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hi !!

so i'm gonna update my fanfic now !!

i had a badluck ! all my files in my computer got erased !! T_T
including my fanfics too...

so sorry if i can't update the characters yet..

it got erased..>_<

here's chapter 5


Chapter 5
"savior?"



hope you liked it !!

i'm gonna update my characters soon! !

i'm just working again on the descriptions..>_<

hope you understand ne?? ^^

tnx for all those who are reading my fanfic !!
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~kyaa!
there's so many lines that I loved! like this one:


Yamapi: for me..i’ll accept her with who she is..i’ll just guide her with everything she does and maybe I can help her be better..how about you…(looks at Michiko’s name tag)..ms..miura..have you ever experienced that?


and also this~!


Aya continued to cry..Yamada realizing he has to do something put his arms around her and comforted her..
Yamada: it’s ok to cry..it will be fine..
Aya was shocked at Yamada’s words, she never thought that Yamada was that gentle..she felt comfortable at Yamada embrace and cried..


*aaawwww*
it's pretty touching ya know~
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shieLdembLem wrote:

~kyaa!
there's so many lines that I loved! like this one:


Yamapi: for me..i’ll accept her with who she is..i’ll just guide her with everything she does and maybe I can help her be better..how about you…(looks at Michiko’s name tag)..ms..miura..have you ever experienced that?


and also this~!


Aya continued to cry..Yamada realizing he has to do something put his arms around her and comforted her..
Yamada: it’s ok to cry..it will be fine..
Aya was shocked at Yamada’s words, she never thought that Yamada was that gentle..she felt comfortable at Yamada embrace and cried..


*aaawwww*
it's pretty touching ya know~



honto??!?! tnx so much !! uwaa ! tnx for reading my fic !! ^^
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honto??!?! tnx so much !! uwaa ! tnx for reading my fic !! ^^


*hehe*
the quotes in your fic where so well-written... ureshii~!
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kawaiipi-chan wrote:




honto??!?! tnx so much !! uwaa ! tnx for reading my fic !! ^^


*hehe*
the quotes in your fic where so well-written... ureshii~!



arigatou !! ^^
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shieLdembLem wrote:


kawaiipi-chan wrote:




honto??!?! tnx so much !! uwaa ! tnx for reading my fic !! ^^


*hehe*
the quotes in your fic where so well-written... ureshii~!



arigatou !! ^^


~ne ~ne, Yamada's getting gentler in here...
I hope he gets more at your nxt chapter~
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Posted 10/20/08

shieLdembLem wrote:


kawaiipi-chan wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:


kawaiipi-chan wrote:




honto??!?! tnx so much !! uwaa ! tnx for reading my fic !! ^^


*hehe*
the quotes in your fic where so well-written... ureshii~!



arigatou !! ^^


~ne ~ne, Yamada's getting gentler in here...
I hope he gets more at your nxt chapter~


haha..well let;s just see ne?? ^^

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yaay~ i like dis part!
haha...it was cute
keep up the good work
&& i'll be waiting for next part ne!
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yaay~ i like dis part!
haha...it was cute
keep up the good work
&& i'll be waiting for next part ne!


arigatou me and april-chan are working on it ! ^^
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gomen for the long wait !! here's chapter 6 !! ^^


Chapter 6
"Truth"



hope you like it !!
chapter 7 is on the way !
just editing some parts ! ^^



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omg!!
:D this chappy is interesting!!
i can't wait for the next part!
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GREAT ONE!!! I GIVE YOU 4/5 STAR...
COS I AM WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER~
ganbatte ne!~
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omg!!
:D this chappy is interesting!!
i can't wait for the next part!
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tnx ! me and april chan are working on it !
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GREAT ONE!!! I GIVE YOU 4/5 STAR...
COS I AM WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER~
ganbatte ne!~


i'm working on it april-chan !
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kawaiipi-chan wrote:


april230 wrote:

GREAT ONE!!! I GIVE YOU 4/5 STAR...
COS I AM WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER~
ganbatte ne!~


i'm working on it april-chan !


hai hai... i know~ hahas
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