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; "She stares around and starts to mutter out some random words" uhm... eeh.. hell..... "Slowly realizing where she got herself into she settle's down with a deep sigh, waiting paitiencly for him to speak; as he slowly walks up to her she flinche's a bit as her eyes slowly grow accustomed to the darkness, while he starts to speak again" This will be youre new home, next to me as my "He slowly grins stroking her cheek" apprentice, slave, maid..., or whatever u may want to call it.


( if i suck just delete >.> im not used to things like this >.< but i wanted to try ! )
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Nr1animef4n wrote:

; "She stares around and starts to mutter out some random words" uhm... eeh.. hell..... "Slowly realizing where she got herself into she settle's down with a deep sigh, waiting paitiencly for him to speak; as he slowly walks up to her she flinche's a bit as her eyes slowly grow accustomed to the darkness, while he starts to speak again" This will be youre new home, next to me as my "He slowly grins stroking her cheek" apprentice, slave, maid..., or whatever u may want to call it.


( if i suck just delete >.> im not used to things like this >.< but i wanted to try ! )


its GOOD GOOD GOOD!
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Legends of the dark side

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chap 1-aayame(name here) -->a innocent girl



Yay, wait.. im an innocent girl.. psh no fun
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yay ^-^ i did a good job woohoo *gets out partypoppers*
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Nr1animef4n wrote:

yay ^-^ i did a good job woohoo *gets out partypoppers* :D


yeah, you did. ^^ Slave .. maid.. apprentice lol LOVE THAT PART
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hehe'' ^-^ i loved the evil feeling in that part so i just why the hell not
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Legends of the dark side

chap 1
Story; After being chased into a desolate field by several light creatures, a innocent girl discovers an empty house. She runs into it, thinking she could last there until nighttime reigns. She steps inside, into a dimly lit parlor. There in the corner, was a man dressed in black, silently sipping somekind of liquid out of his wine glass. He slowly turns his gaze to your direction and you gasp as you see his face.
by Aayame

His face was flawless and his midnight blue eyes looked around the room slowly, only to later pick up a red tint. You excused that detail, and continued staring. His bottom chin was covered in blood, or what you assumed to be blood. No other liquid settled that thick and consisted of that smell. He was defiantly a vampire, and one with class if that was at all possible.
But this was good right? Vampire were on the 'dark' side. Sort of, but seeing as though you were not a vampire and the one standing in front of you was consumed with thirst., your life was in great danger.
He then spoke. His voice completely velvet as it rolled of his tongue. All he said was 'Welcome' before his eyes consumed you and you fell into a dreamless sleep
by Aayame

When the girl woke, she found herself in the middle of a dark empty nowhere. than she found herself REALLY thirsty. she wondered what happened. She tries to breakfree of whatever is trapping her but could not break free. Her thirst makes her ache. suddenly the man from before appeared in her eyes. "Welcome to hell, my vampire apprentice."
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; "She stares around and starts to mutter out some random words" uhm... eeh.. hell..... "Slowly realizing where she got herself into she settle's down with a deep sigh, waiting paitiencly for him to speak; as he slowly walks up to her she flinche's a bit as her eyes slowly grow accustomed to the darkness, while he starts to speak again" This will be youre new home, next to me as my "He slowly grins stroking her cheek" apprentice, slave, maid..., or whatever u may want to call it.
by Nr1animef4n

my turn!
"Look me in the eyes. think of ALL the times when ur being hated. And... Come to the dark side. work for the vampire clan...." the man says. Suddenly the girl's eyes slowly slowly turns to blood red. And she begin to feel like obeying the man somehow... The girl had been turn into a vampire...

the man:"Now now, dear tell me what's ur name? the girl replied slowly and patiently:"Erika." "Erika, ur now a vampire, so the name Erika might not fit you well. Blood.E. fits u well. now tat'll be ur new name." BloodE:"Yes, master."

chap 2
ever since tat day, BloodE have been following her master and explored and learned a lot about hell. She has met other blood apprentices as well. She gets more and more loyal to the darkside. on the other hand...
The dark side's powers had increased since the last war because of the people getting turned into slaves just like Erika. but some humans remains on the land. one of them, is a boy-Ethan. and now back to the dark side, but the elite demon clan... "This boy?" "Yes, the chossen demon god." "Who's going to get him from the inbetween(human world)?" "I will.".........
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"I will"; erika stands up slowly faceing the Counsil as they mock her;; " You will ; the Headdemon starts ; and how do you plan on getting him here, You an apprentice with such a task, hilarious"

"She jumps up with hate in her eyes pointed at the Headdemon " Well! i dont see anyone else jumping in so badly" The man resting a hand on her shoulder presses her down and talks "Sorry for BloodE's unacceptable way of speaking, I think she doesnt know her place yet "

the man's hand bury's its nail's in her shoulder as she growls softly; As he whispers into her ear quickly " You'd better stand ur ground missy" She forces his hand away and stands up again speaking louder" As i said I will!!;.



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"listen, i m the leader of the vampire clan bloodstream. we r not even an elite group. now the demons r one of the top clans, breaking into their territory just like tat and talking rudely when ur a APPRENTICE of the NON ELITE clan is just un4givable." than he drew a diagram to blood E with ashes on the ground in the dark air.

from lowest to highest clans:
black cat clan
citizen clan
dark ele clan
vampire clan
dark fairy clan/dark elv clan/assasin clan
demon clan/

"remember this and... GET BACK TO WORK!" bloodE stared at bloodstream one more time than walked away angrily.
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still bloodE thinks... Who care about tat stupid man? I'll go and capture watevr tat lit guy is! so bloodE goes to the hell gate, runs thro the gate way when the gate guardian black cats followed right after her. but anyway, she maded to the inbetween. She was back to the little house tat she lost consiousness in. And she starts the search for Ethan...
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Legends of the dark side

chap 1
Story; After being chased into a desolate field by several light creatures, a innocent girl discovers an empty house. She runs into it, thinking she could last there until nighttime reigns. She steps inside, into a dimly lit parlor. There in the corner, was a man dressed in black, silently sipping somekind of liquid out of his wine glass. He slowly turns his gaze to your direction and you gasp as you see his face.
by Aayame

His face was flawless and his midnight blue eyes looked around the room slowly, only to later pick up a red tint. You excused that detail, and continued staring. His bottom chin was covered in blood, or what you assumed to be blood. No other liquid settled that thick and consisted of that smell. He was defiantly a vampire, and one with class if that was at all possible.
But this was good right? Vampire were on the 'dark' side. Sort of, but seeing as though you were not a vampire and the one standing in front of you was consumed with thirst., your life was in great danger.
He then spoke. His voice completely velvet as it rolled of his tongue. All he said was 'Welcome' before his eyes consumed you and you fell into a dreamless sleep
by Aayame

When the girl woke, she found herself in the middle of a dark empty nowhere. than she found herself REALLY thirsty. she wondered what happened. She tries to breakfree of whatever is trapping her but could not break free. Her thirst makes her ache. suddenly the man from before appeared in her eyes. "Welcome to hell, my vampire apprentice."
by Cartoonful

; "She stares around and starts to mutter out some random words" uhm... eeh.. hell..... "Slowly realizing where she got herself into she settle's down with a deep sigh, waiting paitiencly for him to speak; as he slowly walks up to her she flinche's a bit as her eyes slowly grow accustomed to the darkness, while he starts to speak again" This will be youre new home, next to me as my "He slowly grins stroking her cheek" apprentice, slave, maid..., or whatever u may want to call it.
by Nr1animef4n

"Look me in the eyes. think of ALL the times when ur being hated. And... Come to the dark side. work for the vampire clan...." the man says. Suddenly the girl's eyes slowly slowly turns to blood red. And she begin to feel like obeying the man somehow... The girl had been turn into a vampire...
by Cartoonful

the man:"Now now, dear tell me what's ur name? the girl replied slowly and patiently:"Erika." "Erika, ur now a vampire, so the name Erika might not fit you well. Blood.E. fits u well. now tat'll be ur new name." BloodE:"Yes, master."
by Cartoonful

chap 2
ever since tat day, BloodE have been following her master and explored and learned a lot about hell. She has met other blood apprentices as well. She gets more and more loyal to the darkside. on the other hand...
The dark side's powers had increased since the last war because of the people getting turned into slaves just like Erika. but some humans remains on the land. one of them, is a boy-Ethan. and now back to the dark side, but the elite demon clan... "This boy?" "Yes, the chossen demon god." "Who's going to get him from the inbetween(human world)?" "I will.".........
by Cartoonful

"I will"; erika stands up slowly faceing the Counsil as they mock her;; " You will ; the Headdemon starts ; and how do you plan on getting him here, You an apprentice with such a task, hilarious"
by Nr1animef4n

"She jumps up with hate in her eyes pointed at the Headdemon " Well! i dont see anyone else jumping in so badly" The man resting a hand on her shoulder presses her down and talks "Sorry for BloodE's unacceptable way of speaking, I think she doesnt know her place yet "
by Nr1animef4n

the man's hand bury's its nail's in her shoulder as she growls softly; As he whispers into her ear quickly " You'd better stand ur ground missy" She forces his hand away and stands up again speaking louder" As i said I will!!;.
by Nr1animef4n

"listen, i m the leader of the vampire clan bloodstream. we r not even an elite group. now the demons r one of the top clans, breaking into their territory just like tat and talking rudely when ur a APPRENTICE of the NON ELITE clan is just un4givable." than he drew a diagram to blood E with ashes on the ground in the dark air.
from lowest to highest clans:
black cat clan
citizen clan
dark ele clan
vampire clan
dark fairy clan/dark elv clan/assasin clan
demon clan/
"remember this and... GET BACK TO WORK!" bloodE stared at bloodstream one more time than walked away angrily.
by Cartoonful

still bloodE thinks... Who care about tat stupid man? I'll go and capture watevr tat lit guy is! so bloodE goes to the hell gate, runs thro the gate way when the gate guardian black cats followed right after her. but anyway, she maded to the inbetween. She was back to the little house tat she lost consiousness in. And she starts the search for Ethan...
by Cartoonful
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id write the next part but im totally stumped about what to write. Writer's block? O.o
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Aayame wrote:

id write the next part but im totally stumped about what to write. Writer's block? O.o


?.? wat? i didnt understand u....
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cartoonful wrote:


Aayame wrote:

id write the next part but im totally stumped about what to write. Writer's block? O.o


?.? wat? i didnt understand u....


Heh, i have writer's block. I have no clue what to write
for the next part of the story
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Aayame wrote:


cartoonful wrote:


Aayame wrote:

id write the next part but im totally stumped about what to write. Writer's block? O.o


?.? wat? i didnt understand u....


Heh, i have writer's block. I have no clue what to write
for the next part of the story


...... anything........ just..... a paragraph or two...
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