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The setup
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i love this story
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hi! I finished meh exams today! but from tomorrow to saturday, i wont be online, so yeah, as always, please be patient! i'll be updating on sunday or next week!
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Okaaay 8DDD Keepz it up again 8D
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Chapter 3

Tara: Next chappie!
Ikuto: It’s about time…
Tara: I’m sorry, Ikuto, what was that? *Glares*
Ikuto: Nothing!
Amu: Tara-Chan… calm down…
Tara: I’m okay, Thanks Amu-Chan! Ikuto! Disclaimer!
Ikuto: again?! Why me?!
Tara: Tadamu fic...
Tadase pops from nowhere: Tadamu!? AWESOME!
Tara: AHH! Tadase! Where the hell did you come from?!
Tadase: I wasn’t noticed once again…


(Flashback to chapter 3)

As soon as I got to the hotel Rima was having her wedding party in, I thought she wouldn’t be nervous…Yeah right! She was as nervous as ever! And I thought she would be calm, cool and collected, but oh man, was I wrong.
Rima: AHH! Amu! Why am I so nervous!?
Amu: Rima! Hold still! I'm trying to fix your hair! If you move, the hair curler will burn you!
Rima: I can't help it though...its my wedding day...
Amu: calm down Rima, you'll be fine, just listen to the priest saying his boring things, and you'll easily know when to speak.
Rima laughs
Amu: what's so funny?
Rima: haha, nothing, you always know when to calm me down
Amu: anyway, good luck its about time for you to go through those doors and walk down that isle, now move!
Rima: thanks Amu.
(End of flashback…wow, long flashback)


Amu’s POV

When Rima and I got to the church, I didn’t expect to see the one person that made me give up on love. I thought it was a trick of the eye, so I just ignored it. I went into the church and stood opposite of Nagehiko. I looked at the guy behind him who seemed familiar with azure blue hair and sapphire eyes in a black tux. After the wedding, we all headed to the Shangri la, the hotel Rima and Nagehiko was having their wedding party in. (sorry, I was being lazy so I didn’t go into details of the wedding.)
Rima: oh my god, Amu! I’m married!
Amu: Rima…you’re over excited…and I can’t breathe…
Rima: oops, sorry Amu.
Nagehiko: Amu-Chan! It’s almost time for you to sing!
Rima: by the way, Nagehiko would like to introduce someone to you later on.
Amu: what? Oh no, Rima, you didn’t!
Rima: hmm, maybe I did, maybe I didn’t.
Amu: You did! Didn’t you?!
Rima: oh! Time for you to sing!
Amu: Rima! Why you little—

Suddenly I was on stage and there was a spotlight on me. I had to make a speech on how I’ve known Rima and Nagehiko and then I had to sing.

Amu: Good evening everybody, I hope everyone is having a good time. When I heard Rima and Nagehiko were getting married, I was so happy for them. I’ve known Rima ever since elementary school, same with Nagehiko. Nagehiko was one of my first best friends when I entered Seiyo Elementary, and then left for a while. Soon after he left, I met Rima who was always acting calm and cool, but I found out she really loves to laugh, but she hides it. Both, Rima and I both had split personalities and we’ve been friends ever since. Anyway, enough of my speech. I was asked by Rima and Nagehiko to sing.

Amu: This song is dedicated to the newly weds.

(Love story – Taylor Swift, which I do not own)

We were both young when I first saw you
I closed my eyes and the flashback starts
I'm standing there
On a balcony in summer air

See the lights; see the party, the ball gowns
I see you make your way through the crowd
And say hello
Little did I know.

That you were Romeo, you were throwing pebbles
And my daddy said, "stay away from Juliet"
And I was crying on the staircase
Begging you, please don't go
And I said

Romeo, take me somewhere we can be alone
I'll be waiting, all there's left to do is run
You'll be the prince and I'll be the princess
It's a love story
Baby, just say yes

So, I sneak out to the garden to see you
We keep quiet cause we're dead if they knew
So close your eyes
Escape this town for a little while

Oh oh
Cause you were Romeo, I was a scarlet letter
And my daddy said, "stay away from Juliet"
But you were everything to me
I was begging you, please don't go
And I said

Romeo, take me somewhere we can be alone
I'll be waiting, all there's left to do is run
You'll be the prince and I'll be the princess
It's a love story
Baby, just say yes

Romeo, save me
They try to tell me how I feel
This love is difficult, but it's real
Don't be afraid, we'll make it out of this mess
It's a love story
Baby, just say yes

Oh oh

I got tired of waiting
Wondering if you were ever coming around
My faith in you is fading
When I met you on the outskirts of town
And I said

Romeo, save me
I've been feeling so alone
I keep waiting for you, but you never come
Is this in my head
I don't know what to think
He knelt to the ground and pulled out a ring
And said

Marry me, Juliet, you'll never have to be alone
I love you and that's all I really know
I talked to your dad
Go pick out a white dress
It's a love story
Baby, just say yes

Oh oh oh
Oh oh oh oh

'Cause we were both young when I first saw you

When I ended the song, the crowd burst into applause. I had fun singing, and Rima and Nagehiko came and thanked me for singing such a beautiful song. Looks like what I saw earlier wasn’t a trick of the eye, it was really the guy who broke my heart a year ago… Tadase. I found myself staring at him and then Nagehiko broke me out of my trance.

Tara: I know, I thought that Ikuto would actually say something in this chapter, but now I know that he WILL be in the next one.
Ikuto: I better be…*glares*
Tara: Amu-Chan! Ikuto’s scaring me!
Amu: Ikuto, leave Tara-Chan alone.
Ikuto: *Grabs Amu* Aww, Your so cute. *Blows into Amu’s ear.*
Amu: AHH! Pervert!
Miki: uh huh…Please R&R!
Tara: Miki! That’s my line!
Miki: Gomen ne, Tara-Chan!

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Chapter 3 posted!! YAY!

as always! please review!
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Chapter 3 posted!! YAY!

as always! please review!


chapter 4 please? IT'S AWESOME. I mean, u TOTALLY have potential.
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wow i cant wait for ikuto to have better part keep it up
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Tadagay

omg omg omg omg i love that song!!!!!!!!! i love Taylor Swift!!!!!

yea! Ikuto to the scene

update as fast as u can!!

u should put this on fanfiction.net u have a pen name so why not? this is very good for ur first story ^^ wait, is this ur first?
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Tadagay

omg omg omg omg i love that song!!!!!!!!! i love Taylor Swift!!!!!

yea! Ikuto to the scene

update as fast as u can!!

u should put this on fanfiction.net u have a pen name so why not? this is very good for ur first story ^^ wait, is this ur first?


lol, yeah, its my first, but i'm confused on how to put a story on fanfiction.net...help? anyway...i'll try to update as fast as i can, and it turns out my exams weren't over yet...stupid CAT's... (not the animal) =.='', but i've finally finished them so i'll be updating a bit faster...maybe. BUT, i WILL be updating next week, coz its my half term break. so, hope u can wait til then!
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sweettara10 wrote:


Natsuya801923 wrote:

Tadagay

omg omg omg omg i love that song!!!!!!!!! i love Taylor Swift!!!!!

yea! Ikuto to the scene

update as fast as u can!!

u should put this on fanfiction.net u have a pen name so why not? this is very good for ur first story ^^ wait, is this ur first?


lol, yeah, its my first, but i'm confused on how to put a story on fanfiction.net...help? anyway...i'll try to update as fast as i can, and it turns out my exams weren't over yet...stupid CAT's... (not the animal) =.='', but i've finally finished them so i'll be updating a bit faster...maybe. BUT, i WILL be updating next week, coz its my half term break. so, hope u can wait til then!


it's very good for ur first let's see, if u don't understand what i'm saying, you'll have to search around the settings in ur profile to find out how. you should do this on another tab so u can switch back and forth between this tab and the fanfiction tab. ok, here goes:

1. all these chapters, do you have it on Word or Microsoft Word or something? you have to have it on there or it won't work.

2. right when you log in, you'll see your profile settings, right? on the left side, there's a list of things you can edit. click on "documents" it's right under "account"

3. at the middle of the page, it says "Upload New Document" in a dark blue heading. do u see it? under that is "label" you can type whatever you want to name ur document. i always do, "Love is Painful chapter 1" or something like that. then below that says, "File on computer" click on "browse" next to it and lok for ur document with ur first chapter.

4. after you found ur document, press "submit document"

5. the page would refresh by itself and u'll see ur document under "Document Manager" click on ur document or "Edit/Preview" either one is fine.

6. then it'll show you ur chapter. you can edit all you want it. after you're done, click "save changes"

7. after you save it, go back to the left side and click "Stories"

8. now since this is ur new story, i'm not sure if i remember. when you click on "Stories" i think it tells you to go to "Guidelines". "Guidelines" isn't on the left side of the page like most links are. it's somewhere on the right when you press "Stories". ok, click on "Guidelines"

9. then it has all the rules. scroll to the bottom of that passage and click on that thing that says you accept and understand the rules or whatever.

10. next to where you pressed "Guidelines", click on "New Story"

11. follow all those steps they told you to do.

12. after you picked the categories and stuff, you should be able to type the summary of your story and the main characters and genre and all those stuff. the last thing you do is select your document. pick the document that has your first chapter. after you're done all those, click "submit story"

and it should show up ur new story. i think you have to do something else but i forget. it'll also take a while before it's up on the internet. i hope that helps!!!

and i hope u update fast >< good luck on ur exams!! wait, CAT? our's it SAT
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HEYY! people, you won't have to wait much longer! because i've almost finished writing chapter 4! =]
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sweettara10 wrote:


Natsuya801923 wrote:

Tadagay

omg omg omg omg i love that song!!!!!!!!! i love Taylor Swift!!!!!

yea! Ikuto to the scene

update as fast as u can!!

u should put this on fanfiction.net u have a pen name so why not? this is very good for ur first story ^^ wait, is this ur first?


lol, yeah, its my first, but i'm confused on how to put a story on fanfiction.net...help? anyway...i'll try to update as fast as i can, and it turns out my exams weren't over yet...stupid CAT's... (not the animal) =.='', but i've finally finished them so i'll be updating a bit faster...maybe. BUT, i WILL be updating next week, coz its my half term break. so, hope u can wait til then!


it's very good for ur first let's see, if u don't understand what i'm saying, you'll have to search around the settings in ur profile to find out how. you should do this on another tab so u can switch back and forth between this tab and the fanfiction tab. ok, here goes:

1. all these chapters, do you have it on Word or Microsoft Word or something? you have to have it on there or it won't work.

2. right when you log in, you'll see your profile settings, right? on the left side, there's a list of things you can edit. click on "documents" it's right under "account"

3. at the middle of the page, it says "Upload New Document" in a dark blue heading. do u see it? under that is "label" you can type whatever you want to name ur document. i always do, "Love is Painful chapter 1" or something like that. then below that says, "File on computer" click on "browse" next to it and lok for ur document with ur first chapter.

4. after you found ur document, press "submit document"

5. the page would refresh by itself and u'll see ur document under "Document Manager" click on ur document or "Edit/Preview" either one is fine.

6. then it'll show you ur chapter. you can edit all you want it. after you're done, click "save changes"

7. after you save it, go back to the left side and click "Stories"

8. now since this is ur new story, i'm not sure if i remember. when you click on "Stories" i think it tells you to go to "Guidelines". "Guidelines" isn't on the left side of the page like most links are. it's somewhere on the right when you press "Stories". ok, click on "Guidelines"

9. then it has all the rules. scroll to the bottom of that passage and click on that thing that says you accept and understand the rules or whatever.

10. next to where you pressed "Guidelines", click on "New Story"

11. follow all those steps they told you to do.

12. after you picked the categories and stuff, you should be able to type the summary of your story and the main characters and genre and all those stuff. the last thing you do is select your document. pick the document that has your first chapter. after you're done all those, click "submit story"

and it should show up ur new story. i think you have to do something else but i forget. it'll also take a while before it's up on the internet. i hope that helps!!!

and i hope u update fast >< good luck on ur exams!! wait, CAT? our's it SAT


YAY! thank youu! i've uploaded my story on fanfiction.net!
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hi everyone! from now on, i'm putting my stories on fanfiction.net! heres the link:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4600438/1/The_Setup
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Natsuya801923 wrote:


sweettara10 wrote:


Natsuya801923 wrote:

Tadagay

omg omg omg omg i love that song!!!!!!!!! i love Taylor Swift!!!!!

yea! Ikuto to the scene

update as fast as u can!!

u should put this on fanfiction.net u have a pen name so why not? this is very good for ur first story ^^ wait, is this ur first?


lol, yeah, its my first, but i'm confused on how to put a story on fanfiction.net...help? anyway...i'll try to update as fast as i can, and it turns out my exams weren't over yet...stupid CAT's... (not the animal) =.='', but i've finally finished them so i'll be updating a bit faster...maybe. BUT, i WILL be updating next week, coz its my half term break. so, hope u can wait til then!


it's very good for ur first let's see, if u don't understand what i'm saying, you'll have to search around the settings in ur profile to find out how. you should do this on another tab so u can switch back and forth between this tab and the fanfiction tab. ok, here goes:

1. all these chapters, do you have it on Word or Microsoft Word or something? you have to have it on there or it won't work.

2. right when you log in, you'll see your profile settings, right? on the left side, there's a list of things you can edit. click on "documents" it's right under "account"

3. at the middle of the page, it says "Upload New Document" in a dark blue heading. do u see it? under that is "label" you can type whatever you want to name ur document. i always do, "Love is Painful chapter 1" or something like that. then below that says, "File on computer" click on "browse" next to it and lok for ur document with ur first chapter.

4. after you found ur document, press "submit document"

5. the page would refresh by itself and u'll see ur document under "Document Manager" click on ur document or "Edit/Preview" either one is fine.

6. then it'll show you ur chapter. you can edit all you want it. after you're done, click "save changes"

7. after you save it, go back to the left side and click "Stories"

8. now since this is ur new story, i'm not sure if i remember. when you click on "Stories" i think it tells you to go to "Guidelines". "Guidelines" isn't on the left side of the page like most links are. it's somewhere on the right when you press "Stories". ok, click on "Guidelines"

9. then it has all the rules. scroll to the bottom of that passage and click on that thing that says you accept and understand the rules or whatever.

10. next to where you pressed "Guidelines", click on "New Story"

11. follow all those steps they told you to do.

12. after you picked the categories and stuff, you should be able to type the summary of your story and the main characters and genre and all those stuff. the last thing you do is select your document. pick the document that has your first chapter. after you're done all those, click "submit story"

and it should show up ur new story. i think you have to do something else but i forget. it'll also take a while before it's up on the internet. i hope that helps!!!

and i hope u update fast >< good luck on ur exams!! wait, CAT? our's it SAT


YAY! thank youu! i've uploaded my story on fanfiction.net!


no prob i'm glad it worked!
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hi everyone! from now on, i'm putting my stories on fanfiction.net! heres the link:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4600438/1/The_Setup


that's great but i still think u should post it here because some people prefer to read it here than on fanfiction
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