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Posted 11/7/08
sry ^-^
(YEAH!! i agree ginji is so cute~ //// and noelle...noelle is noelle..XD lol)
ok lets seee...
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AGE: hmm over 11 maybe
SPOILERS: Mild

A girl named Noelle has been in love for a long time. No its not a person, or animal. It is the sky. ever sence the day her brother, Ginji showed her that it's possible to get closer to the sky she has been working hard to reach there with her brothers help. Then one day a chance occured. Six heros came to her town Sheridan looking help. They said they needed to fly. But the best pilot crashed earlier. Ginji, the best pilot was hurt because of that crash. It was impossible to pilot Albiore with out a pilot like him and with the short time they had there was no time to learn how to fly themselfs. So hearing this Noelle of course took this chance to live her dream. She wasnt as good as her brother but....IT WAS TIME TO REACH THE SKY! (WOOHOOO)!!
Will Noelle get her chance to fly? Or will her childhood friend stop her!!

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OK what do u think? ill probably b able to update 3-5 pages a week but well not these maybe 2 weeks because first i have to search the ways of making a doujin first ^-^ OFF TO THE INTERNET!!......haha.......im very busy with school and my lessons soo itll b hard to update...sry...but ill try my best!!!! hope it gets approved :3 if it does...... tips would b helpful sence its my first doujin after all

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Posted 11/7/08
Alright, so mild spoilers and rated PG...you're approved!!

As for advice, all I can say is make sure you have your background information right....I named my main character thinking he would be named after Guy's swordmanship style....but it was the Sigmund style and not the Seigfreid style...=_= oy...(not that it's a problem, it's actually better that he's not named after a sword practise...^_^ that's be pretty awkward)
Posted 11/8/08
thanxs for the advise ill be sure to think about that oooooo also thanxs for accepting :P
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Posted 1/21/09
I want to post mine up,but I dont have a printer or anything so I cant draw it out and stuff D:
Posted 1/22/09

WingsOfWind wrote:

I want to post mine up,but I dont have a printer or anything so I cant draw it out and stuff D:


That's too bad, it's a shame that we can't have stuff contributed by you as well--it'd be nice to fill our author roster up more, even if it's by just one more. ^_^
Posted 3/24/09
*bows down to the floor* please forgive me!!!!!! for not doing anything for that doujin i was supposed to actually try and make but did absolutely nothing at all!!! i must apologize mmany times!
SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY (i didnt copy and paste any of those sorrys to show how much im sorry.....(((actually i did......SORRY )))
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i told Kushari not to long ago that i would start (maybe) working on my doujin after i beat Star ocean the last hope and now sense im done playing it in my free time i have nothing else to do so yeah im back ahaha.....also during that time ive played both TOV and TOP sooo errr how should i say this if u let me id like to work on a TOV doujin now (yeah need some other tales of doujins so this will work right?) ive all ready made a story, plot, characters, and ect. so ill just right the info about it now................dot....dot......dot....okay one more time i have to say...SORRY!!....well here goes
~~~

Tales of vesperia: Another story to tell (13A, insane spoilers)

Years have past sense Yuri, Duke, and co. destroyed the Adephagos and gave up Blastia. Now the Capital and Guild only fight against the monsters who remain in their world.

Crowe Safure, age 17. Crowe was a Knight for about a year when he was 16 but then left after a certain incedent happened at his training camp (he hates the knights like Yuri...but just not as much as yuri did). After he left, Crowejoined the Guild because of...another incedent...The guild he joined was the Writing Guild, a guild of poetry and... well writing. Crowe lived in peace with the Writing guild untill (....dun...dun.....duuuuuuh) he met a mysterious girl (go figure) named Belle Rose Stella who became his new main character for his book.
~~~
This is a story of lots and lots of Tragic events (or at leats ill try and make em tragic) oh and i promise yuri and Co. will make an appearance (as well as Duke) oh and i should tell u i made Estelle the Queen and her husband Flynn (im a yuri x estelle fan so dont get me wrong theres a reason why flynn married estelle....and no its not because he was trying to escape from his #1 fan girl Sodia ;P)
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well that mas the longest post ive ever written......ahahah well anyway XD i hope this is okay......
Posted 3/25/09
Sounds interesting! : ) I'd like to see this! Just have to wait for Leach's approval. ^^
Posted 3/25/09

kamikazekaito wrote:

*bows down to the floor* please forgive me!!!!!! for not doing anything for that doujin i was supposed to actually try and make but did absolutely nothing at all!!! i must apologize mmany times!
SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY (i didnt copy and paste any of those sorrys to show how much im sorry.....(((actually i did......SORRY )))
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i told Kushari not to long ago that i would start (maybe) working on my doujin after i beat Star ocean the last hope and now sense im done playing it in my free time i have nothing else to do so yeah im back ahaha.....also during that time ive played both TOV and TOP sooo errr how should i say this if u let me id like to work on a TOV doujin now (yeah need some other tales of doujins so this will work right?) ive all ready made a story, plot, characters, and ect. so ill just right the info about it now................dot....dot......dot....okay one more time i have to say...SORRY!!....well here goes
~~~

Tales of vesperia: Another story to tell (13A, insane spoilers)

Years have past sense Yuri, Duke, and co. destroyed the Adephagos and gave up Blastia. Now the Capital and Guild only fight against the monsters who remain in their world.

Crowe Safure, age 17. Crowe was a Knight for about a year when he was 16 but then left after a certain incedent happened at his training camp (he hates the knights like Yuri...but just not as much as yuri did). After he left, Crowejoined the Guild because of...another incedent...The guild he joined was the Writing Guild, a guild of poetry and... well writing. Crowe lived in peace with the Writing guild untill (....dun...dun.....duuuuuuh) he met a mysterious girl (go figure) named Belle Rose Stella who became his new main character for his book.
~~~
This is a story of lots and lots of Tragic events (or at leats ill try and make em tragic) oh and i promise yuri and Co. will make an appearance (as well as Duke) oh and i should tell u i made Estelle the Queen and her husband Flynn (im a yuri x estelle fan so dont get me wrong theres a reason why flynn married estelle....and no its not because he was trying to escape from his #1 fan girl Sodia ;P)
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well that mas the longest post ive ever written......ahahah well anyway XD i hope this is okay......


It's okay!! XD I forgive you!! And yes, you're totally allowed to do it--it shall be very refreshing for a different tales game to be featured lol (I was actually thinking of starting another one either Phantasia?Symphonia?Symphonia 2 related or Vesperia related from Estelle's pov of the adventure (since there's a published doujin from Flynn's perspective already :/) But yeah, ....Trauma. Anyway, glad to see you're still alive XD and lookin' forward to it!
Posted 3/26/09

MR_Leach wrote:


kamikazekaito wrote:

*bows down to the floor* please forgive me!!!!!! for not doing anything for that doujin i was supposed to actually try and make but did absolutely nothing at all!!! i must apologize mmany times!
SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY (i didnt copy and paste any of those sorrys to show how much im sorry.....(((actually i did......SORRY )))
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i told Kushari not to long ago that i would start (maybe) working on my doujin after i beat Star ocean the last hope and now sense im done playing it in my free time i have nothing else to do so yeah im back ahaha.....also during that time ive played both TOV and TOP sooo errr how should i say this if u let me id like to work on a TOV doujin now (yeah need some other tales of doujins so this will work right?) ive all ready made a story, plot, characters, and ect. so ill just right the info about it now................dot....dot......dot....okay one more time i have to say...SORRY!!....well here goes
~~~

Tales of vesperia: Another story to tell (13A, insane spoilers)

Years have past sense Yuri, Duke, and co. destroyed the Adephagos and gave up Blastia. Now the Capital and Guild only fight against the monsters who remain in their world.

Crowe Safure, age 17. Crowe was a Knight for about a year when he was 16 but then left after a certain incedent happened at his training camp (he hates the knights like Yuri...but just not as much as yuri did). After he left, Crowejoined the Guild because of...another incedent...The guild he joined was the Writing Guild, a guild of poetry and... well writing. Crowe lived in peace with the Writing guild untill (....dun...dun.....duuuuuuh) he met a mysterious girl (go figure) named Belle Rose Stella who became his new main character for his book.
~~~
This is a story of lots and lots of Tragic events (or at leats ill try and make em tragic) oh and i promise yuri and Co. will make an appearance (as well as Duke) oh and i should tell u i made Estelle the Queen and her husband Flynn (im a yuri x estelle fan so dont get me wrong theres a reason why flynn married estelle....and no its not because he was trying to escape from his #1 fan girl Sodia ;P)
~~
well that mas the longest post ive ever written......ahahah well anyway XD i hope this is okay......


It's okay!! XD I forgive you!! And yes, you're totally allowed to do it--it shall be very refreshing for a different tales game to be featured lol (I was actually thinking of starting another one either Phantasia?Symphonia?Symphonia 2 related or Vesperia related from Estelle's pov of the adventure (since there's a published doujin from Flynn's perspective already :/) But yeah, ....Trauma. Anyway, glad to see you're still alive XD and lookin' forward to it!



Thanks a lot XD ill start workinh on it.....well actually ive all ready started to work on it buuuuut....ahem how do i put this...my scanner=a big blob of useless crap................>.>.................but as a hero would say I SHALL NEVER GIVE UP! MUAHAHAHA~........or would a bad guy say this?......ehh either way! lol thanks for accepting it! and i look forward to your other doujin if u decide to make it!....oh also i should say thank you to u 2 Kushari ^-^
~~ ummmm also i have an idea...... some people cant show others there love for the Tales of series and make a doujin because they dont have a scanner or somthing right? well maybe this group could also allow people to make fanfics? huh? i love going on fanfiction.com to read people's stories of animes, games, ect. XD plus it could get a lot more people...ummm...maybe.....ahaha well its just an idea and u of course dont have to yes (ur the boss Mr_Leach ) lol
Posted 3/28/09

kamikazekaito wrote:


MR_Leach wrote:


kamikazekaito wrote:

*bows down to the floor* please forgive me!!!!!! for not doing anything for that doujin i was supposed to actually try and make but did absolutely nothing at all!!! i must apologize mmany times!
SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY (i didnt copy and paste any of those sorrys to show how much im sorry.....(((actually i did......SORRY )))
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i told Kushari not to long ago that i would start (maybe) working on my doujin after i beat Star ocean the last hope and now sense im done playing it in my free time i have nothing else to do so yeah im back ahaha.....also during that time ive played both TOV and TOP sooo errr how should i say this if u let me id like to work on a TOV doujin now (yeah need some other tales of doujins so this will work right?) ive all ready made a story, plot, characters, and ect. so ill just right the info about it now................dot....dot......dot....okay one more time i have to say...SORRY!!....well here goes
~~~

Tales of vesperia: Another story to tell (13A, insane spoilers)

Years have past sense Yuri, Duke, and co. destroyed the Adephagos and gave up Blastia. Now the Capital and Guild only fight against the monsters who remain in their world.

Crowe Safure, age 17. Crowe was a Knight for about a year when he was 16 but then left after a certain incedent happened at his training camp (he hates the knights like Yuri...but just not as much as yuri did). After he left, Crowejoined the Guild because of...another incedent...The guild he joined was the Writing Guild, a guild of poetry and... well writing. Crowe lived in peace with the Writing guild untill (....dun...dun.....duuuuuuh) he met a mysterious girl (go figure) named Belle Rose Stella who became his new main character for his book.
~~~
This is a story of lots and lots of Tragic events (or at leats ill try and make em tragic) oh and i promise yuri and Co. will make an appearance (as well as Duke) oh and i should tell u i made Estelle the Queen and her husband Flynn (im a yuri x estelle fan so dont get me wrong theres a reason why flynn married estelle....and no its not because he was trying to escape from his #1 fan girl Sodia ;P)
~~
well that mas the longest post ive ever written......ahahah well anyway XD i hope this is okay......


It's okay!! XD I forgive you!! And yes, you're totally allowed to do it--it shall be very refreshing for a different tales game to be featured lol (I was actually thinking of starting another one either Phantasia?Symphonia?Symphonia 2 related or Vesperia related from Estelle's pov of the adventure (since there's a published doujin from Flynn's perspective already :/) But yeah, ....Trauma. Anyway, glad to see you're still alive XD and lookin' forward to it!



Thanks a lot XD ill start workinh on it.....well actually ive all ready started to work on it buuuuut....ahem how do i put this...my scanner=a big blob of useless crap................>.>.................but as a hero would say I SHALL NEVER GIVE UP! MUAHAHAHA~........or would a bad guy say this?......ehh either way! lol thanks for accepting it! and i look forward to your other doujin if u decide to make it!....oh also i should say thank you to u 2 Kushari ^-^
~~ ummmm also i have an idea...... some people cant show others there love for the Tales of series and make a doujin because they dont have a scanner or somthing right? well maybe this group could also allow people to make fanfics? huh? i love going on fanfiction.com to read people's stories of animes, games, ect. XD plus it could get a lot more people...ummm...maybe.....ahaha well its just an idea and u of course dont have to yes (ur the boss Mr_Leach ) lol


Actually, I had already considered that. If someone wishes to create a Tales of fanfiction and post it here, then that is entirely possible...I was thinking that whoever wanted to forward an idea could do so here, but I suppose that I shall make a forum for that, too. The writer can use the same method as the doujin artists of creating their own pages after their idea is approved and they are made moderator. thanks for mentioning it though, I had almost forgotten! >_<
Posted 4/3/09
I don't think it's a problem, but I'd like to change my main story. >.> Hope you don't mind.

Tales of the Abyss: Sacred Flame of the Quliphoth

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Nate FonFabre (Age 17) is the son of Luke fon Fabre and Tear Grants, of the 8 heroes who lowered the Outerlands into the Quliphoth. He lives in the manor with his parents, and grandparents. He spends his days in the manor reading, and studying, only training when necessary. (*cough*When Luke get's bored.*cough*) He isn't much of a fighter, so his mother keeps him inside the city almost all the time for protection. He's able to hold his own in a fight thanks to Luke, but still is rather bad at battles. Then, one day, a mysterious girl is spotted outside of Baticul and he decides to investigate, capture her, and bring her back to prove that he's strong enough to protect himself. (Or more like he wants to prove he's almost a man.) He is forced to take with him his childhood friends, Badaq (Age 19) and Mary (Age 16) Gardios to help find her. They eventually find her, (Claire, Age 18) with her snow white hair, and a weapon on odd kind, not ever seen in Kimlasca. Nate chases her down without leaving his two friends anytime to react, and catches up to her. However, when they are cornered by several monsters at once, they have no choice but to join forces. The girl attempts to use a strong spell, but it fails due to lack of fonons, and they are blasted to an unknown area. The girl tells Nate that she was not in Kimlasca because she wanted to cause trouble. She claims she can't tell her anymore, but wishes for him to come with her. Seeing the chance to escape his life in the city, and adventure, he agrees, and the two set off for a destination unknown to Nate.

Story continues from there, they meet friends, yata yata yata, buncha twists and turns, and all that jazz. >:P
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Same rating and stuff as the last one. Just change of story. ,:P
Posted 4/4/09

Kushari wrote:

I don't think it's a problem, but I'd like to change my main story. >.> Hope you don't mind.

Tales of the Abyss: Sacred Flame of the Quliphoth

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Nate FonFabre (Age 17) is the son of Luke fon Fabre and Tear Grants, of the 8 heroes who lowered the Outerlands into the Quliphoth. He lives in the manor with his parents, and grandparents. He spends his days in the manor reading, and studying, only training when necessary. (*cough*When Luke get's bored.*cough*) He isn't much of a fighter, so his mother keeps him inside the city almost all the time for protection. He's able to hold his own in a fight thanks to Luke, but still is rather bad at battles. Then, one day, a mysterious girl is spotted outside of Baticul and he decides to investigate, capture her, and bring her back to prove that he's strong enough to protect himself. (Or more like he wants to prove he's almost a man.) He is forced to take with him his childhood friends, Badaq (Age 19) and Mary (Age 16) Gardios to help find her. They eventually find her, (Claire, Age 18) with her snow white hair, and a weapon on odd kind, not ever seen in Kimlasca. Nate chases her down without leaving his two friends anytime to react, and catches up to her. However, when they are cornered by several monsters at once, they have no choice but to join forces. The girl attempts to use a strong spell, but it fails due to lack of fonons, and they are blasted to an unknown area. The girl tells Nate that she was not in Kimlasca because she wanted to cause trouble. She claims she can't tell her anymore, but wishes for him to come with her. Seeing the chance to escape his life in the city, and adventure, he agrees, and the two set off for a destination unknown to Nate.

Story continues from there, they meet friends, yata yata yata, buncha twists and turns, and all that jazz. >:P
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Same rating and stuff as the last one. Just change of story. ,:P


OMG XD okay...not to be mean but I can spot a lot of rip offs here, though admittedly it looks awesome XD It like alomst sounds the exact same until the part about him wanting to BEAT UP the girl rather than, y'know, elope. X3 Don't worry though, it's passable content wise, and knowing you there shouldn't be trouble concerning the rating X] so go for it! (yeah!)
Posted 4/4/09

MR_Leach wrote:


Kushari wrote:

I don't think it's a problem, but I'd like to change my main story. >.> Hope you don't mind.

Tales of the Abyss: Sacred Flame of the Quliphoth

---------------------------------------
Nate FonFabre (Age 17) is the son of Luke fon Fabre and Tear Grants, of the 8 heroes who lowered the Outerlands into the Quliphoth. He lives in the manor with his parents, and grandparents. He spends his days in the manor reading, and studying, only training when necessary. (*cough*When Luke get's bored.*cough*) He isn't much of a fighter, so his mother keeps him inside the city almost all the time for protection. He's able to hold his own in a fight thanks to Luke, but still is rather bad at battles. Then, one day, a mysterious girl is spotted outside of Baticul and he decides to investigate, capture her, and bring her back to prove that he's strong enough to protect himself. (Or more like he wants to prove he's almost a man.) He is forced to take with him his childhood friends, Badaq (Age 19) and Mary (Age 16) Gardios to help find her. They eventually find her, (Claire, Age 18) with her snow white hair, and a weapon on odd kind, not ever seen in Kimlasca. Nate chases her down without leaving his two friends anytime to react, and catches up to her. However, when they are cornered by several monsters at once, they have no choice but to join forces. The girl attempts to use a strong spell, but it fails due to lack of fonons, and they are blasted to an unknown area. The girl tells Nate that she was not in Kimlasca because she wanted to cause trouble. She claims she can't tell her anymore, but wishes for him to come with her. Seeing the chance to escape his life in the city, and adventure, he agrees, and the two set off for a destination unknown to Nate.

Story continues from there, they meet friends, yata yata yata, buncha twists and turns, and all that jazz. >:P
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Same rating and stuff as the last one. Just change of story. ,:P


OMG XD okay...not to be mean but I can spot a lot of rip offs here, though admittedly it looks awesome XD It like alomst sounds the exact same until the part about him wanting to BEAT UP the girl rather than, y'know, elope. X3 Don't worry though, it's passable content wise, and knowing you there shouldn't be trouble concerning the rating X] so go for it! (yeah!)


Wait. Where? o_o I'll change 'em.
Posted 4/4/09

MR_Leach wrote:


Kushari wrote:

I don't think it's a problem, but I'd like to change my main story. >.> Hope you don't mind.

Tales of the Abyss: Sacred Flame of the Quliphoth

---------------------------------------
Nate FonFabre (Age 17) is the son of Luke fon Fabre and Tear Grants, of the 8 heroes who lowered the Outerlands into the Quliphoth. He lives in the manor with his parents, and grandparents. He spends his days in the manor reading, and studying, only training when necessary. (*cough*When Luke get's bored.*cough*) He isn't much of a fighter, so his mother keeps him inside the city almost all the time for protection. He's able to hold his own in a fight thanks to Luke, but still is rather bad at battles. Then, one day, a mysterious girl is spotted outside of Baticul and he decides to investigate, capture her, and bring her back to prove that he's strong enough to protect himself. (Or more like he wants to prove he's almost a man.) He is forced to take with him his childhood friends, Badaq (Age 19) and Mary (Age 16) Gardios to help find her. They eventually find her, (Claire, Age 18) with her snow white hair, and a weapon on odd kind, not ever seen in Kimlasca. Nate chases her down without leaving his two friends anytime to react, and catches up to her. However, when they are cornered by several monsters at once, they have no choice but to join forces. The girl attempts to use a strong spell, but it fails due to lack of fonons, and they are blasted to an unknown area. The girl tells Nate that she was not in Kimlasca because she wanted to cause trouble. She claims she can't tell her anymore, but wishes for him to come with her. Seeing the chance to escape his life in the city, and adventure, he agrees, and the two set off for a destination unknown to Nate.

Story continues from there, they meet friends, yata yata yata, buncha twists and turns, and all that jazz. >:P
---------------------------------------

Same rating and stuff as the last one. Just change of story. ,:P


OMG XD okay...not to be mean but I can spot a lot of rip offs here, though admittedly it looks awesome XD It like alomst sounds the exact same until the part about him wanting to BEAT UP the girl rather than, y'know, elope. X3 Don't worry though, it's passable content wise, and knowing you there shouldn't be trouble concerning the rating X] so go for it! (yeah!)


Oh..Wait a minute. *scratches out last post*

Nate FonFabre (Age 17) is the son of Luke fon Fabre and Tear Grants, of the 8 heroes who lowered the Outerlands into the Quliphoth. He lives in the manor with his parents, and grandparents. He spends his days in the manor reading, and studying, only training when necessary. (*cough*When Luke get's bored.*cough*) He isn't much of a fighter, so his mother keeps him inside the city almost all the time for protection. He's able to hold his own in a fight thanks to Luke, but still is rather bad at battles. Then, one day, a mysterious girl is spotted outside of Baticul and he decides to investigate, capture her, and bring her back to prove that he's strong enough to protect himself. (Or more like he wants to prove he's almost a man.) He is forced to take with him his childhood friends, Badaq (Age 19) and Mary (Age 16) Gardios to help find her. They eventually find her, (Claire, Age 18) with her snow white hair, and a weapon on odd kind, not ever seen in Kimlasca. Nate chases her down without leaving his two friends anytime to react, and catches up to her. However, when they are cornered by several monsters at once, they have no choice but to join forces. The girl attempts to use a strong spell, but it fails due to lack of fonons, and they are blasted to an unknown area. The girl tells Nate that she was not in Kimlasca because she wanted to cause trouble. She claims she can't tell her anymore, but wishes for him to come with her. Seeing the chance to escape his life in the city, and adventure, he agrees, and the two set off for a destination unknown to Nate.

Do you mean these? >.> They both branch from the same game, so it's hard not to start in a similar way. >.< I feel really lame now. *attempts to figure out how to make it realistic, but not dumb*

Posted 4/4/09

Kushari wrote:

Wait. Where? o_o I'll change 'em.


Nate FonFabre (Age 17) is the son of Luke fon Fabre and Tear Grants, of the 8 heroes who lowered the Outerlands into the Quliphoth. He lives in the manor with his parents, and grandparents. He spends his days in the manor reading, and studying, only training when necessary. (*cough*When Luke get's bored.*cough*) He isn't much of a fighter, so his mother keeps him inside the city almost all the time for protection. He's able to hold his own in a fight thanks to Luke, but still is rather bad at battles. Then, one day, a mysterious girl is spotted outside of Baticul and he decides to investigate, capture her, and bring her back to prove that he's strong enough to protect himself. (Or more like he wants to prove he's almost a man.) He is forced to take with him his childhood friends, Badaq (Age 19) and Mary (Age 16) Gardios to help find her. They eventually find her, (Claire, Age 18) with her snow white hair, and a weapon on odd kind, not ever seen in Kimlasca. Nate chases her down without leaving his two friends anytime to react, and catches up to her. However, when they are cornered by several monsters at once, they have no choice but to join forces. The girl attempts to use a strong spell, but it fails due to lack of fonons, and they are blasted to an unknown area. The girl tells Nate that she was not in Kimlasca because she wanted to cause trouble. She claims she can't tell her anymore, but wishes for him to come with her. Seeing the chance to escape his life in the city, and adventure, he agrees, and the two set off for a destination unknown to Nate.

Okay *ahem* Firstone, i don't actually care, I just pointed it out for kicks. Second...you can't find another name for 'em? Third...so does Siegfired. Fourth, so is Siegfried. Fifth, the same thing for Guy...and Siegfried. Sixth so is Siegfried. Seventh brown-eyed girl. Eighth Same self-esteem issue as Seig. Ninth...yeah, same as Seigfried. The blue I just found funny, because it's just like the game (which is not a bad thing, mind you) and the green was a spelling error. XD Remeber, you asked.
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