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Story of Gakuen Alice.
Posted 10/4/08 , edited 10/4/08
Okay this is the same forum as: A story of Natsume, Mikan and Ruka. sort of :D
okay i will begin xD

"Okay class..sit down pleas!" Narumi began.
Everyone looked up, at Narumi and started to sit down, on their seats.
"We have two new students!" Narumi continued, with an happy voice.
Mikan looked up right away. "Cool!! new students...so that means new friends!!!" she thought joifull.
Narumi looked next to him, to two girls.
"I hope you will help the new girls..okay class?" and Narumi started to look at everyone.
"Yes.." the hole class said.
Natsume, and Ruka didn't hear anything what Narumi just said.
"Okay..bye!!" Narumi said, and walked away from the class.
The two girls where just standing there in front of the class.
Suddenly Permy spoke. "Ey..what is your names, and Alice?"
"My name is Mi.." the girl replied. Mi had long, brown hair, and she had blue eyes.
"And i have, the Music Alice.." Mi continued.
"Music Alice?" Mikan asked confused.
"Thats an Alice, that you can make people sleepy, and you can sing, and you can open doors, who are locked, if your singing an melodie.." Iinchou explaned, as he looked behind him to Mikan.
"Whoah..thats an amazing Alice!!" Mikan said suprised, as she smiled at Mi.
Suddenly, the girl who was standing next to Mi spoke. "And i am Rhiley.." Rhiley had, black long hair, that was in an pony taile, and she had her sleeves tucked up, and she had light green eyes.
"And i have the Love Alice.." she continued.
Everyone was an little confused. "Whats an Love Alice?" they asked, as they looked at Iinchou.
"Uhhmm...the Love Alice is that you can make people in love..i think..and you can feel then, the true feelings that people feel for each other...am i right?" and Iinchou looked at Rhiley.
Rhiley nodded.
"Mi? Rhiley?" they heard, at the back from the classroom.
It was Natsume and Ruka. "Do you know them?" Hotaru asked, as she looked at them.
"Well..we we're childhood friends.." Ruka replied.
"Hi Natsume and Ruka, long time..isn't it?" Mi said, smiling.
Natsume and Ruka nodded.
The two girls, walked to their seats.
Rhiley next to Hotaru, and Mi next to Mikan.

* okay..* sigh * that was hard!!!!...i hope you will continue and srry if its long...*
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WOW that is longgg!!!!! hope this forum will turn out well!
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WOW that is longgg!!!!! hope this forum will turn out well!

yup i hope too..but uhh.. i want to stop..but i just keep going lol...but continue!! and do you like it?? xD
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cherryblossomkiwi wrote:




WOW that is longgg!!!!! hope this forum will turn out well!

yup i hope too..but uhh.. i want to stop..but i just keep going lol...but continue!! and do you like it?? xD


that is so freaking hilarious i wanna die. dude. i'll try to do good on this one.
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When the class ended, Rhiley hurried out of the classroom, Ruka, seeing this, looked at Natsume and followed her.
Mi and Mikan stooded up together.
"Hi Mi! i'm Mikan, welcome to Alice Academy!"
Mi stared blankly at Mikan with her blue eyes, "..." And she walked away without saying anything.
Mikan looked hurt.
Hotaru came over, "She's probably just nervous since it's her first day here. Don't worry about it."
"Yeah, you're right" Mikan smiled.
"Don't even bother with them."
Mikan jumped, "Natsume?"
"Just stay away from them." His voice was low and threathening.

*just adding some secretives to the story lol.*
Posted 10/4/08
man this is just too good!

Ruka followed closely behind Rhiley making sure not to loose her tracks. Her weightless body allowed her to continue to move with grace similar to a gazelle, landing on her toes with agileness. There was no doubt about it, she was definitely difficult to follow because of her speed, but Ruka managed. She abruptly halted for a few moments in front of a door leading to her desire. Her emerald eyes glistened from the sun's ray and her jet black ponytail flew with the wind. Her beauty astounded him. She found what she was looking for. Ruka stated to himself.
"Hey Rhiley. Long time no see." He came out of the darkness from the corner, but still keeping his distance. She didn't reply but only looked at him with a melancholy expression. She opened her mouth slightly but silenced her secrets away and walked the opposite direction.

Posted 10/4/08
* damn....i can't think of something but i will try...and your sound an little to exciting RhileyxD..*

"W..What do you mean?" Mikan asked, as Mikan looked at Natsume's cold eyes.
"Just stay away, from them!.." Natsume said again, with sirious face.
"Why?" Mikan asked.
"I say just stay away from them!!.. have you heard me Polkadots!"
Mikan started to get angry. "What is your problem!..i was just talking to her! thats all!"
Natsume looked only at her, with siriously in his eyes.
Hotaru, started to have an evil smile on her face. "I know what your up to..Natsume.."
Natsume looked an bit confused at Hotaru.
"You don't want us to be with them...because you want them for your self!..you are in love, with Rhiley and Mi!" Hotaru said, with evil smile.
Natsume and Mikan's eyes started to get big.
"What?" and Mikan looked at Natsume, with suprise in her eyes.
"No i'm not!! don't act stupid!!..and i mean what i just said!! leave them alone! and stay away from them!" and Natsume hurried out of the classroom.
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man this is just too good!

Ruka followed closely behind Rhiley making sure not to loose her tracks. Her weightless body allowed her to continue to move with grace similar to a gazelle, landing on her toes with agileness. There was no doubt about it, she was definitely difficult to follow because of her speed, but Ruka managed. She abruptly halted for a few moments in front of a door leading to her desire. Her emerald eyes glistened from the sun's ray and her jet black ponytail flew with the wind. Her beauty astounded him. She found what she was looking for. Ruka stated to himself.
"Hey Rhiley. Long time no see." He came out of the darkness from the corner, but still keeping his distance. She didn't reply but only looked at him with a melancholy expression. She opened her mouth slightly but silenced her secrets away and walked the opposite direction.



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Mi silently walked closed the door behind her and headed to her room by herself, Mr. Narumi had shown her earlier.
She plopped herself down on her bed and signed holding up a crumpled piece of paper.
"Natsume...."
her fists clenched together and she threw the paper across the room.
Mi suddenly started humming to herself, and slowly she fell asleep.
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Mikan walked down the hallway, thinking about Natsume.
"Geez...whats whit Natsume..." she thought. "And..is he really..in love with..Mi..and Rhiley?"
Suddenly she stood still. "What in the world am i thinking!!" Mikan yelled to her self. "I don't care about that!!...i will go to Mi
maybe she will now talk to me"
and Mikan walked away.

"You..know you must keep this an secret!" the mistirious man said, against Rhiley.
Rhiley nodded.
"Only..you..and someone else knowes it...if you know what i mean.."
Rhiley didn't reply, she nodded only.
"Wach out for..her!" said the mistyrious man, and dissapeard in darkness from the corner.
Rhiley, stood there for an moment alone, and sighed.
And she walked away.
Ruka didn't know what that person, and Rhiley haved talked about.
But he was confused. "What was that all about?" he thought.

* okay...so...one rule...don't make this as an Chatroom!! plz continue!! xD
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rhiley wrote:

man this is just too good!

Ruka followed closely behind Rhiley making sure not to loose her tracks. Her weightless body allowed her to continue to move with grace similar to a gazelle, landing on her toes with agileness. There was no doubt about it, she was definitely difficult to follow because of her speed, but Ruka managed. She abruptly halted for a few moments in front of a door leading to her desire. Her emerald eyes glistened from the sun's ray and her jet black ponytail flew with the wind. Her beauty astounded him. She found what she was looking for. Ruka stated to himself.
"Hey Rhiley. Long time no see." He came out of the darkness from the corner, but still keeping his distance. She didn't reply but only looked at him with a melancholy expression. She opened her mouth slightly but silenced her secrets away and walked the opposite direction.





haha thats all i am going to describe. the rest will be just action and romance, i just needed to throw out the new characters description. don't worry, yours will be just as good.
Posted 10/4/08
okay, here we go.

Mikan quickly paced in the classroom waiting for someone to come back to know where Mi was. I can't just go run around campuss randomly, she might just come back here. She stomped her foot on the ground with impatience. She silently stroded towards her seat to sit herself, but instead of sitting in her seat she placed herself in Natsume's seat. Natsume... The door slam echoed throught the room, which made Mikan fall out of her chair. She replied to the echo hoping someone would reply from making the slam.
"Wha-what the hell! you scared me!"
There was no sound. Mikan lifted herself up off the ground and watched Hotaru enter the room with Iichou on her side.
"Sorry Mikan that we scared you." Was the reply she as hoping for from Iichou.
"Where's Mi?" She snapped.
"We just saw her down the hall walking towards the classroom, why?"
The door's opening intrupped their bandy and it was who she was hoping for.
"I have to talk to you, Mi!" Mikan yelled and Mi nodded.
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They were standing under a tall tree outside of the academy.
"So..."
"Umm... Natsume said some really..."
"What did he say?" Mikan had captured Mi's attention.
"...that I should stay away from you." Mikan finished hesitantly.

Not far from there Ruka was taking a stroll when he spotted the two girls. He quickly hid behind a tree, "Natsume won't like this.."

Mi showed no kind of expression, "And you're telling me this because..."
"I... I..."
"This is a waste of time." Mi exclaimed and started to walk off.
"I want us to be friends!"
Mi stopped dead in her track, a flash of memories surged inside her. "I want to be friends" echoed in her head.
Slowly, Mi turned around, her eyes hidden from view, "Sorry, but I can't. It's for your own benefit."
Posted 10/5/08
* Whoah!! Rhiley and Mi!! you two are sooooo gooood!! now i can't even think of something to write!!...well i will try..*


Mikan was an little bit confused, and hurt. "What?..why?"
"I'm sorry..but i can't.." Mi replied, and walked away quickly.
Mikan stood there only, with confuse in her eyes.
"Whats..with her?" Mikan said against her self, and suddenly she started to get angry.
"Maybe its all because Natsume!!..i think he haves said something against Mi, and that she is scared from me..or something like that!" "I will look for him.."
And Mikan walked away angrilly, looking for Natsume.
Ruka was hiding behind the tree, and sighed.
"Natsume..isn't going to like this." he said again softly. "I must find Natsume first!"
Ruka walked quickly away.

* i hope this is good.. *
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