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fan fic~what the heart wants(not very good gome)
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ok um this will b about the shugo chara characters and maybe some made up characters the main povs will be miku hatsune, age 14 and amu hinamori, age 14 and um it's an amuto story oh and this is after they win the battle in easter and every1 is in middle school
chapter 1:
"*yawn*god miki it's saturday y did u wake me up so early?"i said sounding groggy "it is oh i forgot gome"miki said sweat dropping i got up and changed i was so bored " i can't believe it was only last year that we finally got the embryo for easter but i still don't know if i have feelings for ikuto or tadase really "i sighed "what's wrong amu-chan"miki asked me worrily"nothing just bored hey r ran and suu up yet?"i asked "nope still in their eggs" "oh ok ima go get some breakfast bye" "bye"*downstairs*
"mama whats 4 breakfast?"i asked wearily "y amu-chan u certainly woke up early today" "yea" *gomenasai breakfast is not ready yet" "ok" i went back upstairs and noticed a certain cat boy outside my window "i-ikuto! what r u doing here?" "oh amu i thought u would b happy 2 see me" he smirked and came into my room"wipe that smirk off your face before i have 2 do it myself i've been training you know" "oh amu isn't that a little harsh?" in what seemed like a minute my mom suddenly called out"amu-chan breakfast is ready" "ja ne amu-chan" he smirked and left "geez that pervert"i said "amu come down now!!!"my mom yelled again "coming"i said and went down ate my breakfast and decided 2 go 2 the park.i saw some1 very easily recognized there but sometimes it could b dangerous around him so i should probably be careful.


gome it was short but i'm new at this gomenasai

and um this is miku's info
name:miku hatsune
age:14
charas:
lina:tomboy drummer/singer

yuuki:tomboy goth

personality:she is a famous singer and the most beautiful girl in school she has 2 act all cheerful and girly because her family forces her 2 for honor but in real life she is a goth and a tomboy she is a hard fighter 2 and she really hates all the attention but somewhere deep down in her heart(deep deep down miku:HEY!!!!!!)she can b really nice(wich is how lina is there)
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friends:goths if any
chara nari:
lina:singing dreamer

yuuki:goth princess

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ok yea i suck right? go ahead say it i won't be mad cuz even i think so myself
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oh freaking 4get it i am now doing amuto since there seem 2 b so many fans
tadamu fans:nuuuu
avni52:gomene i know how u feel but i want ppl 2 reveiw and if that is the only way because a reveiw is what makes writers more confident so it makes it go faster
amuto fans:we love youuuuuu
avni52:ok ok just reveiw or else i might lose all my confidence and just quit
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goodness gracious...!

you'r really bored, aren't you??...=P


wazzup???
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anime_ybeth wrote:

goodness gracious...!

you'r really bored, aren't you??...=P


wazzup???


I was right it's ok 2 admit it cuz i already know it sux
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chapter 2:
AMU'S POV
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"Tadase!!!!!!" i yelled "hi what r u doing here?"i asked wondering "oh um hinamori-san i was on my way 2 your house "he said i wondered y so i decided 2 ask him "y?" "um i wanted 2 tell u something" "what is it?" "i-i l-love u hinamori-san!!!"he was blushing redder than a tomato "oh um i'm sorry but i can't accept your feelings" "i-i understand"he looked bummed out so i gave him a kiss on the cheek and reminded him that we had 2 go meet the others(in this the guardians r over since they already found the embryo but they r still friends)


miku's pov
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"AAAAAAAHHH what's this egg doing here i wanted 2 b the real me not lay an egg this is supposed 2 impossible 4 a human"i ran around panicking 2 myself 4 on my bed were 2 eggs i noticed 1 of them started 2 crack "huh what's gonna come out now?"i watched in amazement as the egg with music notes on it began 2 crack and a little flying human came out"hi i'm lina"she said i had almost passed out"w-w-what r u?" "i'm your guardian chara" "g-g-guardian chara?" "yea your would-be-self u did wish 2 be the real you right?" "y-yea"i said hesitantly i was suddenly pulled into reality and realized that i was talking 2 a flying chibi human"i get it now i'm still dreaming right?" "no i am very much real" "ok first explain everything 2 me while we go check out my new school" "Sure"she smiled on the way there she was telling me so much the thing i was most interested in though was about the embryo it could grant any wish "i could use that"i thought 2 myself i really wanted no 2 b some1 i'm not like i'm being forced 2!!!!and if i was allowed 2 be who i really wanted 2 b the boys would stop stalking me so much.when we got 2 school my mom said i could go explore by myself i found a pretty garden i decided 2 go inside.when i got in i saw about 7 people there(yea in this story seiyo academy is a middle-school section and elementary school)
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avni52 wrote:


anime_ybeth wrote:

goodness gracious...!

you're really bored, aren't you??...=P


wazzup???


I was right it's ok 2 admit it cuz i already know it sux




well, it does not really suck or something...=P

I don't really reAd them...
hehehe....
cuz I can't understand it....=P
and I don't have enough time this week...
maybe on weekends, I can find time to read EVERYTHING you write here...=P

I just said that because you even made a forum and posted those stories...^_^

do you wanna be a writer of a fictionalized story????

^_^


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anime_ybeth wrote:


avni52 wrote:


anime_ybeth wrote:

goodness gracious...!

you're really bored, aren't you??...=P


wazzup???


I was right it's ok 2 admit it cuz i already know it sux




well, it does not really suck or something...=P

I don't really reAd them...
hehehe....
cuz I can't understand it....=P
and I don't have enough time this week...
maybe on weekends, I can find time to read EVERYTHING you write here...=P

I just said that because you even made a forum and posted those stories...^_^

do you wanna be a writer of a fictionalized story????

^_^


*-*-*aNiMe_yBeTh*-*-*


i'm not that good a writer plus i already know what i wanna be A ROCKING DRUMMER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted 10/8/08
ohh cool~
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ohh cool~


i'm not that good(at writing or drumming)
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chapter 3:
MIKU'S POV
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"wow this place is 2 bright"I said it was all right 4 me 2 be my normal self when my mother wasn't there "not 2 bad"lina said "huh?excuse me who r u?"i heard a girl say i looked up i saw every1 the girl who spoke had pink hair in a side ponytail with an x clip,another guy had long blonde hair i thought he was really cute,there was another guy with really long purple hair i thought he looked sort of like a girl,and there was a younger 1 with orange hair put up in 2 pigtails,there was also a pretty long haired blonde girl with a black headband,and another orange haired guy who looked like a sporty kind of guy he was also pretty cute,there was a green haired guy with glasses 2 they were all amazing..."u-um i'm m-"i got cut off by the pigtailed girl "mate isn't that...MIKU HATSUNE THE FAMOUS SINGER!!!!!!! YAY CAN YAYA-CHAN HAVE AN AUTOGRAPH?!?!?!?!?!?!ONEGAI!!!!!!!!"the girl who's name was apparently yaya sounded very childlike"oh no not again" i said quietly 2 myself "nice 2 meet u hatsune-san i am tadase hotori" the blonde headed guy seemed very calm"oh um nice 2 meet u tadase-kun"i said, lost "god y do i have 2 act so shy and girly and cheerful if i was allowed 2 do what i wanted i wouldn't be wearing this stupid pink dress right now"i thought 2 myself"hi hi my name is yaya-chan"she was way 2 cheerful and talks in the third person"oh um n-nice 2 meet u" "now if i could do what i wanted i wouldn't have 2 deal with this over cheery person"i thought then the orange haired guy suddenly cut in from my thoughts "yo hatsune i'm kukai(gome forgot his last name) "konichiwa"i started 2 go into my real personality a bit "well your not as cheery as they say u r all that cheeriness and girliness from u is all a lie right? hi i'm rima"the blonde haired haired girl surprised me by seeing through my act "what r u talking about of course it's not " i said nervously "your lying again" "how could u see through my act?" "well first of all u have charas wich means there is another side of u that u usually hide and second when u came in u said it was 2 bright even though there isn't much light in here" "ok u got me happy?" "thank u very much and i am satisfied" "rima! how did u do that?oh hi i'm amu"the pink haired girl also surprised me "amu-chi get yaya-chan an autograph onegai"yaya suddenly said "hai hai"amu said smiling i was confused why weren't they questioning me about everything usually ppl were always asking me random questions half of wich i didn't even know the awnser 2 because i had never thought about it(wow i get what those writers mean this is very hard and this chapter was completely miku's pov i couldn't think of anything 2 do 4 amu's pov so i just did it all hers gomenasai)
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well at least they get longer every time right? and they get more interesting by the minute right? ok now i'm just lying 2 myself 2 get u guys 2 post
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u know i am ok with mean comments actually i want u ppl 2 tell me how much i suck or else i will just keep writing this without any motivation instead of stopping making u guys suffer by reading my crap
Posted 10/9/08 , edited 10/9/08
youre really negative and you want us to tell you that you story is bad thats weird
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youre really negative and you want us to tell you that you story is bad thats weird


i dun really care i'm different so what? i like 2 b alone
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