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This is the elemental lake roleplay turned into a story.
Please comment on my story so i noe how i am going

Noel was running to school as she was late. But then she began to slow down as she saw a cave. It didn’t feel right to her and seemed unusual but was giving off an aura that made it seem important. She continued running to school but it was useless as she was already late and was given a detention.
Ryuji suddenly bursts through the doors as he plopped himself down on his seat. His black hair hung in his face as he rested his forehead on the desk.
“Ryuji! Hey Ryuji! Hey how are you doing Ryuji?” Noel calls from across the classroom.
“Oh please help me o spirits of the wind from this wretched witch” Ryuji prays
Crash! “Uwaahh......Ryuji....that’s mean! Noel lying down cries a bit.
“Alright! Alright! What do you want Noel?” He glared at her while speaking in an annoying tone. He was seriously tired from yesterday as he found himself lying in the middle of the streets as he had to walk 10 miles back home.
Noel looks at Ryuji and begins to speak.
“Awwww! Ryuji’s in a bad mood today! Anyway, I found a cave on my way here want to go together and discover it? It’ll be fun!!!” She said happily.
Ryuji sighed and got up, “yeah, why not.” He threw his backpack behind him and walked lazily towards the door and stops.
“Are you coming or not Noel?”
Noel nods head and link arms with him only to have Ryuji shrug her off."
This is going to be so much fun! Especially with Ryuji!" Noel smiled and Ryuji gives her a quick smile and began their journey to the cave.

“So Ryuji, you know how you can control wind using your powers, do you know where you got them from?” Noel curiously questions Ryuji.
“I don’t know much myself to tell you the truth.” Ryuji states as he begins to fiddle around with some dirt in his hand using wind. “It was blessed upon me when I was still a baby. My mother took me someplace and that is where I got my powers from. I wasn’t able to ask her as she died when I was 5 and I didn’t know much about it then.”
“Oh, I’m so sorry.”
“It’s okay. It was good to finally have someone to talk to about it.”

Before they knew it they were going through the dark forest to find the cave once again.
"W-where are we????" Noel asked looking around....."Ryuji?"
He sniffed the air, the faint sound of dripping water and mould filled the air.
"We’re close, let's keep on going." they travelled deeper into the forest and Ryuji seemed to know where he was going as if he had been here before.
"How do you know this???" Noel asked then she saw the cave "There it is! That's it!" Noel ran into the cave in the middle there was a lake.
"Oh how pretty!!!" she said then she touched the water and a fish came towards her.
"Hmmm? Oh hi fishy!!" She exclaimed in a happy voice.
"2 people enter, one to fulfil the ancient ritual once more and the other who has entered these depths before, to guide her. We have been waiting for you." The fish uttered. Noel stared at the fish for a moment.
"Ancient ritual? Waiting? Hold on here, did this creepy fish just talk???" she asked herself.
"How rude! I am not creepy! I am the ancient guardian of these lakes!” The fish yelled. Noel dipped her hand in the water trying to touch the fish.
Ryuji grabbed her hands, "don't touch that fish yet." He spoke as he pointed out the rest of the lake. It was filled with green liquid and bones were floating on top.
"Here give me your hand.” He takes Noel’s hand and grabs a small vial with a strange glowing blue liquid inside.
“What is that?” Noel asks Ryuji.
“It’s an elixir. But this one is special; one drop will cure anything and also create a mystical shield to protect it from harm.” He pours one drop onto her hand. Noel’s hand begins to glow a light blue then fades.
“Guardian, I ask you, what is wrong with this lake?” Ryuji asks the fish.
“2 lakes, 2 tests, 1 answer. You have passed both tests. The first was a test of greed. In the middle of this lake, treasure lies. To come here and not seek it, you have passed the test. The second was a test of friendship. Once a person enters, they can’t get out. Only by the help of their comrades may they be saved.”
“But Noel didn’t go into the lake!” Ryuji states clearly.
“Ah Yes! But she did enter the lake and was poisoned as were the rest of these people. You saved here by giving her an elixir to destroy the poison. And in doing so, pass the second test. Well done to you both, you may go retrieve the true treasure.” Suddenly a boulder lifter into the air above the lake and broken to reveal a platform.
“It will take you across to initiate the Ancient Ritual once more.”
Both Ryuji and Noel step onto the platform as it raises into the air and across the lake and along with it the, the Guardian of the lakes, the fish.

They land at the edge of the other lake, and step off the platform. Noel quickly takes off her shoes and dips her feet at the shore of the lake. Suddenly, her eyes turn a bright blue and she begins to walk to the middle of the lake, except that she was walking on the water.
“NOEL! NOEL COME BACK!” Ryuji screams out to Noel.
“Do not interrupt the Ancient Ritual, if you do, who knows what may happen.” The fish states while not taking its eyes off Noel.”
Once Noel reaches the middle, the fish utters 3 sacred words... ‘Sanctus ritus coepi’.
A beam of light blue comes down from the shy and engulfs Noel. She rises into the air and speaks 3 words, ‘WATER’ and bursts of water rise above the surface then die down.
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ur story writting skillz are awesome, me can't wait for more xD
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ur story writting skillz are awesome, me can't wait for more xD


“The ritual is done, element that she controls is water.” The fish utters.
But now, Noel begins to fall!
“NOEL!!!” Ryuji cries out.
But then suddenly a pillar of ice rises up out of the lake and rock flies from the ground to cover the top and catch Noel. Then out from the shadows, emerges a man who seems to be controlling the pillar.
“She’s okay now, no questions for now, we need to get her down and warm so she can rest.”
The pillar turns back to water and the platform of rock comes down towards Ryuji and the man sinks into the ground to lay her down gently. The man pulls out a small silver box with one open side and lays it out pointing towards Noel. The man turns around and looks into the shadows.
“You can come out now. Electricity is your specialty isn’t it?”
A woman emerges from the darkness with a surprised look.
“How long have you known I was here?”
“Ever since you entered, Zakrina. Now just charge this generator with your magic already!”
Zakrina places her hands over the generator and a small flash of light appears and the generator starts and the heater began to operate.
He turns to Ryuji and now in a smooth clear voice begins to speak.
“Now you may ask your questions.”
“First before I say any questions, thank you for rescuing Noel. Now onto my questions, who are you? What are you doing here? How long have you been here and how come you can control 2 elements?”
“Okay. First one, my name is Hiryu; I am also a student at your school. I was here to gain my 3rd element. I have been here for about 10 minutes before you arrived and I can actually control 3 elements: Ice, Solid Earth and Electricity and that is in order of which I received them. Ice is my strongest as I received it first, then Solid Earth then just now, Electricity.”
“My turn, how did you know I was there? How do you know my main element and how do you know my name?” Zakrina inquiries.
“I train under a great ninja, he is my master. I know your element as my master, his other pupil and I have been monitoring the elemental lakes. I was here to investigate movement and also to check our long range monitoring device. For every person that we monitor, we investigate about them. It is one of our goals to make sure that every person who gains elements uses them properly and if they don’t, we will know how to take them down. We also monitor those who become like me and my master who wield more than one element.”
“That is very weird.” Zakrina states.
Hiryu raises his arm out in front of him and a blue aura surrounds his lower arm. 1 big block of ice emerges from the earth and 4 smaller blocks surrounding it. Hiryu then clenches his hand and the blocks of ice shatter to reveal an ice table surrounded by 4 chairs.
“We shouldn’t move her for now. Take a seat, don’t worry, even though they are made of ice, they are not cold nor will they melt. The magical aura here amplifies the magic power here. We can rest here for now; if you want anything to eat just ask. We need to give Noel time to rest here so here magical powers can manifest properly.”
Ryuji just remembers what happened to Noel.
~unfinished chapter~
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YO!!! nice story but i control 3 elements.... water, living earth,and wind....just telling lol ^^
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YO!!! nice story but i control 3 elements.... water, living earth,and wind....just telling lol ^^


It is 1 for now so the story can progress further
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more plez, can't w8 till u introduce other characters xD
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francismontano wrote:


bluebearX94 wrote:

YO!!! nice story but i control 3 elements.... water, living earth,and wind....just telling lol ^^


It is 1 for now so the story can progress further


but that won't be fair becuase YOU have 3 powers.....
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bluebearX94 wrote:


francismontano wrote:


bluebearX94 wrote:

YO!!! nice story but i control 3 elements.... water, living earth,and wind....just telling lol ^^


It is 1 for now so the story can progress further


but that won't be fair becuase YOU have 3 powers.....


Yes but my character has visited all 3 elemental lakes in the world, read the roleplay turned into a story and it will say that he is monitoring the elemental lakes
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Posted 10/17/08
will u include everybody in the story, or just Noel-chan, and Ruiji-kun
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lalacaca wrote:

will u include everybody in the story, or just Noel-chan, and Ruiji-kun


I will introduce everybody and some of my own characters to make it better.
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This is the list

Noel
Ryuji
Fish
Hiryu
Zakrina
Torath
Suzu
Yuriko
Hana
Kenshin
(all the lil pets and mecha of kenshin, hiryu and suzu)
Apollo (zakrina's bird)
Hikaru
and many more to come

So basically
be patient, i have a lot to do and i try to find time to do the story
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me just curious, anywho, gambatte on ur the next section of ur stories xD
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lalacaca wrote:

me just curious, anywho, gambatte on ur the next section of ur stories xD


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