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Posted 4/4/09

Kushari wrote:

Do you mean these? >.> They both branch from the same game, so it's hard not to start in a similar way. >.< I feel really lame now. *attempts to figure out how to make it realistic, but not dumb*



Way to post while i'm writing. >.> but yeah, I get what you're saying XD the whole being kooped up thing is like an abyss staple, but as for the other things...some of them are -too- simliar, y'know? Though, I really don't care so long as it's entertaining and ins't blatant plaigerism XD which it is clearly not. :3
Posted 4/4/09

MR_Leach wrote:

Nate FonFabre (Age 17) is the son of Luke fon Fabre and Tear Grants, of the 8 heroes who lowered the Outerlands into the Quliphoth. He lives in the manor with his parents, and grandparents. He spends his days in the manor reading, and studying, only training when necessary. (*cough*When Luke get's bored.*cough*) He isn't much of a fighter, so his mother keeps him inside the city almost all the time for protection. He's able to hold his own in a fight thanks to Luke, but still is rather bad at battles. Then, one day, a mysterious girl is spotted outside of Baticul and he decides to investigate, capture her, and bring her back to prove that he's strong enough to protect himself. (Or more like he wants to prove he's almost a man.) He is forced to take with him his childhood friends, Badaq (Age 19) and Mary (Age 16) Gardios to help find her. They eventually find her, (Claire, Age 18) with her snow white hair, and a weapon on odd kind, not ever seen in Kimlasca. Nate chases her down without leaving his two friends anytime to react, and catches up to her. However, when they are cornered by several monsters at once, they have no choice but to join forces. The girl attempts to use a strong spell, but it fails due to lack of fonons, and they are blasted to an unknown area. The girl tells Nate that she was not in Kimlasca because she wanted to cause trouble. She claims she can't tell her anymore, but wishes for him to come with her. Seeing the chance to escape his life in the city, and adventure, he agrees, and the two set off for a destination unknown to Nate.

Okay *ahem* Firstone, i don't actually care, I just pointed it out for kicks. Second...you can't find another name for 'em? Third...so does Siegfired. Fourth, so is Siegfried. Fifth, the same thing for Guy...and Siegfried. Sixth so is Siegfried. Seventh brown-eyed girl. Eighth Same self-esteem issue as Seig. Ninth...yeah, same as Seigfried. The blue I just found funny, because it's just like the game (which is not a bad thing, mind you) and the green was a spelling error. XD Remeber, you asked.


1. >.> Sorry. It just seemed like that if that's what they were called in yours then it's not likely that they'd be called something else in a different world. I more looking at mine as a different path the story could have taken.
2. I thought Seig trained often. o_o Did I build a opposite image in my mind?
3. See above. >.>
4. Brown eyed girl? Wha?
5. I thought Seig...Urg...My image of him is totally wrong... @_@
6. Well, being confined and all...yea..blah. <.<

Also, it's not exactly like that game. ,: | It's due to lack of fonons, since the planet storm was calmed. Not hyperresonance. Though...the being spirited away is... >.> Meh...
Posted 4/4/09

Kushari wrote:


MR_Leach wrote:

Nate FonFabre (Age 17) is the son of Luke fon Fabre and Tear Grants, of the 8 heroes who lowered the Outerlands into the Quliphoth. He lives in the manor with his parents, and grandparents. He spends his days in the manor reading, and studying, only training when necessary. (*cough*When Luke get's bored.*cough*) He isn't much of a fighter, so his mother keeps him inside the city almost all the time for protection. He's able to hold his own in a fight thanks to Luke, but still is rather bad at battles. Then, one day, a mysterious girl is spotted outside of Baticul and he decides to investigate, capture her, and bring her back to prove that he's strong enough to protect himself. (Or more like he wants to prove he's almost a man.) He is forced to take with him his childhood friends, Badaq (Age 19) and Mary (Age 16) Gardios to help find her. They eventually find her, (Claire, Age 18) with her snow white hair, and a weapon on odd kind, not ever seen in Kimlasca. Nate chases her down without leaving his two friends anytime to react, and catches up to her. However, when they are cornered by several monsters at once, they have no choice but to join forces. The girl attempts to use a strong spell, but it fails due to lack of fonons, and they are blasted to an unknown area. The girl tells Nate that she was not in Kimlasca because she wanted to cause trouble. She claims she can't tell her anymore, but wishes for him to come with her. Seeing the chance to escape his life in the city, and adventure, he agrees, and the two set off for a destination unknown to Nate.

Okay *ahem* Firstone, i don't actually care, I just pointed it out for kicks. Second...you can't find another name for 'em? Third...so does Siegfired. Fourth, so is Siegfried. Fifth, the same thing for Guy...and Siegfried. Sixth so is Siegfried. Seventh brown-eyed girl. Eighth Same self-esteem issue as Seig. Ninth...yeah, same as Seigfried. The blue I just found funny, because it's just like the game (which is not a bad thing, mind you) and the green was a spelling error. XD Remeber, you asked.


1. >.> Sorry. It just seemed like that if that's what they were called in yours then it's not likely that they'd be called something else in a different world. I more looking at mine as a different path the story could have taken.
2. I thought Seig trained often. o_o Did I build a opposite image in my mind?
3. See above. >.>
4. Brown eyed girl? Wha?
5. I thought Seig...Urg...My image of him is totally wrong... @_@
6. Well, being confined and all...yea..blah. <.<

Also, it's not exactly like that game. ,: | It's due to lack of fonons, since the planet storm was calmed. Not hyperresonance. Though...the being spirited away is... >.> Meh...


What do you think Seig is, Superman? XD He only trains when Guy and Natalia force him to, most other times he'd rather be cooking or out shopping. He's also a horrible fighter, and has a terrible sense of self-esteem because he doesn't think he's manly enough to be his father's son.

Also, sorry, I thought I'd already used the term "brown-eyed girl" in the doujin O_O but I guess not. That's how Seig refers to the girl in the wedding dress :P

And as for point 6, I thought I already said something of that nature in one of the other posts XD
Posted 4/4/09

MR_Leach wrote:


Kushari wrote:


MR_Leach wrote:

Nate FonFabre (Age 17) is the son of Luke fon Fabre and Tear Grants, of the 8 heroes who lowered the Outerlands into the Quliphoth. He lives in the manor with his parents, and grandparents. He spends his days in the manor reading, and studying, only training when necessary. (*cough*When Luke get's bored.*cough*) He isn't much of a fighter, so his mother keeps him inside the city almost all the time for protection. He's able to hold his own in a fight thanks to Luke, but still is rather bad at battles. Then, one day, a mysterious girl is spotted outside of Baticul and he decides to investigate, capture her, and bring her back to prove that he's strong enough to protect himself. (Or more like he wants to prove he's almost a man.) He is forced to take with him his childhood friends, Badaq (Age 19) and Mary (Age 16) Gardios to help find her. They eventually find her, (Claire, Age 18) with her snow white hair, and a weapon on odd kind, not ever seen in Kimlasca. Nate chases her down without leaving his two friends anytime to react, and catches up to her. However, when they are cornered by several monsters at once, they have no choice but to join forces. The girl attempts to use a strong spell, but it fails due to lack of fonons, and they are blasted to an unknown area. The girl tells Nate that she was not in Kimlasca because she wanted to cause trouble. She claims she can't tell her anymore, but wishes for him to come with her. Seeing the chance to escape his life in the city, and adventure, he agrees, and the two set off for a destination unknown to Nate.

Okay *ahem* Firstone, i don't actually care, I just pointed it out for kicks. Second...you can't find another name for 'em? Third...so does Siegfired. Fourth, so is Siegfried. Fifth, the same thing for Guy...and Siegfried. Sixth so is Siegfried. Seventh brown-eyed girl. Eighth Same self-esteem issue as Seig. Ninth...yeah, same as Seigfried. The blue I just found funny, because it's just like the game (which is not a bad thing, mind you) and the green was a spelling error. XD Remeber, you asked.


1. >.> Sorry. It just seemed like that if that's what they were called in yours then it's not likely that they'd be called something else in a different world. I more looking at mine as a different path the story could have taken.
2. I thought Seig trained often. o_o Did I build a opposite image in my mind?
3. See above. >.>
4. Brown eyed girl? Wha?
5. I thought Seig...Urg...My image of him is totally wrong... @_@
6. Well, being confined and all...yea..blah. <.<

Also, it's not exactly like that game. ,: | It's due to lack of fonons, since the planet storm was calmed. Not hyperresonance. Though...the being spirited away is... >.> Meh...


What do you think Seig is, Superman? XD He only trains when Guy and Natalia force him to, most other times he'd rather be cooking or out shopping. He's also a horrible fighter, and has a terrible sense of self-esteem because he doesn't think he's manly enough to be his father's son.

Also, sorry, I thought I'd already used the term "brown-eyed girl" in the doujin O_O but I guess not. That's how Seig refers to the girl in the wedding dress :P

And as for point 6, I thought I already said something of that nature in one of the other posts XD


Well, no. Not superman. ,:P But I thought he trained a lot so he could be strong and beefy in case he ran into a pretty girly. XD

And, for the last part, Yea. You did. That's why I didn't expand on it. ,:P
Posted 4/4/09

Kushari wrote:

Well, no. Not superman. ,:P But I thought he trained a lot so he could be strong and beefy in case he ran into a pretty girly. XD

And, for the last part, Yea. You did. That's why I didn't expand on it. ,:P


Yeah, he's only beefy 'cause he feels inadiquate ;_; it's so sad...
Posted 4/4/09

MR_Leach wrote:


Kushari wrote:

Well, no. Not superman. ,:P But I thought he trained a lot so he could be strong and beefy in case he ran into a pretty girly. XD

And, for the last part, Yea. You did. That's why I didn't expand on it. ,:P


Yeah, he's only beefy 'cause he feels inadiquate ;_; it's so sad...


Oh. lol Anyways, I think we should stop filling up this forum with stuff, considering it's more of a conversation then forwarding ideas. I think we're slightly off topic. ,:P
Posted 4/4/09

Kushari wrote:


MR_Leach wrote:


Kushari wrote:

Well, no. Not superman. ,:P But I thought he trained a lot so he could be strong and beefy in case he ran into a pretty girly. XD

And, for the last part, Yea. You did. That's why I didn't expand on it. ,:P


Yeah, he's only beefy 'cause he feels inadiquate ;_; it's so sad...


Oh. lol Anyways, I think we should stop filling up this forum with stuff, considering it's more of a conversation then forwarding ideas. I think we're slightly off topic. ,:P


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I gots a question-how many stories can you post at a time? =o
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AS many as physically possible for you XD I was thinking about diong another doujin/crossover, but >_< yeah, ever since I started Trauma that's been kindof...hard.
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So I can post two at a time O.o?Or do i have to wait for one to be finished before posting the other?
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*answering for her, because he was able to understand from her last message* Yup. You can. Just make sure you can handle it. ,:3 Don't take more then you can handle, y'know?
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Yeah, that hurts. <:[
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Don't worry I always write a lot of stories at once X3.It only hurts for thinking of all the small details (T^T)
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I'm allowed to put up my stories as a chapter book right :o?
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I'm allowed to put up my stories as a chapter book right :o?
(sorry for the many questions XD)


She's on vacation right now, so I'll go ahead and say go for it. If she says otherwise when she gets back, then you'll just have to fix it. >.>
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