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Rookie Jojiro 6336 cr points Send Message: 18 / M / Above Wherever I... Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 10/10/08, edited 10/19/08 This is more of a "na-me" for Nirvana...that is, a draft or thumbnail. My favorite manga are Air Gear and One Piece...but the drawing style isn't similar to either. It is prolly most similar to D-Gray Man, except stripped to bare basics. This was a collab by Jojiro and tasogare101, the first 18 pages done in the span of a week. I don't think I'll be posting any more until I can get off my artist's block. read from left 2 right ~Chapter One: Newborn Seed~ Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show I apologize for the drop in quality after the first ten pages...it was such a bother to adjust contrast that I just put them up as they were scanned. ~Chapter Two: Caravan~ Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show
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sakuralockheart94 125542 cr points Send Message: 17 / F / Lost in Lonelyville Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 10/10/08 oh wow this is cool, you guys didn't do too bad of a job
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Moderator yaidoll 70653 cr points Send Message: 26 / F / in an indifferent... Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 10/10/08 Yeah, pretty good guys, I'm impresed by all the work u too did! Congrats!
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Rookie Jojiro 6336 cr points Send Message: 18 / M / Above Wherever I... Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 10/11/08 More Nirvana Art. Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show All Patsu Pics: by tasogare101 by Jojiro by Jojiro
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Rookie dmitrivalentine 13729 cr points Send Message: 22 / M / Everywhere Yet No... Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 10/12/08 very nice
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Member atelier7 1140 cr points Send Message: 25 / M Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 10/12/08 pretty cool. it was a bit cliche though. n_n
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Rookie Jojiro 6336 cr points Send Message: 18 / M / Above Wherever I... Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 10/13/08 atelier7 wrote: pretty cool. it was a bit cliche though. n_n EXTREMELY cliche, yes. But, tasogare doesn't draw non-fighting scenes, and he doesn't draw romance, and in general he's stubborn. And, for the story...it was a spur of the moment thing. We had one week to make something conclusive, so I thought, hey, let's have a villain and a thief, and the thief defeats the villain and is a hero. Gah, spouting excuses. Thanks for the comment though, atelier.
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Member atelier7 1140 cr points Send Message: 25 / M Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 10/13/08 Jojiro wrote: atelier7 wrote: pretty cool. it was a bit cliche though. n_n EXTREMELY cliche, yes. But, tasogare doesn't draw non-fighting scenes, and he doesn't draw romance, and in general he's stubborn. And, for the story...it was a spur of the moment thing. We had one week to make something conclusive, so I thought, hey, let's have a villain and a thief, and the thief defeats the villain and is a hero. Gah, spouting excuses. Thanks for the comment though, atelier. hey, at least your hero wasn't that typical. :)) the villain was, though. :))
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Moderator The_8th_Sin 8605 cr points Send Message: 20 / M / Labs, towns, citi... Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 10/13/08 atelier7 wrote: Jojiro wrote: atelier7 wrote: pretty cool. it was a bit cliche though. n_n EXTREMELY cliche, yes. But, tasogare doesn't draw non-fighting scenes, and he doesn't draw romance, and in general he's stubborn. And, for the story...it was a spur of the moment thing. We had one week to make something conclusive, so I thought, hey, let's have a villain and a thief, and the thief defeats the villain and is a hero. Gah, spouting excuses. Thanks for the comment though, atelier. hey, at least your hero wasn't that typical. :)) the villain was, though. :)) Yeah, the villain was typical in many ways, but he was also atypically cool considering his role. The whole manga looked cool, but the villain especially so. I would disagree with you about the hero, atelier; I feel that I've seen this kind of hero many times before (too close to Vash, really)
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Moderator The_8th_Sin 8605 cr points Send Message: 20 / M / Labs, towns, citi... Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 10/13/08 So, Jojiro, is it going to end here, or is it more than just a one shot?
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Rookie Jojiro 6336 cr points Send Message: 18 / M / Above Wherever I... Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 10/14/08 The_8th_Sin wrote: So, Jojiro, is it going to end here, or is it more than just a one shot? It does not end, though it has been temporarily discontinued. There are 20 more finished pages I need to upload, but that means scanning, contrasting, and cleaning up blotches...the other 20 are in even worse shape than this one.
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Member atelier7 1140 cr points Send Message: 25 / M Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 10/19/08 it looks like it'll be a breaking-the-fourth-wall type comedy. :))
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Rookie Jojiro 6336 cr points Send Message: 18 / M / Above Wherever I... Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 10/19/08 I love Mohindi...so many possibilities for failure XD. Chapter Two was made mainly for comedy, to keep my partner interested in continuing to draw the story. It's a few slides short of the desired set, but I think the progression is still follow-able. The first chapter doesn't show this as much, but Patsu lacks common sense royally. The original script for the first chapter had him breaking through the door and running through town, still with the chair tied to him. But when I showed tasogare101 that idea, he was like, "NO." and that was that. Fortunately, from the sleeping and starving in the second chapter, you can see he isn't the type to think ahead or to think logically at all.
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Rookie dmitrivalentine 13729 cr points Send Message: 22 / M / Everywhere Yet No... Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 10/19/08 im looking forward to reading it then
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Moderator Raiden_Stormstrider 6016 cr points Send Message: 18 / M Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 10/19/08, edited 10/19/08 As stated before, it looks kind off cliche. But it was fun to read. Really. Does this has some parody in it? It seemed like it for a moment.
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