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fan fic~what the heart wants(not very good gome)
Posted 10/11/08

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buono_shugochara wrote:

dis is like well ace/good/cool hehe ur really good n i like da pics of ur characters there cute ^.^


they ended up different then i wanted them


oh well their still good ^.^
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Posted 10/11/08

buono_shugochara wrote:


avni52 wrote:


buono_shugochara wrote:

dis is like well ace/good/cool hehe ur really good n i like da pics of ur characters there cute ^.^


they ended up different then i wanted them


oh well their still good ^.^


i guess
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Posted 10/11/08
chapter 5:
MIKU'S POV
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"well what now" "let's find a place we actually like in the school" yuuki seemed bored like me "i'm already doing that but i can't find 1 single dark place and-"i was cut off"HEY LOOK IT'S MIKU HATSUNE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"i looked 2 see some boys and some ppl started 2 notice RUN!!!! was the first thing that came into my mind so i just did i am so glad i am such a fast runner "HEY MIKU WAIT UP"i heard some1 yell "WAIT I LOVE U WILL U MARRY ME"i heard some random guy yell"HEY SIGN A SONG 4 US PLZZZZ!!!!!" "I LOVE U MIKU HATSUNE!!!!"as i ran more and more ppl joined in then i saw an alleyway the perfect spot 4 hiding especially sine my girly character was afraid of the dark ha like that was possible so i hid they lost me and went back 2 what they were doing i knew i should've worn a disguise but mama said no hmph good thing i am always prepared with a disguise in my purse i took out my hair bands put it into 1 ponytail and put a hat and some sunglasses on then i went back 2 the school "these ppl r way 2 obsessive"i said in my abnormal cold tone i rarely got 2 use it so the longer i went without using it the colder and meaner it was then i saw an egg with an x on it i suddenly knew that it was an x-egg like the 1 lina told me about "an x-egg huh? i guess we should purify it i may b a gothic tomboy but hey it doesn't mean i can't b nice now if only i could character transform how do i do that?" "u have 2 belive in yourself as much as possible" "easy thanks yuuki"then in a second i was transforming "my own heart...UNLOCK character transformation gothic princess"i was suddenly wearing stuff i would've never thought(according 2 the pics it's a skirt so maybe she shouldn't b a tomboy yea i'll fix that later on but first i have 2 fix the transformation) "black heart" then suddenly a black heart shot out from me and hit the egg "EH?!?!?!?!?!?!?!" "good job miku"lina was way down below then it hit me I WAS FLYING!!!! "WHAT IN THE WORLD?!?!?!?!?!" "miku belive in yourself or it will wear off" "ok got it but how do i purify it?" then i heard some1 yell "LOCK ON...OPEN HEART!!!!"then it was purified i was confused then i saw amu "what???????



(sorry can't think of anything i have writers block the next 1 will definitely b longer gomenasai plz dun kill me!!!)
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Posted 10/11/08 , edited 10/11/08
i'll write more when i get at least 10 reviews
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Posted 10/15/08
fine i can see u ppl really do hate it thank you 4 letting me know u dun want more now i can get a real life
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Posted 1/3/09
i really like it u dnt need to stop
u jst need practice
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