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Sweetie_666 wrote:

I liked it, but the end seems a bit rushed. It was odd to read because Miki is my name, what are the odds? lol.


hahaha yea like i said before i thought it was rushed too but your name it Miki?! cute! i love that name lol
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Sweetie_666 wrote:

I liked it, but the end seems a bit rushed. It was odd to read because Miki is my name, what are the odds? lol.


hahaha yea like i said before i thought it was rushed too but your name it Miki?! cute! i love that name lol


Yes, it is! You thinks it's cute? Thank you!
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Posted 10/7/08

Sweetie_666 wrote:


berr078 wrote:


Sweetie_666 wrote:

I liked it, but the end seems a bit rushed. It was odd to read because Miki is my name, what are the odds? lol.


hahaha yea like i said before i thought it was rushed too but your name it Miki?! cute! i love that name lol


Yes, it is! You thinks it's cute? Thank you!


yeah i like it. i always thought it was a cute name.(when i think of the name miki i think of Mickey Mouse(i know such a weirdo lol))
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Posted 10/7/08

berr078 wrote:


Sweetie_666 wrote:


berr078 wrote:


Sweetie_666 wrote:

I liked it, but the end seems a bit rushed. It was odd to read because Miki is my name, what are the odds? lol.


hahaha yea like i said before i thought it was rushed too but your name it Miki?! cute! i love that name lol


Yes, it is! You thinks it's cute? Thank you!


yeah i like it. i always thought it was a cute name.(when i think of the name miki i think of Mickey Mouse(i know such a weirdo lol))


Lol, nice. At least think of Minnie Mouse, rotfl.
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Posted 10/7/08

Sweetie_666 wrote:


berr078 wrote:


Sweetie_666 wrote:


berr078 wrote:


Sweetie_666 wrote:

I liked it, but the end seems a bit rushed. It was odd to read because Miki is my name, what are the odds? lol.


hahaha yea like i said before i thought it was rushed too but your name it Miki?! cute! i love that name lol


Yes, it is! You thinks it's cute? Thank you!


yeah i like it. i always thought it was a cute name.(when i think of the name miki i think of Mickey Mouse(i know such a weirdo lol))


Lol, nice. At least think of Minnie Mouse, rotfl.

lmao!
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Posted 10/7/08
interesting...
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i'll try to read it later
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Posted 8/14/09
it was nice.
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Posted 8/14/09
I dont feel like reading. so im just going to nod my head
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Posted 8/14/09
once Yamapi entered the story it went way too fast. if you just slowed it down a bit and added more to the plot during that period then it would have been more satisfying.
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Posted 8/14/09
uhhhmmm,...~
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Posted 8/14/09

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once Yamapi entered the story it went way too fast. if you just slowed it down a bit and added more to the plot during that period then it would have been more satisfying.


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nice avatar!! hahahah
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I enjoyed it, nice job. Like everyone else said, the ending was a bit rushed, but it was still really good. If you write more stories, I will defiantly read them.
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Posted 8/15/09 , edited 8/15/09

cutie_ea16 wrote:


Gureisu1 wrote:

once Yamapi entered the story it went way too fast. if you just slowed it down a bit and added more to the plot during that period then it would have been more satisfying.


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nice avatar!! hahahah


thanks... i like it too ^^
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