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Posted 10/19/08
The storyline is based off of all those regular storylines for Shounen manga...I like to think of it not as cliche so much as following the genre. Haha, weak lol

Parody, no. Maybe we should give Patsu a straw hat or something later. Good idea. Yup.
Posted 10/20/08

Jojiro wrote:

The storyline is based off of all those regular storylines for Shounen manga...I like to think of it not as cliche so much as following the genre. Haha, weak lol

Parody, no. Maybe we should give Patsu a straw hat or something later. Good idea. Yup.


Awesome idea!

Note : My sarcasm meter is broken.
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Jojiro wrote:

I love Mohindi...so many possibilities for failure XD. Chapter Two was made mainly for comedy, to keep my partner interested in continuing to draw the story. It's a few slides short of the desired set, but I think the progression is still follow-able.

The first chapter doesn't show this as much, but Patsu lacks common sense royally. The original script for the first chapter had him breaking through the door and running through town, still with the chair tied to him. But when I showed tasogare101 that idea, he was like, "NO." and that was that.
Fortunately, from the sleeping and starving in the second chapter, you can see he isn't the type to think ahead or to think logically at all.


Second chapter is better than the first, in my opinion. Keeping it short, but I'd like you to know that I read it.
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