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Posted 10/10/08 , edited 10/19/08
This is more of a "na-me" for Nirvana...that is, a draft or thumbnail. My favorite manga are Air Gear and One Piece...but the drawing style isn't similar to either. It is prolly most similar to D-Gray Man, except stripped to bare basics.
This was a collab by Jojiro and tasogare101, the first 18 pages done in the span of a week. I don't think I'll be posting any more until I can get off my artist's block.


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~Chapter One: Newborn Seed~


~Chapter Two: Caravan~
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Posted 10/10/08
oh wow this is cool, you guys didn't do too bad of a job
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Yeah, pretty good guys, I'm impresed by all the work u too did!
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More Nirvana Art.


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Posted 10/12/08
very nice
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Posted 10/12/08
pretty cool. it was a bit cliche though. n_n
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pretty cool. it was a bit cliche though. n_n


EXTREMELY cliche, yes. But, tasogare doesn't draw non-fighting scenes, and he doesn't draw romance, and in general he's stubborn. And, for the story...it was a spur of the moment thing. We had one week to make something conclusive, so I thought, hey, let's have a villain and a thief, and the thief defeats the villain and is a hero. Gah, spouting excuses. Thanks for the comment though, atelier.
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atelier7 wrote:

pretty cool. it was a bit cliche though. n_n


EXTREMELY cliche, yes. But, tasogare doesn't draw non-fighting scenes, and he doesn't draw romance, and in general he's stubborn. And, for the story...it was a spur of the moment thing. We had one week to make something conclusive, so I thought, hey, let's have a villain and a thief, and the thief defeats the villain and is a hero. Gah, spouting excuses. Thanks for the comment though, atelier.


hey, at least your hero wasn't that typical. :)) the villain was, though. :))
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atelier7 wrote:


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atelier7 wrote:

pretty cool. it was a bit cliche though. n_n


EXTREMELY cliche, yes. But, tasogare doesn't draw non-fighting scenes, and he doesn't draw romance, and in general he's stubborn. And, for the story...it was a spur of the moment thing. We had one week to make something conclusive, so I thought, hey, let's have a villain and a thief, and the thief defeats the villain and is a hero. Gah, spouting excuses. Thanks for the comment though, atelier.


hey, at least your hero wasn't that typical. :)) the villain was, though. :))


Yeah, the villain was typical in many ways, but he was also atypically cool considering his role. The whole manga looked cool, but the villain especially so.

I would disagree with you about the hero, atelier; I feel that I've seen this kind of hero many times before (too close to Vash, really)
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So, Jojiro, is it going to end here, or is it more than just a one shot?
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So, Jojiro, is it going to end here, or is it more than just a one shot?


It does not end, though it has been temporarily discontinued. There are 20 more finished pages I need to upload, but that means scanning, contrasting, and cleaning up blotches...the other 20 are in even worse shape than this one.
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it looks like it'll be a breaking-the-fourth-wall type comedy. :))
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I love Mohindi...so many possibilities for failure XD. Chapter Two was made mainly for comedy, to keep my partner interested in continuing to draw the story. It's a few slides short of the desired set, but I think the progression is still follow-able.

The first chapter doesn't show this as much, but Patsu lacks common sense royally. The original script for the first chapter had him breaking through the door and running through town, still with the chair tied to him. But when I showed tasogare101 that idea, he was like, "NO." and that was that.
Fortunately, from the sleeping and starving in the second chapter, you can see he isn't the type to think ahead or to think logically at all.
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im looking forward to reading it then
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As stated before, it looks kind off cliche.

But it was fun to read. Really.

Does this has some parody in it? It seemed like it for a moment.
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