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Those everlasting footsteps.
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Posted 10/3/08
This fanfiction is 100% original and not copied from any other fanfic. I thought of the storyline myself. The writing style was slightly inspired by jc-zala from fanfiction.net. This story is also on that web in the Gakuen Alice section. Feel free to drop reviews there! :D




How was it? I guessed the main people this chapter revolved around is Reo and Kimiko. I had to introduce the two main antagonist first! Yes, incase you noticed, there are still 2 more students from the AAO which has not been found out yet. I plan to do so in the later chapters, so stay tuned! Anyway, most of you should have realised that Hotaru was not in this chapter. I have something else something planned for her anyway.

Thanks for reading anyway!
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Posted 10/3/08
I think it was very nice. you should write more fanfics.
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Posted 10/4/08
thanks so much . i was wondering whether i did a bad job in it since i didnt actually get feedbacks.. T.T
Posted 10/4/08
this is good!!...better then my story =(...i can't wait for the second chapter!!!
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Posted 10/4/08
Heh thanks for the compliment.. It wasn't that good anyway. Haha. I know better fanfic authors.
Posted 10/4/08

thmelodie wrote:

Heh thanks for the compliment.. It wasn't that good anyway. Haha. I know better fanfic authors.


heheh...you're better then me..read it if you would..here on the forums: Fanfiction about Gakuen Alice. i'm horrible... everyone said that i'm bussy with rewriting the Anime heheh lol...but again...your better then me

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Posted 10/5/08
Boohoo. I need more encouragement! Please do give comments .Is it too long?
Posted 10/6/08

thmelodie wrote:

Boohoo. I need more encouragement! Please do give comments .Is it too long?


do you mean your story?...no~! i like that!...really i like long stories!! keep on going..and i can't wait for chapter 2
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Posted 10/6/08 , edited 10/6/08
The 2nd Chapter is finally up! I kinda rushed through it though. I don't think it's that good T.T. Anyway, if you're wondering who is LilMiyuki, it's my id on ff.net . Your comments are greatly appreciated!



Finished. So do COMMENT COMMENT COMMENT !
Posted 10/6/08
OMG...that was sooooooooo SUGOI!!!!! ( Great!! )....i can't wait for chaprer 3!!!!! =D
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Posted 10/7/08
That was great! So detailed! I loved it!
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Posted 10/8/08
Ahh. Thanks ! Do love more comments though [:
Posted 10/8/08
its good!!! i can't wait for chapter 3.. =D very interesting =3
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Posted 10/19/08
whens chapter 3 coming out?
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Posted 10/19/08
cause i want to read more. and i was like soo happy that natsume said that mikan was his girlfriend. i waa practicly crying. lol
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