Post Reply The rage within, finally awakens
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Posted 10/4/08 , edited 4/7/09
The rage within, finally awakens

Finally
the first day
of your
life that was good.
Everything went right.
It was all
going your way.
The sun about to
set on your perfect day.
Thats when it
happened.
Something
happened that
broke the last
straw.
All the hatred.
All the fury.
All the rage.
Awakens~
All the
bad things.
Everything you
kept within.
Finally came out.
All the beatings.
All the termoil.
All the things
that ever made you mad.
Come out on
one violent rampage.
You start to release it
on everything
you see.
Your clothes rip.
Lightbulbs shatter.
Stuffed animals
shreded to bits.
The love of your
life enters the
now destroyed room.
You turn to see
them with a look of concern.
you run to them
and give them a hug...
the last they'll ever get.
You icy cold hands
hug her throat.
She struggles to
free herself.
She is
unseccesful.
You grin as the
last breathe
escape her
mouth.
Her eyes grow foggy
as she drops to
the floor.
She has left our world.
You realize what you did.
You fall to your
kness.
You start to cry.
But not out
of sadness.
Out of joy.
You leave her dead body.
Walk the moonlit
fields and forests.
Grinning.
And you loved the
fealing of taking life.
And cant wait until
your next
outrage.
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Posted 10/5/08
wow
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Posted 10/5/08
thnx~ It's a bit different, but yeah
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Posted 10/5/08
U always make a good poems, I think u deserve a credit 4 it
Posted 12/6/08
WOW... im speechless
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