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Aayame wrote:


cartoonful wrote:


Aayame wrote:

id write the next part but im totally stumped about what to write. Writer's block? O.o


?.? wat? i didnt understand u....


Heh, i have writer's block. I have no clue what to write
for the next part of the story


...... anything........ just..... a paragraph or two...


ok over my writer's block ><. ill try to write a paragraph now ^^
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Wait, what is the vampire's name? all i saw was her refer to him as 'master'
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Aayame wrote:

Wait, what is the vampire's name? all i saw was her refer to him as 'master'


1.main character-the little girl tat turned into a vamp slave~Erika but now BloodE
2.vampire clan leader-the man tat turned erika into bloodE~BloodStream
3.future main character-the demon god child tat do not know who he really is, and the person tat Demon clan and BloodE wanted to capture~Ethan

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BELOW IS THE FULL VER.
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Ok anyways..

still bloodE thinks... Who care about tat stupid man? I'll go and capture whatever tat lit guy is! so bloodE goes to the hell gate, runs through the gate way when the gate guardian black cats followed right after her. but anyway, she made it to the inbetween. She was back to the little house tat she lost consciousness in. And she starts the search for Ethan...
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BloodE steps forward and begins on her trek to find Ethan. She carefully looks around, observing her surroundings. It was funny when she thought about it, that a few hours ago she was being chased into this very house by her enemies. She walked forward a bit, just before tripping over a loose plank and falling.
Behind her she heard a terrible noise. Someone was stepping through the Hell Gate. She slowly moved her head to the side only to see her Master standing above her.
"You foolish girl" he said in a harsh tone "You would go to find the future demon king, Ethan, ALONE?!"
He picked her up and set her on her feet. "The whole world is in chaos now. Just know, that since I'm you master i am blamed for whatever you do. If we do not find Ethan, you will not be the only one dying." he heavily emphasized the word DYING and looked down and her, and she swore he was upset at her soon-to-be fate.
She looked up and him and for some odd reason, she saw him sad for the first time.
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cartoonful wrote:


Aayame wrote:

Wait, what is the vampire's name? all i saw was her refer to him as 'master'


1.main character-the little girl tat turned into a vamp slave~Erika but now BloodE
2.vampire clan leader-the man tat turned erika into bloodE~BloodStream
3.future main character-the demon god child tat do not know who he really is, and the person tat Demon clan and BloodE wanted to capture~Ethan

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BELOW IS THE FULL VER.


Ok next paragraph is up, above this

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Aayame wrote:

Ok anyways..

BloodE steps forward and begins on her trek to find Ethan. She carefully looks around, observing her surroundings. It was funny when she thought about it, that a few hours ago she was being chased into this very house by her enemies. She walked forward a bit, just before tripping over a loose plank and falling.
Behind her she heard a terrible noise. Someone was stepping through the Hell Gate. She slowly moved her head to the side only to see her Master standing above her.
"You foolish girl" he said in a harsh tone "You would go to find the future demon king, Ethan, ALONE?!"
He picked her up and set her on her feet. "The whole world is in chaos now. Just know, that since I'm you master i am blamed for whatever you do. If we do not find Ethan, you will not be the only one dying." he heaving emphasized the word DYING
She looked up and him and for some odd reason, she saw him sad for the first time.


nxt paragraph......

suddenly, another group of people came out from the hell gate. It was the demon clan elders... One of them said:"Dear vampire clan slave, you have not behaved well... The guardian cats told us so we got here on time before you made a mess..." Another demon said:"But since we're all here now, let's all go and find him." BloodStream bows and forced BloodE to bow as well... "Thank you for your forgiveness..."said BloodStream. Just when they're about to start the search... "DARK SIDE DEMONS AND VAMPIRES!!!! CHARGE!!!!!" A army of mixed elves, light warriors rushed into the scene and started attacking. The two forces fought. While they fought, BloodE managed to escape to the inbetween village. She saw a yough boy about her age and size in the village center. BloodE's heart went fast, her face went red and her expressions went blank... He's so CUTE!!!!! thought BloodE...
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cartoonful wrote:


Aayame wrote:

Ok anyways..

BloodE steps forward and begins on her trek to find Ethan. She carefully looks around, observing her surroundings. It was funny when she thought about it, that a few hours ago she was being chased into this very house by her enemies. She walked forward a bit, just before tripping over a loose plank and falling.
Behind her she heard a terrible noise. Someone was stepping through the Hell Gate. She slowly moved her head to the side only to see her Master standing above her.
"You foolish girl" he said in a harsh tone "You would go to find the future demon king, Ethan, ALONE?!"
He picked her up and set her on her feet. "The whole world is in chaos now. Just know, that since I'm you master i am blamed for whatever you do. If we do not find Ethan, you will not be the only one dying." he heaving emphasized the word DYING
She looked up and him and for some odd reason, she saw him sad for the first time.


nxt paragraph......

suddenly, another group of people came out from the hell gate. It was the demon clan elders... One of them said:"Dear vampire clan slave, you have not behaved well... The guardian cats told us so we got here on time before you made a mess..." Another demon said:"But since we're all here now, let's all go and find him." BloodStream bows and forced BloodE to bow as well... "Thank you for your forgiveness..."said BloodStream. Just when they're about to start the search... "DARK SIDE DEMONS AND VAMPIRES!!!! CHARGE!!!!!" A army of mixed elves, light warriors rushed into the scene and started attacking. The two forces fought. While they fought, BloodE managed to escape to the inbetween village. She saw a yough boy about her age and size in the village center. BloodE's heart went fast, her face went red and her expressions went blank... He's so CUTE!!!!! thought BloodE...



YAY im betting its Ethan. Zomgz i want to write the next chapter

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ok heres a shot, since cartoonful is eating lunch *eats some more pocky* WRITING TIME

She saw a young boy about her age and size in the village center. BloodE's heart went fast, her face went red, and her expression went blank. HES SO CUTE!!! though BloodE.

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She felt guilty for leaving her force behind, and especially her master. She walked slowly towards the boy.
"Um.. hello?" she said carefully, as if her life were in danger. The little boy looked her way and smiled a tiny bit.
His eyes summed up her size, race, and posture. He smiled carefully. Then frowned and ran away.
"Where are you going?!" she yelled towards him. A tall figure behind her lifted its foot and kicked her into a wall. Some human managed to make it into the Hell Gate. She laid there in a heap and was too weak to get up. The tall human walked towards her in a victorious gait. She was weak from not having blood. He swooped in for the kill. But in a blur, the human was thrown across the town into the fire between the worlds. He was clearly, dead. In front of her stood her master and the boy about her age.
"Well obviously you don't know how to fight." he said, but she blacked out and fell unconscious. the thirst was getting to her. The next thing she saw, was when she woke up. in a small house, with a dimly lit fire, her master standing over her and the boy sleeping in the corner.
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I try to repeat the first few sentences of the previous writer so people don't get confused
the -------------------------------------- line is where their story ends and mine begins
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ok i guess i can write the next paragraph only because i have so much writing to fit into one paragraph lolz
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"Well obviously you don't know how to fight." he said, but she blacked out and fell unconscious. the thirst was getting to her. The next thing she saw, was when she woke up. in a small house, with a dimly lit fire, her master standing over her and the boy sleeping in the corner.
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She gazed at the sleeping boy. He looked so peaceful, but why did he leave her before when he saw she was in danger? But, he did come back, so she forgave him. She didn't want to, but her gaze met her master's. His eyes were blood red and she looked back down at the floor in fear. He kneeled down slowly, and his eyes gently faded to the normal black, with a red tint, shade. He tilted his head in confusion.
"You're a vampire, you must have noticed your thirst, no?" he asked slowly.
"I'm not drinking human blood, when I used to be human!!" she shouted at him, she never wanted to hurt a human.
"Key words being 'used to be', you are one of us now." he said calmly.
"No" she shouted at him and tried to get up and run away, but ended up tripping and falling over in pain onto the floor beneath her.
He sat down beside her and placed a hand under her chin. He moved her head to his neck. He muttered something that sounded an awfully lot like "Drink"


Wohoo! Cliff hanger- ish thing
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bloodE was strugling not to drink and stop her thirst, but her thirst kept getting bigger... At last... She drank it with shame... The boy at first thought they were humans and didn't know the situation at first, but after seeing bloodE and bloodstreams' teeth and after seeing bloodE gulping down the blood, he knew they were vampires... "Vampires!..... V-Va-VAMPIRES!!! Wat are you guys doing HERE?!? are you going to kill me?......."said the boy whose in fear. bloodE:"Your... Ethan right?" "how do you know......" "*blushes*uh, yes... you see... i guess.. i think...." "huh?" "ur a demon"interrupted bloodstream. ethan:"demon?.... hen ur joking...." bloodstream made a serious face:"No, I am not joking." Ethan:"What are you going to do with me?" "The eldest demon elder in the demon clan, Demonhead, WANTS THE POWER OF THE DEMON GOD. Everyone already treats him like a god, and he deserves it. We'll kill you and transfer your god powers to Demonhead."explained bloodstream.
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kill him... no way.... CANT LET TAT HAPPEN!!!! WAIT!!! why am i even WORRING for ethan? hav i... hav i.... "yes you have fallen for him..."came a voice."Don't let him die. His existence is the meaning of ur existence, and ur existence is the meaning of his existence. and both of ur existences.... are the dark side's existence....."the voice came again, than the voice came no more.... bloodE thought-I have... I really have.... fallen for him.... is this wat u called.... luv at 1st sight? grrr.... and wat does the rest means, the existence thingy......... but when she woke from her daydream..... She saw the demon elders along with bloodstream and along with Ethan whoes trying to break free... I CANT LET HIM DIE.... thought bloodE again.....
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bloodE quickly stole Ethan from bloodstream's arms, dashing into the wild forest.... Ethan:"why you saved me?"
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Oh ill write the next chapter thingy
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