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[fan-fiction]I'll never be the same again.
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Here's a fan-fiction made by me =D(you can call me Sakura or whatever..)
I'm pretty bad at writing stories. So please, don't put any rude comments.(Ex.You should stop writing! This is the worst fan-fictions ever! I'm wasting my time reading this!) If you are gonna bash me: just stop reading it and wasting your time commenting!
If you want to give advice, feel free. I'm gonna need some help every now and then.(Ex. You could've made that character more angrier. You could have put in a little twist in it.)
If any of the characters aren't my ideas: I'll put the name of the user and give them credit.
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Here's part 1!

Episode 1-My true would-be-self~♥~

I woke up and stretched a little. As I got out of bed I wondered, "Will I meet anybody? Make new friends?" I brushed my teeth and combed my brown hair. I made a little braid on the side and tied it into a pony-tail. I put on my Seiyo Academy uniform and walked downstairs to the kitchen. I smiled as I saw my mom, who was washing dishes. "Morning mom." She smiled. "Good morning Sa-chan." I pouted a little because I was tired of her calling me 'Sa-chan' which meant 'Little-chan.'(I think..) "Mom! I'm in 7th grade! I'm not little anymore!" "Your still little to me and always will be. I sat down and started eating a bagel with cream cheese. Then, I walked out the door, while saying good-bey. As I got to the gate I bumped into somebody, my stuff fell to the floor and I was on the ground. The person turned around. It was a girl. Her hair was pink with a black cross hair clip. "Oh, I'm sorry. Are you okay?" She reached out her hand. I nodded and took her hand. She pulled me up. I grabbed my backpack. She started walking to the door. I followed her. As we were walking, I heard whispering from other students. "Look! Joker's chair! Hinamori-san!" "Yeah, the fifth member of the guardians!" I was surprised. "Guardians? Joker's chair?" She turned around, slowed down so we were walking side by side and nodded at me. "Hinamori Amu." I was still in awe. "F-Fuskishi S-Sakura." Amu smiled. "It's nice to meet you Sakura-chan. What class are you in?" "U-Um... 7th grade star." "Me too. Looks like were classmates." I nodded. The bell rang and we took our seats. I was sitting next to the window, while Amu was beside me.

~~~Episode 1 will be continued~~~~
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(Here's a picture of Sakura: (She's me in anime form!!!)
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~~~Episode 1, part 2~~♥~~

The teacher asked us to introduce our selves. Amu was first. She stood up. "Hello. Hinamori Amu. Guardian, Joker's chair." I looked at her. I swear I saw a heart clip in her hair! I must've been dreaming. The teacher called my name. "Fuskishi-san." "H-Hai." I stood up. "F-Fuskishi S-Sakura. Please treat me well." I made a little bow and sat down. I sighed in relief, I got that over with. I turned to the window. "Amu-chan..." The lunch bell rang. We walked to the other side of school. I looked up. There was a boy wearing high school's uniform, he had ears and a tail. "Oy, Amu. Is this your new friend?" He jumped down before us. "Ikuto!" "Ikuto?" I pointed at him. "You mean this cosplayer?" He looked annoyed. "I'm not a cosplayer! These are real!" Amu sighed, not knowing what to tell me. "Why don't you go back to school?" Ikuto walked closer to Amu. "What? I'm not allowed to see you?" Amu blushed. Watching everything, I blinked. "Does Amu-chan have feelings for Ikuto-kun?" "Too close!" She pushed him back. Then he whispered something in her ear, but I couldn't hear it. "I feel a strong heart's egg from her." "Just go." "Fine." He jumped on the roof and left. I stared, watching him leave. I turned to Amu, who was still a little pink. "Amu-chan? Do you have feelings for Ikuto-kun?" The bell rang. "Well, let's go back to class." I nodded and followed her. We had gym class. The teacher asked us to run laps. After my second time, I was already tired. Amu was beside me, not even breathing hard at all. I looked at her. The heart was in her hair again! We stopped to get a drink. When I turned to her again, the heart wasn't there anymore! "I must be daydreaming. There's no way she could have changed hair clips without even taking them off. School was over. Amu went to her guardian meeting. I walked home by myself and sighed. "Amu gets milk and cookies while I have to make dinner myself." I got home, made dinner and ate it. When was I done, I took a bath. The warm water felt pretty good.
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~~~Episode 1 part 3~~♥~~

I came out of the bath.(dressed) I went in my room to watch some t.v. It was about a girl who could do anything she wanted. "She kinda reminds me of Amu-chan... I want to be somebody. Sing the songs I want to sing, Be whatever I can be..." After a while, I went to sleep. Hoping I could have that chance.

Episode 2 will come soon~~~
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~~♥~~Episode 2~~♥~~
Ahh! A guardian chara?!"


Ring Ring

I reached out my hand and shut my alarm off. My eyes were still sleepy as I slowly got out of bed. My foot hit something. I turned to see what it was, there was an egg with a red ruby on it. I kneeled down and poked it. It was still warm. "Don't tell me... I made that?!" I went into the bathroom, washed my face, brushed my teeth and combed my hair. I put on my uniform and a white headband in my hair.(which was let loose) Then I went into my room and put the egg into my backpack. "Sakura! Come and eat!" "Okay mom!" I ran downstairs into the kitchen, put my backpack on the floor and started to eat. I checked my watch and ran out the door. "Bey mom!" "Bey Sakura!"

When I got to the gate I saw Amu and a boy with blond hair. "I wonder who she's talking to? He looks cute!" I walked to them and waved. "Hi Amu-chan!" They both turned around. "Hi Sakura-chan." The boy smiled. "So this is the Sakura you were talking about." Amu nodded. "I'm Hotori Tadase. Guardian, King's Chair." "Fuskishi Sakura." "He's so cute! Ouji-sama!" I heard little voices. "I feel an egg," said a little voice. "Huh? Did you heard a little voice?" Amu grabbed something and the air and shoved it in her bag. "I-It's nothing. Just your imagination." "Ohhhh okay." "Gah! I can't find anything to say!" I felt something in my bag wiggle. I opened it and it almost flew away, but I caught it just in time. As I held it in my hands Tadase and Amu stared at it. "A-Amu-chan d-do you know what this is? I found it near my bed when I woke up." Amu nodded and four little figures came out of Amu's bag and another from Tadase's. All 5 of them flew to my egg. "It seems like a strong one," said the king-looking one. The blue one nodded. "Yeah, it does." I was in shock. "A-Are you guys little fairies?!" Amu and Tadase sweatdropped. "U-Um.. Sakura-chan, I'll explain everything to you." The bell rang and we all walked to class.

episode 2 will be continued
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episode 2 continued part 2

I sat in my chair and looked around. "Huh?! Tadase-kun is in this class?!... Oh well...." The teacher started teaching. I starred out the window. Two black eggs with a white X-marks flew around. "Amu-chan..." Amu looked at me. I pointed at the eggs. "What's that?" "Trouble..." She turned to Tadase. He nodded. Amu stood up. "Sensei, I have to go to the bathroom!" I stood up. "I have to go also!" I wanted to know what she was going to do. The teacher nodded and we both left the room.

Amu ran outside while I followed. She stopped running in front of the eggs. "My own heart, UNLOCK!" She made a sign with her hands. A blue light surrounded her. When the light was gone, "Chara Nari, Amulet Spade!" I just stood there in awe. "What? Did she mean chara nari? S-She transformed?!" Purple energy came out from both eggs. "Muri. Muri. Muri!" Amu quickly dodged them. "Sakura-chan, get out of here!" "But! What about you?!" "Just go!" I ran behind a tree. Both eggs attacked this time, the attacks were combined. Amu got hit and was knocked to the ground. "Amu-chan!" She got up slowly. "I-I'm okay..." The eggs did the same attack again. "Amu-chan!" "I have to help.. I don't want her to get hurt." I heard a cracking sound. A little fairy came out from a light. "Hello. I'm Aika. Your guardian chara." She had a pink t-shirt with a black vest(it's flat.(not puffy)) and black mini skirt. Her boots are black and go above her knee. Her hair is brown and down to her waist. She has a white headband, on it is a rectangular gem in the color of a ruby. She wears a mic headset.(like Dia's but pink not white) "A.. shugo chara?" Aika nodded. "Sakura-chan, you want to help Amu-chan right?" I nodded. Aika smiled. "Okay then, Dream, Love, Sing. Turn into a girl whose dreams come true!" A pink light surrounded me. Amu looked at me and smiled. When I came out, I was wearing Aika's clothes. "Chara Nari, Love Singer!" I looked at myself. "Wow! I suddenly feel this energy..." Aika was inside me, "Now! Sing..." "W-What?!" Aika took over me.

Both eggs got healed. Amu, who was already transformed into herself again walked up to me. "Wow! I didn't know you liked to sing." I transformed back into myself. "I..I've been singing for a while... now explain to me!" Amu told me everything from the humpty lock to Easter. "Ohhh. Now I understand." Then Amu's charas lined up before me. "Hello. I'm Ran, Amu's sportly would-be-self." "I'm Miki, Amu's art would-be-self." "I'm Su, Amu's would-be-self who loves to cook desu~" "And I'm Dia. Amu's singing would-be-self." Aika flew in front of me. "I'm Aika. Sakura-chan's would-be-self who's truthful and loves to sing!" I smiled. "It's nice to meet you."

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Posted 10/12/08
pretty good story so far
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thank you very much!!
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Isn't Temari Nadeshiko's chara? and Ran is Amu's sporty self right? ur confusing me! :3
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kawaii cant wait to see whatll happen next
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its nice but doesnt amu have ran not temari (sorry if it sounds a little mean D=)
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Mosi101 wrote:

Isn't Temari Nadeshiko's chara? and Ran is Amu's sporty self right? ur confusing me! :3





UN1M3 wrote:

its nice but doesnt amu have ran not temari (sorry if it sounds a little mean D=)


Sorry minna. I got a little mixed up with my RP character and the fan-fiction. I'll change it right away!
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its okay XD at least ur going to change it now right ^_^
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Yup. I just changed it =3
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