30 out of 50 of my fans are boys! And 20 out of that
30 are in love with me!" Laughed Hotoru.
"What about the other 20 fans?" Asked Haru.
"Oh you don't want to know..." I said emotionlessly.

This was basically every days routine. Fight, fight, fight, forget what there fighting about,
then fight some more.


"What where we fighting about again?...." Asked Hotoru.
"We where-!..... Ugg! You made me forget!!" Complained Haru.
"HA-HA!" Molked Hotoru.

See what I mean...? Stupid morons huh? Well it's not my job to critisize, it's
my job to tell this story.

Hotoru liked to believe everyone loved her (and they did, but that's not the point)
so one day she decided to make fun of Haru making up something as ridiculous
(ridiculas us to her) as if Haru liked her. So she keep saying "Haru, you have a crush on me!",
over, and over again.
Not everyone believed this, or wanted to belive this, but Haru in fact did have a crush on her.
But never wanted to admit it.


What will be in store for these two next.....?
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Kawaii wa MITCH!
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Chapter One
"Meet the morons-! I mean main characters!"



okay 1. totally great opening! it caught my attention instantly! 2. awesome!!! and i could keep going! XD great job! keep it up!!
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kyahikaru wrote:

Kawaii wa MITCH!
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Chapter One
"Meet the morons-! I mean main characters!"



okay 1. totally great opening! it caught my attention instantly! 2. awesome!!! and i could keep going! XD great job! keep it up!!

*eyes shinning* R-really? Thank you so much! I'll continue to write this! I'll post the next chapter tomorrow! Thankies!!
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yay!!!!!!~~ this will totally brighten my day after reading this horrible book...ur stories totally beat that author who has their work published!! omg at this rate i know u will be an author and a mangaka!!~XD
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yay!!!!!!~~ this will totally brighten my day after reading this horrible book...ur stories totally beat that author who has their work published!! omg at this rate i know u will be an author and a mangaka!!~XD


TANKS! XD XD XD! You should make a story group! I'd love to read a story by you sometime! And here I go! I'm going to post it! XD XD
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specialbunny11 wrote:

yay!!!!!!~~ this will totally brighten my day after reading this horrible book...ur stories totally beat that author who has their work published!! omg at this rate i know u will be an author and a mangaka!!~XD


TANKS! XD XD XD! You should make a story group! I'd love to read a story by you sometime! And here I go! I'm going to post it! XD XD


a story group? ...never made one before...and..im not very proud of my stories...truthfully...i only ever made one...nvr finished it...and lost it....i have no motivation on stories....TT_TT
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a story group? ...never made one before...and..im not very proud of my stories...truthfully...i only ever made one...nvr finished it...and lost it....i have no motivation on stories....TT_TT


that's exactly how i felt. until some people begin commenting and saying how awesome it is and how they cant wait for the next chapter! I made me so happy that even if only two people where commenting and reading i should continue!
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specialbunny11 wrote:

a story group? ...never made one before...and..im not very proud of my stories...truthfully...i only ever made one...nvr finished it...and lost it....i have no motivation on stories....TT_TT


that's exactly how i felt. until some people begin commenting and saying how awesome it is and how they cant wait for the next chapter! I made me so happy that even if only two people where commenting and reading i should continue!


...two people...i cant believe it ...ppl! where are ur feelings?!? srry...but i think that ur stories deserve ALOT more fans....
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specialbunny11 wrote:

a story group? ...never made one before...and..im not very proud of my stories...truthfully...i only ever made one...nvr finished it...and lost it....i have no motivation on stories....TT_TT


that's exactly how i felt. until some people begin commenting and saying how awesome it is and how they cant wait for the next chapter! I made me so happy that even if only two people where commenting and reading i should continue!


...two people...i cant believe it ...ppl! where are ur feelings?!? srry...but i think that ur stories deserve ALOT more fans....


ya i think so too .... I have no idea why people aren't reading... all the work i put into it.... and ALL the advertisement i did....
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specialbunny11 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


specialbunny11 wrote:

a story group? ...never made one before...and..im not very proud of my stories...truthfully...i only ever made one...nvr finished it...and lost it....i have no motivation on stories....TT_TT


that's exactly how i felt. until some people begin commenting and saying how awesome it is and how they cant wait for the next chapter! I made me so happy that even if only two people where commenting and reading i should continue!


...two people...i cant believe it ...ppl! where are ur feelings?!? srry...but i think that ur stories deserve ALOT more fans....


ya i think so too .... I have no idea why people aren't reading... all the work i put into it.... and ALL the advertisement i did....


...me neither...i also dont know why they wont read them...hmm...maybe i should advertise with my other account...*shine*
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...me neither...i also dont know why they wont read them...hmm...maybe i should advertise with my other account...*shine*


Ya! And I could go to a whole bunch of forums and advertise! [although the second one might bother people ]
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...me neither...i also dont know why they wont read them...hmm...maybe i should advertise with my other account...*shine*


Ya! And I could go to a whole bunch of forums and advertise! [although the second one might bother people ]


lol ppl might get mad if u advertise tooo much....lets say 5 places advertise will be okay....
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...me neither...i also dont know why they wont read them...hmm...maybe i should advertise with my other account...*shine*


Ya! And I could go to a whole bunch of forums and advertise! [although the second one might bother people ]


lol ppl might get mad if u advertise tooo much....lets say 5 places advertise will be okay....


hah ya you probably right!
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specialbunny11 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


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...me neither...i also dont know why they wont read them...hmm...maybe i should advertise with my other account...*shine*


Ya! And I could go to a whole bunch of forums and advertise! [although the second one might bother people ]


lol ppl might get mad if u advertise tooo much....lets say 5 places advertise will be okay....


hah ya you probably right!


ill advertise too...using TWO users....lol XD
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lol ppl might get mad if u advertise tooo much....lets say 5 places advertise will be okay....


hah ya you probably right!


ill advertise too...using TWO users....lol XD


cool! thanks! ^^
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