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This is a story that was create due to boredom.
There are some ideas which I taken and modified from games , anime and manga.
The story characters are truly fictional.
I might have committed grave English mistake so if anyone can correct me ,thank you.

Chapter 1 - A New Beginning ~ A New ending ~~ Anoother way forward

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Chapter 2 - The Hidden House~~ The Secret Avatar
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Chapter 3 - Living in the Memories~ Trapped in the Past
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wow XD what a way to start off a story (with drama and mystery XD) but did u mean on time??

In the parchment, it reads
In time of trouble do not fear ,
let the bard sings his songs ,
for you may listen with with your ear ,
the kindly advice on
the adventure to begin.

Come what may come,
in time no time no matter what, <<<<<(no time?) {on time???}>
what lies within you may be calm,
or chaotic nature wet.

It is a cowardly way to run,
hide or give up,
there is no pun
to become a tub.
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UN1M3 wrote:

wow XD what a way to start off a story (with drama and mystery XD) but did u mean on time??

In the parchment, it reads
In time of trouble do not fear ,
let the bard sings his songs ,
for you may listen with with your ear ,
the kindly advice on
the adventure to begin.

Come what may come,
in time no time no matter what, <<<<<(no time?) {on time???}>
what lies within you may be calm,
or chaotic nature wet.

It is a cowardly way to run,
hide or give up,
there is no pun
to become a tub.


pardon me for the in time no time ,
actually , from that sentence I wished to convey that in time or no time ,
they will come , as in the problem will arise.

The message on the whole is to mock at both Rocket Lee and Razier,
telling them that they are weak and they cannot hide from the Aggalm.
The Aggalm merely spare them on their whims , or more likely , they
are just the pawns of Aggalm unknowingly.

Thank for commenting on my stories.XD
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Chapter 4 - Moving Forward~ A New Discovery
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Posted 10/11/08 , edited 10/11/08

ligersay wrote:


UN1M3 wrote:

wow XD what a way to start off a story (with drama and mystery XD) but did u mean on time??

In the parchment, it reads
In time of trouble do not fear ,
let the bard sings his songs ,
for you may listen with with your ear ,
the kindly advice on
the adventure to begin.

Come what may come,
in time no time no matter what, <<<<<(no time?) {on time???}>
what lies within you may be calm,
or chaotic nature wet.

It is a cowardly way to run,
hide or give up,
there is no pun
to become a tub.


pardon me for the in time no time ,
actually , from that sentence I wished to convey that in time or no time ,
they will come , as in the problem will arise.

The message on the whole is to mock at both Rocket Lee and Razier,
telling them that they are weak and they cannot hide from the Aggalm.
The Aggalm merely spare them on their whims , or more likely , they
are just the pawns of Aggalm unknowingly.

Thank for commenting on my stories.XD


ooooooooooooooooooooooooo i get it now XD and no problem
u dont have to thank me i have to thank you ^_^ for ur advice and also for writing such a great story ^_^ XD and wheres Ravado D= <u dont have to answer that XD> i'll be waiting for the next chapter i wonder whats going to happen next (dum dum dummmmmmm XD)
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Chapter 5 - The Shining Light , Appearance of the Angel


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UN1M3 wrote:


ligersay wrote:


UN1M3 wrote:

wow XD what a way to start off a story (with drama and mystery XD) but did u mean on time??

In the parchment, it reads
In time of trouble do not fear ,
let the bard sings his songs ,
for you may listen with with your ear ,
the kindly advice on
the adventure to begin.

Come what may come,
in time no time no matter what, <<<<<(no time?) {on time???}>
what lies within you may be calm,
or chaotic nature wet.

It is a cowardly way to run,
hide or give up,
there is no pun
to become a tub.


pardon me for the in time no time ,
actually , from that sentence I wished to convey that in time or no time ,
they will come , as in the problem will arise.

The message on the whole is to mock at both Rocket Lee and Razier,
telling them that they are weak and they cannot hide from the Aggalm.
The Aggalm merely spare them on their whims , or more likely , they
are just the pawns of Aggalm unknowingly.

Thank for commenting on my stories.XD


ooooooooooooooooooooooooo i get it now XD and no problem
u dont have to thank me i have to thank you ^_^ for ur advice and also for writing such a great story ^_^ XD and wheres Ravado D= <u dont have to answer that XD> i'll be waiting for the next chapter i wonder whats going to happen next (dum dum dummmmmmm XD)



Here chapter 5 for you
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OMG WHY DID RAZER THREATENED AN ANGEL and Rocket lee hit on the angel. WOW >_> they should get punished XD (well they dont have to but should XD) ^_^ i didnt think an angel would appear that surprised me XD but it was nice ^_^ they got another ally (or did they??) ^_^i wonder what will happen in the next chapter.
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Posted 10/12/08
Rocket Lee didn't hit the angel, Rocket Lee was hit by Raizer.

"Knock it off ! We had a crisis here and stop fooling around. I bet this is a fake or an illusion." ,growled Razier as his muscles tensed up and he whacked the head of Rocket Lee like a ball .

“Ouch!”

“Knock it off.”

show that rocket lee was being hit.


Lol
the story i am writing consist of fantasy, magic, drama , romance(some), action
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Posted 10/12/08
And why Raizer threatened the Angel ? Well , in later chapter you will know. XD
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Posted 10/12/08 , edited 10/13/08
Chapter 6 - Mark of the Lances , Angel Florence

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her song was long XD if i had to sing that every time to get in pass the rock wall i wouldnt want to go in the gate what so ever XD
nice chapter ^_^
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Posted 10/13/08
They are angels and they lived in eons of year , might as well let them sing some songs as they have free time.
Lol, just joking only.
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