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Posted 10/11/08 , edited 10/11/08
Well, It's obvious what this thread is about.. Poems and Songs OBVIOUSLY.. Write one at random and post it up, and have other people criticize it..
Make sure you post whether it's a song or a poem

I thought of it within 5 minutes.. At random..

Song:
Don't do
what you always do.

You're a virgin,
and you know it too.

You think it's straight
when you masturbate,

but in the end my friend;

You're being gay with yourself.
Posted 10/11/08
Song;

tralala tralala

im a happy boy tralala

(repeat)

tralala tralala

im a good boy tralala

(repeat)
Posted 10/12/08
Insanity is my friend,
but logic is there to slap me.

Sometimes I dodge,
most times there are marks.
-- Though I'd gladly return the gesture.
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Posted 10/12/08
A cat sat on a mat
It wore a hat
It was fat
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Posted 10/12/08

SixthSpade wrote:

Well, It's obvious what this thread is about.. Poems and Songs OBVIOUSLY.. Write one at random and post it up, and have other people criticize it..
Make sure you post whether it's a song or a poem

I thought of it within 5 minutes.. At random..

Song:
Don't do
what you always do.

You're a virgin,
and you know it too.

You think it's straight
when you masturbate,

but in the end my friend;

You're being gay with yourself.


haha!Fun!XD
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Posted 10/12/08
Roses are red
Violets are... pink...
Flowers smell good
but you sure stink



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Posted 10/12/08
"Telegram for the Masked Marauder!"


DRO1 wrote:

Roses are red
Violets are... pink...
Flowers smell good
but you sure stink






"I sure.... what?"
"STINK, YOU FOOL! STINK!"
"*gasps* That was the Masked Marauder!"

I love Bugs Bunny. The roses are red, violets are pink scene was epic.
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Posted 10/12/08
You guys know I made that song as a joke but you can put up serious songs and poems as well..
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Posted 10/12/08 , edited 10/12/08

h4x0rz wrote:

"Telegram for the Masked Marauder!"


DRO1 wrote:

Roses are red
Violets are... pink...
Flowers smell good
but you sure stink






"I sure.... what?"
"STINK, YOU FOOL! STINK!"
"*gasps* That was the Masked Marauder!"

I love Bugs Bunny. The roses are red, violets are pink scene was epic.


Yeah it was fucking great. I was wondering if anyone was gonna get that. Yeah I totally plagiarized.
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Posted 10/12/08

DRO1 wrote:


Yeah it was fucking great. I was wondering if anyone was gonna get that. Yeah I totally plagiarized.


I had that on VHS, on my dad's ''50 years of Tom and Jerry'' tape. I watched that thing everyday after school.
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Posted 10/12/08 , edited 10/12/08
This hand i extend.

what i need is simple yet complicate
the voice that sooth my pains and headaches
the touch that make my body yearn to embrace
the love that burn my heart yet give me shades
through the fire and storm that raging in my mind
in the darkness and pain for you i cry.

my tears fell for all the happiness you brought me
on my hands and knees i beg for forgiveness
my tears fell for all the pain i caused her
guilt chained my soul, my body lifeless.

your presence sheltered me from the chaos of an existence
sweet sounds of freedom she offered ensnared my mind
following your voice i blindly stepped forward with determination
straining my eyes to look for you, the beacon of light shining bright
only to find out that the hurricane didn't past
for i was only in the eye of the storm this happiness i know couldn't last.

reaching out for her touch knowing i could never feel
screaming her name when i know she could never hear
trying to build a love that i know could never be real
longing to hold her in my arms, while knowing she's never near.

your lips grant me sweet air yet leave me breathless slowly i die
your fingertips so gentle but cut deeper than the sharpest knife
her love so cruel happiness came at a high price to pay
you gave me wings yet chained me down
shacked by her memories on the ground i lay
in my blood and tears, for her i waited
but deep in my soul, knowing i'll be better left unfound.

what's the use of a heart when i can't love
what's the use of a body when i can't move
what's the use of wings when i can't fly
what's the use of us when i can't be with you.

my heart enclosed in your matrix with no tomorrow
time's running out for us with none left to borrow
memories of our sweet embraces refused to falter
hopes of a future with her please never alter
the sound of your heart beating ever softly
caressing your cheek fingertips meeting so lovely
to see you in your white gown I’ll trade the world for
slipping this ring on the delicate finger of yours
waking up every morning on my bed i lie
confused to why there's tears on these eyes.

aftermath~

your tears fell, so silently it thundered through me
the end is here memories passed and frozen in time
breaking off rusty chains slowly i went on my knees
breathe in the sweet air deeply feeling so sublime
i loved her, she loved me, no need for any pain & sorrow
looking forward we each head to our own tomorrow
"forget about me" i said, "this is where we part hands"
"heartaches will fade away, like footprints in the sand"
kissed away her tears one last time i whisper my goodbye
"you're a part of me always, even if someone better will stand by your side".

our love come and goes I’m happy our lives touched
even just for an instant cherish this chapter of our lives we must
turning the sheets over we headed our separate ways
eager to start writing and fill up these blank pages
let the ink running down your pens guide you to a new beginning
you'll touch others' lives love will blossom unexpecting
when things get tough this hand will always be extend
never forget about us, i'll always be here, with love, til..

...the end.
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Posted 10/13/08

h4x0rz wrote:
I had that on VHS, on my dad's ''50 years of Tom and Jerry'' tape. I watched that thing everyday after school. :P


Yeah? Well this one's funnier.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iGD6nYQpc6c
Posted 10/13/08
mary had a little lamb little lamb
little lamb
mary had a little lamb its feet was black as charcoal
everytime it jumps the fence you can see its lil black asshole


lol my friend sang that to me

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Posted 10/13/08

DRO1 wrote:


h4x0rz wrote:
I had that on VHS, on my dad's ''50 years of Tom and Jerry'' tape. I watched that thing everyday after school. :P


Yeah? Well this one's funnier.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iGD6nYQpc6c


I laughed so fuckin' hard just now.
"Look me up at my Gettysburg address."
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Posted 10/13/08
"Pill in The Morning"
I woke up this morning
I took a pill
thought it would be fine and my day would be great
But now I'm annoyed
I got a pill in my throat
I feel like shit
I think I'm gonna puke
This fucking sucks
Id rather I got hit in the nuts.
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