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hey, in the next chappie, should i make Tadase come to his senses and realise he isn't gay? i need at least 5 answers please


yes yes u should make him feel sad for broking up with amu make him feel that he made the biggest mistake EVER for saying he's gay (and saying its so forward to amu) MAKE HIM REALIZE HES NOT GAY (so then amu could break his heart like he broke hers ^_~) <<<i feel evil for saying that>
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go go go nyuu keep it going please don't make me wait to much!!!!!!!!!!

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The Setup

Tara: Yay! My first fanfic! AMUTO PAIRING! GO AMUTOO!
Ikuto: Wow, I like her already.
Amu: Hey, what'd I miss?
Ikuto: AMU! *Glomps*
Amu: AHH! Pervert! Get off me!
Ikuto: aww, Amu, you're so cold.
Tara: I have been completely forgotten...*goes to corner and hides* anyway, while I sulk over here, enjoy...
Audience: O.O weird...
Tara: *Goes back to cheerful mood* just so you know, the ages: Ikuto-22 Amu, Rima-20 Nagehiko-21 and the chara’s are human in this. (Sorry, I wasn’t bothered to mention the other characters) Ikuto! do the disclaimer please!
Ikuto: why do i have to do it?
Tara: I could make this a Tadamu story...
Ikuto: NO! Tara-chan doesn't own Shugo Chara!


Amu’s POV
Why do these things happen to me? Tadase broke up with me for a GUY! 3 years, 3 damn years I was together with him, and he’s gay! I haven’t been with anyone else since Tadase, I mean I’ve dated, but they were jerks or cheaters so ever since last year, I gave up on Love, a few people I know were right…Love stinks! All of a sudden, my phone rang.
“Hello?” I said.
“Hey, Amu, its Rima, can you come over? I want to tell you some good news.”
“Mm, sure, I have nothing else to do anyway” I said boredly.
“There’s your cool & spicy self again” Rima sighed into the phone.
“What?”
“Never mind, anyway, just get over here”
“Hai, Hai.” And I hung up.
Rima’s POV
“Mou…” I said as she hung up the phone.
“Did you just call Amu-Chan?” Nagehiko came from the living room.
“Yeah, she’s on her way over.” I said as Nagehiko snaked his arms around my waist with his head on my shoulder.
“I can’t wait until I see Amu’s reaction when I tell her the news. Nagehiko, you were best friends with Amu at Seiyo Elementary, right? Don’t you have an idea about how she’ll react?” I asked.
“Hmm, I have an idea, but who knows?” He replied back to me giving me a smile.
This is what I love about Nagehiko, he’s so gentle and kind, and loves laughing like I do. I was so happy when he proposed to me, and I want Amu to be the first to know, she was my first friend when I first transferred to Seiyo Elementary 9 years ago, and we have always been keeping contact. But, ever since Tadase, she hasn’t loved anyone. I heard the doorbell ring and knew instantly it was Amu. So I rushed to the door.
Rima: Hey Amu!
Amu: Hi Rima, so what’s up?
Rima: well, come in first and sit down and talk to Nagehiko for a while, I’ll get some tea.
Amu: Nagehiko? He’s here?
Rima: Uh, yeah, I’ll fill you in on the details when I get the tea.
Amu: uh, sure.
Amu’s POV
I was surprised when Rima said Nagehiko’s name, I haven’t seen him in ages! I haven’t seen him since Seiyo Elementary. I remember introducing Rima to Nagehiko, but then what have they been doing? I sat there thinking for a minute until Nagehiko said something.
Nagehiko: Amu-Chan, how have you been?
Amu: I’ve been good, except for the incident with Tadase last year.
Nagehiko: huh? What happened?
Amu: I was together with him for 3 years, those 3 years I was so happy, and then he dumps me for a guy! I found out he was gay, and I was so pissed.
(Flashback)
Tadase: Hinamori-san?
Amu: What’s with the sudden formality? Is there something wrong?
Tadase: I want to break up with you.
Amu: what? why?!
Tadase: I…I’M GAY!
I stood there dumbfounded by what Tadase just said, and I just shooed him out the door and slammed it right in his face.
(End flashback)
Nagehiko: oh, that incident…
Amu: you knew?
Nagehiko: Rima told me.
Rima came in from the kitchen with 3 cups of tea and looked at Nagehiko. I just sat there wondering what they were thinking.
(Narrator’s POV)
Rima put down the tray of tea with some snacks and gave Nagehiko a look signaling that they should tell Amu the news.
Rima: Amu, we’re just going to come right out and say it…
Nagehiko & Rima: We’re getting married!
Amu stood there dumbfounded, then finally realized what they had said, and squealed like mad.
Amu: AHH! No way! Are you serious! I’m so happy for you guys!
Amu got up and hugged both of them.
Nagehiko: haha, so I was right. This was her reaction.
Rima: that’s not all, Amu; we want you to be the maid of Honor.
Amu: Are you kidding?! Of course I will! Have you chosen the best man yet?
Nagehiko: Not yet, Tadase says he’s busy during the day of our wedding. Kukai and Utau are coming—
Amu: Kukai and Utau? Since when were they together?
Rima: since a month ago, and also Kairi is coming with Yaya, even Kairi’s sister Yukari and Yuu Nikaido are coming.
Amu: Wow, I’ve missed a lot. How about Ran, Miki, Suu, Dia and those people?
Nagehiko: Yeah, they’re coming too.
Amu: Wow, I can’t wait to see them again.
Rima: Also, Amu, can you sing at the wedding party? We want you to sing a song, you sing so beautifully.
Amu: Well, I could but- -
Nagehiko: Then it’s settled! Amu-Chan will sing at the wedding party!
Rima: Great! Nagehiko, could I talk to Amu alone for minute please?
Nagehiko: Sure, I’ll be in the kitchen.
When Nagehiko left, Rima stared at Amu with a look saying “get a new boyfriend already!”
Amu: R-Rima, why are you looking at me like that?
Rima: let’s see…ever since Tadase dumped you, you’ve given up on love, why?
Amu: because every time I go out with someone, they’re all jerks! And after a week I catch them cheating on me! That is why I’ve given up!
Rima: well, don’t give up just yet…
Amu: huh?
Rima: never mind. Anyway, practice a song for my wedding; it’s in 2 weeks. Just meet up with me here next week because I need to pick my wedding dress.
Amu: Sure. Oh no! I’m late for work! Sorry Rima, I have to go, Suzuki-san will complain if I’m late.
Rima: Sure, Bye Amu.
When Amu left, Nagehiko was leaning against the doorframe.
Rima: you hear that?
Nagehiko: every single word. I’m going to go call Tadase and ask to get him to come.
Rima: great.

Tara: Ahh, I'm finally done! 4 pages but it took forever.
Amu: YAY! I'm happy for Rima and Nagehiko!
Ikuto: Hey! when do I appear?
Tara: Calm down, you MIGHT appear in the next chapter.
Kukai: yo!
Tara: Kukai! *glomps*
Ikuto: oi, have you forgotten about me?
Tadase: *reads chapter* you made me gay?!?
Tara: oh, hi tadaga--I mean Tadase, I didn't notice you were here.
Tadase: I was here the whole time!
Ran, Miki, Suu, Dia: Please R&R!
Tara: Aww, I love you guys! Thanks for reading!


hehe i like how you put ikuto and the other's nyuu it's very nice that part please keep going and put ikuto soonnnnn
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I will, he's in the next chappie which i'm currently writing as we speak and its ma birthday! =]
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awsome i love it will u read mine pplllzz it's awsome it's amuto too iput my self in but i don't apear for a bit so pplllzz read mine hears the link
http://www.crunchyroll.com/forumtopic-345047/AliceXchara.html#16995011
it's funny romance and i might put in a little bit of drama but i'm one of those ones that like happly ever after only with out the bad guys also i put the 2 i hate the most together tadase and uatu then kukai and yaya i put rima with Naghiko as well oh ya it's a combo of shugo chara and gakuen alice everyones fav pearing hope u like it


i love ur fanfic! i have it on faves on ff.!!
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Tara: YAY! Next chappie!
Amu: you seem over excited.
Tara: well, YA, don’t ask why.
Ikuto: okay…
Tara: This is going to be a bit rushed, coz I have to go out soon. I’ll be updating probably like once or twice a week, and maybe another chappie tomorrow because it’s a holiday for me, and also my birthday tomorrow! (October 6th)
Yuuki (from Vampire knight): Tara-Chan doesn’t own Shugo Chara!
Tara: Thanks! Wait a sec…Where’d you come from!?
Amu: on with the story!

(Flashback to chapter 1)
When Amu left, Nagehiko was leaning against the doorframe.
Rima: you hear that?
Nagehiko: every single word. I’m going to go call Tadase and ask to get him to come.
Rima: great.
(End flashback)


(Nagehiko’s POV)

Nagehiko: hey Tadase, I need a favor…
Tadase: Sure, what do you need?
Nagehiko: I need you to get a certain person to come to my wedding…
Tadase: Sure, and by the way, I can come to your wedding, I cancelled what I had to do that day, and why do you need him to come?
Nagehiko: To help a friend…
I hung up on Tadase, and told Rima everything was as planned.
Rima: Perfect.

(Rima’s POV)

As soon as Nagehiko told me that he was coming, I smiled evilly. (A/N: Is that the right word?)

(Amu’s POV)

I rushed to work but I was late anyway. Suzuki-san started to yell at me.
Suzuki-san: Amu-Chan, YOU’RE LATE!
Amu: Gomen ne, I was helping someone with wedding preparations
Suzuki-san: AH! You mean Nagehiko’s and Rima’s?
Amu: H-how did you know?
Suzuki-san: Rima-Chan told me herself!
Amu: A-ah…
Suzuki-san: anyway, GET TO WORK!
Amu: H-hai!
I started to take orders from a table in the far corner, and as usual, the guys were eyeing me, but I got used to it.
Amu: May I take your order?
Guy 1: Hey cutie, how about I order you?
I just rolled my eyes and ignored him, and his friend smacked his head.
Guy 2: Sorry for my friend’s flirty behavior, we’ll just order a Mocha latte.
Amu: coming right up.
After my shift, I was exhausted and went home, I bumped into someone near the park.
Amu: Ah! S-sorry, I wasn’t looking where I was going.
I looked up to see a gorgeous looking guy with azure-blue hair and sapphire blue eyes but then quickly looked away until he said something.
Mysterious guy: It’s okay; just watch where you’re going next time.
Amu: H-hai.
I quickly walked away before he could see my flushed face.

(Mysterious guy’s POV) – (A/N: This is so obvious on who it is, isn’t it?)

Who was that girl? She was so cute, her strawberry pink hair, her honey-golden eyes, wait, why am I thinking about this? She looked like she was around 20…I shrugged it off and continued walking.

(Amu’s POV)

That was so embarrassing! I have to seriously keep my mind focused even if I’m tired! I finally got home and flopped on my bed. I then realized I had to practice a song for Rima’s wedding party. I went to my CD collection and started searching for a song to sing.
I managed to finally find one and started practicing. That turned out pretty good if I do say so myself, I thought.
Amu: Look’s like I’m going to have to practice this all week. What joy…
A week later
My phone rang while I was still asleep, knowing the only one who would call me at this time…Rima.
Amu: Rima…what do you want? It’s only 8:30am…
Rima: Well then, get your lazy ass out of bed and get down here! I need help picking my wedding dress!
Amu: ugh…a week has passed already…?
Rima: yes, now GET UP!
She screamed into the phone, my eyes shot wide open, realizing that if I didn’t wake up soon, she would’ve came over and dragged me out of bed if she had too.
Amu: alright, alright, I’m up.
Rima: You better be.
She said those words in such a scary tone; I practically jumped out of bed instantly to get ready. I met her at the café I worked at, ‘The crescent café’. It was a homey little café, and it was pretty popular. After Rima and I had some coffee, she dragged me out to the most expensive dress shop in town.
Amu: R-Rima… Are you serious about getting your dress here? This is the most expensive place there is…
Rima: Amu, apparently you’ve forgotten, but I own the company, I designed all these dresses…
Amu: oh, right…
We went in, and she showed me tons of designs then tried some on, in the end, she picked a long flowing white dress with flowing sleeves. My jaw dropped when she tried it on and I said instantly that it was the one.
Rima: great! Now I have a bunch of designs for you to see and try on for your dress.
Amu: Rima, is this really necessary?
Rima: but, of course! I want this wedding to be perfect.
When she gave a load of dresses to try on, I couldn’t help but laugh at her eagerness. Normally, I’d expect her to be really nervous before her wedding, but she was the complete opposite. I finally came to a dress, which was a red, knee-length dress with a bow at one corner of the dress.
Rima: That looks so good on you! We found your dress! By the way, have you found a song to sing at my wedding yet?
Amu: Yep, but you’re going to have to wait until your wedding party to find out what I sing!
I just winked at her and she puffed her cheeks at me.
Rima: Mou…fine…
Amu: haha! Don’t worry; just wait a few more days.

(Tadase’s POV)

Ugh…this is so awkward…as soon as I kissed the guy, I thought I was gay…now I just feel uncomfortable and awkward…I was drunk, for god’s sake! I didn’t know what the hell I was doing! And yet, because of that, I broke up with Amu! Stupid, stupid Tadase! Think before you do anything next time! I hope Amu hasn’t found someone else yet…I know I’ll see her at Rima’s wedding! I can hopefully make up with Amu there… (A/N: Did that seem a bit straight forward?)
On the day of the wedding…

(Amu’s POV)

As soon as I got to the hotel Rima was having her wedding party in, I thought she wouldn’t be nervous…Yeah right! She was as nervous as ever! And I thought she would be calm, cool and collected, but oh man, was I wrong.
Rima: AHH! Amu! Why am I so nervous!?
Amu: Rima! Hold still! I'm trying to fix your hair! If you move, the hair curler will burn you!
Rima: I can't help it though...its my wedding day...
Amu: calm down Rima, you'll be fine, just listen to the priest saying his boring things, and you'll easily know when to speak.
Rima laughs
Amu: what's so funny?
Rima: haha, nothing, you always know when to calm me down
Amu: anyway, good luck its about time for you to go through those doors and walk down that isle, now move!
Rima: thanks Amu.

Tara: Heyy, hope you like that!
Yuuki: I liked it!
Tara: Okay, SERIOUSLY, where did you come from!?
Yuuki: oh right! There was a reason I came here…oh yeah! Vampire knight season 2 is out!
Tara: Seriously!? Awesome!
Ikuto: Have you completely forgotten that we’re in a Shugo Chara fanfic?
Tara: oops.
Amu: it’s okay, Tara-Chan!
Tara: Arigatou.
Dia: Anyway…R&R please!
Tara: AHH! DIA! YAY!
Dia: Gotta run!
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Chapter 2 posted!
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girlylove23 wrote:

awsome i love it will u read mine pplllzz it's awsome it's amuto too iput my self in but i don't apear for a bit so pplllzz read mine hears the link
http://www.crunchyroll.com/forumtopic-345047/AliceXchara.html#16995011
it's funny romance and i might put in a little bit of drama but i'm one of those ones that like happly ever after only with out the bad guys also i put the 2 i hate the most together tadase and uatu then kukai and yaya i put rima with Naghiko as well oh ya it's a combo of shugo chara and gakuen alice everyones fav pearing hope u like it


i love ur fanfic! i have it on faves on ff.!!


thx i'm gladi'm going to update anyday now i'm sick so it's hard for me to think
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OMGGG KAWAAAAAIII STORRRYYYY 88DDDDDDD! MORE PLEASE.
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was that a bit straight-forward? please tell me and review pleasE!
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this stroy is cute and write more soon
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lmao i love your little conversastions at the begining and ending of your chapter, lmao`~
funny stuff...funny....
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girlylove23 wrote:

awsome i love it will u read mine pplllzz it's awsome it's amuto too iput my self in but i don't apear for a bit so pplllzz read mine hears the link
http://www.crunchyroll.com/forumtopic-345047/AliceXchara.html#16995011
it's funny romance and i might put in a little bit of drama but i'm one of those ones that like happly ever after only with out the bad guys also i put the 2 i hate the most together tadase and uatu then kukai and yaya i put rima with Naghiko as well oh ya it's a combo of shugo chara and gakuen alice everyones fav pearing hope u like it


i love ur fanfic! i have it on faves on ff.!!


thx i have cpter 3 up and i want to see about a thing i'm putting in on chapter 13/14 for the cultre fest
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realy good i love ur story
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I'll be updating probably next week or this sunday, coz i have exams this week, so please be patient!
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