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Posted 10/11/08
this is my first poem i am posting pls tell me what you feel about it. it is sort of short
thank you


since we were young
we've been in love
now i am old i dont know
what went wrong

you are so strong and bold
while i am weak and old
but at night
i steal you heart again


you see me, but
you dont know me
with my disguise you and i
are in love again

will you ever know know that you once loved me.
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21 / F / Malaysia
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Posted 11/17/08
Not bad
Posted 11/28/08
it's iight =3
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Posted 5/29/09
cute poem, watch your spelling though
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