[FanFic] BAKA!
Posted 10/2/08 , edited 10/2/08
Okay well I don't own Shugo Chara, blah blah blah but I own the characters!

Um, this is my FIRST fanfic.
so don't judge.


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Posted 10/2/08
wat kind of couple pairing is dis? or is dis ur own lil character u created?
Posted 10/4/08

babymew383 wrote:

wat kind of couple pairing is dis? or is dis ur own lil character u created?


amu is from shugo chara of course~
& tha other ppl are jus ppl i made up o-o
duh
Posted 10/4/08
im confused
Posted 10/5/08

mariah10 wrote:

im confused


why....?
Posted 10/6/08
its hard to read cuz you dont seperate what which character is saying and plus i wear glasses so i cant see to well
Posted 10/8/08 , edited 10/8/08
well isnt it obvious whos saying what?
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Posted 10/11/08
erm, no, not really.
Try posting it up on fanfiction.net, you'll get reviews from experienced writers, plus more people will read it.
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Posted 12/6/08
it is a bit hard but it is really gud i like it
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Posted 12/6/08
wow, that must have tooken a long time to type all that!
But it is kinda confuesing...
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