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uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
hahah u posted it!!!
kyaaaa!!!
ne ne ne can i be here??
you know who- i like ne??
hahahaha ja ne!! cantwait for next chappi jessee chan!!!
galingan mu ha :P




thanks!!
you can be Hibiki..


eeeehhh

bakit?? bakit si ryosuke??
diba si... daiki??

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:D hsj-chaaaaaaaan!!
whee! i like dis!
can i be hibiki??


You're now Yuji..
is that okay?? ^-^
since Yuji is also an unknown character..
someone must take the part too ne?? xDD
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hsj9392 wrote:


deen22 wrote:

uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
hahah u posted it!!!
kyaaaa!!!
ne ne ne can i be here??
you know who- i like ne??
hahahaha ja ne!! cantwait for next chappi jessee chan!!!
galingan mu ha :P




thanks!!
you can be Hibiki..


eeeehhh

bakit?? bakit si ryosuke??
diba si... daiki??




i dunno kung may part c daiki d2 eh la p ko naiisip s kanya..
and secret muna kung cnu tlga ung partners..
haha
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hsj9392 wrote:


deen22 wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:


deen22 wrote:

uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
hahah u posted it!!!
kyaaaa!!!
ne ne ne can i be here??
you know who- i like ne??
hahahaha ja ne!! cantwait for next chappi jessee chan!!!
galingan mu ha :P




thanks!!
you can be Hibiki..


eeeehhh

bakit?? bakit si ryosuke??
diba si... daiki??




i dunno kung may part c daiki d2 eh la p ko naiisip s kanya..
and secret muna kung cnu tlga ung partners..
haha



hahaha ganun ba
okiess

haha il leave it to you!! ^_^
atleast im in this fic hahaha
ilove fics like these!! mysteries / detective like
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hsj9392 wrote:


deen22 wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:


deen22 wrote:

uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
hahah u posted it!!!
kyaaaa!!!
ne ne ne can i be here??
you know who- i like ne??
hahahaha ja ne!! cantwait for next chappi jessee chan!!!
galingan mu ha :P




thanks!!
you can be Hibiki..


eeeehhh

bakit?? bakit si ryosuke??
diba si... daiki??




i dunno kung may part c daiki d2 eh la p ko naiisip s kanya..
and secret muna kung cnu tlga ung partners..
haha



hahaha ganun ba
okiess

haha il leave it to you!! ^_^
atleast im in this fic hahaha
ilove fics like these!! mysteries / detective like



thanks deen-chan!!
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kyaaa!!!
can i be in it? .. onegaishimasu?? ..
can i be Kawazaki Stacey ..
or even Hirohata Ayumi?? ..
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Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:

:D hsj-chaaaaaaaan!!
whee! i like dis!
can i be hibiki??


You're now Yuji..
is that okay?? ^-^
since Yuji is also an unknown character..
someone must take the part too ne?? xDD


okie lol :] thanx!
at least i'm in the fic, ne?
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kyaaa!!!
can i be in it? .. onegaishimasu?? ..
can i be Kawazaki Stacey ..
or even Hirohata Ayumi?? ..



Who among Stacey and Ayumi??
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cool !!!! i cnt wait to read the 1st chapter !!! ^_^
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wow~ hehe cool fic~
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ano...just wondering btw...have u guys picked the winner yet?? for the one shot fic??
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ano...just wondering btw...have u guys picked the winner yet?? for the one shot fic??


Yup..
but until now I'm still waiting for the prizes..
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sorry..
we all have been busy lately..
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cool !!!! i cnt wait to read the 1st chapter !!! ^_^


thanks for reading!!
I'm posting the 1st chapter!! ^-^
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Chapter One: The Untold Story

[Opening Theme: Run Run Run bu HIGH AND MIGHTY COLOR]

[Hibiki’s POV]

“Oto-san! Don’t leave me!"

I hugged him so tight as if I never want to let go. It was the most painful experience I’ve ever had in my life. As I whisk my soft hand gently on his face, and the more I look at his pale lifeless body, my heart hurts more and more. It feels like it’s going to explode!

“Now I am alone, how could I live? Who will take care of me? I can’t do this! I’m hopeless! How could life be so cruel?"

Those were the things running in my mind at the moment of my father’s death. It’s strange how they suddenly left me. I never once thought that I will end up alone. My name is Fujimoto Hibiki, 14 years old, a simple girl with a simple life. My mother abandoned me when I was still 8 months old. And after almost 14 years, my father passed away.

As I was preparing for my father’s funeral, I accidentally dropped a thick old book. It was all dusty; therefore, I carried the book only with the tip of my fingers to put it back in place. Because it was too heavy, it slipped on my fingers, but this time, letters scattered coming from the pages of the dirty book. To my curiosity, I didn’t mind reading it. Besides, I thought no one would nag me since my father’s already gone. Some were unsent love letters while some were electric bills. But as I read more, I saw this strange letter saying:


“Dear Fujiko,

I know it had been tough for you and our boy and girl twins when I left Harajuku. I did that because I can’t take it when Harajukans gossip about me. I’m like the ugliest man in Harajuku! Because of that, I’ve become more and more insecure. I moved to this peaceful place, Nagoya, and lived normally with normal people. It had been tough for me too because I first worked here as a school janitor. But I thought I’d rather live in this small world than be discriminated and pushed away in your world!

Don’t you find it awkward when we walk together? All people suddenly stare at us saying, “This guy is so lucky!” “How could the queen like this ugly man?” “He should be imprisoned for trespassing out perfect lives!” It’s so painful when I hear those! And if I were to stay longer, I would definitely get insane!

So here I am, lying on my bed, suffering from cancer. I’m just waiting for the death god to take me. But I’m holding on as much as I could because I don’t want to leave my 14 year old daughter named Hibiki. Yes, she is the twins’ half sister. And if I die, all I ask of you is to take her there. Onegai?

I just want to say that I miss you so much and I hope Yuji and Fuji are doing well. I am really sorry for leaving you three. Always remember that I love you and will always love you, my sweetheart.

Love,
Fujimoto Satoshi”


I read it tons of times trying to understand what my father meant on the letter. I’m not sure but it seems like I still have got siblings, and they are twins! Moreover, if I will be able to find them, I will no longer be alone! Those facts pushed me into trouble of looking for them.

After my father’s funeral, I immediately packed my clothes and prepared everything for the long journey.

@ The market place:

Hibiki: Now where will I go? *sees an old woman* *comes near the old woman*

Old woman: *stares at Hibiki* what is it you like? apples? strawberries?

Hibiki: Sumimasen, demo I’m not going to buy fruits.

Old woman: Then what is it you like?

Hibiki: Ne, do you know where Harajuku is?

Old woman: Harajuku? Of course I do! I used to live there when I was so young and pretty! *sighs* I miss the good old days...

Hibiki: So, where is it?

Old woman: You have to ride a plane to get there!

Hibiki: Eh? Seriously?

Old woman: You can take to train too but you’ll spend 2 days on the road before you reach Harajuku...

Hibiki: ha? That must be so far!

Old woman: Hai!

Hibiki: Thanks a lot! Ne, I have to go. Jaa!


I headed to Nagoya Train Station. And to my surprise:

Hibiki: ¥ 150,000? Damn it! It’s too expensive! I can’t possibly have that much money! *scratches her head*

Gothic Wannabe: Are you going to Harajuku?

Hibiki: I was supposed to but I can’t afford it! *sobs*

Gothic Wannabe: Too bad for you, then. By the way, what’s your name?

Hibiki: Hibiki... Fujimoto Hibiki desu!

Gothic Wannabe: Fu... Fujimoto? Seriously?

Hibiki: Why, did I do anything wrong?

Gothic Wannabe: Iie, demo how are you related to Fujimoto Yuji?

Hibiki: Yuji? *brings out the letter* Based on this letter, I am Yuji’s half-sister. Chotto... you know Yuji?

Gothic Wannabe: *evil smile* If I will be able to send her to Harajuku, then I will get the chance to meet Yuji! *says to herself*

Hibiki: Ne, what are you murmuring about?

Gothic Wannabe: Eto, let’s go to Harajuku together!

Hibiki: As I said, I can’t afford to go there...

Gothic Wannabe: Don’t worry; I’ll pay for your transpo. What do ya think?

Hibiki: Fo...for free??

Gothic Wannabe: Hai! *evil laugh*

Hibiki: For real?

Gothic Wannabe: Yes! For real!

Hibiki: Oh my Goth! Thanks!



[Yuji’s POV]

Everytime I sit on my throne, which then belongs to my mother, Fujiko, I can’t help but think about the past. I always look back to the time when my father, Satoshi, left us. He had caused so much damage in our once perfect lives. He made us miserable! He ruined everything!

My mother loved him so much. That’s why when he left us, mom followed him and brought with her my twin Fuji. Ten years have passed but there’s still no sign of mom and Fuji. Because of her long absence, many wannabe’s invaded Harajuku! I was the only one in charge of the empire, who was just 11 year old then; therefore, I wasn’t able to do anything to stop the wannabes! But as I turned 12, I realized that I must do something as the only successor.

I ordered the “machos” (that’s what they call their soldiers) to put away all the wannabes. And if they insist to stay, they will be put to jail! I’ve fixed everything in Harajuku but I still don’t know where mom and my twin is... I tried to look for them, but everytime I step out of Harajuku, I just lose my breath! Especially when I see wannabes surrounding me! For that reason, I stopped searching. And besides, they might be dead by now since they stayed too much out of Harajuku.

As the only successor, I have to be tough for the Harajukans! I promised to protect them from wannabes. My heart hardened like a stone. All I felt was hatred and anger for non-Harajukans! I’ve gone stronger and stronger as I grow. I’ve learned to be heartless and be insensitive. The hardships I’ve gone through helped me to be tough! That’s why everyone looks up to me!

*hears a knock*

???: Master, it’s time to eat!

[Closing Theme: Dreams by HIGH AND MIGHTY COLOR]


End of Chapter One
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kyaaa!!!
can i be in it? .. onegaishimasu?? ..
can i be Kawazaki Stacey ..
or even Hirohata Ayumi?? ..


Umh..
you're now Stacey!! ^-^
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