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Neminis
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Posted 10/15/08
Leaking Loving
Time to See
Open your Eyes
My little sweety
Slowly rising
Foriegn and new
Burning your eyes
They Flicker in the Light
Angelic little Baby
Seeing no Other
Growing alone
The Warmth so unknown
Beauty beyond
That of her Life
Soul hidden behind
A block of Ice
Noone seeing
The Tears that she Cries
Her only Friend
The Reflection in the walls
Of her Secret little Fortress
Forbidden to be Seen
By any Other's eyes
Alone she Wonders
Blind to this World
Forbidden Ice Princess
In her Invisible Ice World
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Posted 10/16/08

Neminis wrote:


Nice poem , I like the last 4 lines It has a sort of nice rhythm and ends just right.
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