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hsj-chan! still remember me? e-to, gomen for being inactive eh. we had tons of school works

anyway, your fanfic is too awesome! the title really caught my attention (since i love harajuku too xD) and nice plot and chapter one! im looking forward to the next one.^^ anou, i wanted to be a character but then i saw that there's nothing left for me again demo, it's fine.^^



Of course I remember you!! ^-^
if I'm not mistaken.. we talked about UPCAT!!
xDD ^-^

btw..
thanks for the comment!!
it's awesome you love Harajuku!! ^-^
and.. don't worry..
I'll reserve an additional character for you!! xDD


hai hai~ we talked about UPCAT!haha
im glad you remembered it

haha yeah, coz harajuku is really kakkoi ne?
in fact im about to buy a harajuku lovers sneakers,haha x)
sou? arigatou hsj-chan for reserving one for me! yatta~ ^^
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Posted 10/14/08

hsj9392 wrote:


nerii-chan wrote:

hsj-chan! still remember me? e-to, gomen for being inactive eh. we had tons of school works

anyway, your fanfic is too awesome! the title really caught my attention (since i love harajuku too xD) and nice plot and chapter one! im looking forward to the next one.^^ anou, i wanted to be a character but then i saw that there's nothing left for me again demo, it's fine.^^


and don't worry..
all of us have been busy lately.. ^-^


haha yeah agree.
school works are really annoying and tiring =.=
ohw and we'll have our quarterly exams from tom until friday so i won't be online that much ><
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nerii-chan wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:


nerii-chan wrote:

hsj-chan! still remember me? e-to, gomen for being inactive eh. we had tons of school works

anyway, your fanfic is too awesome! the title really caught my attention (since i love harajuku too xD) and nice plot and chapter one! im looking forward to the next one.^^ anou, i wanted to be a character but then i saw that there's nothing left for me again demo, it's fine.^^


and don't worry..
all of us have been busy lately.. ^-^


haha yeah agree.
school works are really annoying and tiring =.=
ohw and we'll have our quarterly exams from tom until friday so i won't be online that much ><



Oh ok then..
talk to you after ur exams!!
good luck!! ^-^
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ohh!! whee~~ i liked this chapter!! It was...how you say? cool lol
but..so sad that her dad died...same age as when my dad died.. O__O woah..sugoi~~ xD
lols...well anyway!
can't wait for next chapter!!!
<3 it!
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ohh!! whee~~ i liked this chapter!! It was...how you say? cool lol
but..so sad that her dad died...same age as when my dad died.. O__O woah..sugoi~~ xD
lols...well anyway!
can't wait for next chapter!!!
<3 it!



thanks!! ^-^
I'm working on the next chapter!! xDD
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Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:

ohh!! whee~~ i liked this chapter!! It was...how you say? cool lol
but..so sad that her dad died...same age as when my dad died.. O__O woah..sugoi~~ xD
lols...well anyway!
can't wait for next chapter!!!
<3 it!



thanks!! ^-^
I'm working on the next chapter!! xDD


ohh! yay!
ganbare~!
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hsj9392 wrote:


Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:

ohh!! whee~~ i liked this chapter!! It was...how you say? cool lol
but..so sad that her dad died...same age as when my dad died.. O__O woah..sugoi~~ xD
lols...well anyway!
can't wait for next chapter!!!
<3 it!



thanks!! ^-^
I'm working on the next chapter!! xDD


ohh! yay!
ganbare~!




thanks!!
and thanks for being so active!! ^-^
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hsj9392 wrote:


Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:


Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:

ohh!! whee~~ i liked this chapter!! It was...how you say? cool lol
but..so sad that her dad died...same age as when my dad died.. O__O woah..sugoi~~ xD
lols...well anyway!
can't wait for next chapter!!!
<3 it!



thanks!! ^-^
I'm working on the next chapter!! xDD


ohh! yay!
ganbare~!




thanks!!
and thanks for being so active!! ^-^


lol!
no biggy i just love reading these fanfics!
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hehe..
thanks again!!
im working on the next chapter now..
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hsj9392 wrote:


nerii-chan wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:


nerii-chan wrote:

hsj-chan! still remember me? e-to, gomen for being inactive eh. we had tons of school works

anyway, your fanfic is too awesome! the title really caught my attention (since i love harajuku too xD) and nice plot and chapter one! im looking forward to the next one.^^ anou, i wanted to be a character but then i saw that there's nothing left for me again demo, it's fine.^^


and don't worry..
all of us have been busy lately.. ^-^


haha yeah agree.
school works are really annoying and tiring =.=
ohw and we'll have our quarterly exams from tom until friday so i won't be online that much ><



Oh ok then..
talk to you after ur exams!!
good luck!! ^-^


hsj-chan im back! gah~ exams killed me
e-tto, looking forward to the next part. ganbatte.^^
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nerii-chan wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:


nerii-chan wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:


nerii-chan wrote:

hsj-chan! still remember me? e-to, gomen for being inactive eh. we had tons of school works

anyway, your fanfic is too awesome! the title really caught my attention (since i love harajuku too xD) and nice plot and chapter one! im looking forward to the next one.^^ anou, i wanted to be a character but then i saw that there's nothing left for me again demo, it's fine.^^


and don't worry..
all of us have been busy lately.. ^-^


haha yeah agree.
school works are really annoying and tiring =.=
ohw and we'll have our quarterly exams from tom until friday so i won't be online that much ><



Oh ok then..
talk to you after ur exams!!
good luck!! ^-^


hsj-chan im back! gah~ exams killed me
e-tto, looking forward to the next part. ganbatte.^^



hai!!
I'm working on it!! ^-^
thanks for the support!!

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Chapter Two: An Unpleasant Welcome



Recall on the previous chapter:
*hears a knock*
???: Master, it’s time to eat!


[Opening Theme: Run Run Run by HIGH AND MIGHTY COLOR]

Yuji: Rose Anne?

Rose Anne: Hai, Yuji-sama!

Yuji: Hold on, just wait for me in the dining hall, ne?

Rose Anne: Yes, Master!


@ Harajuku Station:


Gothic Wannabe: We’re here at last!

Hibiki: Su..sugoiiiiii! *amazed*

Gothic Wannabe: It’s nothing compared to the inside of Harajuku! *proud face*

Hibiki: Honto? You mean.. we’re not yet inside Harajuku?

Gothic Wannabe: Hai! Oh, there’s the passage way!

Hibiki: I can’t wait to enter! Let’s go! *excited*

Gothic Wannabe & Hibiki: *enters the passage way*

Censor: *scans the Gothic Wannabe* Wannabe alert!

Gothic Wannabe: What?

Hibiki: Eh? *freaks out*

Macho 1: Let’s get her out!

Macho 2: Hai! *grabs the Gothic Wannabe*

Hibiki: Chotto!

Gothic Wannabe: Help me!

Hibiki: Stop it! You shouldn’t treat people like that!

Macho 1: *pushes Hibiki* Do you want me to send you away before the censor declares that you’re a wannabe? *evil face*

Macho 1 & 2: *carries the Gothic Wannabe out*

Gothic Wannabe: Noooooooooooooooo!

Hibiki: *pissed* Don’t worry! I’ll soon get all wannabes to have freedom to live in Harajuku! *lets the censor scan her*

Censor: Clear! Welcome Harajukan!

Hibiki: Ho..honto? *enters Harajuku*

Macho 3: Chotto matte! Something must be wrong with the censor! *holds Hibiki*

Hibiki: Eh? But it can’t be wrong! I’m no wannabe!

Macho 4: No! Just stay here for a while! *checks what’s wrong with the censor*

Hibiki: *puppy eyes* I just want to see my brother!

Macho 3: Nooo! Not the puppy eyes!

Macho 4: *still checking out the censor* I don’t know what its problem is... Eh? Where’s the kid?

Macho 3: I lost control of her! She did the puppy eyes! *crazy looking*

Macho 4: *bashes Macho 3* You idiot! How could you fall for that puppy eye thingy?

Macho 3: It’s irresistible! If only you’ve seen it...


Inside Harajuku:


Hibiki: OMGosh! She’s right! The station is nothing compared to the inside of Harajuku! It’s so awesome!


She ran as if she had been freed from many years of imprisonment. Everybody stared at her. They were disgusted by what she was wearing; A green shirt with lots of patches, a green long old skirt, a pair of green sneakers, with matching bright green bag. She heard murmurs and laughs, “Ew! Look what she’s wearing!” “She looks hilarious!” “Let’s call the machos! She’s freaky!” Yet, she didn’t care. She continued doing what she wanted to do. She did forget about her first priority in going to Harajuku. Suddenly:


???: *boom* Ouch!

Hibiki: Gomen!

???: You stupid! Don’t you know who I am?

Hibiki: Umh.. not!

???: *breathes deep*

Gossiper: OMGosh! Respect Kawazaki-san!

Stacey: You heard it?

Hibiki: Kawazaki-san? *bows* Gomen! I’m new here!

Stacey: Ugh! Move over!

Hibiki: *moves away*

Stacey: Never block my way, stupid kid! *walks away*


Hibiki: How could she act like that! *pissed* This maybe is a perfect place but the people here are.. ugh! Ne.. why am I here anyway? *wonders* OMGosh! I have to look for my siblings and for.. Fujiko-san! *runs near the girls*


Girl 1: Ew! Stay away from me!

Hibiki: Umh.. I’ll just ask something..

Girl 2: Go ahead. What is it?

Hibiki: Umh.. do you know where the Fujimotos live here?

Girl 3: Of course we do! What do you need from Yuji-sama?

Hibiki: Eto.. I’m Fujimoto Hibiki.. I believe Yuji’s my sibling! *smiles*

Girl 1: Oh come on, that couldn’t be possible!

Hibiki: I’m telling the truth!

Girl 2: Can you show us a proof?

Hibiki: Here’s my ID!

Girls: *looks at the ID*

Girl 3: Ne, nice ID you’ve got! But we have a Fujimoto ID too!

Girls: *show their IDs*

Hibiki: Fujimoto Saki.. Fujimoto Yumi.. Fujimoto Kumiko.. Eh? All your surnames are Fujimoto? *shocked*

Girl 2: It’s not so.. but because we belong to the Fujimoto Yuji Fans Club, we’ve decided to make this Fujimoto ID with our names after Fujimoto!

Hibiki: But.. for what reason?

Girl 1: To make us look like married to Yuji-sama! *daydreams*

Hibiki: Ehhhhh?

Girl 3: So.. where did you get that ID?

Hibiki: *whines* This is my school ID!

Girl 2: Oh by the way.. Yuji-sama lives over there! *points at the Harajuku Empire*

Hibiki: *eyes wide open* Seriously? OMGosh! I’m rich! Thanks everyone for your help! *run towards the empire*

Girl 3: Do you think she’s telling the truth?

Girl 1: Of course not! She’s just desperate to meet Yuji-sama!

Girl 2: I don’t know.. but somehow her eyes are pretty similar to Yuji’s.. have you seen the color? It’s green! *smiles*

Girl 1 & 3: Ehhhhh?


And so Hibiki went to the empire. Everything was doing well but when she was about to enter, she saw the machos everywhere! There were like hundreds and thousands of them! She lost hope of meeting the Fujimoto until the machos opened the gate for the limousine to enter. She entered as the limousine entered. She sneaked inside the palace as the machos were busy welcoming the little dude wearing a mask that went out of the green limousine.


@ the Palace:

Hibiki: Phew.. I didn’t know it would be this hard to enter here! *hears footsteps* *hides* OMGosh! She’s so pretty! And her dress is like for dolls! *murmurs*

Rose Anne: *hears Hibiki murmuring* *looks at Hibiki*

Hibiki: *covers her mouth* *shocked*

Rose Anne: Konnichiwa! *smiles*

Hibiki: Ehe? Konnichiwa..

Rose Anne: *walks away*

Hibiki: And.. she’s nice! *explores the palace* *sees another dolly* Ne.. You’re here again?

???: Do I know you?

Hibiki: But.. You just said “konnichiwa” to me a while ago.

???: It’s must be Rose Anne.. She’s always so nice.

Hibiki: And.. you are?

???: I’m Mary Jane!

Hibiki: ...

Mary Jane: The mean one! *evil laugh* What are you doing here anyway?

Hibiki: *shaking* I.. I want to see and meet the Fujimotos..

Mary Jane: So you sneaked through?

Hibiki: E.. kinda like it..

Mary Jane: I know what to do!

Hibiki: What is it?

Mary Jane: I’m going to tell on you!

Hibiki: No please! I need to meet them!

Mary Jane: Them?

Hibiki: The Fujimotos!

Mary Jane: You mean with the “S”?

Hibiki: Hai?

Mary Jane: Silly.. It’s only Master Yuji who’s here..

Hibiki: Then.. I need to meet Yuji!

Mary Jane: Like I said earlier.. I’m mean.. too bad I can but I don’t want to help you with that! And fan girls aren’t allowed inside the palace.. so I’m calling the machos! *smiles*

Hibiki: No! *runs away*

Mary Jane: Ne, that kid is so easy to trick! *laughs*


She ran as fast as she could. She freaked out because anywhere she goes; she sees the dollies walking which all look the same with different puffy outfits. She had no idea where to go. She felt safe when she luckily found a room with all the lights closed.


Hibiki: *catches her breath* *lights opened*

Dollies: Konnichiwa!

Hibiki: *sees hundreds of dollies* *cries* *runs out of the room*

Dollies: Eh? *laughs*


Hibiki was so lost! She didn’t know that she would have so much difficulty in looking for the Fujimotos. She thought she was lucky enough to get to Harajuku. But it’s far more difficult to get to meet the Fujimotos. At that same moment, Yuji was heading to the dining hall. When suddenly:


???: *crash* Itai!

Hibiki: Honto ni gomenasai! *bows*

???: How dare you do this to me!

Hibiki: *looks up* *stunned* Are you.. Fujimoto Yuji?

Yuji: What do you think?

Hibiki: You’re such a pretty boy! *brings out the letter*

Yuji: What are you doing here in my palace?

Hibiki: Ano.. here.. I need you to see this! *shows the letter*

Yuji: I have no time for that! Dollies! Put her to jail!

Hibiki: Chotto! Noooooooooo!

Dollies: *grabs Hibiki* *walks out*

???: Ne, what happened?

Yuji: A fan girl sneaked through..

???: *sees a paper on the floor* *picks up the paper* *reads the letter* Eh?

Yuji: Why? What is it?

???: Is this letter from the fan girl?

Yuji: Hai.. why?

???: Here.. read it!

Yuji: *reads the letter* *shocked* Ryo-chan.. do you think it’s real?

Ryosuke: I don’t know but it sounds like it! Why don’t you ask her?

Yuji: Then.. I have to get her back!

Ryosuke: Hai.. *angelic smile*

[Closing Theme: Dreams by HIGH AND MIGHTY COLOR]


End of Chapter Two


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:O lols. I laughed at her clothes. it's all green. XD even her eyes. XD haha!

aww... I pity her. She's lost. :O and she's surrounded by dollies.
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:O lols. I laughed at her clothes. it's all green. XD even her eyes. XD haha!

aww... I pity her. She's lost. :O and she's surrounded by dollies. :(


thanks!!
haha!!
yah..
green all over!! xDD ^-^
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~kyaa!
finaLLy! someone likes the color green toO~! *haha!*
I thought I was the only one that Loves green...
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